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9-1SomeexpertsbelievethatitisbetterforchildrentobeginlearningaforeignlanguageatprimaryschoolratherthansecondaryschoolDotheadvantagesofthisoutweighthedisadvantages？文章结构一：好处弊端各一半年纪小，更容易教学小学老师不够专业，课程难以标准影响母语的学文文章结构二：反驳坏处（书上考官范文结构年纪小，更容易教学 Traditionally,childrenbegantostudyforeignlanguagesatsecondaryschool,butnowthiscoursehasbeenintroducedtomanyprimaryschools.Thiscanhelpchildrenmastertheforeignlanguageearlier,althoughtherearesomeproblemsthatshouldnotbeTobeginwith,primaryschoolstudentscanpickuplanguagesmuchmoreeasilythanhighschoolstudents.Theirlearningislesslikelytobeaffectedbythemothertongue.Whentheygrowupintoadolescents,theymayfeelshyandreluctanttocommunicatewithothersinaforeignlanguage.Anotherbenefitisthatprimaryschoolstudentshavemoretimetolearnforeignlanguages.Astheprimarytimetableisflexible,theclasscanbedesignedtobeshorterandmorefrequent.Meanwhile,theteachercanaddmoreentertainmentelementstothecourseandmaintainlearners’enthusiasmandprogress.Thereare,however,somedisadvantages.Primaryschoolteachersaregeneralists,andmaynothavethenecessarylanguageskillsthemselves.Thelearningprocessinprimaryschoolisnotcontinuousandsystematic.Ifthecourseisnotstandardised,studentswouldbeatdifferentlevelswhentheyenterthehighschool.Moreover,learningforeignlanguagestooearlymayaffecttheacquisitionofa ’smothertongue.Agoodexampleisthatmanyyoungchildrenin starttolearnEnglishataveryyoungage,buttheirabilitytospeakandwrite Overall,earlyexposuretoforeignlanguageswouldbenefitchildrenintermsoflearningotherlanguagesandunderstandingforeigncultures.However,theschoolandeducational shouldchoosetherighttimeandadoptappropriatemethods.5-2：Insomecountriesyoungpeopleareencouragedtoworkortravelforayearbetweenfinishinghighschoolandstartinguniversitystudies.Discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesforyoungpeoplewhodecidetodothis.开头好处：开阔眼界，增长见识；变得独坏处：休息之后，无法重新适应大学的学习环境，收不了心，想再回到校结尾使用驳论的写法（剑5-2考官写法，第165页开头好处：开阔眼界，增长见识，变得独结尾：利大于使用驳论的写开头好处：开阔眼界，增长见识，变得独结尾：弊大于Thefirstbenefitofthistrendisthatyoungpeoplecanhaveabroaderviewoflifeandbetter alresourcestodrawon.Whentheyworktoearnaliving,theycanmeetsomepeoplewhocanbehelpfultotheirfuturecareer.Bytravellingtoothercountries,theseteenagerswillhaveabetterunderstandingofdifferentcustomsandcultures.Incontrast,thosewhopassdirectlyfromschooltouniversityarerestrictedintermsofknowledgeandexperience.Theytendtobemoreindependent,astheycannotrelyonparentsandteachersanymore.Theyhavetolookafterthemselvesandsolvevariousproblemsbythemselves.Independenceisaveryimportantfactorinacademicstudyandresearchandgivesthemanadvantageintermsofcowiththechallengesofstudentlife.However,therearecertainlydangersintakingtimeoffatthatimportantage.Youngadultsmayendupneverreturningtotheirstudiesorfindingitdifficulttoreadapttoanacademicenvironment.Theymaythinkthatitisbettertocontinueinaparticularjob,ortodosomethingcompleydifferentfromauniversitycourse.Butoverall,Ithinkthisislesslikelytoday,whenacademicqualificationsareessentialforgettingareasonable议DiscussadvantagesandDoyouthinkthebenefitsoutweighdrawbacks？Isitapositiveornegativedevelopment？TowhatextentdoyouagreeorDiscussbothviewsandgiveyourownWhatarereasons,effectsandWhat？题1：Somepeoplebelievethatunpaidcommunityserviceshouldbeacompulsorypartofhighschoolprograms(forexampleworkingforacharity,improvingtheneighborhoodorteachingsportstoyoungerchildren).Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree? (剑9-2)2：NuclearenergyisbetterthanothersourcesofenergytomeettheincreasingneedTowhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?（2013-9-题3（作业）：Livinginbigcitiesisbadforpeople’shealth.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree? 题1：Somepeoplebelievethatunpaidcommunityserviceshouldbeacompulsorypartofhighschoolprograms(forexampleworkingforacharity,improvingtheneighborhoodorteachingsportstoyoungerchildren).Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree? (剑9-2)文章结构第二段：同意的理由1：培养责任心：版本1： ngunpaidworkiscommonamonghighschoolstudentsinsomecountries,whichhas eacompulsorypartofhighschoolprograms.Inmyopinion,thiscanprovidethemwithmanyvaluableskills,althoughitmayaffecttheirstudysometimes.Inclassasacompulsorypartofhighschoolprograms.Whilethismayoccupytheirtimetosomeextent,itisbeneficialforstudents’growthinvariousItissuggestedthatallhighschoolstudentsshouldbeinvolvedinunpaidcommunityservices.Inmyopinion,thiscanprovidethemwithmanyvaluableskills,althoughitmayaffecttheirstudysometimes.版本1： ngunpaidworkiscommonamonghighschoolstudentsinsomecountriesandsomepeoplebelievethisshouldbeacompulsorypartinhighschooleducation.Inmyopinion,thiscanprovidestudentswithmanyvaluableskills,althoughitmayaffecttheirstudysometimes.example,example,insomecommunities,teenagersneedtolookafteroldpeople版本2： ngunpaidworkiscommonamonghighschoolstudentsinsomecountriesandsomepeoplebelievethisshouldbeacompulsorypartinhighschooleducation.Iagreewiththisopiniontosomeextent.Iagreewiththisopiniontosomeextent.Ithinkthisviewpointisreasonable.Inmypointofview,thispracticehasbenefitsaswellasdrawbacks.Thisargumentmaybetrue.Ithinkthisisaone-sidedIthasbeensuggestedthathighschoolstudentsshouldbeinvolvedinunpaidcommunityservicesasacompulsorypartofhighschoolprograms.Mostofthecollegesarealreadyprovidingopportunitiestogainworkexperience,howeverthesearenotcompulsory.Inmyopinion,sendingstudentstoworkincommunityservicesisagoodideaasitcanprovidethemwithmanylotsofvaluableskills.弊完整范文版本1（鼓励中学生做义工，同时也需要合理引导，有利有弊，利大于弊ngunpaidworkiscommonamonghighschoolstudentsinsomecountries,whichhas eacompulsorypartofhighschoolprograms.Whilethismayoccupytheirtimetosomeextent,itisbeneficialforstudents’growthinvariousaspects.Firstofall,ngunpaidworkcanenhancestudents’senseofresponsibility.Whenservingasvolunteers,studentswilllearntoconsiderotherpeople'sneedsandunderstandwhatkindofroletheycanyinthecommunity.nursinghomesorreadtochildreninkindergartens.Suchchildrenaremorelikelyto eusefuladultswhentheygrowup. ngunpaidworkenablesstudentstoputtheoryintopractice.Inthisprocess,theywouldgainworkexperienceandpracticalskills,whichwouldbeanassetontheirCVsandincreasetheiremployability.Manycompanieswouldconsiderwhetherthejobapplicantshavetheexperience ngvoluntaryworkwhentheyrecruitnewemployees. ngvoluntaryworkwillconsumestudents’timeanddistractthemfromstudy.Somestudents’academicperformancemaydeclineandtheirparentswouldcominthatthiskindofworkhasaffectedtheirstudy.Ifthefamilyandstudentsthemselveshaveanantipathytovoluntarywork,itgoesagainsttheoriginalintentionoftheorganizer.Myviewisthatallstudentsinhighschoolsshouldbeencouragedtotakepartinunpaidwork,whichcanhelpthem ematureandresponsible.However,theyshouldalsobeguidedinarrangingtheirtimereasonablyandstrikingabalancebetweentheirstudyandextra-curricularwork.完整范文版本2（驳论写法Inmanyhighschools,studentsarerequiredtodounpaidworkafterclassasacompulsorypartofhighschoolprograms.Whilethismayoccupytheirtimetosomeextent,itisbeneficialforstudents’growthinvariousFirstofall,ngunpaidworkcanenhancestudents’senseofresponsibility.Whenservingasvolunteers,studentswilllearntoconsiderotherpeople'sneedsandunderstandwhatkindofroletheycanyinthecommunity.nursinghomesorreadtochildreninkindergartens.Suchchildrenaremorelikelyto eusefuladultswhentheygrowup. ngunpaidworkenablesstudentstoputtheoryintopractice.Inthisprocess,theywouldgainworkexperienceandpracticalskills,whichwouldbeanassetontheirCVsandincreasetheiremployability.Manycompanieswouldconsiderwhetherthejobapplicantshavetheexperience ngvoluntaryworkwhentheyrecruitnewstaff.Ontheotherhand, ngvoluntaryworkwillconsumestudents’timeanddistractthemfromstudy.Somestudents’academicperformancemaydeclineandtheymayhaveanantipathytovoluntarywork.However,ifparentsandteacherscouldguidechildreninarrangingtheirtimereasonablyandstrikingabalancebetweentheirstudyandextra-curricularwork,thisproblemwouldbeaddressed.Inconclusion,allstudentsinhighschoolsshouldberequiredtotakepartinunpaidwork,whichcanhelpthem ematureandresponsible.2：NuclearenergyisbetterthanothersourcesofenergytomeettheincreasingneedTowhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree（2013-09-07）开头段不同版本：Totackletheenergycrisisthroughouttheworld,nuclearenergyisnowwidelyusedinmanycountries.Comparedwithfossilfuels,ithasvariousadvantages,buttherearealsosomerisksthatweshouldpayattentionto.Somepeoplethinkthatnuclearpoweristhebestsourceofenergyandshouldbefurtherpromotedtotackletheenergycrisis.Thissoundsreasonable,butusingnuclearpowerhassomerisksthatshouldnotbeignored.Totackletheenergycrisisthroughouttheworld,nuclearenergyisnowwidelyusedinmanycountries.Whilesomepeoplethinkthatitisthebestsourceofenergy,Idisagreewiththisopinion.Iagreewiththisopiniontosomeextent.Ithinkthisviewpointisreasonable.Inmypointofview,thispracticehasbenefitsaswellasdrawbacks.Thisargumentmaybetrue.Ithinkthisisaone-sidedHowever,itistooearlytocometotheconclusionthatnuclearpoweristhebestsourceofenergy,consideringitspotentialrisks.Nuclearpowerstationsmaybedestroyedbytechnicalfailures,naturaldisastersorterroristattacks.Leakageofnuclearwasteandradiationwouldcausecatastrophicconsequencestotheenvironmentandposeathreattopeople’shealthandsafety.Forexample,destructionofnuclearpowerstationsinJapanfollowingthetsunamiafewyearsagoseriouslydamagedthelocalenvironment.Numerouspeopleexposedtoradioactivitydiedorsufferedfromfataldiseases,withtheimpactofthis lastingtilltoday.However,usingnuclearpowerhashugepotentialrisks,soitisnotthebestsourceofenergy.Thenuclearntmayexplodeduetoimproperoperation,naturaldisastersoreventerroristattacks.Ifthenuclearwasteleaked,itwouldcausedisastrousconsequencetotheecologicalenvironmentandposeathreattopeople’shealth.Inhumanhistory,suchaccidentshappenedmanytimesinsomecountriessuchasRussiaandJapan.Asaresult,thelocalenvironmentwascompleydestroyedandmanypeoplewerekilledorsufferedfromseriousdiseases.参考范文：题3作业：Livinginbigcitiesisbadforpeople’shealth.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree? (2014年3月1号考题)文章结构主体段第1段：主体段第2作业范文（驳论写法Despitetheacceleratingurbanizationandgrowingurbanpopulation,somepeoplethinkthatlivinginbigcitiesisharmfultopeople’shealth.Thisistruetosomeextent,ifweconsidertheenvironmentoflargecitiesandlifestylesofcitydwellers.Inrecentyears,duetoincreasingtraff