高考英语二轮限时高效训练书面表达34

高考英语二轮限时高效训练书面表达34书面表达假定你是某大学的学生李津，你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席，负责规划、组织俱乐部的有关活动，你欲参选，请按以下提示，写一篇竞选演讲稿。个人的优势介绍（如性格、专长等）组织校内的活动的假想（如举办讲座、英语晚会等）组织校际沟通活动的假想（如举办争辩赛、演讲竞赛等）表达竞选的梦想。注意：词数许多于100；请勿说起真切学校姓名可适合的加入细节，以使内容充分，行文连接；开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参照词汇：副主席：vicepresident竞选：runforGoodafternoon,mydearfriends,MynameisLiJin,Thankyou.2.第二节：短文写作（共1题；满分30分)请依据以下提示，并联合案例，用英语写一篇短文。Weallknowthat“sticksandstonesmaybreakourbones”,butweshouldalsobeawarethatwordscanhurtpeople,too.注意：①不必写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；②除诗歌外，文体不限；③文中不得流露个人姓名和学校名称；④词数为120左右。3.第二节读写任务（共1小题；满分25分）阅读下边短文，而后依据要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文Tomanypeopleeventheword“work”soundsunpleasant,notnecessarilybecausetheyarelazy.Thesameman,whodislikeshisjobinthefactoryorevenintheoffice,mayworkhardattheweekend,paintingthehouseordiggingthegarden.Whatisthereason,then？Inmostcases,itisbecausethesepeoplesimplydonotenjoytheeasy,likemakingupwoodenboxes,butitisveryboring.Veryoftentheyaredoingajobwhichisjustasmallpartofamuchlargerone,suchasattachingadoorhandletoacar.Buttheparttheyplayinactuallymakingthecarissosmallthattheycanneversay:Ihavemadesomething!Yetinmodernsocietysomebodyhastodoordinaryjobssuchascleaningstreetsbecausethis-1-Isthewaysocietyisorganized,Nomatterhowordinaryajobis,itplaysapartinsocietyandthereforedeservesourduerespect.Societycannotfunctionasingledaywithoutthe“dullandboring”jobs.[写作内容]以约30个词归纳上文的主要内容。以约120个词说说你对平庸工作的想法，内容包含：描绘洁净工工作的艰辛；若是没有洁净工，环境会变得怎样？你对平庸工作者的见解。[写作要求]14.作文中能够使用亲自经历或虚假的故事，也能够参照阅读资料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。15.作文中不可以出现真切姓名和学校名称。[评分标准]归纳正确，语言规范，内容适合，语篇连接。Ⅲ写作（共两节，满分40分）基础写作（共1小题；满分15分）你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇时势快讯。[写作内容]请依据以下信息，写一篇对于移民火星的快讯[写作要求]只好用5个句子表达所有内容[评分标准]、句子构造正确，信息内容完好，篇章连接。第四部分：书面表达（共两节，15分）第一节情形作文（20分）假定你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请依据以下四幅图的先后次序，用英文写一篇周记。记述爸爸出差时期，妈妈患病，你照料她的过程。注意：1.周记的开头已经为你写好。2.词数许多于60.-2-LastMonday,第二节开放作文（15分）请依据下边提示。写一篇作文。词数许多于50.YouarediscussingthefollowingpicturewithyourEnglishfriendJim.Nowyouaretellinghimhowyouunderstandthepictureandwhatmakesyouthinkso.6.第四部分——写作（共两节，满分35分）短文改错（共10小题；每题1分，满分10分）假定英主事课上老师要求同桌之间互换改正作文，请您改正你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有处语文错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅波及一个单词的增添、删除或改正。增添：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下边写出该加的词。删除：把剩余的词用斜钱（）划掉。改正：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下边写出改正后的词。注意：每处错误及其改正均仅限一词；2．只充许改正10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Mr.Johnsonisahardworkingteacher.Everyday,hespendstoomuchtimewithhiswork.Withlittlesleepandhardlyanybreak,soheworksfrommorningtillnight.-3-Hardworkhavemadehimveryill.“Hehasruinedhishealthy.Weareworriedabouthim.”Thatiswhichotherteacherssay.Yesterdayafternoon.IpaidvisittoMr.Johnson.Iwaseagertoseehim,butoutsideherroomIstopped.Ihadtocalmmyselfdown.QuietlyIstepintotheroom.Isawhimlyinginbed,lookingatsomeofthepicturewehadtakentogether.Iunderstoodthathemissedusjustasmanyaswemissedhim.书面表达（满分25分）一个英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英文稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。写作重点：它是中国传统节日之一；家人聚会；观月、吃月饼、还有旅行、探友等其余活动。注意：词数100左右；能够适合增添细节，以使用文连接；开头语已您写好，不讲总词数。参照词汇：中秋节:theMid-AutumnFestival阴历:lunarcalendar观月:enjoythefullmoon月饼:mooncakeTheMid-AutumnFetivalTheMid-AutumnFestivalfallsonthe15thoftheeighthmonthofOurChineselunarcalendar.试卷答案1.略请依据以下提示，并联合案例，用英语写一篇短文。Weallknowthat“sticksandstonesmaybreakourbones”,butweshouldalsobeawarethatwordscanhurtpeople,too.注意：①不必写标题，不得照抄英语提示语;②除诗歌外，文体不限;③文中不得流露个人姓名和学校名称;④词数为120左右。OnePossibleVersionMydeskmateadmiresmyfluentEnglishverymuchandIusuallyfeelencouragedbyhiscompliments.Oneday,whenwelearnedthenewword“eccentric”inclass,wewereaskedtomakeasentencewithit.Ivolunteeredtodoitbysaying“Mydeskmateisaneccentricboywhoseclothesneverfithim.”Hearingthis,thewholeclassburstintolaughterandmydeskmate’sfaceturnedred.Afterclass,Ilearnedfromtheteacherthatmydeskmatewouldhavedroppedoutofschoolifhehadn’tbeenhelpedbyothers.Mymindlesswordsmusthavehurthimdeeply.NotuntilthendidIrealizewordscouldbepowerfulinbothpositiveandnegative-4-ways.Weshouldavoidhurtingothersifwecan’talwaysbeencouragingwhenwespeak.3.4.-5-第一节：情形作文2013年北京卷情形作文持续了以前的传统，仍旧以四幅图的记述文写作为出题点。在内容上，并无高出五大主题，即“校园拓展类、好人好事类、社会公益类、旅行招待类、家庭生活类”的范围。图画内容比较简单，四幅图中并无出现超纲或许冷僻词汇。能够说，本次考题属于难度较低的考场作文。考生在写作时，重点关注两个细节即可：1.本文的体裁是周记，因此整篇文章的主语是“我”，而不是“我们”；2.周记要求在写作时，多出现心理活动描绘和感情描绘。主要能注意这两点，相信考生能够在考场上写出一篇不错的考场作文。高分范文：LastMonday,myfatherwouldbeonabusinesstripforfivedays.Havinggottenmypromiseofbeinggreatathomeandtakingcareofmymother,herestassuredandputhisluggageintothetrunkofhiscar.Seeingmyfather’sdrivingaway,mymotherandIwavedourhandsandsaidgoodbyetohim.Foramoment,Ibegantomissmyfather,wishingthathewouldbesafeandwellthenextdays。Ithoughteverythingwouldgowell,asthiswasnotthefirsttimethatmyfatherhadbeenawayforseveraldays.Yet,unfortunately,mymothercaughtacoldthenextmorning.Lookingatherpaleface,Iexperiencedhighlevelsofanxiety.However,ItoldmyselfthatIhadtocalmdownandlookaftermymum,asIpromisedtomydad.ThemomentIgotmymumtosleep,Iputcoldtowelonherforehead,foundpillsinthemedicinebox,andmadesomenoodlesforher.Luckily,shewakedupandfeltbetter,aftertakingthepillsandthenoodles.Thatherfeverwasgonerelievedandsatisfiedmealot。Inthenextfourdays,Iwastakingherbodytemperaturetwiceaday,ensuringthatshewascompletelywell.Toourdelight,mydadwentbackhomesafelyandhealthily-6-onSaturday.OnhearingwhatIhaddonetomymum,he,aswellasmymum,beamedatmeandgavemeabigthumb.Hearingtheirpraisesandseeingbrightsmilesontheirfaces,Ireallyfeltoverjoyedandthrilled.Conceivably,takingcareofmyparentswas,indeedanddefinitely,mymissionandobligation第二节：开放作文2013年北京卷开放作文的难度与早年持平，图画比较简单，简单理解。经过“大鱼”和“小鱼”的对照，能看出来图画的立意应当与“理想”和“现实”有关。从描图的角度上来说，除了“鱼竿”这个单词在写作时略微有点难度以外，其余的因素都是比较简单办理的。在写作时，请注意；两个个方面：因为在英文提示部分，要求的是先“理解图画”，因此写作时请考生在首段直接提出立意。开放作文在写作时，必定要有“带图谈论”的环节。因此，固然提示部分其实不像早年的题目同样，明确出现“描图”两个字，但在首段提出立意以后，第二段仍是要有描图的语言，不然会失分。高分范文：Hi,Jim,thereisaninterestingpictureconveyingamessagevividlythatadifferencebetweenrealityanddreammayaswellberecognizedinourlife.Evidently,realizingthisdifferenceandtryingtoshortenthisgapisthekeytoachievingouraccomplishment,otherwisenothingwillbegottenintheend。Inourdailylife,somepeopleareawareoftheirability,makinggreateffortstoimprovethemselves,whileothersignorethedisparitybetweentheirearnestwishandpoorestactuality,doingnothingbutcomplaining.Conceivably,theconfusedmaninthepictureisexactlythelatterone.Inthispicture,amanisfishingonabigstone,waitingandwaiting.However,thesmallfishhehascaughtistotallydifferentfromthebigoneheislongingfor.Now,therearetwooptionsinfrontofhim:facetherealityandkeeptryingtillgetthedreamyfish,ordrophisfishingrodandfeeldesperate.Apparently,hechoosesthesecondone.Suchasituationseemsfairlycommoninoursociety.Wearefacedwiththiskindofintriguingquestionallthetime,andeverychoicewemakehasgreatinfluenceonourwaytosuccess.Makinganaccurateestimateofourrealitiesanddreams,thensparingnoeffortstoapproachthetipistheonlyoptionforustomake,providedthatweareingreatwantofachievingourgoals。a-7-Basedontheabovestatement,aconclusionwillbearrivedatthatlearningtoaccepttherealityandadoptingapositiveattitudetowardsthedreamiswhatwearesupposedtodo,whenconfrontingourless-satisfyingsituation.第一节Johnsonisahardworkingteacher.Everyday,hespendstoomuchtimewithhiswork.Withlittlesleepandonhardlyanybreak,soheworksfrommorningtillnight.Hardworkhavemadehimveryill.“Hehasruinedhishashealthy.Weareworriedabouthim.”Thatiswhichotherteacherssay.Yesterdayafternoon.Ipaid︿visittoMr.healthwhataJohnson.Iwaseag