高考英语复习第三部分写作增分攻略八吸引眼球的高级词汇与复杂句式牛津译林版市赛课公开课一等奖省名师优质

学案八吸引眼球高级词汇与复杂句式1/36写作利用探究写作时，假如仅局限在把内容交代清楚这一层次，只选取一些普通词，或一律使用简单句平铺直叙，那么习作就会显得呆板、单调，没有可读性。要想写出高分作文，不但要把要求表述清楚，而且还要尝试使用高级词汇与复杂句式。如能利用恰当，哪怕只用上一、两处，也会为习作增添色彩，给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。2/36一、利用高级词汇三标准1.标新立异恰当地使用一些蕴含感情色彩或其它考生不轻易想到高级词汇，会彰显自己水平。[高考佳句]①I’llthankyouifyouthinkaboutmysuggestion.→I’llappreciateitifyoutakemysuggestionintoconsi-deration.(福建高考满分作文)3/36②Ireceivedyouremaillastweek，butIambusypreparingformyfinalexam，whichisimportantforme，soIdidn’treplytoyouwithoutdelay.→Ireceivedyouremaillastweek，butIambusypreparingformyfinalexam，whichisvitalforme，soIdidn’treplytoyouwithoutdelay.(山东高考满分作文)③Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.→Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.(辽宁高考标准范文)④We’lltryourbesttoimprovetheworkingconditions.→We’llsparenoefforttopromotetheworkingconditions.(山东高考标准范文)4/362.短语优先写作中，要想写出“亮点”就要注意挖掘自己现存词汇潜力，多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，会使短文内容丰富，表示更有力度，增添文采。[高考佳句]①Toachieveone’sdream，onemusttrytoequiponeselfwithrichknowledgeandsetagoaleasytoreach.→Toachieveone’sdream，onemustmakegreateffortstoequiponeselfwithrichknowledgeandsetagoaleasytoreach.(北京高考满分作文)5/36②What’smore，wecanpouroutthetroublesweface，andreleaseourpressurefromdifferentaspects.→What’smore，wecanpouroutthetroubleswearefacedwith，andreleaseourpressurefromdifferentaspects.(重庆高考满分作文)③Totellyouthetruth，Idon’treallylikeyournewnovel.→Totellyouthetruth，Ireallyshownointerestinyournewnovel.(湖南高考满分作文)6/363.手法多样在表示相同或相近意思时，要尽可能防止过多地使用同一个单词，用其它对应词或短语来代替，这么能让阅卷老师感觉到你词汇量丰富。实在找不到，能够变更说法，“曲径通幽”或许会有更加好效果。[高考佳句]①Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingfootballmatches.→Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingfootballmatches.(江西高考满分作文)7/36②ItshowedmethatthewayofeducationinCanadaisquitedifferentfromthewayofeducationofChina.→ItshowedmethatthewayofeducationinCanadaisquitedifferentfromthatofChina.(湖北高考满分作文)8/36【即时演练】用较高级词汇代替黑体单词或短语1.Weallhavethesameopportunity.2.Moreandmorevisitorshavebeenattractedtothisplace.3.Theteacherdirectedthegiftedstudentstowardsthemoredifficultcourses.4.We’lltryourbesttodevelopthetraditionalfriendshipbetweenus.5.Icannolongerbearthewayhespeakstous.6.Wouldyoupleasehelpmetoturndowntheradio?答案1.possess

2.Anincreasingnumberof

3.challenging

4.promote

5.putupwith

6.domeafavor9/36二、利用高级句式七大策略1.利用被动语态，重点更鲜明[高考佳句]①WewillhaveselectedaboutthirtyvolunteerstotheMarsthroughouttheworldby.→AboutthirtyvolunteerswillhavebeenselectedtotheMarsthroughouttheworldby.(广东高考书面表示)10/36②I’mdelightedtoknowthattheShanghaiMuseumwillorganizeafamousartexhibitionandyouarecollectingopinionsofthepublicastoselectingthelocationfortheexhibition，whichencouragedmetowritetoexpressmyideas.→I’mdelightedtoknowthatafamousartexhibitionwillbeorganizedbytheShanghaiMuseumandopinionsofthepublicarebeingcollectedastoselectingthelocationfortheexhibition，whichencouragedmetowritetoexpressmyideas.(上海高考满分作文)11/362.利用强调句，重点更突出[高考佳句]①Thepeoplewhoobeytherulesmatter.→Itisthepeoplewhoobeytherulesthatmatter.(·江苏，书面表示)②Withouthesitation，Idecidedtofollowthemandwehadlotsoffunthatday.→Withouthesitation，Idecidedtofollowthemandwedidhavelotsoffunthatday.(·浙江，标准范文)12/36③Ourparentshavedevotedtheirunconditionallovetous，whichindeeddeservesourappreciationandreward.→It’sourparentswhohavedevotedtheirunconditionallovetous，whichindeeddeservesourappreciationandreward.(重庆高考满分作文)13/363.利用倒装句，语言更活泼[高考佳句]①Itnotonlyaffectsoureverydaylife，butmayalsothreatenpeople’slives.→Notonlydoesitaffectoureverydaylife,butmayalsothreatenpeople’slives.(·江苏，书面表示)14/36②IwassoexcitedthatIcouldn’twaittotrymyhandatridingit.→SoexcitedwasIthatIcouldn’twaittotrymyhandatridingit.(·福建，满分作文)③Thechildrencangrowupmentallyandphysicallyhealthyonlyinthisway.→Onlyinthiswaycanthechildrengrowupmentallyandphysicallyhealthy.(福建高考满分作文)15/364.利用省略句，行文更简练[高考佳句]①Maybeitisabetterideatotakeoutdooractivitieswhenyoufeelbad.→Maybeitisabetterideatotakeoutdooractivitieswhenfeelingbad.(·安徽，满分作文)②Areyoulookingforwardtotheprize-givingceremony?Sure!It’llbeheldfrom15：00to17：00.→Lookingforwardtotheprize-givingceremony?Sure!It’llbeheldfrom15：00to17：00.(·辽宁，满分作文)16/36③Asitisscheduled，EnglishTalentShowwillbeheldtoday.→Asscheduled，EnglishTalentShowwillbeheldtoday.(·陕西，满分作文)④Althoughtheywerefacedwithmanyproblems，theydidn’tloseheart.→Althoughfacedwithmanyproblems，theydidn’tloseheart.(山东高考满分作文)17/365.利用感叹句，感情更强烈[高考佳句]①Fromtheexpressionontheface，Iknewmymathteacherwassurprised.→Whatasurprisedexpressionwasonmymathteacher’sface！(·湖南，满分作文)②Itisaverysplendidmoment.→Howsplendidamomentitis！(辽宁高考满分作文)18/366.利用with复合结构、分词(短语)等，结构更简明[高考佳句]①Ourschoolliesatthefootofamountain，thereisariverflowinginfrontofit.→Atthefootofamountainliesourschool，withariverflowinginfrontofit.(北京高考满分作文)②Theteachercameintothelecturehall，manystudentsfollowedhim.→Theteachercameintothelecturehall，followedbymanystudents.(广东高考满分作文)19/36③Ipickedupthecase.Ishoutedatthemanloudly.Buthedidn’thearmeandrodeaway.→Afterpickingupthecase，Ishoutedatthemanloudly，butherodetoofasttohearme.(湖南高考满分作文)20/367.利用虚拟语气，表示更传神[高考佳句]①Imissedbeinghitbythecarwithyourhelp.→Withoutyourhelp，Iwouldhavebeenhitbythecar.(安徽高考满分作文)②Itishightimeforbothlocalgovernmentandresidentstotakeeffectivemeasures.→Itishightimethatbothlocalgovernmentandresidentstookeffectivemeasures.(福建高考满分作文)21/368.利用复合句，句式更多变[高考佳句]①Tooursurprise，thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.→Whatsurprisedusmostisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.(重庆高考满分作文)②Itwasquiteanexperienceforbothofus，andIwillneverforgetitfortherestofmylife.→Itwasquiteanexperienceforbothofus，whichI’llneverforgetfortherestofmylife.(陕西高考满分作文)22/369.利用it句式，表示更丰富[高考佳句]①Personally，drinkingplentyofboiledwatereverydayisnecessary.→Ithinkitnecessarythatweshoulddrinkplentyofboiledwatereveryday.(陕西高考满分作文)我认为我们天天喝大量开水是必要。23/36②What’sworse，somedrivers，cyclistsandpedestriansdonotthinkobeyingtrafficrulesisvital.→What’sworse，somedrivers，cyclistsandpedestriansdonotthinkitvitaltoobeytrafficrules.(·江苏，满分作文)更糟糕是，一些司机，骑自行车者和行人没有认识到交通规则主要性。24/36③Youshouldprovidesomemoneytofundourprogram，aswellasofferussomepracticalsuggestions.That’sourdesire.→It’sourdesirethatyoushouldprovidesomemoneytofundourprogram，aswellasofferussomepracticalsuggestions.(重庆高考满分作文)我们渴望你能为我们项目提供一些资金，还能提供一些实用提议。25/36【即时演练】按要求转换以下句子7.Aboveall，wemustdosomethingtostoppollution.(用被动语态)____________________________________________________8.IrealizedtheimportanceofEnglishwhenIenteredseniorhighschool.(用强调句)____________________________________________________9.Wedon’tknowitsvalueuntilwelosehealth.(用倒装句)____________________________________________________26/3610.Ifitisn’twellorganized，themeetingwillbeafailure.(用省略句)____________________________________________________11.Wehadaverygoodtimewiththepeasantsthatday.(用感叹句)____________________________________________________12.Becausetherewastoomuchnoise，Icouldn’tgoonstudying.(用with复合结构)____________________________________________________27/36答案7.Aboveall，somethingmustbedonetostoppollution.8.ItwaswhenIenteredseniorhighschoolthatIrealizedtheimportanceofEnglish.9.Notuntilwelosehealthdoweknowitsvalue.10.Ifnotwellorganized，themeetingwillbeafailure.11.Whatagoodtimewehadwiththepeasantsthatday!12.Withthenoisegoingon，Icouldn’tgoonstudying.28/36单句跟踪演练Ⅰ.请用高级词汇替换以下句子中画线部分1.Hehasdecidedtobeateacherwhenhegrowsup.2.Developingveryquickly，theInternetcausesthebreakdownofface-to-facecommunication.3.Whenyouareboredwiththepeoplesometimes，you’dbetterfindaquietplace，listeningtosomeclassicalmusic.4.Hedidn’tlistentowhatIsaidintheclass.29/365.SuddenlyIthoughtofanideathatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.6.Assoonashearrived，hebeganhisresearch.答案1.determined/madeuphismind

2.givesriseto3.fedupwith

4.turnedadeafearto

5.Icameupwithanidea/anideaoccurredtome

6.On/Uponhisarrival30/36Ⅱ.按要求转换以下句子1.Ididn’ttakehisadvice，soIfailedintheexam.(用虚拟语气)___________________________________________________2.Ifitisso，Ihopeyouwillhaveawonderfultime.(用省略句)___________________________________________________3.Wecanachieveourgoalinthisway.(用倒装句)___________________________________________________31/364.Muchtooursurprise，Maryfailedinthefinalexam.(用名词性从句)___________________________________________________5.Becausetheweatherwasgood，ourjourneywascomfortable.(用短语代替从句)___________________________________________________6.Ifyougothroughthegate，you’llfindtheentrancetoBearCountry.(用并列句)___________________________________________________32/36答案1.IfIhadtakenhisadvice，Iwouldn’thavefailedintheexam.2.Ifso，Ihopeyouwillhaveawonderfultime.3.Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.4.WhatsurprisedusmostisthatMaryfailedinthefinalexam.5.Thankstothegoodweather，ourjourneywascomfortable.6.Gothroughthegate，and