考研英语-黄涛-启航教育

SectionIV作文考点及复习技巧

1.英汉思维习惯（直截了当direct=callaspadeaspade；indirect转弯抹角）

2.写作的现实与矛盾（wordless,incorrect）

3.写作的“四化”：

①语言准确化（accuracy）②语言多样化（variety）

③结构清晰化（clarity④内容简单化（simplicity）

4.写作的九条原则：

①语言第一（准确度、广度、难度、亮度）②结构第二（关联词）

③内容第三（要一致）④审题看图要认真

⑤文体要统一⑥主题要突出

⑦方式要多样化⑧首尾要照应

⑨考点要覆全

第一节高分词汇变化与替换

1.Moreandmoreyoungpeoplefinditmoreandmoredifficulttoadapttothefiercecompetition.

2.Moreandmorechildrenlikesurfingtheinternet.

Teenagers9surfingtheinternetisontheincrease/rise/drop/decline/.

Thenumberofteenagers9surfingtheinternetisontherise.

3.Amoreandmoreharmoniousclimateisneededwiththedevelopmentofsociety.

Thereisagrowingneed/demandfbranincreasinghannoniousclimateasoursocietyadvances.

4.Mostpeoplerealizethateverycitizenshouldhaveanequalchancetobeeducated.

Thevast/overwhelmingmajorityoffolksarcawarethateverycitizenshouldhaveanequal

chancetobeeducated.

5.Peoplebegantodiscusstheissueofmiddleschoolstudentsstudyingabroad.

Aspiriteddiscussionhassprungupwithregardto/asto/concemingtheissueofmiddleschool

studentsstudyingabroad.

6.1firmlysupportthisideathatweshouldmakefriendswithourneighbors.

Iamfirmlysupportiveofthisideathatweshouldbeongoodtermswithourneighbors.

7.Somepeopleoftenthinkeverybodyshouldhaveasenseofresponsibility.

Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthateverybodyshouldhaveasenseofresponsibility.

8.Whenwetalkaboutwhethercollegestudentsshouldbeinvolvedinbusinessactivities,

different

peoplehavedifferentideas.一淡到大学生是否应该参加商业活动的问题，不同的人持有不

同的观点。Whenitcomestowhethercollegestudentsshouldbeinvolvedinbusinessactivities,

ideas/opinionsvaryfrompersontoperson.

9.Thispicturehasadeepmeaningandindicatesadeepsocialphenomenontoo.

Thiscartoon/drawingbearsaexplicitmeaningandisindicativeofaprofoundsocial

phenomenonaswell.

10.Ithinkweshouldencouragechildrentofacesomehardship.Onlylikethis,theyareableto

face

theproblemtheywillmeetintheirlives.

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Inmypersonalsense,childrenareencouragedtogothroughsomehardship.Onlyinthismanner,

aretheycapableoffacingtheproblemtheywillconfrontintheirlives.

11.Wecanseefromthepicturethattherunnerreachesthefinishinglineandstartstowardsa

new

goalagain.

Ascanbeseenfromthepicture/isdepictedinthedrawing,therunner...lineandstrivesfbrthe

nextgoaloncemore.

12.Nowadays,thetrendofbecomingoldappearstobethebiggestproblem.

Currently,anagingpopulationhasbecomeaharsh/severeprobleminChina.

13.SoIamfullofthanksfbryourtimelyhelp.

ConsequentlyIamdeeplyobligedtoyouforyourtimelyhelp.

14.Inoursociety,somepeoplethinksupportingoldmenisnotasimportantasbefore.

Inourfast-developingcommunity,someindividualscontendthatsupportingtheoldisnolonger

regardedasmomentousasbefore.

15.Theythinktheydon'twanttolookaftertheirparentsfbrhavingnotime.

Theyoungstersmaintainthattheyareunwillingtolookaftertheirparentsforlackoftime.

16.Therewerenoourparents.Then,wehavenochancetoliveinthisworld.

Butfbr/Withoutourparents,wewouldhavenochancetocometotheworld.

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第二节作文典型错误分析

一.谓语动词（时态错误）

1.Wecollegestudentshadenoughtimetotakepart-timejobs,nomatterhowbusywewere.

2.Theyoungpeoplearefacingwithtoomanytemptationsnowadays.

3.Hisfaultissatisfywiththepastsuccessandpaylittleattentiontothepresentchallenge.

4.TheimportanceofculturalcommunicationjustletmoreforeignersknowChina.

二.主谓一致和代词（指代错误）

5.EveryaspectoftheChineseliveshavechangedinthepastdecade.

6.Oneoftheseriousproblemshumanbeingsarefacedwitharewatershortage.

7.Gettingupearlybenefitusinmorethanoneway.

8.Ishallmeetwithlotsofdifficulties,butIthinkIcanovercomeit.

三.逻辑主语与后面的主语不一致错误

9.Attheageofsix,myfatherbegantogivemeEnglishlessons.

10.Sotosolvethisproblem,itneedseveryonetomakegreateffort.

11.Comparedthetwopictureswecanconcludethattheflowersinagreen-housearetooweak

to

bearharshenvironment.

12.Confrontedthissituation,weshoulddeveloparationalattitudetowardsit.

四.平行结构错误

13.Ayoungfolkshouldstrikeabalancebetweenbeinghimselfandtofollowthecult.

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14.Nowadayspeoplenotonlyeatenough,butalsoeatbetter.

15.HisspokenEnglishisbetterthanallhisclassmates.

五.名词错误

16.Collegestudentisconfrontedwithvariousstressandtension.

17.Internetprovidesuswithmanyusefulinfbnnations.

六.连接词语错误

18.Becausesomecollegegraduatescouldnotfindabetterjob,sotheydecidedtocontinueto

pursueaseconddegree.

19.Althoughanopportunityisrare,butwemuststrivetoseizeit.

20.Thereis,asisvividlyillustratedinthispicture,ayoungmanisaskinghisbarbertocuthis

hair

inDavidBeckham'sstyle.

21.Chinaopenedthedoortotheoutsideworld,moreandmorepeoplevisitChinaandbecome

interestedinChineseculture.

22.Asthesayinggoes,utimeismoney.^^Inmypersonalsense,timeisevenmorepreciousthan

money.Whenmoneyisspent,wecanearnitback.Whentimeisgone,itwillneverreturn.This

isthereasonwhywemustvalueourtime.

七.拼写、表达、搭配错误

23.Westudentsshouldleam/studyasmuchknowledgeaspossible.

24.Inordertoserveforthepeoplewellinthefuture,Ishouldstudyhardnow.

25.TVnowplaysanimportantroleinourdailylife.Becausewecannotlivewithoutit.

26.Thefishingshipsaremanymorein1995thanin1990

27.Mysolutionstothisproblemhaveseveralways.

28.Whenoldproblemsaresolved,newproblemswillrise.

29.I'mdeterminedtostudymuchmoreharderthanlastterm.

30.Inthepasttwodecades,ourcountryhastakenplacegreatchanges.

九.词性错误

31.WeshoulddevelopChina'seconomic,andleadourcountrytoarich,strongnation.

32.Ourworldwillbrightifeveryoneshowslovetoothers.

33.Theincreasingpopulationeffectsonourenvironment.

十.句子成分错误

34.Peoplethinkgotothemoviewillcostalotofmoney.

35.ThepictureshowsanAmericangirlwhowearingthetraditionalChinesecostume.

36.Thebestwayshowloveistohelpthoseneedhelpintheirlife.

37.Asitisuniversallyacknowledged,knowledgeispower.

38.Moreandmorepeopledeeplybelievesmokingdoesharmtohealth,wastesmoney.

十一.标点符号错误

39.1won'tlosemyheart,instead,Tilstudyharder*.

40.1candowhateverIlikeinthelibrary.Forexample:reading,traveling,ordoingexercises.

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第三节作文经典句型练习

一.It+被动语态+that...

1.人们普遍认为，广泛的文化交流在许多方面对各国人民有好处。

thatextensiveculturalexchangedoesgoodto

peopleformvariousnationsinmanyways.

2.人们通常认为，一个人如果没有在现实生活中经历逆境和困难，他意志就决不能变得

足

够坚强。

Itisgenerallyacceptedthatwithoutexperiencinghardshipsanddifficultiesinreallifeonecan

neverbecomestrong-mindedenough.

3.人们必须承认，就青少年来说，一个充满竞争的环境对于生活技能的锻炼来说是必要

的。

Itmustbeadmittedthatacompetitiveenvironmentisnecessaryforthepracticeoflifeskills

on

thesideofteenagers.

4.不可否认的是，旅游业的过度发展可能会破坏某些风景区的生态平衡。

Itcannotbedeniedthattheovergrowthoftourismmaydisturbtheecologicalbalanceofsome

scenicresorts.

5.众所周知，体育锻炼能够提高和增进我们的身心健康。

Itiswellknowntousallthatphysicalexercisescanimproveandenrichourphysicaland

mentalwell-being.

二.Itis+形容词+that...

6.显而易见/不言而喻/毫无疑问，这种情况是直接由于过度的紧张和压力而造成的。

thatthesituationiscauseddirectlyby

excessivetensionaswellasstress.

7.人们对这个有争议的问题持不同的态度，这是可以理解的/不可避免的。

Itiscomprehensible/understandable(inevitable)thatpeople'sattitudesare

divergent/different

onthiscontroversialissue.

8.很难想象/相信我们年轻人竟然如此沉溺于这个虚拟的网络世界里。

Itisunimaginable(incredible/unbelievable)thatweyoungstersshouldbemuchaddictedtothe

virtualnetworld.

三.Itis+形容词+forsb.(sth.)todosth.

9.大家积极参加体育锻炼非常重要。因为体育锻炼不仅我们的身体有好处，而且对我们

的

心理和性格也有好处。

Itisobvious(self-evident,clear,undeniable,apparent),fortheywilldogoodnotonlytoour

bodybutalsotoourmindandpersonality.

10.现在大学生毕业时很难找到一个理想的工作，特别是那些学基础课程专业的学生，比

如

历史和数学。

__________________________________________________________uponhisgraduation,

especiallythosemajoringinfundamentalcoursessuchashistoryandmathematics.

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11.现在非常迫切需要采取紧急措施来控制非法毒品在青少年中大幅度蔓延。

Itishighlyimperativethaturgentmeasuresshouldbedonetocontrolthewidespreaduseof

illegaldrugsamongteenagers.

四.as/alongwith/Coupledwith”随着"句型

12.随着经济的快速发展，中国人民的生活标准己经大大提高，许多家庭能够买得起房子

和汽车。

Alongwiththerapidgrowthofeconomy,thelivingstandardsoftheChinesepeoplehavebeen

greatlyimproved.Housesandcarsarewithineasyreachof（买得起）manyfamilies.

13.随着每年培养的大学生越来越多，求职市场的情况正变得愈加严峻。

__________________________________________________________________eachyear,the

situationinthejobmarketisgettingtighterandtighter.

14.随着工业和农、业的不断进步，缺水的问题也将越严重。

Asindustryandagricultureadvances,theproblemofwatershortagewillbethemoreserious.

15.随着中国进步开放和扩大与其它国家的教育交流，出国留学在中学生中正越来越流

行。

AsChinaopensfurthertotheoutsideworldandincreasesitseducationalexchangewithother

countries,goingabroadtostudyisincreasinglyfashionableamongmiddleschoolstudents.

£.Therebe句型

16.在过去十年里，年轻已婚夫妇想生孩子的数量已出现了明显的下降趋势。

Inthepasttenyearstherehasbeenamarkeddeclineinthenumberofyoungmarriedcouples

whowanttohavechildren.

17.近来，关于是否要克隆人类出现了热烈的讨论/辩论。

Inrecentyears,therehasbeenaheated/spiriteddebate/controversyconcerningwhetherhuman

beingsshouldbecloned.

18.现在仍然有许多孩子因为贫困而不能上学。

Therearestillquiteanumberofchildrenwhocannotaffordtogotoschoolbecauseofpoverty.

19.随着因特网业的发展，越来越多的人会上网冲浪。

AstheInternetindustrydevelops,therewillbeanincreasingnumberoffolkssurfingontheweb.

20.现在人们对孩子不得不要承受的学习和心理上的沉重负担表现出越来越多的担忧。

___________________________________________________________________________,both

academicandpsychological,whichourchildrenhavetobear.

六.表示“使...变得…”的句型make+宾语+形容词make+形容词+forsb.todosth.

21.信息技术的广泛引用会使我们的工作和生活更加方便和丰富。

Thewidespreadintroductionofmodeminformationtechnologywillmakeourworkandlife

moreconvenientandcolorful.

22.最重要的是，我们应该不断地加强我们的环保意识，使我们的世界成为适合人类居住

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的美好家园。

Mostimportantly,weshouldincreasinglyheightenourenvironmentalawarenessand

23.现代交通意味着让人们出门旅行更加快捷、方便和舒适。

Modemtransportationmeansmakingithighlyfast,convenientandcomfortableforpeopleto

travelfarawayfromhome.

24.先进的医学科技使得人类的寿命更长，遭受各种疾病越少。

Advancedmedicalsciencehasmadeitpossibleforhumanbeingstoleadamuch...

七.sothat（以便）/so…that（如此…以致）句型

25.青少年是如此喜欢时装以至他们花大量钱来买时髦的衣服。

Teenagersaresokeenaboutfashionsthattheyspendlargeamountsofmoneyonfashionable

clothes.

26.我们青年人应该学会以恰当的方式来减轻压力以便我们能够更好地适应这个竞争社

会。

___________________________________________________________________wecanbetter

adapttothecompetitivesociety.

八.非限制性定语从句

27.有些人可能沉溺于网上冲浪，这会危害他们的身心健康。

Somepeoplemaybeaddictedtonetsurfing,whichimpairstheirphysicalandmentalhealth.

28.越来越高的离婚率将引发一系列的问题，这已受到大众的极大关注。

Theincreasinglyhighdivorceratewillcauseaseriesofproblems,which

九.用分词结构扩展内容

29.由于人们没有意识到地球上的水资源是有限的，因此人们每天浪费了大量的水。

People,arelimited,wasteagreat

amountofwatereveryday.

30.公民有权利知道真相和约束名人，从而形成一种公众舆论。

Citizenshavetherighttoknowthetruthandsupervisethecelebrity,thusformingapublic

opinion.

31.由于父母亲对孩子寄予极大希望，所以当他们得知其孩子考试不及格时，他们再也抑

制不住自己极度的失望和生气了。

Havingplacedgreatexpectationsontheirson,theycouldn'tholdbackhugedisappointment

andangerwhentheylearnttheirson'sfailuretopassthetest.

32.随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的人们开始购买汽车来满足工作和生活的需要，也就

恶化了交通问题。

,agrowingnumberoffolksbegintobuycarsto

meettheneedsofworkandlife,therebyworseningthetrafficproblems.

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十.结论句型

33.只要我们采取有效的措施，由老龄化社会所引发的问题将会减少到最小程度。

Aslongaswetakeeffectivemeasures,theproblemscausedbytheagedsocietywillbe

reduced

tothesmallestextent.

34.只要我们马上明智地采取行动，我们一定能够解决当前的这个紧迫的问题。

,weareboundtosolvethepresentsevereproblem.

35.只要政府和个人做出努力，就一定能找到一个解决这个问题的方法。

Aslongasthegovernmentandindividualsstrivehard,therewillcertainlybeawaytosolvethis

problem.

36.从提供的所有证据来看，我们可以稳妥地得出如下结论，体育锻炼对青少年的心理和

智力的发展都有益。

Judgingfromallevidenceoffered,wecansafelycometotheconclusionthatphysicalexercises

arebeneficialtothepsychologicalandintellectualgrowthofteenagers.

37.简而言之，在优先考虑发展经济的时候，应该做出大的努力来加强伦理和道德教育。

Inshort(Inaword/Allinall/Tosumup),greateffortsshouldbemadetoenhanceethicand

moraleducationwhenhighpriorityisgiventotheeconomicdevelopment.

38.只有当这些措施付诸实践的时候，缺水的问题才能得到解决。

Itisonlywhenthesemeasuresareputintopracticethattheshortageofwatercanbesolved.

39.只有当这个问题得到有效地解决时，我们才能维持一个稳定和谐的社会。

Onlywhenthisproblemissolvedeffectivelycanwemaintainastableandharmonioussociety.

40.如果各行各业的人们足够关注这个问题，我们城市的生活将一定更加美好。

___________________________________________________________,ourlifeinthecity

will

certainlybemoreenjoyable.

第四节写作基本功句30

一.主语

【.找到问题出现的原因将会大大地帮助你减少压力和紧张。

willgreatlyhelpyoureducestressaswellastension.

2.很难想象没有因特网我们的生活会是什么样子。

Itisdifficulttoimaginewhatlifewouldbelikewithouttheinternet.

3.鼓励大学毕业生去西部工作是一个明智的决策。

ItisawisedecisiontoencouragecollegestudentstoworkinwestChina.

4.从他的行为中可以清楚看到，他不讲道德。

hehasnomorality.

5.最重要的是我们应该意识到这个问题的严重性。

weshouldbeawareoftheseriousnessofthisproblem.

6.越来越多的国家欢迎不同的文化证明了我的观点。

Thefactprovesouropinionthatanincreasingnumberofcountrieswelcomedifferentcultures.

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7.大学生是否应该参加社交活动是个有争议的话题。

collegestudentsshouldparticipateinbusinessactivities.

二、谓语

8.我们年轻人应该行为举止恰当，有礼貌。

Weyouthsshouldconductourselvesproperlyandhavegoodmanners.

9.这些行为应该受到道德和舆论的谴责。

moralityandpublicopinions.

10.应该采取有效的措施来阻止这种不良现象的发生。

三、宾语

11.政府应该在这个问题的解决中扮演重要的角色。

12.人们深信，学校应该减轻压力，家庭应该重建和谐，政府应该加大投入。

Folksareconvincedthatschoolsshouldreducepressure,thatfamiliesshouldrebuildharmony

andthattheadministrationshouldincreasefinancialinvestment.

13.这对于开阔人们的眼界是很有好处的。

Itisbeneficialforbroadeningpeople'shorizon/vision.

14.现在许多人无视公共规章，我们应向公众呼吁树立公德心。

Currentlyanincreasingnumberoffolksdisregardpublicrules/regulations.

四、表语

15.我认为这个事实是不言而喻的。

16.这些措施似乎很合理。

五、定语

17.有很多因素导致了这个问题。

18.良好的社会风气能促进家庭的和谐及社会的进步。

Favorablepublicmoralclimatecanenhancetheharmonyoffamiliesaswellasthesocial

advance.

19.大学应该提供实践课程，这对社会有利。

Collegesoughttoprovidepracticalcourses,whichisconducivetothewholesociety.

20.性别歧视是现代社会的耻辱，我们每个人都有责任解决它。

Sexdiscriminationisashameformodemsociety,whichallofusareduty-boundto

eliminate.

六、状语

21.有了坚定的决心，人就能够克服他所遇到的任何困境和危险。Withastrong

determination,

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oneisabletoovercomewhateverhardshipsanddangershemayencounter.

22.没有他无私的帮助，她不可能度过这次难关。

Withouthisselflessassistance,shewouldn'thavepulledthroughthisdifficulty.

23.远离亲人朋友，人会觉得孤独。

Livingfarfromrelativesandfriends,peoplewillfeellonely.

24.面对这个问题，我们应该努力找到解决它的办法。

七、补语

25.观念的不同使他很难理解他父母亲。

Differentviewsmakeitdifficultfbrhimtounderstandhisparents.

26.我们发现树立正确的人生观对大学生来说是非常重要的。

27.大家的无私照顾和关心使她的生活充满了阳光。

Everyone'sselflesscareandattentionmakesherlifeftillofsunlight.

八、情态动词

28.我们应该努力维护公共道德，改进社会风气。

29.我们必须努力抓住和充分利用生活中的每•个机会来提高自己。

Wemuststrivetoseizeandmakefulluseofeveryopportunityinlifetoimproveourselves.

30.我们应教育公众树立正确的时间观念。

九、作文常用句子的写法：

①主i胃宾：Everyonedreamsofattainingsuccessinhiscaree匚

②主系表：Inthatway,competitioncanbecomeasensibleandpositivething.

③主谓状:Weshouldconfronthardshipsfearlesslyandstrivetoovercomethem.

④主谓宾（宾补）Somestudentsholditasensiblechoicetotakearationalattitude.

⑤并歹峋：Peoplehavedifferentproblemsandconsequentlythecausesforstressandtension

aredifferent.

⑥主从复合句，（主语、状语、定语从句、同谓语从句），要掌握连接词的运用

⑦句子的构成（DIY+Enhancement）

第五节考研作文常用九大句式

1.主动和被动句灵活运用

目前；世界正在面临着的问题

Currently/Atpresent,oneofthepressingproblemsfacingournation/worldtodayis.

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Itcanbeeasilyseenfromthepicturethat（后接句子）

Agreatdealofdueattentionshouldbepaidto+N....（应当大量适当地重视）

2.Therebe结构和Itis放在句首的形式

Thereareanincreasingnumberoffolkswho（后接定语从句）

人们慢慢认识到—.

Thereisagrowingworldwideawarenessof+N.

Itismostlikelythatthedrawerintendsnotonlytoinfbnnusoftheobviousfactbutalsoto

set

usthinkingwhatisimpliedinthiscartoon.

3.同位语的设置

Courage,anindispensablequalityfbraperson,canhelpusovercomeanytroubleontheway

to

success.

4.疑问句形式

Whyistheresuchatrend?Whyistheresuchaphenomenon?

5.倒装句形式

Simplydrawnasthiscartoonappearstobe,yetitconveysaprofoundimplication.

6.强调句形式

Itisthisthought-provokingdrawingthatmakesmeawareofitsrealisticsignificancetoour

daily

lifeandwork.

7.从句形式

Howimpressivethecartoonisindescribingoneofthemostwidespread/prevalentsocial

phenomenonconcerning/withregardto

8.虚拟语气

如果没有希望工程，那些孩子将永远不会学到宝贵的知识。

IftherewerenoProjectHope,thosechildrenwouldn'tacquirevaluableknowledge.

如果情况继续恶化下去，我们将付出更加昂贵的代价。

Ifthesituationcontinuedtodeteriorate,wewouldpayamuchhigherpricefbrit.

9.引用名人名言

______________________________,courageisthemotherofsuccess.

Astheoldsayinggoes,everylifehasitsrosesandthorns.（生活有甜也有苦。）

第六节PartB图画作文高分策略

描述图画段落

1.描述图画开始句

Asisapparently/vividly/ridiculously/interestinglyshown/depicted/drawninthe

picture/cartoon/drawing/photograph,（后接完整单独句子描写图画）

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2.开始真正描写图画

如图所示，介词+动词谓语+主语，+非谓语动词，+with伴随结构。

在图画中央有，它，周围有.（可以使用倒装，主语与前文

一致，可使用非限定性定语从句或者现在分同，介词做伴随结构）

2001年考研真题大作文图片

如图所示，黑暗中有一盏小小的油灯，它向周围散发着光亮。

Asisshowninthecartoon,inthedarknesshappilystandsanoillamp,spreadingbrightness

arounditself.

JustasanoldArabproverbsays,loveisjustlikeanoillamp,beingbrighterinthedarker

places.

/JustasanoldArabproverbsays,wherethereislove,thereishope.

2006年考研真题大作文图片

如图所示，在椅子上有一个年轻人，希望理发师把自己的头发理成贝克汉姆的样子。

Asisvividlydrawninthepicture,,like

DavidBeckham.

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2002年考研真题大作文图片

照片中央站着一位美丽的美国女孩，她穿着传统的中国服饰，佩戴着各种各样的饰

物,脸

上洋溢着灿烂的笑容。

Asisvividlyshowninthephoto,,(whois)dressedin

Chinesetraditionalclothes,,.

2005年考研真题大作文图片

图画中央躺着一位老年人，蜷缩着像一个皮球，他被四个子女赶出门外；而四个子女各

自

把守着自己家的大门，拒绝接纳老人。

Asisironicallydepictedinthedrawing,inthemiddleofthepictureliesanoldman.He

croucheslikeafootball,whoisrejectedbyhissonsanddaughter.Theyareguardingtheir

homes

respectivelyandrefusingtotakecareoftheirfather.应改为卜面高分句型：

2003年考研真题大作文图片

如图所示，温室里有一朵柔嫩的小花，长的很茂盛，而温室为它遮风挡雨.当小花从温室

中搬出来的时候，它无法抵抗风雨的侵蚀，很快就枯萎了，任由它的花叶随风飘零。

Asisvividlydepicted,,growingvigorously,with

theshelterprotectingitfromthebrushofthestorm.Whenremovedoutoftheprotection,the

flowercannotstandthestormandquickly,withitsleavesfallinginthewind.

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2004年考研真题大作文图片

操场上有一个小伙子在跑步，向着终点冲刺。然而，终点又被命名为起点。尽管他已经

很累了，脸上大汗淋漓，但是他还是在乐观地奋力继续跑下去。

Asisshowninthecartoon,,,

whichisdefinedasanotherstartingpoint.,,he

is

strivingtocontinuehisjourneyoptimistically.

第七节图画作文精彩段落(极力推荐)

一.起始段

1.图画/图表描述段

(1)Asisshowninthepicture,themoststrikingfeatureofthedrawingisthat(从句)....It

ismostlikelythatthedrawerintendsnotonlytoinformusofthefactbutalsotosetus

thinkingaboutitspracticalsignificance.(描述图画)

(2)尽管这幅图血看似设计简单，但其寓意却是非常深奥的。作者真实目的不是这副画本

身，而是要引导我们去探求在它背后究竟隐藏着什么。

Simplydesignedasthedrawingseemstobe,thesymbolicmeaningisasdeepasoceans.The

author'srealpurposeisnotthedrawingitself,buttoleadustofindwhathidesbehindtheice

burg.

(3)Itseemstomethatthecartoonistissendingamessageabouttheimportance/necessityof

.Thisdrawingisattractingourattentiontothissocialissuethat.

(4)Asisvividlydepictedintheabovepicture,thereisnodoubtthatitssymbolicmeaningsubtly

conveyedshouldbegivendeepconsideration.

2.热点话题引出段

(5)Inrecentyearsthephenomenonthat(后接从句)现象,whichhasarousedgreatconcernin

varioussections,shouldbecondemnedseverelyormadeillegal.Thisissuehasbroughtabout

lotsofdirectorindirectinfluences/effects/impactsonoursociallife,noneofwhichis

haimless.(反面话题)

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(6)Perhapsthemostthought-provokingphenomenonconfrontingthenationnowadaysis(名

词)whichispervasiveinallwalksoflives.(中性话题)

(7)(名词)....issowidespreadthatwecanwitnessthepositiveeffectsofthisissueeverywhere

/itremainsamongthemostprevalentsocialissuesinthepastdecades.(正面话题)

(8)(名词)…,asatraditionalvirtuethathasbeenhighlyvalued/treasuredbyChinesepeople

forthousandsofyears,seemstobeignoredanddiscardedinthesedecades.(反面话题)

二、拓展段

1.利弊说明段

(9)Acomparativeanalysisofthepositiveandnegativeaspectsof(名词)willperhaps

provideuswithabettersenseoftheeventualimpactof.

(10)Advantagesanddisadvantagesarethebasicdualconceptsofnearlyeverythinginourlife.It

goeswithoutsayingthatforeveryadvantagetherewillbeadisadvantage.Anadvantageforone

groupmightprovedisadvantagetoothers.

2.意义阐释段(引申/象征)

(11)Simplydesignedasthepictureis,thesymbolicmeaningitconveysisdeepandprofound.It

is,mostlikely,thatthedrawerintendsnotonlytopresentthefacttousbutalsotosetus

thinkingaboutitssocialsignificance.

(12)Aftercarefulthinkingandreflection,wecometounderstandtheenlighteningpicture/wise

remarkstepbystep.Icontendthatthisthought-provokingpictureconveystwolayersof

meanings.

(13)Itgoeswithoutsayingthatthedrawingsaimatrevealingaprevailingandseriousproblem

inChina/inthecontemporarycommunity.

(14)Symbolically,thedelicateflowerisnaturallyassociatedwiththeyouths,overprotectedby

theirparents,withthegreenhouseprotectingthemfrombrushofstorms,which

epitomizes/symbolizestheintensecompetitionintherealworld.

3.观点对比段

(15)Whenitcomesto,somepeoplemaintainthat.Otherscontendthatthe

oppositeistrue.Thereisprobablysometruthtobotharguments,but.

(16)Generallyspeaking,differentpeoplealwayshavedifferentviewstowardsthesamequestion,

notbecausethequestioniscomplicated,butbecauseofthediversityofthoughts.Peoplehave

differenthabitsofthinking,differentpositionsandsoon.

4.原因列举段

(17)Ignoringcauseandeffectisexactlythesamethingasfoilingtolookbothwayswhen

crossingabusyinteraction.Thus,itisessentialtoexamineeveryangleinordertofully

understandthenatureofaperplexingproblem.

(18)Thereasonfor...arebothcomplicatedandvaried.Ideemthephenomenonresultsfrom_

and.However,themainreasonisquitelikely+N.

(19)Thefollowingcanbethecombinationoffactorsgivingrisetothisissue.

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(20)很明显，有很多复杂的原因导致这个现象的发生，而下面的是最有代表性的。

Apparently,avarietyofcomplicatedfactorscontributetothephenomenon,withthefollowing

onebeingtheforemost.

(21)除了下面的原因，没有更好的了。为这样一个复杂的现象给出原因不是一个简单的事

情。

Icanthinkofnobetterreasonsforthephenomenonotherthanthefollowingtwo.Itisno

simplejobtoinducereasonsforthiscomplicatedphenomenon.

(22)Myfirstconsiderationis./Themainreason,inmypersonalsense,liesin+N./

isalwaysthetopofthelistofmyarguments.Nconstitutesanothercauseofthisproblem.

/Anadditionalfactorrestswith.Anequallyessentialcausethatdeservesourattentionis

+N.

5.举例论证段

Lookingaround,wemayfindexamplestoonumeroustolist.Athinghappeningaroundus

may

serveasatypicalexample.

(23)Thelistofsuchinstancescangoonandon,and1can'tthinkofbetterillustrationsthanthe

followingexamplewhichwillbesufficienttoprovetheabovefact/phenomenon.

(24)我们人类历史上与这个话题相关的例子有很多，在我所听到的，看到的，经历过的

所

有和这个话题相关的例子之中，最有说服力的是，除了这个例子，我再也找不到

更有说服力的了。(45字)

Ourhumanhistoryhasbeenfilledwithavarietyofexamplesof+(考试话题).Amongallthe

touchinginstancesrelatingto+(考试话题)thatIhaveheard,noticed,andexperienced,themost

impressiveoneis+名词.Icannolongerthinkofbetterexamplesotherthan+N(名词).

(25)Accordingtoarecentinvestigation,thereareanincreasingnumberoffolkswhosharethe

concernabouttheproblemof___whichisanissuethatdeservespublic,professionaland

politicalattentionnotonlybycityresidentsbutalsobyfanners.

6.分层论述段

(26)Tosolvethisissue/problemisatwo-wayoperation.Foronething,individualsshould

enhancetheconsciousnessof.Foranother,legislativestepsneedtobeintroducedto

control

/restrain/stimulate/encouragethisphenomenon.

(27)Thepainterwantstotellusthat,justlikerunning,whateverwedo,weshouldn'tstop

making

progress.Forastart,itappliestoindividu