高中英语作文建议信公开课【】课件

Aletterofgivingadvice

1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其效劳提出建议或忠告。3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌领先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。写作攻略Heading说明写作意图；一两个句子2.Body提出具体建议；层次清楚3.Ending总结；照应主题如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三局部建议信写作的本卷须知：a．这类文章一定要符合英语信件的根本格式。b．这类文章的根本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。

Dear

XXX,

①

Iamglad/sorrytohearthatyouhavedifficultyinlearningEnglish.

②Ifeelthatitismydutytomakesomesuggestionsconcerningenvironmentalprotection.

Hereissomeadvicethatmaybebeneficialtoyou.Firstly，….

Secondly,…．Thirdly,….

Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestions

useful.Yours,XXX写作语料库：英语建议信的常用词句

A.建议信开头常用句式(对应材料,说明写作意图)1．AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper/ontheinternet,Iamsorrytoknowthat…2．Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto…3．Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter.4.Ifeelthatitismydutytomakesomesuggestionsconcerning….5.Iamwritingtosharesomeadviceon…withyou.B.建议信第二段常用句式,给出建议及理由，井然有序。1.

Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…我想如果你能……可能会更好2.

Inmypersonalopinion,itwouldbewiseofyoutotakethefollowingactions.在我看来，如果你能采取以下措施，将是一种明智的选择。3.

Firstly，…Secondly,…．Thirdly,….4.

To

begin

with,….In

addition,….What’s

more,….Last

butnotleast,….建议信结尾常用句式

1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoseriousconsideration.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。2.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/有用/有帮助。3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。假设你是李华，在校园英语论坛〔forum〕上看到一些同学的帖子，他们在就如何学好英语寻求帮助。请你以Bookworm的网名给他们回帖，结合自己的经验提出一些建议。内容提示：1〕培养学习兴趣；2〕找到适合的学习方法；3〕勤学好问，多实践。词数100左右改错1.I’llhelpyouinyourEnglish2.MyEnglishisnotverywell.3.Finishit

onyourself.4.Therearesomeadvise.5.Don’tafraidofEnglish.6.Setupalearningaim,goaheadtoachieveit.7.Setdowntheknowledgeintheclass8.Youmustlistencarefullyandfollowteacherssaid.9.Onlyifyoureadaboutitaheadofschedule,youwilllearnitbetter.with/OnyourownisbeandwhatadvicewillyouWell---goodOn----byIamsureyou’llbesuccess.Youcansetdownthatyouthinkisimportant.successfulYoucansetdownwhatyouthinkisimportant.allBeautifulsentencesinyourcompositions

1.HereissomeusefuladviceforyouabouthowtolearnEnglishwell(class2JirunZe)2.HearingthatyouareintroublewithEnglish,I’dliketogiveyousomeadviceonhowtogetalongwellwithEnglish.(Class1MaguoQin)3.NoonecanfailtonoticethefactthatlisteningandreadingareplayinganimportantroleinlearningEnglish.(Class1HanXu)4.IwillgiveyousomenecessaryadvicewhichcanimproveyourEnglish.(Class7XieShuang)5.Noonecandenythefactthatitisimportanttolistentotheteachercarefully.(Cass7LiuxinYan)6.Onlyintheseways,canyouhaveagoodcommandofEnglish.假设你是李华，在校园英语论坛〔forum〕上看到一些同学的帖子，他们在就如何学好英语寻求帮助。请你以Bookworm的网名给他们回帖，结合自己的经验提出一些建议。内容提示：1〕培养学习兴趣；2〕找到适合的学习方法；3〕勤学好问，多实践。词数100左右DearFriends,

Fromtheforum,I’velearnedthatmanystudentshavesomeproblemsinEnglishlearning.(IamsorrytoknowthatyouhavedifficultyinlearningEnglish.)NowIamwillingtosharemyadvicewithyou.

Hereissomeadvicethatmaybehelpfultoyou.Firstly,itisimportanttocultivate/developyourinterestinlearningEnglish.Asyouknow,interestisthebestteacher,whichcanencourageustolearnEnglishactively.Secondly,findingasuitablemethodissignificant.OnlyifyouuseeffectivemethodscanyouimproveyourEnglish.Thirdly,itissuggestedthatyoushouldaskyourteacherforhelpwhenyouareintrouble.Asyouknow,practicemakesperfect.Ihopeyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.IbelieveyourEnglishwillbeimproved.yours,Bookworm1.怀古思今，激发科技报国热情，科技创新助推中华民族伟大复兴的梦想早日实现2、欧共体形成、日本成为经济大国、不结盟运动兴起和中国的振兴，这些共同构成了世界的多极化趋势。3、多极化趋势还只是一种趋势和方向，不是一种成熟的国际关系格局。4、两极格局虽然受到多极化的冲击，在当时仍是国际关系