2023年高考英语（深化复习+命题热点提分）专题15短文改错

PAGEPAGE1专题15短文改错1.短文改错Inancienttimes,people'stransportationmeansweretheirfoot.Soitwasratherdifficultforthemtravelfromoneplacetoanother.Asaresult,theyknowfewthingsabouttheoutsideworld.Theworldwastoobigforthemtounderstandit.Withscienceandtechnologydevelopingrapidly,moreandmoretransportationmeansappear,suchasbicycles,buses,cars,trains,shipsandplanes,thatcarrygoodsandpassengerstoandfromeverycorneroftheworld.Andtheyshortenthedistanceamongpeople.Withthehelpofthesemodernfacilities,peoplefromallovertheworldcangetinconstantlytouchwitheachother.Soitismucheasyforpeoplefromdifferentnationstounderstandeachotherbutcommunicatewitheachother.Thustheworldisgettingsmallerandsmaller,justlikebigfamily.第五句：that→which第六句：among→between第七句：constantly→constant第八句：easy→easier;but→and第九句：big前加a/one2.短文改错Insurancecompaniesarenormallywillingtoinsureanything,butitmustbeuniquetoinsureadish.Itwasaunusualpiedish,foritwaseighteenfeetinlongandsixfeetinwidth.Theyhadbeenpurchasedbyalocalauthoritysothatanenormouspiecouldbakedforanannualfair.Thepiecommitteedecidedthatthebestwaytotransportwouldbebyacanal,sotheyinsureditforthetrip.Shortafteritwaslaunched,thepiecommitteewenttothelocalinntocelebrate.Inthesametime,anumberofteenagerclimbedontothedishandheldalittlepartyoftheirown.Dancingprovedtobemorethanthedishcouldbear,butduringthepartyitcapsized(倾覆)andsinkinsevenfeetofwater.答案：第二句：a→an;long→length第三句：They→It;could后加be第四句：去掉a第五句：Short→Shortly第六句：In→At;teenager→teenagers第七句：but→for/because;sink→sank3.短文改错I'velearntfromthenoticethatyou'relookingforanEnglisheditorforusschoolpaper.I'mwrittenthislettertoapplyfortheposition.I'mLiHua,SeniorThreestudentinourschool.Inmyview,Imetyourrequirements.Foronething,I'mwillingtodevotesomeofmysparetimetoserveothers.Foranother,I'mgoodatbothEnglishorFineArts.I'meitherskilledinusingcomputers.Iwouldbegladifyoucouldoffertomeanopportunityforaninterview.I'mlookingforwardtoyourkindlyreplyatyourearliestconvenient.答案：第一句：us→our第二句：written→writing第三句：Senior前加a第四句：met→meet4.短文改错ItwasasunnydaytodaybutIwenttoXishanParkforaspringouting.ThemomentwhenIenteredthepark,avarietyofbeautifulflowersandgreentreescameintosight.Attractingbythebeauty,Icouldn'thelptakingphotos.AsIwanderedalongthepath,enjoyingthebeautifulview,Inoticedanythingunpleasant.Twoschoolgirlsjumpedoverthefencetopickflowers.Obviouslytheydidn'trealizethattheirbehaviorhasdonegreatdamagetobeautyofthepark.Withouthesitation,Iwentupandstoppedherpolitely.Feelingquiteembarrassed,thetwogirlscameoutimmediate.Thentheytookpicturesinsidethefence.Seeingthat,Ismiledandeverythinglookednicerinmyeye.答案：第一句：but→and第二句：去掉when第三句：Attracting→Attracted第四句：anything→something第六句：has→had;beauty前加the第七句：her→them第八句：immediate→immediately第九句：inside→outside第十句：eye→eyes5.短文改错Lastweekend,IhelpedmygrandparentsprepareforourtriptoBeidaihe.OnSaturdaymorning,togetherwithmygrandparents,IsearchedfortheInternetforthetrainschedule,theweatherinBeidaihe,andsomehotelinformations.Intheafternoon,Iwenttothetrainstationandmanagetobuytwoticketsformygrandparentsbuttherewasalongqueue.Afterdinner,Ipackedintothesuitcasewhichmygrandparentswouldneed,suchasclothes,glasses,aumbrella,andamap.Thenextmorning,Iwenttothestationseethemoff.Wavedgoodbyetothemontheplatform,Ifelthappyforthemandwishedthemasafetyjourney.6.短文改错IlivedinStockholmfor18monthswhenIwasinmytwenty.Iwasabletogetseveralfunjobs,taughtguitarandpiano,andEnglishatlanguageschool.Theywantedeveryonewithan“American〞accent.Ialsotakethebarexamwithstudents.IbecamefriendsinmanySwedesandstudentswhoarefromaroundtheworld.IwasgreatprivilegedtoattendtheNobelPrizeBallattheKing'spalace.Itwasveryformal.Themenhadtoweartophats,whiteglovesbutcarrycanes!Mylistofadventuresistoomuchlongtodocumenthere.Itisbyfarthebigadventureandlearningexperienceofmylife.答案：第一句：twenty→twenties第二句：taught→teaching;at后加a第三句：everyone→someone/somebody第四句：take→took第五句：in→with第六句：great→greatly第八句：but→and第九句：去掉much第十句：big→biggest7.短文改错Oneofmyhappiestchildhoodmemorieswerehavingdinnerwithmyparentsandtwosisters.Asaresult,foundthatweseldomhadachancetogettogether,thenwedecidedwewouldsetasidethreeeveningstheweekforasitdowndinner.Firstwetriedsettingthreefixeddaysforourexperiment—Mondays,WednesdaysorFridays.Afteracoupleofweekoftryingthisplan,almosteveryonewasunhappy.Forawhile,thekidsbegantoresisttheidea.Theysaidtheywouldrathertospendthetimewiththeirfriendsortakepartinsomeactivities.Gradual,though,theybegantoseetheseeveningstogetherforaverydifferentway.Welaughedalotandwediscussedabouteachother'sproblems.Sinceafewmonths,weallfeltthatwehadbeenabletobuildmuchstrongrelationshipswiththefamilythanwehadbefore.8.短文改错Thismorning,IwasjoggingintheparkwhenIcaughtsightawalletonabench.Clear,someonehadleftittherebyanaccident.Ipickeditupandcheckedthecontents.Insidethem,Ifoundsomemoneyoracardwithaphonenumber.Believingthattheownerwouldbeworrying,Iimmediatelytrythenumber.Amananswereditinananxiousvoice.HeardthatIhadhiswallet,hesighedwithreliefandtoldmehewouldreturnrightaway.Tenminutelater,themanarrived.Afterconfirminghewastheowner,Ihandedthewalletbac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