高考英语记叙文高分写作训练

高英记文分作练一教目艺品时这主要外一成Chinglish。不积语言逻辑想二教过任一赏一佳，验分作格和言累好任二了高评标，根欣并判外篇作文任三如使丰的式（中英习任四运今的词句，写一作（参考录高词）任五互评，相习各评一最，前展。任六开作的意并析篇作1

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这些活使我置身于一个不熟悉的新世界，扩大了我的知识范围，使我能够接触课本上没有的东西。参加社活动并不会占用学生太多的时间上全部的时间都用到习上并不健康，正如那句老话：只工作，不玩耍，聪明的孩子会变傻。我每一个人都应该尽自己的一份力使我们的生活环境更美好one’part)不忽视的是保护环境是我们的责任。因，垃圾污染这一问题必须被看作是需要得到全社会努力解决的主要问题之一。只有通一个全面的垃圾处理系统才能够充分解决这一问题。此，我们应该提倡一种更加节俭的生活方式，以减小垃圾污染的增长规模。10.解这问题更重要的一点在很大程度上取决于我们对于社会和环境的责任果能够唤起广泛的责任感，那么我们离达到人与自然之间的和谐就不远了。IV.expressionsfolksrosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，pleasurableexcellent,3.dreadful,unfavorable,adverse,ill有害的替换bad（果bad做语，可以有be换。）eg.armyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesingames,romancewithgirls/boysorindorms.Whenitapproachesgraduation,theyfindtheirrecordsimpressive.armyof,of,aamultitudeofhostof,many,ifmost替换individuals,ifnottheideathat同理用most,ifall替换aquitefew替ideathat,theattitudethat,itisthat,itis替因为是书面语，以要加。affair,business,matter替shared代commonfruits替换10.formypart,fperspective替opinion.11.Increasing(ly),替moreand注没有growingly这形式。所以当修饰名词时用修形容词，副词用sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.Sthispopularwith12.littleifanythingor换13.替helpful.14.purchaser替换4

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