读后续写满分作文模板

读后续写【题型分析与写作方法】题型解析：读后续写是写作的一种新题型，顾名思义就是我们在阅读一篇还未写完的文章之后，按照语段所给的开头写出两个语段（约150词），从而把这篇文章未写完的部分补充完整，使之浑然一体。读后续写不仅要求考生准确使用词汇和语言框架，会合理润色语言，更重要的是，它还要求考生能够明白应该如何整理续写内容，以使得其形成和前文统一连贯的、能够表述完整信息的表达内容。应该说，这种题型是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁，它不仅考查了考生在阅读文章的基础上分析文章逻辑的能力，又考查了考生的创造力、想象力，以及运用准确丰富的语言进行表达的能力。解题方法：下面是读后续写类作文的写作步骤：读文精读文章，确定文章线索。每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索，比如，是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索，这样有利于考生“顺藤摸瓜”完成续写。确定文章体裁和主要内容（话题）。注意文中的关键词，也就是故事中的时间、地点、人物和事件等信息。审题仔细审题，明确续写要求。一般短文后面的“注意”都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制、续写段落的首句提示，这样考生才能做到“心中有数”。谋段在读文、审题的基础上，先仔细阅读续写部分所给出的两段段首文字，再构思这两段要写的段落大意。根据原文情节确定好段落大意，找出每一段的写作要点，然后再补充相关细节和常识，这两段加起来要能写出10到15个句子，以满足续写词数的要求。初写拟写草稿，修改错词病句。在确定了思路和内容之后，拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性及语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。写作时要注意，所用的人称和时态要与原材料一致。定稿完成初稿后，考生需先结合原材料中故事线索读一读自己续写的内容，既要确保所写内容没有与原材料相矛盾的地方，又要保证内容上前后连贯，语句通顺；然后润色续写部分，可使用高分单词或短语，运用各种从句、介词短语结构、非谓语动词等高级表达，合理添加过渡词；最后誉写文字，这个过程考生务必做到“字迹工整、清晰”。【万能模板之读后续写“八步走”】情绪------情绪描写。从原材料中体会作者相应情绪，借助情绪的延续，以此为衔接，续写。细节-----进一步描述。转折----个人的努力或者借助外界的力量，使事情发生转折。转机-----事情似乎有了转机，让人抱有希望，心理能感到安慰。失望----问题仍然没有解决或者又出现了新的问题。想法----面对没有解决的问题或者新问题，突然有了想法或感触。结局-----在想法或感触的影响下，事情有了最后的转折/转机。点题-----呼应前文备注：这八步不是固定的，考生可以根据自己的想法打乱部分顺序，也可以略写个别环节。此步骤，可让续写有话可说，让情节续写跌宕起伏，前提是要读懂原材料的中心，抓住文章脉络。【模板范文】前文提要：在我小的时候，我的家里有一个传统：在万圣节进行雕刻南瓜比赛。我很想赢得比赛，于是每年都选择一个很大的南瓜。有一年，我在雕刻南瓜的时候不小心把头卡在了南瓜里。Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Myheadspandizzilyasiftheworldswirled.Atmywit'send,Ifeltastaboffear.(“我”的情绪：慌张、无奈）“Don'tpanic!Papa,Papa,weneedyourhelp,"Jasonexclaimed.Intimeovercamemyfather.(借助外界帮助）HeembracedmyneckandpulledbackwithstrengthwhileJasonpinned/presseddownthepumpkin.（一系列动作描写）Itdidn'twork,though.(问题未解决）“Whynottearthepumpkindirectly?"suddenlyrangoutmother'svoice.(新想法)Inasplitsecond,acreakbrokeoutoverhead,followedbyarayoflight,whichIseeminglyhadn'tseenforages.(问题得到解决）ButwhatdidIsee?Mymotherwasfilmingalltheway.(衔接句）ThatvideowaspostedonlinetheMondaybeforeHalloween.Tomysurprise,soonmyvideowasfollowedbyaseaoflikes,mymailboxfloodedwithsimilarstories.(衔接句）Mybigrednoseandmysorechinbecamenetizens'favoritetopic.AlittleembarrassedasIwas,awaveofwarmthwelledupinside.(细节描写之我的心情）Thenagoodideaflashedacrossmymind.(想法）“Isn'titagoodideatosharestoriesonlinetochoosethefunniest?"ItoldJason,jumpingwithjoy.（做法，为结局做铺垫）“Amazing!Let'scallitPumpkin'sCompetition."Jasongiggled.(Jason的反应，照应开头）【万能模板之高分素材】【高分素材之单词和短语】情绪描写＆2.细节描写：哭：howling(嚎哭)，sob,weep,burstintotears,burstoutcrying.(one'seyes)brimwith/befilledwithtears害怕：horror,frightened,scared,speechless,in(a)panic,inacoldsweat,befilledwithterror,rootedtothespot,freeze,one'skneesfeelweak,(hands)sweat高兴、激动：（动词）dance,jump/leapwithjoy,feelasurgeofjoy/excitement,whistle,overcomewithhappiness/delight/joy/excitement,(one'seyes)twinkle,(one'sheart)beat/poundwildly;(形容词）delighted,overjoyed,excited,thrilled,wildwithjoy伤心、痛苦:feelasurgeofsadness,(sadness)surgewithinsb.,one'sheartache,overcomewithsadness生气、愤怒：felt/getangry/furious,feelasurgeofanger/rage/fury,eyesblaze,stormoutof/into/off,storm/sayangrily,sth.makessb.'sbloodboil,sth.makessb.extremelyangry,claspone'sfists/teeth,sb.'sbloodisup转折：个人努力或借助外界鼓起勇气：pluckup/take/gather/summonupone'scourage毫不犹豫：withouteventhinking,withoutdelay,withouthesitation,withoutasecondthought转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰似乎：asif,seemingly,appear,seem欣慰：breathasighofrelief,sighwithrelief,toone'srelief5.失望：但是问题还未解决或出现了新问题:徒劳:invain,nouse,withoutsuccess茫然:ataloss,atsea,blankly,belostinafog想法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）occurto,hit,strike,flashintoone'smind,crowdinone'smind,dawnon结局：过段时间，事情有了最后的转折:过了一段时间：notlong,shortlyafterwards,beforelong,foraninstant/moment令人惊讶的是:toone'ssurprise,strangelyenough8.总结：点题，呼应前文realize,echo,linger,whisperinone'smind,downdeepinone'sheart【高分素材之句式】★情绪描写＆细节描写哭：1.Alumpcametohisthroat.2.Hereyeswereredfromcrying.3.Hereyesbrimmedwithtears.4.Tearscoursed/trickled/streamed/randownhercheeks.害怕：1.Shewastoofrightenedtotellherfamilywhathadhappened.2.Hisheartwaspounding,asifhewerefrightened.3.Lizawassofrightenedthatshecouldn'tmakeasound.4.Ibowedmyheadtimidlyanddarednotlookatmyfather'scloudyface.5.Mybrainisblank.Ijustwanttoleavethishorribleplace.高兴、激动：1.Whensheknew...shefeltexcited/thrilled.2.Whensheknew...hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.3.Whensheknew...herheartwaspoundingwithwildjoy.4.Whensheknew...awildexcitementtookholdofher.5.Knowing...shefeltasurgeofexcitement.伤心、痛苦：1.Asadnesscameoverher.2.Herheartached,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.3.Numbwithgrief,shebecamespeechless.4.Feelingasurgeofsadness,shecouldn'thelpcryingbitterly.5.Sadnesssurgingwithinher,sheburstintotears.生气、愤怒：1.Samstoodrootedtothespot,hiseyesblazingwithanger.2.Hefeltsoangrythathestormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindhim.3.Boilingwithrage,heshookhisfistatme.4.Filledwithfury,shewasunabletoutterasingleword.★转折：个人努力或借助外界鼓起勇气：1.Hesummoneduphiscourageandlodgedaprotestwithhisfather.2.Ifinallypluckedupthecouragetoaskherfor..毫不犹豫：1.Shecouldhardlywaitto...2.Hardlythinking/Withouteventhinking,heranto...★转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰1.Itseemedasif/thatsomeonewascomingtosaveus.2.Oftentimesourtearsofremorserevealaglimmerofhope.3.Awaveofrelieffloodedthroughme...4.Awaveofreliefwashedoverhim...1.ltsuddlyoccur1★失望：但是问题还未解决或出现了新问题1.Butbadluckforme,Ifailedinmyattempttopersuadeher.2.Sheclosedhereyestightlyinavainattempttoholdbackthetears.3.Alloureffortswereinvain.4.Shekeptpacing,wonderingwhattodonext.5.Withtearsstreamingdownherface,shedidn'tknowwhattodonext.6.Withtearsstreamingdownherface,shewasunsureofwhattodonext.7.Shewasatalosswhattodo.8.Hewasinadilemmaaboutwhethertodoornot.★想法：突然有了一个想法1.Itsuddenlyoccurredtohimthat...2.IthitmethatIhadachoice.3.Athoughtstruckherthat...4.Itdawnedthat...5.Anideaoccurred/cametomethat