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写作是考试中学生比拟难以攻克内容,雅思大作文在分析题目时,不能只看到其外表意思,与此同时解到题目所涉及的是哪一类话题也是特别重要的一环,题目中是否有一些关键词需要格外注意以及对于这道题目所能想到的一些观点论证都要引起注意。下面详细看看雅思作文真题详解吧!Aspartofeducation,studentsshouldspendaperiodoftimestudyingandlivinginadifferentcountrytolearnitslanguageandculture.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?审题:题目翻译:作为教育的一局部,学生应该要花一段时间去海外学习和生活来学习当地的语言和文化。你在多大程度上同意或者不同意?能力考查:这个教育类话题是同意不同意的考试指令,考查考生对于考官所呈现的社会现象或所表达的观点是否能够清晰地给出自己的想法并加以有效论证。一般来讲,碰到这种指令,理论上是可以写完全支持或者反对的,但是还是建议大家尽量尝试用折中的写法,即局部同意局部反对。这种一分为二的思考方式可以在考场上帮助你快速想出观点并进展有效作答,另外这种答题模式也不太会发生偏题的情况。框架构造:Partlyagree1.开头段(用于引出题目背景,并且说明自己的态度)2.论证出guo学习和生活对于学习语言和文化的重要性3.但是,反面论证这种做法对于局部学生是不现实的4.结尾(再次重申自己的观点,并且可以给出自己的建议)Sampleanswer:Goingabroadforfurtherstudyhasbeemoreofatrendaslargenumbersofstudentsparticipateininternationallanguagetests,suchasIELTSorTOEFL.Someacademicsadvocatethatanexperienceoflearninginforeigncountriesisanecessarypartofeducationforlanguagebettermentandlanguageacquisition.Asforme,however,suchpracticeshouldbeconsideredwithdiscretion.Admittedly,studyingandlivinginanothercountrycanbeaneffectivewaytoachievethementionedpurposes.Comparedwithsecond-handexperience,livinginthenativeenvironmentcanprovidestudentswithmanyopportunitiestousethelanguagetomunicatewithlocalpeople.Suchlanguageabilitycanmakethembemorepetitiveinthefuturejobmarket.Meanwhile,livingexperiencescanhelpstudentstohaveadeepinsightintolocallife,includinghistory,cultureaswellasreligiousbelief.However,itwouldbeunrealisticifallstudentsareencouragedtoparticipateinit.Firstofall,consideringstudentsthemselves,thosewholacklearningandadaptiveabilitymayfindithardtointegrateintolocallifeandsometimestheywillfeeldisappointedorevendepressedbecauseofcultureshocksandlanguagebarriers.Tuitionfeesandlifeexpensescanbeanotherproblem.Differentfromrichstudents,thosewhoefromworking-classfamiliesorneedyfamiliescannotaffordsuchabigcosttostudyoverseas.Forexample,studyinginUKforoneyearmaycostonestudentnearly300thousand,whichisfarfromaffordability.Tosumup,anexperienceofstudyingandlivingoverseascanhelpstudentstospeakgoodlanguageandunderstandthelocalculturewell.However,itisnotapracticalwayformostordinaryfamiliesunlesstheymakefullpreparations.思路分析:Introduction:Goingabroadforfurtherstudyhasbeemoreofatrendaslargenumbersofstudentsparticipateininternationallanguagetests,suchasIELTSorTOEFL.(用最熟悉的事件引出背景)Someacademicsadvocatethatanexperienceoflearninginforeigncountriesisanecessarypartofeducationforlanguagebettermentandlanguageacquisition.(对于题目的改写)Asforme,however,suchpracticeshouldbeconsideredwithdiscretion.(在段落的最后,用一句话说明出自己的观点)Body1:主题句:Admittedly,studyingandlivinginanothercountrycanbeaneffectivewaytoachievethementionedpurposes.(其中mentionedpurposes指的是题目中的掌握语言和文化,为了防止重复,改用其他方式来表达)支撑论点局部:Comparedwithsecond-handexperience,了比照论证手法,强调国外生活与学习的好处)livinginthenativeenvironmentcanprovidestudentswithmanyopportunitiestousethelanguagetomunicatewithlocalpeople.Suchlanguageabilitycanmakethembemorepetitiveinthefuturejobmarket.(凸显对于语言的好处,使用了因果论证来说明语言的重要性)Meanwhile,(论点之间的连接词)livingexperiencescanhelpstudentstohaveadeepinsightintolocallife,includinghistory,cultureaswellasreligiousbelief.(论证了对于文化的帮助,使用including来举出文化的一些典型表现)。Body2:主题句:However,itwouldbeunrealisticifallstudentsareencouragedtoparticipateinhowever转折连接词引出与上段不同的看法,指出了一局部特殊的学生不利于海外学习,这样就表达出了逻辑上的缜密)支撑论点局部:①Firstofconsideringstudentsthemselves,thosewholacklearningandadaptiveabilitymayfindithardtointegrateintolocallifeandsometimestheywillfeeldisappointedorevendepressedbecauseofcultureshocksandlanguagebarriers.(第一个论点,指出语言能力差的学生不适合出guo学习,使用的是因果论证)②Tuitionfeesandlifeexpensescanbeanotherproblem.Differentfromrichstudents,thosewhoefromworking-classfamiliesorneedyfamiliescannotaffordsuchabigcosttostudyoverseas.Forexample,studyinginUKforoneyearmaycostonestudentnearly300thousand,whichisfarfromaffordability.(第二个分论点,指出家庭经济条件学生也不适合出guo学习,用forexample引出了典型的举例论证)Conclusion:Tosumup,(段落结尾常见连接词)anexperienceofstudyingandlivingoverseascanhelpstudentstospeakgoodlanguageandunderstandthelocalculturewell.However,itisnotapracticalwayformostordinaryfamiliesunlesstheymakefullpreparations.(个人观点的重述加上适当的建议)Somepeoplethinkchildrenshouldobeytherulestheirparentsandteacherssetandlistentothem,butothersthinklesscontrolwillhelpchildrentodealwiththeirownfuturelife.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.审题:题目翻译:有些人认为小孩子需要遵守和听从父母和老师指定的规那么。然而另外一些人那么认为对小孩少一点的限制会有利于他们更好的处理和解决未来生活中的问题。讨论两个观点并且给出你个人的看法。能力考查:这个教育类话题是双边讨论的考试指令,考查学生是否能对于考官所呈现的两个观点进展有效的论证及比照。这个题目中一般都会有标志性词眼,例如somepeoplebelieve…,whileothersthink…。就这类题目的答题要点来说,我们会建议四段式构造,包括开头引入,两个观点的分别论证及结尾段给出你自己的看法。题目关键词:rules,parents,teachers1.开头段(用于引出两个观点所争论的内容)2.论证第一个论点的合理性,即小孩子需要遵守和听从父母和老师指定的规那么3.论证第二个观点的合理性,即对小孩少一点的限制会有利于他们更好的处理和解决未来生活中的问题4.结尾段(给出个人观点)Sampleanswer:InmostChinesefamilies,itismontofindthatparentsandteachersplayadominantroleinchildren’slives,whichmeanstheyhavestrictdisciplinesonchildren.Whilesomepeopleapproveofthis,othersholdtheoppositeattitudethatlesscontrolismoreimportantinchildren’sfuturegrowth.Thosepeoplewhoadvocateofimposingrulesonchildrenhavetheirownreasons.Theymaythinkthatitisthemosteffectivewayforchildrentodevelopgoodbehaviorsataveryyoungage.Inotherwords,theserulescanhelpthemtobegoodsocialmembersinthefuture.Forexample,muchcontrolontheuseofputersandmobilephonesisconducivetochildren’sphysicalandhealth.Also,learninghowtobepoliteandrespectfultootherscanbeconsideredasanimportantskillinchildren’sfuturecareer,astheywillinevitablygetalongwithdifferentpeople,suchascolleaguesorclients.However,therearestillsomepeoplethinkingthattoomuchcontrolisnotbeneficialtochildren.Instead,parentsandteachersshouldgivethemmorefreedomtodecidetheirpersonalaffairs;otherwise,theymayheavilyrelyontheserulesandmaynotbeabletosolveproblemsontheirown.Forinstance,ifchildrengetusedtoobeytheirparents,theydarenottomakeanychallengesintheirfuturejob,whichisafatalweaknesstoemployers,whoshowtheirpreferenceonthosecreativeapplicants.Myviewisthatimaginationandindependencearequitenecessaryforchildreniftheywanttobeproductivemembersinthesociety.Asaconsequence,insteadofgivingtoomuchcontrol,whichdepriveschildrenofthechancestopracticetheseskills,parentsandteachersareadvisedtogivechildrenmoresupporttotakeadventures.思路分析:Introduction:InmostChinesefamilies,itismontofindthatparentsandteachersplayadominantroleinchildren’slives,whichmeanstheyhavestrictdisciplinesonchildren.(用举例,引出题目背景)Whilesomepeopleapproveofthis,othersholdtheoppositeattitudethatlesscontrolismoreimportantinchildren’sfuturegrowth.(重新改写了题目,但是没有发表观点,这局部观点的表达可以放在结尾段去重点描述)Body1:主题句:Thosepeoplewhoadvocateofimposingrulesonchildrenhavetheirownreasons.(对于原题第一论点的改写,指出规那么对于小孩的重要性)支撑论点局部:Theymaythinkthatitisthemosteffectivewayforchildrentodevelopgoodbehaviorsataveryyoungage.Inotherwords,theserulescanhelpthemtobegoodsocialmembersintheForexample;muchcontrolontheuseofputersandmobilephonesisconducivetochildren’sphysicalandmentalhealth.(举例论证1)Also,learninghowtobepoliteandrespectfultootherscanbeconsideredasanimportantskillinchildren’sfuturecareer,astheyinevitablygetalongwithdifferentpeople,suchascolleaguesorclients.(举例论证2,用2个例子更加直观和有效地论证中心论点)Body2:主题句:However,therearestillsomepeoplethinkingthattoomuchcontrolisnotbeneficialtohowever

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