高考作文专题指导

专题复习高考写作指导假设你是艾学习，上个星期天去市图书馆看书时发现以下问题，你写信向馆长Mr.Wang反映：1.实用性的书、新书太少；2.书架上的书比较混乱；3.阅览室的光线对视力有害；4.管理员工作时彼此闲聊。书面表达DearMr.Wang,LastSunday,Iwenttodosomereadinginyourlibrary.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

So,forthesakeofreaders,Isuggestthatyouchangeallthosementionedassoonaspossible.

Yours,AiXuexi答题卡DearMr.Wang,LastSunday,Iwenttodosomereadinginyourlibrary.

Ifoundsomeproblemsinyourlibrary.Tostartwith,Ididn’tfindtoomanybooksthatarepractical,andnewbooksmightbetoofew.Inaddition,booksontheshelvesarealittlebitoutoforder,whichmakesithardforreaderstofindwhattheyneed.Whatisalsonotgoodisthelightfromoutside,thelightisalittledark,whichcaneasilydoharmtothereaders’eyes.Moreover,thefactthattheworkerschatwitheachotherreallymakesmedisappointed.Afterall,theirvoicesnotonlydisturbthereaders’readingbutalsotheirmoods.Theyhaveabadeffectontheimageofyourlibrary.

So,forthesakeofreaders,Isuggestthatyouchangeallthosementionedassoonaspossible.

Yours,AiXuexi学生习作StudentADearMr.Wang,LastSunday,Iwenttodosomereadinginyourlibrary.

Ifoundsomeproblemsinyourlibrary.Tostartwith,Ididn’tfindtoomanybooksthatarepractical,andnewbooksmightbetoofew.Inaddition,booksontheshelvesarealittlebitoutoforder,whichmakesithardforreaderstofindwhattheyneed.Whatisalsonotgoodisthelightfromoutside,thelightisalittledark,whichcaneasilydoharmtothereaders’eyes.Moreover,thefactthattheworkerschatwitheachotherreallymakesmedisappointed.Afterall,theirvoicesnotonlydisturbthereaders’readingbutalsotheirmoods.Theyhaveabadeffectontheimageofyourlibrary.

So,forthesakeofreaders,Isuggestthatyouchangeallthosementionedassoonaspossible.

Yours,AiXuexi评点StudentA

要求考生根据所给情景，用英语写一篇100个单词左右的短文。

情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。

本部分满分25分，所需时间约为30分钟。NMET的要求NMET书面表达评分原则1、先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定档次。第五档：21~25分第四档：16~20分第三档：11~15分第二档：6~10分第一档：1~5分

0分语言地道，规范覆盖所有内容要点2、主要内容：内容要点；词汇和语法的数量和准确性；上下文的连贯；语言的得体性应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分3、拼写和标点是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。4、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。5、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。NMET书面表达评分原则Somethingimportant

foragoodarticleStructureInformationShinningpoints给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三部分Introduction点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示或开门见山2.Body

中心叙述部分；层次分明3.Ending

小结；呼应主题；要求或呼吁structure给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三部分IntroductionWhy?Findsomeproblems2.Body

Fourproblems3.Ending

Purpose:expectsomeimprovementsstructurePreparenecessaryinformationProblems:1.实用性的书、新书太少；1.newly-published,practical2.书架上的书比较混乱；

2.ontheshelves,inamess,

outoforder3.阅览室的光线对视力有害；3.readingroom,light,dim,doharmto4.管理员工作时彼此闲聊。4.workers,chatwith,whileworkingAddpossibleinformationHowdoyoufinditProblemsBadeffectsWhensearchforsomethingnewnotenoughnewbookscannotattractreadersWhenlookforwhatIwantoutoforderhardtofindtherightbookWhilereadingdimlightdoharmtoeyesWhilereadingchattingworkerscannotenjoyreadingDearMr.Wang,LastSunday,Iwenttodosomereadinginyourlibrary.

OverthetimeIwasthere,Ifoundsomethingunpleasant.Therefore,I’dliketovoicemyopinions,which,Ihope,wouldbeusefulforyoutocreateamorecomfortableplaceforreaders.First,therearefewnewandpracticalbooksontheshelves,andmostbooksarenotpopulartoday.Second,somebooksarenotsortedinproperorder,makingitdifficultforreaderstofindwhattheywantquickly.Third,theassistantsdidn’toffergoodservices.Instead,theywerealwayschatting.Inaddition,poorlightinthereadingroomisbadforeyes.

So,forthesakeofreaders,Isuggestthatyouchangeallthosementionedassoonaspossible.Yours,AiXuexiOnePossibleVersionPossiblePatternDearXX,……butIdidnotenjoyitbecauseoverthetimeIwasthereIfoundsomethingunpleasant.First,_______as__________.Then,__________,makingitdifficultfor_____to______________.Inaddition,_______for____.Itwasratherannoying.Tomakemattersworse,_____________so_____thatIcouldhardlybearit.Asa_____toyour_____,I’mdisappointedwithmyexperienceinyour_____.I’mwritingtheletterinthehopethatyoucanconsidertheseproblemsandmakesomeimprovements.

Yoursfaithfully,XX假设你是艾学习，上个星期天去市图书馆看书时发现以下问题，你写信向馆长Mr.Wang反映：1.实用性的书、新书太少；2.书架上的书比较混乱；3.阅览室的光线对视力有害；4.管理员工作时彼此闲聊。Practice模板填空：DearMr.Wang,…butIdidnotenjoyitbecauseoverthetimeIwasthereIfoundsomethingunpleasant.First,_______as/for__________.Then,__________,makingitdifficultfor_____to______________.Inaddition,_________________.Itwasratherannoying.Tomakemattersworse,_____________so_____thatIcouldhardlybearit.Asa_____toyour_____,I’mdisappointedwithmyexperienceinyour_____.I’mwritingtheletterinthehopethatyoucanconsidertheseproblemsandmakesomeimprovements.

Yoursfaithfully,

AiXuexiExercise假设你是李华，在出国交流学习期间，到当地一家电影院看了一场精彩的电影，但在观影过程中发现了一些问题。请你根据下列提示用英语给影院经理写一封信。1.因广告过多，影片放映晚点；2.影片播放音量过大；3.安全出口标识不明，存在安全隐患；4.适当结尾。参考词汇：安全出口－exit安全隐患－potentialsafetyhazardDearManager,I’manexchangestudentfromChina.Yesterday,Iwenttoyourcinematoseeafilm.Thefilmwasverygood,but______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yoursfaithfully,LiHuaPreparenecessaryinformation

1.因广告过多，影片放映晚点；thefilmwasdelayed,toomanyads

2.影片播放音量过大；soundtooloud3.安全出口标识不明，存在安全隐患；theEXITsignsnotseenclearly,presentpotentialsafetyhazards.4.适当结尾。参考词汇：安全出口－exit安全隐患－potentialsafetyhazardAddpossibleinformationHowdoyoufinditProblemsBadeffectsthedelayedfilmtooloudsoundEXITsignsnotseenclearlypotentialsafetyhazard假设你是李华，在出国交流学习期间，到当地一家电影院看了一场精彩的电影，但在观影过程中发现了一些问题。请你根据下列提示用英语给影院经理写一封信。1.因广告过多，影片放映晚点；2.影片播放音量过大；3.安全出口标识不明，存在安全隐患；4.适当结尾。参考词汇：安全出口－exit安全隐患－potentialsafetyhazardPractice模板填空：DearMr.Wang,…ThefirmwasgoodbutIdidnotenjoyitbecauseoverthetimeIwasthereIfoundsomethingunpleasant.First,_______as/for__________.Then,__________,makingitdifficultfor_____to______________.Inaddition,_________________.Itwasratherannoying.Tomakemattersworse,_____________so_____thatIcouldhardlybearit.Asa_____toyour_____________,I’mdisappointedwithmyexperienceinyour_____.I’mwritingtheletterinthehopethatyoucanconsidertheseproblemsandmakesomeimprovements.

Yoursfaithfully,

AiXuexiDearManager,I’manexchangestudentfromChina.Yesterday,Iwenttoyourcinematoseeafilm.Thefilmwasverygood,but

IdidnotenjoyitbecauseoverthetimeIwasthere,Ifoundsomethingunpleasant.

First,thefilmwasdelayedasthereweresomanyadvertisementsatthebeginning.Itwasratherannoying.

Second,thesoundofthefilmwassoloudthatIcouldhardly

bearit.Third,theEXITsignscouldnotbeseenclearly,whichpresentedpotentialsafetyhazards.Andifsomethingterribleshoul