考研英语作文三段写作技巧三

名人代言的非模板式表达:第二段Obviously,themessagethepicturetriestoconveyisthatcelebrityendorsementcouldbringaboutpotentialproblemsdespiteitsmanyadvantages.Thatis,withoutregulations,itcouldbeusedbythosewithbadintentionstotrickpeopleintobuyingcommoditiesthatareeitherpoorinqualityorharmfultopeople'shealth.第三段Withcelebrityendorsementincreasinglyusedbycompaniesandmanufacturesinoursocietytopromotetheirproducts,we,ascustomers,shouldalwayskeepaclearmindandmakesensibledecisions.Meanwhile,itisalsoourgovernment'sresponsibilitytomakelawsandregulationsforcelebrityendorsementtoensuretherightsofcustomersandcreateasafeandsoundenvironmentforthedevelopmentofadvertisingbusiness.“个人能力和质量”的写作步骤某种质量对成功很重要:可能出现的主题辞:1.顺境与窘境(FavorableCircumstancesandadverseCircumstances)2.勤劳(hardworking,diligence,painstakingefforts3.慎重(prudenceanddetermination4.坚持/毅力(perseverancepersistence,determination)5.热忱和乐观(enthusiasmandoptimism)6.博学和求知(learnednessandseekingknowledge/pursuitofknowledge)7.活力(vitality8.身强体壮充满活力(burstingwithvitalityandgoodhealth9.独立(independence)10.感恩(gratitude,gratification)11.创新(creation,innovation,criticalmind,criticalthinking)12.鼓舞(encouragement)13.真挚(sincerity)14.宽容(humanity,love,understandingandtolerance)15.白满和谦虚(Beingself-satisfiedandbeingmodest)16.英勇(courageandbravery17.敬业精神(professionaldedicationandprofessionalethics)18.业务水平(competence19.磨难(sufferingandhardship)第二段的写作:…第一句:…Thepicturetellsusthatnothingcanbecomparedwithcreationorinnovationwhenitcomestothecultivationofindividualcharacteristics./forthepersonalgrowth.或许:Theauthorofthepictureattemptstoconveywithacertainamountofconfirmationthedistinctlyclearmessagethatthespiritofcreationseemstounderliealmostallhumansuccesses.或许Thishumanqualityispartandparceltothepersonalgrowthanditsabsencewilldefinitelyleadtoone'spoorperformanceandlowerachievement.…第二句:…Putitanotherway,withoutit,onecouldhardly/barelytastevictory/achievetheirgoal.或许:Putitanotherway,theadventurespiritisakeyingredientofthemodernrecipetosuccess,eitherforindividualsorforanation.或许:Tobesure,withoutthecouragetoengageinunknownjourneyandtoembraceunexpecteddetoursorsetbacks,wewouldhavenoanyadvancetospeakof.Fairlyspeaking,peopleororganizationbeingabletodothenextbigthingmusthavethisurgetotakeontheunfamiliarorunexpectedroute.And,adventurespirit,whichthispicturehighlighted,indeedconstitutesoneofthewheelsonwhichhumansocietyevolves.…第三句:…Dueattentiontothisqualityisattachedbyindividualsandeventhewholesociety.或许Onmypersonallevel,independenceistrulythefundamentalattributeoftopperformers,whichseparatethehighachieversfromtherestofthepack.或许:Inourera,also,thisqualitymakessomeoutstandingcompaniesorpeoplestandout.…第四句…Peoplewithspiritofindependencecannotonlyaccumulatewealth,butwillalsoestablishtheircareer,fitintosociety,andevenattainsocialstatus.或许举例:谷歌有名的互联网企业依赖其不行匹敌的产品获取了一系列优秀的成就。正是冒险精神使这个公司为其股东和民众创建了巨大的价值。换句话讲:假如没有创建精神谷歌是不行能获取这些优秀的成就。曼德拉的例子版本一曼德拉一位巨人和伟大的英豪因为深信人生而同等被残忍的关押了27年最后把白己的祖国改造成了一个开放的社会能够说是世界上最有说服力的对于坚毅意志的例了他用他一世的经历告诉我们:不论什么时候不论在哪里不论怎样面对挫折时的刚毅和面对梦想的执着都是通向成功的重要原则版本二NelsonMandela,oneofthemostrecognizableAfricannamesinhistory,wasamanpossessingunmatchedcapabilitytoendureandtoforbear.Heinsistedonloveandforgivenessdespiteofhavingbeenputbehindbarsfor27yearsforhisunwaveringbeliefinhumanequality.Hislifeperfectlyillustratestheimportanceoffortitudeandperseveranceinachievinggoalsanddreams.曼德拉历史上被人记着的最出名的非洲名字拥有无可匹敌的忍受能力。只管因为深信人生而同等而被关押了27年却深信爱和宽容。他的生命完满的证了然刚毅和执着在实现目标和梦想中的重要性。马云的例子版本一:13.ThesuccessstoryofMaYun,founderofChina'sonlinetradingempire--Alibaba,bestillustratestheimportanceofinnovationinrealizingpersonalambitionandcreatingvalueforthesociety马云中国电了商务帝国阿里巴巴的首创人阿里巴巴的年销售额已经达到白亿他的成功故事完满的例证了在实现个人理想和为社会创建价值时创新的重要性。版本二:14.MaYun}thecreatorofTaobao,whomakesthemostprofitabledayfore-commerceintheworld一Singles'Day,bestillustratestheimportanceofinnovationinrealizingpersonalambitionandcreatingvalueforanation.马云淘宝网这类崭新的B2C商业模式的创新者创始了全世界互联网收益最高的网络购物节:双十一他完满地例证了在实现个人理想和为社会创建价值时创新的重要性。Hisincredibleachievementsoriginatingfromthecriticalthinkingevenpoliticalheadsbothdomesticandabroad:LiKeqiang,theChinesepremier,attractsattentionwasreportedtoconversationwithhimandmorecompanyinUK.recently,BritishPrimeMinisterCamerontriedtoconvinceandcuriosityofhaveheldclosehimtolisthiscompanyinUK.他那些源白于创新思想的成就甚至惹起了国内外政治领袖的好奇和关注。据报导中国总理李克强都和他有亲近的谈话。近来甚至英国首相都试试着说服他到英国开企业。…最后一句…Inotherwords,weretherenothespiritofihdepehdehce,wewouldnevertastetherealhappinessofthesuccessfullife.换句话讲假如没有独立的精神我们就不行能获取成功的愉悦。第三段的写作:(超级无敌崇高结束段)Thepicture,tosomedegree,makesusreflecttheconventionalsuccessandenlightensustowonderthemeaningoflifeanditspermanentspiritualvalues.Thespiritofindependenceiswidelyacknowledgedastheessentialtraitthatwillentitleusnotonlythematerialwealthorrankofpowerbutalsothewaytomakelifemeaningful.So,thesurestwaytohaveameaningful,happylifeistosetgoalsmatteringtousandtotheworldandcommitourselvestostrivingforitwiththisquality.从某种程度上讲这幅图画使我们去反省传统的成功启迪我们去研究生命的意义和那些永久的精神价值。独立的精神是一种一定的质量能使我们不单能够获取物质财产和权力还可以让我们找到使生命更存心义的道路。因此获取幸福和充满意义的生活的最靠谱的方式就是找到对白己和对这个世界都重要的目标在这类精神的陪伴下白己不停地努力。版本二:Toalargeextent,wearecompelledbythisdrawingtoreflectontheconventionalsuccessesthattakeupaninappropriatelylargeshareofourenergyandtime.Itinspiresustoexploretherealessenceoflifeandtoderiveguidancefromtheever-lastingmoralvaluesthattrulymatter.Thisdrawing,inaway,enlightensusonthelimitsofoldbeliefsofsuccess,whichcarriesmuchlessvaluethantheimmortalvaluesthatindeedcarriesweighttoaman'slife.从某种程度上讲这幅图画使我们去反省传统的成功启迪我们去研究生命的意义和那些永久的精神价值。版本三:…第一句:…任何能真实获取幸福的人都一定拥有这类精神这类精神不单能产生物质财富和一般意义的成功而且能让我们获取真实的存心义的人生。15…第二句:…因此我们一定记着:获取幸福和