10 读后续写历险型(故事构造“三大套路”)

读后续写：历型：典文森遇）...................................................................................................................1：险细描..............................................................................................................................3①海上难.........................................................................................................................................3②洪水................................................................................................................................................5③地震................................................................................................................................................5④火灾................................................................................................................................................5⑤受伤................................................................................................................................................6⑥丛林生.........................................................................................................................................7：险故构“大路”........................................................................................................套一恶环要托....................................................................................................................套二转思技好....................................................................................................................套三万升要记....................................................................................................................：活用.......................................................................................................................................例：洞险.................................................................................................................................10：考题现................................................................................................................................真1：爸与森遇【20186浙江卷..........................................................................真2：游途遇【2017年6月浙卷.................................................................................14Part1经典例文（林遇险）retiredsearchanddog.HemissedownerAlbecauseAlhadoutawithout’snephewStevetookBradyalongwhenheandhiswenthike.ButsuddenlySteveZachburningrealizedthatlightninghadsetonfire.Wind-blownflamehadfromtopofoneanother.Thesummerhadintotinderbox(helpingIthadmorewindand

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butdidncomeback.nochoicebuttoleaveHeartsick,SteveandwentslopecouldnblameBradyforpanickingandescaping.himselfwantedtorunthoughhedidn’thaveaclueway.Theyhadn’tfarwhentherewasfamiliarandcamerunning注意：1.所续写的短文词数应为150左；2.应使用个上短文中标有下线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开语已经为你写好；4续完成后，请用下划线标出所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：“Where’veyou”Stevecried.

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messagewasclear,Stevehesitated.coursehewhathisunclesaidaboutBradysavinghislife,butthathadbeenlongago.Washestillsharpenoughtothroughthis?Bradyagain,urgently,“0K,bigguy,”Stevedecided...Paragraph2Bradyledtheslopeandintothetrees.Severalthedogstoppedgethisescaperoute.Oftenhedirection.Howlongthey’dwalkedSteveidea.justheldontoBradyleashwithonehandandkeptputtingonefootinfrontoftheother.Hewasalmostnumbwhenheheardthewonderfulsoundofrushingwater.Theyelltheboysranunsteadilyforwarduntiltheyjumpedcool,runningwater.“Brady,youdid第1段“你去哪儿了？史蒂夫叫道，雷迪直接停在他面前，开始把他推回他们刚爬上去的斜坡。当蒂夫仍然没有得到它，布雷迪抓住男孩的牛仔裤，并拉得更用力。息很清楚，但史蒂夫犹豫了。当然记得他叔叔说过布雷迪救他的命，但那是很久以前的事了。还能让他们度过难关吗？布迪又紧急地拉了一下，“，大个子蒂决.第2段布雷迪带领他们回到斜坡上，进入树林。这大狗停了好几次，以获得他的逃跑路线。他常变方向。他走了多久史蒂夫不知。他是用一只手抓住布雷迪的皮带续一只脚放在另一前面。听到哗哗的水声，他几乎麻木了。河！子们大喊一声，摇摇晃晃地向前跑，直到他们跳进凉爽的流水里。“布雷迪，你做到了Part2历险类细节写①海上遇难天气*Theskyisdarkenedwithgloomyclouds.Lightingflashedacrosssky,followedbyclapofthunder.Minuteslater,therecamedownpour.*Thehowlingandsmackedrepeatedlyagainstface.海上*Theboiledthestorm.

*Theangrywavescrashedagainstthesideoftheboat,withsplashinghereandthere.船*Leanedsideways*Theshiprockingupanddowntherestlesssea.*Thecrashingfilledtheirboatwithwaterfasterthantheycouldit.救援人*Butthen,asIlookedindistance,Idiscoveredaofthreeorfourbigheadingtowardstheshore.*Withoutthinking,Irandowntheholdingbodyboardonthewayandshoutedatastrangertocallthepolice.*Pattingfacesup,Icontinuouslytoldthemtostrong.遇难者*Shetokeeptheofbreathingsothatcouldbreatheevenly.*Ifeltextremelyexhausted（-）*Lookingthevastsea,Ifeltasensefearsurgingthroughwholebody.*Saltstingingmyeyes,Icouldhardlylongcouldholdon.*ButIshoutedinmyhead:keepon.*Heanairplaneflyingoverhead.withnoflashlight,hewasinvisibleinthevastocean.*Hetookoffhisyellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldtoanopenareaandflaggedifcameback.*Insheerdesperation,Ifinallycaughtsightofsomeboatswithlifeguardsonheadingtowardsus.Thankyou,lord.*Quitesoon,feltstrongarmspullmeoftheseaontotheboard.(摘自杭二中参考答)救援过程*Thenhedraggedherupperfromthewater,.救人未遂

*Heheldherhandtightlyseparatedthem.*Hefoughtthewavesstrovecatchher,butfailed,shewasdrifted其他*Energyreturningmagically,herosetohisfeetandaction.*Theywavedtheflagandscreamedforhelp.*BearGryllscaughtsightofshabbyboatandmenrags.*Theytakenboardandthankedoveroveragain.*Fromthemon,hemadeuphismindnevertotakeanyrisksunlesshecouldensuretightsafety.Becausewassimplyhisstubbornconductsandhisignoranceof...that...②洪水*Thewaterrising.Twohourspassed.Hedidnottomoveaninchforfearofslipping.*Anothertwohourslater,henoticedthatwaterlevelwentenoughthathecouldanescape.*Stiffkeepinginonepositionforslowlyunfoldedhisbodies.*Cautiouslyandsteadily,hemadehiswayforwardtoentrance.③地震*Deepcracksopenedupinstreets.*Thecavedin.*Hugebuildingscollapsed,sendingcloudsofdustintothe*Theanimalsgrewrestlessasifinanticipationofdisaster.④火灾屋子*Fannedbywind,thewasbathedinanimmensestreamofflames.*Thehousewasbathedanstreamflames.

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Part3历险类故事造“三大套路套路一：劣环境要烘So,myandIputournewcowboy，gotonourhorsesslowlytowardsthe.（年11月江高考NeverhadIlovelycreatureinmysoIfolloweditswithoutthinking（年月浙江高考）processofseekingforItotallyimmersedincharmnature（年11月江高考）What'shefoodwithletphonesupplies.（苏省如皋中学2021届高三第一学期教学质量调研试）Wewerenowhere,onlyunderwear,withoursuppliesourcellphones.（北省宜昌市第二中学2021届三起点考试英语试题）套路二：折思维技巧例如，故事中我们迷路了，正在想办法如何脱离困境。Suddenlyitoccurredtouswethetoguideitdarker,makingitincreasinglyusmakeout（突然我们想到我们可以坚持小路引导我们回去。但天色越来越暗，使我们走道路越来越困难。）解：个子于正变负的式迷后想了法，于正”但外环不许天太。于负”【材累

1.Ultimately,weweresafesound安然无恙（1711浙江高考）2.Wejumpedintotheto（开车送我们去巡逻站）,werewereabletocallour（湖北省宜昌市第二中学届高三起点考试英语试题）套路三：能升华要牢需要牢记，历险类的文章不要无缘无故拔高主题，一般的主题词是“勇敢难当然还有一个万能的表达“这是一次难忘的经历万句：Thatdaywassounforgettablethatitwouldstayinmymemoryforever.那是此忘它永留我记。遇到危险并且最终成功脱险的经历必对我们每个人来说一定是一生中难忘的经历以这个句子使用的场合还是挺多的。句子中使用了so...that的句式结构：如此......以于。是一个形容词，表示“无法忘记的”。万句：OnlythendidIrealizethatitwasbraverythatconquerwhateverdifficultyintheway.直那，才识，是敢能服切难遇到危险后敢对能决问题个句子突出勇敢这个核心“险型”的故事里是常恰当的这话使用了倒装的结构和强调结构结合的方式属高分亮点句。【材累

Sittingintheguestroom,Ifounditblissfultobeby（年月浙江高考）Despiteingoodwasreallyhewasbacktotheresorttoreunitehisfamily（江苏省如皋中学届高三第一学期教学质量调研试）3.As发机慢运转时发出突突声Itripnotbebadafterall.Good-bye,regularoldsummervacation.HelloTripofaLifetime（十校联盟续写讲评）Part4灵活应用例1：山洞险阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。monthsago,friendLisa,andI,plannedtosomethingadventurous,sowedecidedtoexplorecaveinoutskirtofcitywithsomefood,water,torchesandmostimportantlycellphones.Butnotgoingwell.Wecouldnotvehicledropusthere.Atlonglast,wefindtaxiwhichtookustheofthecity.AnotherevidenceofluckwasthatHarryhadhiscellphoneAfterwegotoutoftheoflocalsuswaytotheThelookedveryattractiveyetmysterious:thewassodark,andthetinysoundsmadetheinsectsandanimalscouldbeheardproperly,pullingusintothecaveunknownsupernaturalpower.Asweweremovingforwardmademarksontherocksalongourpathusoftheexitofthecave.Andalwayskeptourmobilesswitchonmodetocontacteachotherincasewegotseparatedandevenworse,lostinthecave.Aswewereforward,Harryfeltthatwasfollowingourfootstepsbuthehisintuitiontoajoke.Whenwereachedinthedeepofthecave,welostwayandgraduallythefogspreadeverywhereandnotabletoseeotherproperly.ofgotscaredofwhatwashappeningaroundus.Suddenly,wenoticedthatHarrywasnotwiththenwe

vaguelyheardashoutfromthedepthofthecaveandwethoughtwasHarry,westartedsearchingforhim.Butourtorchesleftusesuchthickfog.续写词数应为150左ParagraphSowegropedourwaytowardsthedirectionoftheshout._______________________________________________________________________________ParagraphAfterwereunitedwithHarry,wetofindthewayout._______________________________________________________________________________【答案】wegropedourwaytowardsthedirectionofshout.Frightenedaswere,westillmadeourtosearchforHarry.Hardlycanseeanythingincompletelydarksituation,sowehadtofeelourwaysearchHarrywithallstrength.andcautiouslymovingforward,weheldourtightlyinordernottobeseparated.Withvoiceapproaching,realizedwouldmeetHarryimmediately.Fortunately,whenfindingHarrysittingonground,sighedwithaAfterwereunitedwithHarry,wetofindthewayout.Withouthesitation,wedecidedtohuntforwhichhadmadebefore.“Igetit!Harryscreamed.Lookingquickly,wefoundtheseclearmarkseasily.Itwastheofthesemarksthatquicklyfoundexit.walkingoutofthecave,weknewweweresaved.Fromthisexperience,whatlearntwasthatwasdangerousexploreunknownwordwithoutafullydetailedplan.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇记叙文述了作者和小伙伴们一起去探索一个位于城市郊区的山洞洞面太黑又有雾，所以Harry和们走散了。当听到Harry的呼救后，我们一起找到了Harry，最终逃离了山洞。【详解】段续写：①由第一段首句内容“所以我们摸索着朝着呼喊的方向走去可第一段可描写我们是如何在山洞中寻找Harry的②由第二段首句内容“我们和重后，我们试图找到出路。”可知，第二段可描写我们利用之前所做的记号逃离山洞的过程。

2.续写线索到音——寻找Harry—找到Harry——寻找出口——逃山洞——领悟感受3.词激活行为类①寻找：huntfor/searchfor/find②大叫：③接近：approach/drawnear情感类①小心：careful②害怕：scared/frightened【点睛】高分句型Frightenedwemadeourtosearchfor(运用了as引让步状从句时的倒装结)[高分句型Withouthesitation,wedecidedtohuntforthesewhichmade用了引的限制性定语从)[高分句型3].wasthehelpofthesemarksthatwequicklyfound(用了强结构Part5高考真题再真题1：爸爸与我森遇险【年6月浙江卷】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Itandmywantedtotreatmeavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtakeonatotheWildWest.WetookplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinlateafternoon.UnclePaul,dad’sfriend,pickedusfromtheairportanddrovetohisinPecos.HiswifeusadeliciousdinnerandwetoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwater

rollingdowntherivernearby.earlyinmorning.UnclePaulwoketohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsdawnonfarm,hesaid.Afterbreakfast,tohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃)IwasimpressedtodadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon,askedUnclePaulifIcouldtakehorseride,andsaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithwasngoingtakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonhorses,slowlytowardsthemountains.belateforsupper,”UnclePaulcried,“andtotracksothatyou’tgetlost!“OK!dadcriedback.AfterawhilePaulhisfarmhousewereofwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetheafternoonmixedtocreateascene.Itlookedlikebeautifulwoven(编的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustus.注意：1.所写短文的词数应为150左；2.至使用5个文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1Suddenlyalittlejumpedinmyhorse.Paragraph2ideawherewegot_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Possible

Paragraph1:Suddenlyaoutfrontmyhorse.Dadfounditcutethatwedecidedchaseit.Afterawhile,wecompletelylosttheTherewasnothingleftinoursightbutthetrees.notbeabletoitbacktothefarmhouseintimeforsupper.”Ithoughtmyself.Afteraseriesoffruitlessattemptsfindwayout,felthungryandtired.Paragraph2:Weideawewereitwasgettingdark.Wegotstuckinforest.Andunexpectedshoweraddedtodifficultyofusfindingahome,forallthetrackswehadmadedisappearedbecauseofrain.Ialmostonofbreakingdownwhenmyfathersaid,“Donson.Ithereisrivernearthehouse.Findthewillhome.Finally,foundtheriverandtohousealongit.Needlesstosay,weateadinner.真题2：旅游途中遇【2017年浙江卷】第二节读后续写（满分25分阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Onabright,Julyafternoon,MacHollan,aprimaryschoolteacher,wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhisfriends.OneofhisfriendsstoppedabicyclebuttheyencouragedMactocarryon,andtheywouldupwithhimAsMacpedaled(骑行alongalone,thoughtfondlyofhiswifeyoungdaughtershome.toshowthisbeautifulplacesomeday.ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.“Man,that’sabigdog!”hethought.Butwhenhelookedtoside,instantlyitwasnatbutawolf,quicklycatchingwithhim.’sheartjumped.Hefoundhiscanofbearspray.onthefiredthespraytheAbrightcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andMacrelief,fellback,shakinghead.aminutelater,itwashisagain.ThenitattackedthebackofMac

bike,tearingopenhistentbag.Heatthewolfasecondtime,again,itfellonlytoquicklyrestartchase追赶)pedalinghardwavedandyelledpassingcarsbutwascarefultoslowd