戴云托福写作

WHOAMI男,可以检验,有官方证明。Englishname:Tom人生态度:快乐\宽容\进取2000年加盟新东方。WHOAMI教授过下列课程:

写作\阅读\语法\口语\听力\翻译

OR高考\四六级\考研\实用英语\雅思\托福WHATCANIDOFORYOU新托福考试相关知识写作基本知识\训练方法\应试技巧英语学习方法\建议\参考书推荐参考书俞敏洪

《托福词汇词根+联想记忆法》张道真《实用英语语法》戴云《托福语法满分精要》WHATCANIDOFORYOU留学申请相关知识如何奠定你留学申请的优势1.TOEFL和GRE，SAT，GMAT，

LSAT成绩2.学校各门功课的考试成绩（GPA）和排名3.个人陈述，读书计划和三封推荐信

4.发表的文章和著作5.获得的奖励和荣誉(教学科目，体育，文学，艺术等）6.领导和参加的学术研究和社会实践项目（发明和专利，论文）7.学生会工作和社团工作成绩8.国外学习生活和旅游经历9.令人震撼的人生经历和特质参加出国考试,你能得到什么ScholarshipCertificateofEnglishproficiencyExperienceofchallengingyourlimitExperienceofovercominghardshipsFatalmeetingofyourlove\friendsWHATCANIDOFORYOU我的人生经验和教训(主要是教训)社会科学和人文知识的极浅显介绍我们的目标是:

没有蛀牙!WHOAREYOU你来自哪里?你想去哪里?为什么?你的目标可以实现吗?---我的诺贝尔梦想WHOAREYOU你有何准备?你的优点?你的缺点?你有信心吗?

AllroadsleadtoRome?

Hardworkleadstosuccess?

Wherethereisawill,thereisaway?

你知道吗?有一位伟大的科学家曾经说过…理想与人生价值科学家------爱因斯坦文学------莎士比亚杂交水稻------袁隆平新东方------俞敏洪托福------戴云???-------亲爱的你ToshowortoshowoffBethebestofall;orBethebestofthecrowd;orBethebestofyourselfToshowortoshowoffBethebestinonefield;orBethebestinonepoint;orBethebestofyourself砖头的用途1---3种:建房子,垫脚,砸人4---10种10---20种21---560种ExploreandactivateyourpotentialBethebestofyourselfBeststructureBestsentences

Bestwords

Longestpossible——“黄金规则一”基本要求练习句型变换和扩充，每周两个练习写独立作文,每周两篇。加强阅读和听力训练。

基本要求阅读完教材:OFFICIALGUIDE

LONGMANPREPARATIONCOURSE

自编讲义,尤其是范文，句型集及作文题库

GeneralIntroductionto

iBTTOEFLReading:60---100minsListening:60---90minsBreak:10minsSpeaking:20minsWriting:55minsGeneralIntroductionto

iBTTOEFLTotaltime:4hoursTotalscore:120StartingTime:September,2006GeneralIntroductionto

iBTTOEFLWritingContent:integratedwritingandindependentwritingScore:rawscore:0~5scaledscore:0~30Time:Integratedwriting:20minutesReading：3mins\230—300wordsListening:2mins\230—300wordsindependentwriting:30minutesWordrange:Integratedwriting:150---225wordsindependentwriting:300words以上新旧托福分数对照表请看:重要分数的位置120---100115---99.5110---96.8105---93.6100---89.095---8590---79.785---73.180---66.275---59原始分数和最终分数换算表5303.5224.75293.25214.5283204.25272.75184252.5173.75242.2515重要分数的位置30---97.929---95.928---93.427---90.525---87.224---82.923---82.922---77.421---72.420---66.9学习新托福写作须知美式英语或英式英语?词汇课或语法课或写作课?字数重要吗?结构重要吗?拼写重要吗?

学习新托福写作须知(续)

------书面语或口语?

PhotographTelevisionLaboratorydormitoryMathematics

学习新托福写作须知(续)

------书面语或口语?

&Eg.∵∴KidCan’t

学习新托福写作须知(续)

------语法重要吗?

Peopleworkinginbigcompanyaresupposedtobeabletousecomputer.Thereisanevidencethatadvertisingprofoundlyaffectshumanbeingtheworldover.Apersonwithbroadandprofoundknowledgecanhaveabetterlifethanthepersonwhodoesnot?Themanbittenbythehomelessdoghasdied.Judgmentsmadeinmostofthebookarebelievable.ThemajorityofChinesearefondofwatchingTV.Alargeamountofpeoplegoabroadtolearnadvancedknowledge.Dinosaurshaveextincted.学习新托福写作须知(续)

------句子是文章的最基本单位句子训练方法三种句子训练方法(一)1.用多种方法表达同一句意.

例如:A对B很重要.1）AisimportanttoB.2）Aplaysanimportantrole\partinB.3）AisofimportancetoB.4）Bcannotlive\develop\grow\survivewithoutA.5）AistoBwhatthefoundationistoaskyscraper\wateristofish.6）Aisessential/significant/crucial/critical/vitaltoB.7）TheimportanceofAtoBcanneverbeexaggerated\denied\ignored.2.扩充句子.

将一个简单句进行扩充,增加至15字,25字,35字,尽量使用不同的语法结构,如同位语,插入语,非谓语结构,各种从句,并列结构等。（教主要求：文章里多于25字的句子至少有3句。）句子训练方法(二)句子训练方法(三)3.对句式进行各种变化。句子的变化句子的分类五大句型特殊句型（倒装句，强调句，修辞问句，并列结构，各种从句，插入语，同位语，等等）句子的变化方式句子的分类陈述句,疑问句,感叹句和祈使句简单句,复合句,复杂句和复合复杂句主动句和被动句五大句型S+ViS+Vt+OS+Vt+Oi+OdS+Vlink+CS+Vt+O+C句子的变化方式开头的变化(名词,不定式,介词词组,分词…)结尾的变化长短句的变化主被动的变化各种句式的变化开头的变化范例Cheatingontestsrepeatedlyinvitesself-defeat.Repeatedcheatingontestsinvitesself-defeat.Tocheatontestsrepeatedlyistoinviteself-defeat.Thefactthatyoucheatontestsrepeatedlyinvitesself-defeat.Foranyonetocheatontestsrepeatedlyistoinviteself-defeat.Whoevercheatsontestsrepeatedlyistoinviteself-defeat.Leadto＼resultin\inviteResultfromBecauseof\dueto\thanksto\owingto\byreasonof\onaccountof\Because\for\since\as因果关系的表达Asaresult\outcome\consequenceofInconsequence\intheend\consequentlyThe\effect\influence\impact…Affect\influenceSotherefore\thereby\hence\thus段落的实现比较对照法（整体\分项比较）整体比较：A：a1,b1,c1B：a2,b2,c2分项比较：a1,b1a2,b2a3,b3段落的实现分类法定义法例如：Parentsarethebestteachers.Playingagameisfunonlywhenyouwin.衔接手段使用连接词和短语(表并列\转折\递进\因果\比较\对照\举例)使用代词使用语意的粘连精彩句型1Thelecturediscusses…whichdiffersfromthemainideainthereadingthat…精彩句型2

Theprofessormadethepointthat…Thereading,incontrast,heldadifferentview.Anotherimportantpointshowedinthelisteningmaterialisthat…butthereadingpresentsaconflictingideathat…Finally,theprofessorstatedthat...whichchallengesthestandpointmadebythewriterwhosaidthat...Ingeneral,theprofessordiscussedtheproblemof…thatthereadingviewedinacontrary\opposing\differentangle.精彩句型3

Accordingtothelecture…ontheotherhand\whilethereadingstatedthat…

精彩句型4Theprofessormadethepointthat…onthecontrary\incontrast\however,thewriterdemonstratedanideathat…

精彩句型5Thelecturesupports\illustratestheideathat…Thelecturecontradicts\refutes\iscontraryto\istheoppositeoftheideathat…

精彩句型6Contrarytothebeliefinthepassagethat…theprofessorsaysthat…Theprofessorrefutestheviewpointshowedinthepassagethat…bysayingthat…对材料的指称Thespeaker\lecturer\professor\listeningmaterial\lecture\talkThewriter\author\readingmaterial\writing\passage时态的运用一般现在时态or一般过去时态注意框架部分时态的一致性and学术内容的时态要根据上下文来确定重要人名举例WilliamShakespeareGeorgeWashingtonThomasJeffersonFranklinRooseveltAbrahamLincolnBillGatesChristopherColumbusWinstonChurchillNeilArmstrong（astronomer）LouisArmstrong(singer）DwightD.EisenhowerMargaretMitchellMarilynMonroe

O.HenryPearlS.BuckJohnF.KennedyMarkTwainTheodoreRooseveltAlbertGore,Jr.ThomasEdisonAlexanderFlemingErnestHemingwayHenryFord

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WaltDisney重要专用名词举例TheStatueofLibertyTheBostonTeaPartyTheYangtzeRiverTheMississippiRiverThePulitzerPrizeMountRushmoreNationalMemorialTheRockyMountainsMcDonald’sHarvard\Princeton\YaleUniversityshockingly\unusually\notably\noticeably\overwhelmingly\strikingly\awfully\exceedingly\dramatically\highlyimpressively\strongly插入语Anewfactorywouldcontaminatethelivingspaceofmostofourtown’sinhabitantstosomedegree.Anewfactorywould,tosomedegree,contaminatethelivingspaceofmostofourtown’sinhabitants.常用作插入语的副词

indeed，surely，nonetheless，however，nevertheless，notwithstanding,admittedly,obviously，besides,furthermore,briefly,similarly,

honestly\frankly\generally(speaking)，

naturally，luckily\fortunately，astonishingly,conversely,undeniably,undoubtedly常见的作插入语的形容词或短语

strangetosay，needlesstosay，mostimportantofall，worstofallinsum\short\summary，inotherwords，inasense，ingeneral，inmyview\opinion\judgment，

inconclusion，inthefirstplace，

inconsequence,inadditionOnthecontrary,incontrast常用作插入语的介词短语

tomyjoy\delight\satisfaction\surprise\astonishment\amazement\regret\disappointment，

ofcourse,forinstance\example,infact,asamatteroffact常用作插入语的不定式短语

tobesure，tosumup，totellthetruth,tostartwith，插入句

Iamsure，

Ibelieve\wonder\suppose，itseems，asIseeit，whatisimportant(serious)，I’mafraid，itissaid明喻

1.使用明喻需要具备的条件：本体和喻体不能是同一类事物，并且是本质不同的；本体和喻体必须有相似点（即可比性）；二者的相似点要能够引起比喻联系；喻体是形象的，具体的，人们熟悉的和常用的。2.明喻使用的特征词汇3.喻体的选择：注意中西方文化的差异使用明喻的标志性词汇as:Beautyisassummerfruit,whichiseasytocorruptandcannotlast…seem:Thegateofthebuildingseemstobetheentrancetoavasthiveofsixorsevenfloors.like:Lifewaslikeaboxofchocolate…asif/asthough:Itrainedasiftheflood-gatesofHeavenwereopened,pare/liken…to…:Shakespearecompared/likenedtheworldtoastage.as…as…:Hedrinksasmuchasafish.theway(inwhich):Ishouldsmellitthewayacatsmellsamouse.mightaswell…as:Youmightaswellthrowyourmoneyintotheditchasgiveittohim.nomore…than/notanymore…than:Scienceisbuiltwith…AistoBwhatCistoD/WhatCistoD,thatAistoB/AsCistoD,AistoB:Thegovernmentistoacountrywhattheheartistoaperson.中西方文化寓意相同的：ascoldasice（像冰一样冷），asfatasapig（胖得像猪），ascunningasafox（像狐狸一样狡猾），asstillasdeath（死一般沉寂），asgracefulasaswan（像天鹅一样美丽），aschasteasice（冰清玉洁），asgreedyasawolf（像狼一样贪婪），asloyalasadog（像狗一样忠诚），ashandsomeaspaint（美丽如画）中西方文化寓意不同的：toeatlikeahorse（像马一样能吃），todrinklikeafish（像鱼一样能喝），likeadrownedrat（落汤鼠一样），likeapeacockamongsparrows（像孔雀站在麻雀里），likeahenonahotgirdle（像热烤盘上的母鸡），asdrunkasarat（烂醉如泥），asmerryasacricket（像蟋蟀一样快乐），aspoorasachurchmouse（穷得像教堂里的耗子），asthinaslath（骨瘦如柴），ascloseasanoyster（像牡蛎一样闭嘴），asstupidasagoose（愚蠢得跟鹅一样）暗喻通常直接用喻体做句子的宾语或者定语等成分来实现比喻。常见的习惯用语：teachafishtoswim（教鱼游泳——班门弄斧）featherone’snest（往自己的巢里弄羽毛——中饱私囊）beardthelioninhisden（在狮子的洞口拔它的胡须——虎口拔牙）addinsulttoinjury（给受伤的人以侮辱——雪上加霜）castpearlsbeforeswine（把珍珠放在猪面前——对牛弹琴）holdthecandletothedevil（为恶魔打火把——助纣为虐）cryupwineandsellvinegar（吆喝酒却卖醋——表里不一）fishintheair（在空气中钓鱼——水中捞月）lockthestabledoorafterthehorseisstolen（马被偷了后上锁——亡羊补牢）killtwobirdswithonestone（一石二鸟）setafoxtokeepone’sgeese（让狐狸看管鹅群——引狼入室）letsleepingdogslie（让睡觉的狗躺着吧——不要打草惊蛇）kickagainstthepricks（朝刺上踢腿——以卵击石）letthecatoutofthebag（让猫爬出袋子——露出马脚）holdawolfbytheears/takethebullbythehorns（抓住狼的耳朵/公牛的角——骑虎难下）aflashinthepan（火药池的火光——昙花一现）sitontwochairs/standontwoboats/ridetwohorsesatthesametime（脚睬两只船修辞问句

1.勿须回答2.起强调作用

修辞问句

举例:Willanybodywhoisconcernedwiththeecologicalprotectionagreewiththeplantograbthealreadylimitedlandforthosepoorandenchantingendangeredspecies?头韵Practicemakesperfect.Loveme,lovemydogs.Timeandtidewaitfornoman.Moneymakesthemarego.Cleanandclear;CocaColaAllroadsleadtoRome.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway