2021中考英语作文：现代生活2021疫情英语作文

第第页共29页用一般过去时态；提出至少两条避免意外发生的建议，用一般现在时；最后要呼吁同学们注意校园安全。同时要注意提示词汇的使用。例文点评：这篇短文内容清晰完整语言简洁正确。首先举例描述发生在校园里的意外事，有过程有结果，接着用Ithink引入自己的建议，最后用Ihope+从句的方式呼吁学生们要注意校园安全。高分亮点：短语：ranaftereachother；becauseof；felldown；keeponeeyeon；stopthemfromrunning；payattentionto。句型：hadbetterdosth最好做某事；Ihope+从句。昨天你班召开了一次“告别陋习，走上文明”的主题班会。会上老师让你们谈谈身边同学的变化。请你根据表格里的内容写一篇有关王明同学的文章。过去的表现现在的表现经常和同学打架(fight)和同学相处融洽(begoodwith)花很多时间玩电脑游戏(spendtimedoing)积极(active)参加各项活动(activity)经常吃垃圾食品(junkfood)健康的生活习惯(livinghabits)在课堂上吃东西，睡觉(either...or...)认真听课，按时完成(finish)作业考试不及格(fail)各门学科取得好成绩，尤其(especially)数学注意：1文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥使短文的意思连贯语句通顺。2不得出现真实的人名，校名和地名。字数80左右，(文章的开头已给出，不计入总字数)WangMingismyclassmate.Hehadmadegreatprogressthisterm.Inthepast,【满分范文】WangMingismyclassmate.Hehadmadegreatprogressthisterm.Inthepast,healwaysfoughtwithothers.Heusedtospendmuchtimeplayingputergames.Andheoftenatejunkfood.Inclassheeitherateorslept.Healwaysfailedtheexam.Butnowhechangedalot.Hecanbegoodwithotherstudents.Hetakeanactivepartinallkindsofactivities,andbeesveryoutgoing.Hehashealthyeatinghabits.Alsohelistenstotheteacherscarefullyinclassandfinisheshishomeworkontime.Sohegetsgoodgradesinallsubjects,especiallymath.Nowwealllikehim.【解析】题干解读：本文属于材料作文，根据你班召的主题班会“告别陋习，走上文明”的主题班会。谈谈你身边同学的变化。这篇文中涉及到了过去和现在的不同变化。文中需要用到一般过去时和一般现在时态。2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务。本文是两段式，第一段介绍了过去的情况，第二段是现在的变化。语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。高分亮点：短语：makegreatprogress；inthepast；fightwith；either・・・or…；takeanactivepartin；healthyeatinghabits。句型：Heusedtospendmuchtimeplayingputergames（usedtodo的句型）；Hetakeanactivepartinallkindsofactivities,andbeesveryoutgoing（六）初三学生Sandy面临中考，面对父母和老师的期望及每天堆成山的作业感到非常苦恼，昨天因为看了一小时的电视和妈妈吵架，最后摔门而去。于是她写信给老师倾诉烦恼，请你根据下列提示以老师Nancy的身份用英语给她写一封回信。提示：1．舒缓目前的压力；2．安排好每天的学习和休息；3．处理与父母的关系。注意：1．必须包括要点中所有提示内容，并作适当发挥；2．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；3．表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；4．词数不少于90词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。DearSandy，I'mreallygladthatyoucanshareyourproblemsandfeelingswithme．Hereismyadvice．Yours，Nancy【满分范文】DearSandy，I'mreallygladthatyoucanshareyourproblemsandfeelingswithme．Hereismyadvice・（点题）First，it'sagoodchoicetotakeupahobbytohelpyourelaxandreduceyourpressure.【髙分句型一】Second，youcanmakeplansforyoureverydaylife・Afteryoustudyforabouttwohours，youcantakeawalkoutsideandtrytorelax・Besides，don'tstayuplate．It'snotgoodforyourhealth．Third，neverarguewithyourparents．Youshouldlearntounderstandthemandspendsometimemunicatingwiththem．Discussyourproblemswiththemandtellthemyourideas．Theywillhelpyoufindbetterwaystosolvethem・（建议）Inaword，youwillhaveahappierlifewithlesspressureaslongasyoustudyhardandoftentalkwithyourparents.【髙分句型二】（总结全文）Yours，Nancy（七）九年级的学习生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有进步、喜悅•请根据下面提示，以“OurSchoolLifeinGradeNine为题写一篇词数为80左右的短文，介绍九年级的学校生活，并提出希望和建议・提示：1・在学校：老师认真负责，充满爱心；学生：……（至少发挥两点）2．周末作业：作业多，舍弃爱好；周末活动：锻炼、电视愿望：……（发挥一到两点）要求：1．短文须包括所有提示要点，可适当发挥；2．短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名；3．词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）．参考词汇：patient,carefully，actively,stressed紧张的满分范文】OurSchoolLifeinGradeNineItismorethanhalfayearsincewebecameaGradeNinestudent.【髙分句型一】Hereiswhatourschoollifeislikenow・（点题）Atschool,allofourteachersworkveryhard．Mostofthemarekind-heartedandpatientenoughtohelpuswithallkindsofproblems・Asforstudents，inclasswelistentotheteachercarefullyandthinkactively・Afterclass，wearebusydoingourhomework・Weallworkhardtoimproveourselves・Onweekends,wespendmuchtimedoinghomework，sowecan'tsparetimeforourhobbiesanymore・Ifeelalittlestressed，soItrytoplaybasketballorwatchTVtogetrelaxed・Ihopetoworkhardtomakemydreametrue・Ialsowishmyclassmateshealthyandhappyeveryday.（介绍学校生活）Nopains，nogains・Themorecarefullyweplanourday，themorecolorfulourschoollifewillbe.【髙分句型二】（总结全文）（八）近年来，我国校园欺凌事屡有发生，而遭受校园欺凌的学生容易情绪抑郁、焦虑，不敢去学校，甚至会出现心理问题等严重后果•请以“Myopinionsaboutschoolbullying为题“，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的看法．提示：1．Whatdoyouthinkofschoolbullying？2．Whatwillyoudoifyouarebulliedoryouseesomebodyelsebeingbullied？要求：1．所给提示信息应全部包括，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；2.80词以上．参考词汇：心理问题mentalhealthproblems．Myopinionsaboutschoolbullying【满分范文】MyopinionsaboutschoolbullyingSchoolbullyingisabigproblemthathasgotmoreandmoreattentioninsociety．Beingbulliedcanmakestudentsfeelscaredorupset．Somestudentsareafraidofgoingtoschool．Schoolbullyingcanevenleadtomoreseriousmentalhealthproblems．Sohowshouldwestopschoolbullying?（我对校园欺凌的看法）IfIseesomebodybeingbulliedorIambullied，Iwilltelltheteachersormyparentsatonce.【髙分句型一】Itisnotagoodideatodoanybadthingstothebulliesonmyown.【髙分句型二】（如果被欺负，我会怎么做）（九）初中生活即将结束，这三年一定给你留下很多美好的回忆．英语俱乐部征文要求写篇110词左右文章描述你难忘的校园生活、师生情或同学情．以及在临别之际，对他们说的感激和祝福的话．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名．【满分范文】Howtimeflies!Ourjuniorhighschooldaysareingtoanend，andI＇dliketosayalottoyouallwhohavehelpedmeandstayedwithme.【髙分句型一】（点题）Firstly，I＇dliketothankmygreatteachers.Theyteachmenotonlyhowtolearnbutalsohowtobeaman.Thoughtheylookstrictandserious，theyarealwayskindtome.（感谢老师）Secondly，Iwanttothankmyfriendlyclassmates.AslongasIhavetrouble，theyarealwaysaroundme.Imissthehappydayswhenwestaywitheachother.Iloveallofyou・（感谢同学）Finally，I＇mgoingtothankmyparents.Theyalwayslookaftermeverywelltokeepmehealthy.Andtheyoftenencouragemetoworkhardatschool.【髙分句型二】（感谢父母）（十）亲爱的同学，假如你是Alex，初中生活即将结束，你所向往的髙中生活即将来临.由于疫情（epidemicsituation）原因，你将代表（represent）初三毕业生，做一个网络直播演讲．请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇演讲稿．（1）对初中三年学习生活的总结（至少三个方面）（2）对老师、同学及父母的感谢，并简要说明原因（3）谈谈你对未来的梦想和肩负的社会责任，以及你得去实现要求：1．文章语句通顺，句式多样．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．3．文中不得出现真实姓名、学校和班级．4．词数：100词左右．Dearladiesandgentlemen，That＇sallformyspeech．Thankyouforyourattention!【满分范文】Dearladiesandgentlemen，It＇smyhonortomakeaspeechatthegraduatingceremony.【髙分句型一】（点题）Ithasbeenthreeyearssincewecametothebeautifulschool．Ourschoolisverybeautiful．Wehavecolourfulactivitieseveryterm．Ourteachersalwaystrytomaketheirlessonslivelyandinteresting.【髙分句型二】Wehavelearnedalotandmadegreatprogressduringthelastthreeyears.（对初中三年学习生活的总结）Weshouldthankourteachers，ourparentsandourclassmates．Thefirstgroupismyclassmates．We＇veworkedhardtogetherandwe＇veevensharedsomedifficulttimestogether．Thesecondgroupisourparents．IthankyouformakingahomewhereIfeelbothsafeandrelaxed．Ialsothankyouforyourhelpwithmyhomework．Thethirdgroupisourteachers．Wecanneverpayyoubackforyourkindness，yourpatience，andgiftofknowledgewhichyouhaveofferedus.（对老师、同学、父母的感谢以及原因）Inthefuture,Iwanttobeateachertohelpmorepeopleinneed．Iwillstudyhardandrealizethisdreamassoonaspossible・（未来梦想以及实现）That＇sallformyspeech．Thankyouforyourattention!（十一）“你养我长大，我陪你变老．“父母亲一直在为我们的成长默默付出，成长要学会感受爱、回报爱．今天你即将毕业是向父母表达感激的好机会．请根据以下所给要点，写一篇英语短文．要点：（1）给我生命，一直照顾我成长；（2）努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条；（3）拥有爱心，教我学会；（4）今天，我要为你们……（自主发挥，至少两点）.注意事项：（1）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息．Youbringmeup.Iwillbewithyouinyourlife.Youareimportantpersonsintheprocessofmygrowth.__【满分范文】Youbringmeup.Iwillbewithyouinyourlife.Youareimportantpersonsintheprocessofmygrowth．Yougivemelifeandtakecareofmeallthetime.（给我生命，一直照顾我成长）WhenIhaveproblemswithmystudyandlife，youarealwayspatientenoughtohelpmeandencourageme.【高分句型一】Inordertoletmeliveapleasantlifeandreceivegoodeducation，youalwaysworkhardfrommorningtillnight.（努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条）Everyoneknowsyouarethepersonsfulloflove.Youarereadytohelppeopleinneed.Itisyouwhoteachmetobeakindperson.【髙分句型二】（拥有爱心，教我做慈爱的人）Dadandmum，todayI＇llcookdinnerforyou．I＇llgoforawalkwithyouafterdinner.（今天要为父母做的两事）Ihopeyouwillbehappyandhealthyforever!【名师点评】【高分句型一】WhenIhaveproblemswithmystudyandlife，youarealwayspatientenoughtohelpmeandencourageme.当我的学习和生活有问题时，你总是耐心地帮助我，鼓励我．when当时候，引导时间状语从句，adj+enough+todosth足够地……可以做某事，【高分句型二】Itisyouwhoteachmetobeakindperson.是你教会我做一个善良的人.本句使用了强调句Itis+被强调部分+that/who…（十二）初中生活马上就要结束了，三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想（请不要写出真实的学校名称以及真实姓名）。提示词语：threeyears；memories；oneof；oneday；think；happy/sorry【满分范文】Howtimeflies!Ihavestudiedinmyschoolforthreeyears.AndIwillgraduatefrommiddleschoolinamonth.Iameagertosharemyhappinessandsadnesswithyou.Ihadsomanymemoriesinthreeyears＇life.Oneofthemimpressedmeverymuch.Istillremember,whenIbegantolearnEnglish,Ifoundittoodifficult.NomatterhowhardItried,Istillcouldn＇tdowellinitandalmostgaveitup.AssoonasmyEnglishteacherfoundmyproblem,shehadatalkwithmeabouthowtolearnEnglishwell.Sincethen,shehaskepthelpingme.Littlebylittle,I＇vebeeinterestedinEnglishandI＇mgoodatit.IthinkIamsoluckytobeeoneofherstudents.I＇velearnedalotfromher.Iwilltrytohelpotherswh