小升初英语我的好妈妈

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皎洁的月光照射在那张脸上，我留心地端量着。妈妈老了，乌黑的头发里掺杂着几根白发，那双炯炯有神的眼睛也深深地陷下去了。我的鼻子一酸，往事浮现在眼前。

Thebrightmoonlightonthatface,Icarefullylooked.Mymotherisold.Herblackhairismixedwithwhitehair.Herbrighteyesaredeeplysunk.Whenmynosewassour,thepastcametome.

去年秋天，我的外婆患了胆结石，住进了医院，这可忙坏了妈妈。早晨，大家还在沉睡中，妈妈就静静地起床了，为我们做好早餐，便骑车到医院去。一到那里，就开头繁忙起来，给外婆拾掇床铺、喂饭、喂药；

晚上妈妈还要为外婆铺床，然后打来热腾腾的水，帮外婆洗脸、擦身，安置外婆睡觉，然后才拖着疲乏的身子回家。

Lastautumn,mygrandmotherhadgallstonesandwasadmittedtothehospital,whichmadeherbusy.Inthemorning,everyonewasstillsleeping,somymothergotupquietly,madebreakfastforus,androdetothehospital.AssoonasIgotthere,Ibegantobebusy,makingmygrandmother"sbed,feedingherriceandmedicine;intheevening,mymotherwouldmakeherbed,andthenshewouldfetchhotwatertowashherface,cleanherbody,andputherinbed.Thenshewoulddraghertiredbodyhome.

妈妈不仅关切照管老人，对儿女的关切也是无微不至的。

Motherscarenotonlyfortheelderly,butalsofortheirchildren.

现在已经到了秋天，大家都添了服装，我的那套旧衣服已经()穿好几个念头了，想让妈妈给我添件新的，可话到嘴边却咽下去了。有一天我终究忍不住向妈妈开口了：“妈妈，我想买衣服可以吗？我那衣服已经穿了好久了，同学们都笑我穿衣服那么寒酸。”妈妈满不在乎地说：“嗯！哪些衣服还可以穿嘛！从小理应”“好了，好了，不买就算了，说这么多！”我把妈妈的话打断了，心想：妈妈真小气，给我买件衣服都不舍得。

Nowit"sautumn,everyonehasaddedclothes.Myoldclotheshavebeenputonseveralideas.Iwantmymothertoaddanewone,butIswallowittomymouth.OnedayIfinallycouldn"thelpsayingtomymother,"Mom,canIbuyclothes?Myclotheshavebeenwornforalongtime,andmyclassmateslaughatmyshabbyclothes."Mothersaidindifferently,"Well!WhichclothescanIwear!Sincechildhood,Ishould..."Well,well,don"tbuyit,justsaysomuch!"Iinterruptedmymother"swords,thinking:Momissomean,Ican"taffordtobuyadressforme.

其实，我并不知道妈妈在给我织毛衣，一听到我说要买衣服就快速地赶织。到了半夜我醒来望见妈妈还在灯光下一针一针地为我赶织毛衣，眼泪就不知不觉夺眶而出。过了十几天，毛衣赶好了，妈妈把毛衣拿给我。我看了看美观的毛衣，又看了看妈妈，察觉妈妈为了赶毛衣瘦了好多，泪珠便叭嗒叭嗒地落下来了

Infact,Ididn"tknowthatmymotherwasknittingsweatersforme.AssoonasIheardthatIwantedtobuyclothes,Iquicklyknittedthem.WhenIwokeupinthemiddleofthenight,Isawmymotherknittingsweatersformeunderthelight,andtearscametomyeyesunconsciously.Aftermorethantendays,thesweaterisready.Mymothertakesittome.Ilookedatthebeautifulsweaterandthenatmymother.Ifoundthatmymotherlostalotofweightinordertocatchupwithhersweater,andtearsfelldown

我为有这样的妈妈感到骄傲，我在心里深情地呼叫：“妈妈啊！您是我的好妈妈！”

Iamproudofhavingsuchamother,andIcallinmyheartaffectionately:"Mom!Youaremygoodmother!"

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