表达文采飞扬,怎样使用较高级词汇

怎样让书面表达文采飞扬05高考英语书面表达评分原则4：评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。第5档（20——25分）：②应用了较多的语法结构和词汇

③语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力1.多实少虚:nice2.短语优先：Icannotbearit.Iwantit.generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,warm-hearted,hospitalIcannotputupwithit.Iamlookingforwardtoit.３弃旧取新:Ｗeallhavethesamechance.Therearemoreopponents.1.较高级词汇possessopportunityexist学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。1.It’sverydangerousforthestudentstogothroughthetraffic.2.Studentsareriskingtheirliveswhenthreadingtheirwayamongcars.社会应加强对学生的交通安全教育。1.Thestudentsshouldbetaughtmoreaboutthetrafficsafety.2.Andalsoitisofgreatusetostrengthenthesafetyeducationoverthestudents.较高级词汇(Exercises1)较高级词汇(Exercises2)1.Weallthinkheisagreatman.2.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.3.Shewentthereinordertostudymusic.4.Inourschool,therearetwenty-sixclassrooms.Weallofhim.Theplantobeafailure.Shewentthere

studyingmusic.Ourschooltwenty–sixclassrooms.Thinkhighlyturnedoutforthepurposeofismadeupof较高级词汇(Exercises3)5.Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.6.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.7.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.You’llfindingmyhouse.Agoodideatome.thegoodweather,

ourjourneywascomfortable.havenotroubleAgoodideasuddenlyme.Thankstooccurredstruck非谓语各种从句with复合宾语倒装独立主格虚拟等等强调句型运用多种语法结构，句式灵活多变，可以使文章增色不少。2.丰富的语法结构丰富的语法结构(Exercises1)1.Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.2.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）3.Hecameinandtherewasababyinhisarms.(用with结构),pleasegivemeane-mail.isthat

thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.OnhisarrivingWhatsurpriseshimHecamein,

withababyinhisarms.4.(由于不知道他的电话，他没法跟Mary联系)(用非谓语）5.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)

6.TomandMarylikesingingsongs.(使用倒装）Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthat，hecan’tgetintouchwithTom

Notknowinghistelephonenumber

heknewwhathadhappened.丰富的语法结构(Exercises2)Tomlikessingingsongs,Mary.sodoes7.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词)8.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.（使用句型结构）9.Becausetheweatherisfine,manypeoplewenttoclimbtheWesternhill.（使用独立主格结构）

bymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.,alargenumberofpeoplewenttoclimbtheWesternHills.hespoke,excitedhefelt.丰富的语法结构(Exercises3)FollowedThemorethemoreTheweatherbeingfine一篇好的书面表达，还应该行文连贯流畅，具有“逻辑美”。使用恰当连接词，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑，使文章更为地道，更具“英语味”。记得使用恰当的连接词，如:soon,immediately,suddenly,infrontof,nextto,ononehand,ontheotherhand,however,

though,otherwise,thanksto,asaresult(of),solongas,onconditionthat,

evenif/though,

what’smore,besides,tomakethematterworse,I’mafraid,youknow,Asweallknow…3.恰当的连接词1.Thisvillageisverysmall.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Thisvillageisasmallonewith/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.

However,ithaschangedalotsince1978.LastSunday,twoYoungPioneerswereontheirwaytotheChildren’sPalace.Theysawaboxfalloffapassingtruck.Theyshouted“stop”tothedriveratthetopoftheirvoice.

LastSunday,twoYoungPioneerswereontheirwaytotheChildren’sPalacewhentheysawaboxfalloffapassingtruck.Withoutdelay,theyshouted“stop”tothedriveratthetopoftheirvoice.

3.Yesterday，therewasapolicemaninthestreet.Hestoppedacar.Thecarwasatthecorner.ItlookedlikeaHonda.Therewasaboyonthesidewalk.Hewasridinghisbicycle.Thebicyclewasatwo-wheeler.Thecarnearlyknockeddowntheboy.

Yesterday，apolicemanstoppedacar－Hondaatthecornerofthestreet，

because

itnearlyknockeddownaboywhowasridingatwo-wheelbicycleonthesidewalk.2.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.What’smore,theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.飞让文采扬达表面书语意要合情合理，过渡自然语句要有简有繁，随“意”而安语法要结构正确，无懈可击语言要地道流畅，书写规范联考书面表达欣赏：MakingEveryDayEarthDayAscanbeseenfromthebriefdialogue,theearthsuffersalotfromman’sbehaviouratpresent.Therearemanyproblems.Forinstance,wehumanbeingsaredestroyingtoomanytrees,whichleadstoairpollution.Besides,pollutedwaterissentintoriversdirectlywithoutbeingdealtwith.Furthermore,fewpeopleareawareofsuchproblemswhilemostofustakethemforgranted.联考书面表达欣赏：However,ontheEarthDay,somemeasuresaretakentocarefortheearth.Notonlydopeoplespreadtheideaofprotectingtheearth,butalsosomethingwillbedone,suchasdealingwithrubbish,recyclingusedbatteryandsoon.Butthatisfarfromenough.IstronglycalloneveryonetotreateverydayastheEarthDayandtakecareoftheeartheveryday.Onlyinthiswaycanwehopeforabetterhometolivein.

Homework:联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：

1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。2）词数：100-120之间。

联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：

1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。2）词数：100-120之间。Practice书面表达：Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool.Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.Ladiesandgentlemen,

Welcometoourschool!Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!①Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②Ithaschangedalotsince1978③.Peoplehere④arericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.①Thisvillageisasmallonewith/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②However,

ithaschangedalotsince1978③andhasbeendevelopingveryfast.Peoplehere④liveamuchbetterlifethanbefore.书面表达：Nowitistakingonanewlook.

Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤.⑥Nowithasbeenrebuilt.⑦Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys⑧.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.⑩Thankyou.

Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤andmostchildrencouldn’taffordtogotoschool.⑥

Butnowithasbeenrebuilt⑦and⑧whichhas4storeysisthemostbeautifuloneinthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨What’smore,

theyenjoyfreeeducation.⑩Mayyouenjoyyourstayherethenewlybuiltteachingbuilding/Mayyouhaveapleasanttimehere!Thankyou.

Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!①Thisvillageisasmallone

with/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②

However,ithaschangedalotsince1978③

andhasbeendevelopingveryfast.

④

Peoplehereliveamuchbetterlifethanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤

andmostchildrencouldn’taffordtogotoschool.⑥Butnowithasbeenrebuilt⑦

andthenewlybuiltteachingbuilding⑧

whichhas4storeysisthemostbeautifulone

inthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨

What’smore,theyenjoyfreeeducation.

⑩

Mayyouenjoyyourstayhere/Mayyouhaveapleasanttimehere!Thankyou.

2001年春季高考作文给澳大利亚的朋友写一封信，谈谈减负给学生的学习和生活带来的变化。

Iwilltellyouthechangesofmylife.Before,wehadmanyclassesev