度米作文汇编之2023年英语四级作文写作思路及练习记叙文

度米作文汇编之2023年英语四级作文写作思路及练习：记叙文记叙文是以叙述人物的经历和事物的发展变化过程为主要表现形式的一种文体。记叙文既可以以写人为主，又可以以写事为主。写记叙文要注意记叙文的“六大要素”即：时间(when)——何时发生，有没有具体时间?地点(where)——何地发生，有没有地点变化?人物(who)——何人参与，谁是主角?事件(what)——发生了什么，有何特点?原因(why)——事件的起因?结果(how)——事件的经过及结局?一般说来，在一篇记叙文中这六大要素是缺一不可的。记叙文的思路就围绕这六大要素充分展开。【例】英语四级考试中，只出现过一次专门的记叙文体裁的写作，即“anearlymorningwalk”(1988.6.)，2003年6月出现过包含记叙文的作文，即“aneye-witnessaccountofatrafficaccident”。对于“anearlymorningwalk”，知道命题要求后，我们就要开始构思了。when：题目已规定了是“清晨”，在这个时候，“我”去散步。where：到哪儿散步?去公园?在校园里?在街上(街上空气不好，还是不去!)。who：在公园里看到晨练的人：中老年人、年轻人、小孩子;在校园里看到读书背单词的学生。what：人们热火朝天地做操，随音乐跳舞，打球，等等。why：清晨空气清新，适合锻炼;一日之际在于晨，背背书，读读单词。当然，由这个题目可以令人想到很多东西，因篇幅所限，我们做了删减。参考范文anearlymorningwalkonemorningigotupveryearly,andeverythingaroundwasveryquiet.thesunhadjustrisen,shiningbrilliantlyandeverythingseemedtobecoveredwithalayerofgoldensilk.therewereonlysomebirdssingingoccasionallyinthetalltrees.istrolledalongthestreettowardthepark,breathingthefreshairandfeelingextremelyhappy.wheniarrivedatthepark,ifound,tomysurprise,thatthereweresomanypeoplethere.menandwomen,boysandgirls,allwereenjoyingthemselvesintheirvariousactivities.someweredoingmorningexercises,somewereplayingbadmintonandsomeoldpeoplewerehavingtheirteawhiletalkingtoeachothercheerfully.iwanderedaroundthepark.tomydelight,ifoundafewmiddle-schoolstudentstalkingtoeachotherinenglishinonecornerofthepark.iwentupandspoketotheminenglish.wesoonbecamefriends.iwasverygladtofindanotheropportunitytopracticemyspokenenglish.onthewayhome,irealizedthatanearlymorningwalkreallywasgoodandhealthful.takingearlymorningwalksmakesonehealthyandwise.【点评】文章按照时间顺序(inchronologicalorder)，第一句话点明时间(onemorning)、人物(第一人称“i”)，并简要描述了早晨的特点(whatwasthesetting)，接着第二段第一句话交代地点(inthepark)，然后介绍公园里人们及作者的活动(whatwashappening)，最后在文章结尾点题，即，归纳中心思想——takingearlymorningwalksmakesonehealthyandwise.仅仅189个单词既满足了记叙文的“六大要素”，又有明确的中心思想和生动的细节，行文方式符合要求。例二：amostunluckyday1.以“amostunluckyday”为题，想想该怎么写。注意：题目的中心词是“unlucky”。when:where:who:what:why:how:参考思路when：哪一天是最倒霉的日子?考前的晚上?公布成绩的日子?周末?where：在大街上违章停车?在学校?在商场?在经常光顾的地方——食堂、餐厅、麦当劳、图书馆、溜冰场、投影厅?who：是我倒霉?是好友?你?那个蛋白质室友?what：拿到罚单?上课上班迟到?失恋?被窃?四级没过?why：倒霉嘛，无非是运气不好，睡过头了、态度恶劣、偷懒、不刻苦…how：一团糟，挨批，心情极度沮丧，不过也无所谓嘛…想完之后，我们再花点儿功夫将关联的东东挑出来，别忘了本文的中心是“unlucky”。根据自己的思路，写一篇文章：参考范文amostunluckydayihadastreakoftoughluckyesterday.everything,itseemedtome,wentwrong.andisimplycouldn’hemorning,asluckwouldhaveit,myalarmclockdidn’tring,andwithanachingheadiwokeuphalfanhourlaterthanusual.iwasinsuchahurrythat,whenmakinganomelet,igotmyfingersburntandsplashedtheomeletalloverthefloorofthekitchen.havingnotimeformybreakfastatthatpoint,irushedoutofmyhousewithanemptystomachandhurtingfingers.ihadintendedtocatchthe7:30subway,butsomehowicouldn’tmakeit.ibecameverynervousatthemerethoughtofbeinglateformyenglishclass,becausemyenglishteacherisverystrictanddemanding,andhegetsangrywheneveranystudentislateforhisclass.aftergettingoffthe7:40subway,iracedallthewayfromthestationtomyschool,thinkingitwouldbeimpossibleformetoflagataxiatthishouroftheday.atthecornerofthestreetnearmyschool,iabruptlybumpedintoamanand,worseluck,broketheglassesihadboughtfor500yuanjustlastweek.withscarcelyanytimetoreceiveorofferanapology,ijustkeptonrunningandrunning.atlonglast,iarrivedattheschoolonlytofind,withgreatsadnessmixedwithsomerelief,thattheschoolwasemptyandtheclassroomswerealllocked.itwassaturday.myillluckshowednosignofcomingtoanend.whenireturnedhomegreatlyfrustrated,ifoundmyselflockedout.inmyhurryihadforgottentobringthekeywithme.justmyluck!【点评】这篇文章按照时间顺序一气呵成。文章的标题、第一句和最后一句都点出了中心思想：“ihadamostunluckyday”。故事从作者醒来开始，在慌慌张张中煎蛋卷、赶地铁、急奔学校、撞破眼镜、发现白忙乎了一场，最后猛然清醒——匆忙之中忘了钥匙!整个故事描述得精彩生动，既有动作的细节又有作者内心的感受，让读者也身临其境地体会了倒霉的一天。例三：叙述一场交通事故a:根据以下提示叙述一场交通事故：1)用第一人称;2)短语提示：drivehomeatabout30kilometersanhour;itwasdark;asmallgirlchasedadog;nothitherbuthitacarintheotherdirection3)写出作者对此交通意外的感想。参考范文lastnightiwasdrivinghomefromwork.ihadanaccident.iwasfollowingbehindatruck,drivingatabout30kilometersanhour.iwaswatchingthetrafficcarefullybecauseitwasgettingdark.suddenlyasmallgirlranontotheroadfromtheleft.shewaschasingadogandshewasn’tpayinganyattentiontothetraffic.iimmediatelyappliedthebrakesandturnedthesteeringwheelquicklytotheright.thegirljumpedtowardsthesideoftheroadassoonasshesawmycar.fortunatelyididnothither,butihitacarcomingintheotherdirection.luckilyiwasnotdrivingveryfastsothedamagewasnotserious.itisbettertodamageacarthantoinjureayoungchild,ithoughttomyself.b:以第一人称写一篇记叙文，讲述在旅行中经历的一件小事。参考范文goonamediterraneanjourneymywifeandihavealwaysenjoyedtravelingbysea，andlastyearwedecidedtogoonamediterraneanjourney.althoughourholidaywasratherexpensivewethoughtthatthehighstandardofaccommodation,thefirst-classfoodandthemanyinterestingplaceswesawwerewellworththepricewepaid.wefoundthatmostoftheotherpassengerswerefriendlyandinteresting,buttherewasoneman,amr.james,whoirritatedandannoyedus.whateversubjectwetalkedabout,itseemedthathewasanexpertatit.hehad,apparently,readmorebooks,visitedmorecountriesands