高中英语题型之读后续写知识点解析

高中英语题型之读后写知识点解析评分标准阅卷时主要考虑以下容：（）与所给短文及段落开语的衔接程度；（）内容的丰富性和对所关键词语的覆盖情况；（）应用语法结构和词汇丰富性和准确性；（）上下文的连贯性。续写步骤精读文章，确定文章索。每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读章，找到该篇文章的写作线索，如是以时间为线索还是以间为线索等，这样有利于考生“顺藤摸瓜仔细审题，明确续写求。一般短文后面的“注意”都有对此短文续写的体要求，如字数限制、使用几处下划线关键词语、续写段的首句提示，这样考生能做到“心中有数回扣原文，揣摩续写路。根据文章后面的要求，再次快速回读短文，抓文章的思路，结合段首的提示语，最终确定续写段落的思，同时结合文章划线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。拟写草稿修改错词句确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提语或者文中划线的关键词语拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句结构的多样性、语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词正确使用，使上下文连贯。（）标出续写部分中使用到的材料中标有下划线的关键词语。这一点可以帮考生检查关键词语的使用情况并根据情况做出修改。最后誊写文字时，务必做到“字迹工整、清晰真题解读年6月浙江高考真题阅读下面短文，根据给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Itwassummer,anddadwantedtotreatalikeneverHetotakeatheWildWest.tookplanetoAlbuquerque,acityinthestateofMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,dad’friend,pickedusfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HisusadeliciousdinnerandtoknowhissonsandKyle.MydadandIthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterdownthenearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulusuphavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,”said.Afterbreakfast,IwenttoAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemywentwithUnclePaultakethesheepto（吃草）wasimpressedseedadandridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.IntheIUnclePaulIahorseride,hesaidyes,aslongasdadwentwithme.ItgoingtoahorseridebymyselfSo,dadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourandheadedtowardsmountains.“Don’late”UnclePaul“andkeeptothetracksoyoudontgetlost!”OK!”mydadcriedAfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutsight.soandquietandthecolorsrocks,thedeepgreentrees,andthelateafternoonsunamagicItlookedlikeabeautiful（织的spreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.注:所续写短文的词数应150左右至少使用个短文中有下划线的关键词语；续写部分分为两段，段的开头语已为你写好；4.续完成后，请用下划线出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Suddenlyarabbitoutinfrontofhorse.Paragraph2:hadnowherewewereanditgettingdark.续写思路和以往的高考英语命作文不同，读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息，仅要读懂字面含义，还要厘清文章的脉络和关系。续写这短文时，考生需要明白故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理置变化、人物情感等。在此基础上，考生顺着文章的思路根据线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用语表达出来。同时，在组织语言时，切记使用个上给出的提示词。续写分析已知线索：去西部荒野——体验场生活——骑马去森林（父亲带作者去“西荒野，喂鸡牧羊，体验农场生活；见父亲和叔叔骑马很潇洒，作者心生向往，于是亲身上马体验，和父亲一同骑走向森林……）可续写线索：迷路？找到回农场的法？回到农场？第一段所给首句“Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontmy一句是故事发展的转折点可从子出现后带来的结果入手展开去，可以写马受到惊吓狂奔而去，也可以写因追赶兔子迷路，无论从何角度拓展，需注意与续写第二段首句呼应第二段所给首hadnowherewewereanditgettingdark.”这一呼应前文UnclePaul的嘱托——要误了晚饭、不要迷路，以从如何寻路返回入手去写续文。前文提示农场附近有河且river标有下划线的关键词语，所以可以从沿着河流到农场的角度拓展。续写词汇已给提示词汇：dadhouse，lostsight话题激活词汇：情感：，relief，nervous，worried动作：，crythinkto环境scenerymountainrangevalleyriverlakeforest，sunsetwind，nepossibleversionaragraphSuddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofhorse.DadandIfoundwassochaseit.awhile,werelostintheforest.Therewasnothingleftinourbutthetrees.“WemaynotbeabletoitbacktothefarmhouseintimeforIthoughtAfteraseriesfruitlesstofindawayout,wefeltandtired.Paragraph2:heforest.Andanunexpectedshoweraddedthedifficultyofusfindingawayhome,forallthehadmadedisappearedbecauseoftherain.Iwasalmostontheedgeofdownwhenmyfathersaid,“myson.thereisrivernearthefarmhouse.theriverandwillbebackFinally,wefoundthegotbacktothehousealongit.Needlesssay,atealatedinner.模拟训练阅读下面短文，根据给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。wasthemostamazingpersoninallofandhewascousin.theageofStevewasastarattheofMinnesota.Iwantedtobeexactlylikehim.SowhenSteveaskedmetogowithhimonaspringfishingtripnorthernMinnesota,Iwasexcited!Afterthetrip,weandsupplies,andbeganouradventure.WereachedtheinnorthernMinnesotabyearlyOnourwaythecampsite,Stevepointedtoahousefarawayonemountains,sayingthatitwasthestation（护林站）theforesterworked.Finally,afteralongwalk,wethecampsiteandsetupthecampthesunwassetting.Steveknewallthetricksanexperiencedcamper.Afterwegatheredwoodfromthehestartedthecampfireusingonlyandsteel—matches.supperweonfreeze-driedbeef,wildriceandpeasoup.Igreedilyafterallwork.enough,intooursleepingbagsandaboutourforfishingnextday.stilltalkingquietlyasuddennorthwindup;thetemperatureanditbegantosnow.Stevefoundawaytemperaturetent.Hedraggedalog（原木fromtheforesttotheoppositesideofthecampfire.Thenhe包裹foil（铝箔thelog.Theheatfromthereflectedoffthefoilandintothetent.Soonimagesoflakefillingmydreams.Thesnowhadstopped,butsometimelaterapowerfulwindmusthaveuptheofourfire.IwasbySteve.Ourtentwasfire.IranoutofthetentThetent（塌inside.WithoutanythoughtofendangeringIreachedintoburningandhimtotheicylake.Fortunately,wenotseriouslyhurt.注:所续写短文的词数应150左右至少使用个短文中有下划线的关键词语；续写部分分为两段，段的开头语已为你写好；续写完成后，请用下线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Later,asstoodbytheburningtowarm,consideredourdifficultsituation.Paragraph2:Suddenly,weheardinforest.Onepossibleversion：Later,asstoodburningtenttokeepweconsideredourdifficultsituation.campsitewasinoftheforest,reallyfarawayfromthehighway.Wein