【读后续写精读课件】2021八省联考读后续写命题解题精讲精析

2021八省联考读后续写命题解题精讲精析读后续写Step1：精深语篇，精准理解Step2：理清思路，把握全局Step4：积累素材，激活表达Step3：推动情节，展开续写Duringthispastyear,I’vehadthreeinstancesofcartrouble.Eachtimethesethingshappened,Iwassickofthewaymostpeoplehadn’tbotheredtohelp.Para.1instancen

[学术词汇]情况，例子，事例cartrouble[认知词块]汽车故障

besickof(doing)sth[输出词块]对（做）某事感到厌倦/厌烦

notbothertodosth[输出词块]懒得做某事，不愿费心做某事Step1：精深语篇，精准理解Oneofthosetimes,IwasonthesideoftheroadforclosetothreehourswithmybigJeep.Iputsignsinthewindows,bigsignsthatsaidNEEDAJACK(千斤顶),andofferedmoney.Nothing.RightasIwasabouttogiveup,aMexicanfamilyinasmalltruckpulledover,andthefatherbounded

out.Para.1sayv

[熟词生义]写着offerv

[精准的汉语释义]自愿给予pullover[短语动词]（使）停靠在路边（小品词over：向一边，

从一侧到另一侧，翻转）boundv

[熟词生义；读后续写动作词汇]跳跃，跳跃着前进Para.2Hesizedupthesituationandcalledforhisdaughter,whospokeEnglish.HeconveyedthroughherthathehadajackbutthatitwastoosmallfortheJeep,sowewouldneedsomethingtosupportit.sizeup[短语动词]判断，估量（=sumup；size为名词动化，小品词up表示“合在一起”）sizeupthesituation[认知词块]对情况作出了判断conveyv

转达，传达supportv

[熟词生义]

支撑Para.2Thenhegotasaw(锯子)fromthetruckandcutasectionoutofabiglogonthesideoftheroad.Werolleditoverandputhisjackontop,andwewereinbusiness.

cutasectionoutofabiglogonthesideoftheroad从路边的一块

大木头上锯下一段儿

rollv

[读后续写动作词汇]滚动，翻滚

beinbusiness[认知词块]准备就绪Para.3

Istartedtakingthewheeloff,andthen,ifyoucanbelieveit,Ibrokehistireiron.Noworries:Hehandedittohiswife,andshewasgoneinaflashdowntheroadtobuyanewtireiron.Shewasbackin15minutes.Wefinishedthejob,andIwasaveryhappyman.takethewheeloff[认知词块]拆卸轮胎tireironn

[独立词条]拆轮胎棒（iron此处指铁器，通常用来构成复合词）hand…

to

[动作词汇]把……交给

inaflash[认知词块]转瞬间，立即Para.4Thetwoofusweredirtyandsweaty.Hiswifepreparedapotofwaterforustowashourhands.Itriedtoputa$20billintheman’shand,buthewouldn’ttakeit,soinsteadIwentupto

thetruckandgaveittohiswifeasquietlyasIcould.Iaskedthelittlegirlwheretheylived.Mexico,shesaid.TheywereinOregonsoMommyandDaddycouldworkonafruitfarmforthenextfewweeks.Thentheywouldgohome.

sweatyadj

[派生词]满是汗的

apotofwater[认知词块]一壶水

goupto[读后续写动作词汇]走近Step2：理清思路，把握全局本文是一篇记叙文，作者讲述了自己亲身经历的一个感人故事。作者的汽车出故障后，本以为无人愿意帮忙，没想到墨西哥一家人不嫌麻烦，不计回报，甚至全家出动，帮作者修好了汽车。然而，故事并没有结束，感动作者的远远不止这些，后边还会发生什么样的故事呢？Step2：理清思路，把握全局Para.语篇结构关键词1汽车出故障2-3好心人帮忙修车father:cutasectionoutofabiglog;rolleditoverandputhisjackontopdaughter:English,conveywife:goneinaflashtobuyanewone4作者支付报酬cartrouble，aMexicanfamilyputa$20billintheman’shand,buthewouldn’ttakeit;gaveittohiswifeasquietlyasIcouldStep2：理清思路，把握全局Para.语篇结构关键词5午饭与纸袋6返还报酬Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthe

paperbag.WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI’dhadlunch.Step3：推动情节，展开续写文章通过情节线“汽车出故障—好心人帮忙修车—作者支付报酬—？”和情感线“失望—开心—感激—？”，按照时间顺序进行叙述。根据情节线和感情线可以清晰理清篇章结构和接下来的发展脉络，即小女孩给纸袋，返还报酬，以及作者的情感变化：惊喜、惊讶、感激、感动等。Step3：推动情节，展开续写语篇情节线（动作词汇）情感线（情感词汇）Para.1汽车出故障失望（besickof；giveup）Para.2-3好心人帮忙修车开心（averyhappyman）Para.4作者支付报酬感激（a$20bill;asquietlyasIcould;Iaskedthelittlegirlwheretheylived）Para.5-6小女孩给纸袋，返还报酬（Action…？）惊喜、惊讶、感激、感动（Feeling…？）Step4：积累素材，激活表达（细节描写词汇）细节描写：动作线：小女孩给纸袋，返还报酬（侧重面部表情、心理活动、肢体动作等人体与动作的细节描写）情感线：作者的情感变化（侧重惊喜、惊讶、感激、感动等情感描写）Step4：积累素材，激活表达（细节描写词汇）人体与动作描写（面部表情、心理活动、肢体动作等）情感描写（惊喜、惊讶、感激、感动等）面带笑容wearasmileonone’sface面露喜色sb’sfacelightsup/brightens脸上露出灿烂的笑容abright/shiningsmileappearson/spreadsacross/crossessb’sface勉强笑了笑forceasmile步伐轻快withaspringinone’sstep眼睛闪烁着喜悦的光芒sb’seyesshinebrightlywithjoy眼睛紧盯着某人的脸one’seyesfixonsb’sface好奇地看了某人一眼throw/castacuriousglanceatsb词：affect,move(moved,moving),touch(touched,touching),curious,shock,wonder,surprise(surprised,surprising),amaze(amazed,amazing),astonish(astonished,astonishing)appreciate,thankful,grateful,aid,assist词块：dosbafavour,helpout,withthehelpof,give/lend(sb)ahand,inreturn(for),express/showone’sthanksStep4：积累素材，激活表达（细节描写词汇）人体与动作描写（面部表情、心理活动、肢体动作等）情感描写（惊喜、惊讶、感激、感动等）紧紧抓住某物holdtightlyonsth伸手抓某人的手reachforsb’shand手里拿着某物holdsthinone’shand伸出双臂拥抱某人put/throwone’sarmsaroundsb冲上前去rushforwardtodosth冲到门口rushtothedoor挥手waveone’shand摇头shakeone’shead手舞足蹈jump/danceforjoy兴高采烈地inacheerfulvoice目瞪口呆withsb’seyeswideopen惊讶地说不出话来beshockedbeyondwords惊讶地inamazement/astonishment出乎意料地beyondone’sexpectations潸然泪下/泪如泉涌tearsroll/run/stream/flowdownsb’scheeks或tearswellupinsb’seyes感动地说不出话来betouchedbeyondwords以上素材均来自《高考总复习全效新方略》WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI’dhadlunch.Hearingwhatshesaid,IrealizedthatIdidn’thavelunch.Tobehonest,afterworkinghardforseveralhours,Iwassohungry.Feelingabitembarrassed,Ireplied:“no!”Thegirlsaidwithasmile,“Comeon!Joinus.The

Mexiconsandwichisdelicious!”Withmovedtearsrollingaroundmyeyes,Itookthesandwich.Aftereatingitlikewolf,IfeltthatitwasthetastysandwichthatIhadeverhad.Whiledining,Italkedaboutmytroubleandfeelingsandtheysharedtheirinterestingstoriesinthelife.Then,thegirl’smotherhadanothersandwichandsomefruitplacedinapaperbagandhandedittome,sayinggently:“Keepitandhaveitlater!Wehadtogonow.”

Ishowedmyheartfelt