大学英语四级作文 写作技巧

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9DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写，2.出现这种现象的原因是……3.为了改变这种状况，我认为……从遣词造句组段三方面分析DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling12分作文Nowadays,fewerandfewerstudentspayattentiontotheirword-spelling.Accordingtoarecentsurvey,thereisadramaticincrease(高分短语)inthenumberofstudentswhocanonlyimitatethepronunciationofawordbutbeincapableofspellingit(句式上，定语从句，使表达更丰富).9分作文(用词一般，无特色,句式简单)Nowadays,studentspaylittleattentiontothespellingofwordswhenstudyEnglish.Thisinfluencesstudents’writingverymuchandmakesteacherworry.第一段15分作文Nowadays,studentsattachlessattention

(高分词汇，强于payattentionto)tothespellingofwordsintheprocessofEnglishstudy,whichhasbeenbroughtintopublicfocusandcalledforfurtherconcern.(定语从句的使用，使表达更生动)组段：使用复合句直接开门见山点出主题。第二段遣词造句组段

9分作文：Therearepossiblythreereasonsforthisphenomenon.First,oureducationmakesstudentspaylessattentiontospelling.Second,someteachersdon’temphasizetheimportanceofspellingduringteaching.Last,somestudentsaretoolazytorecitewords.

闪光词汇不多，表达不够生动/短句，简单句过多/衔接有些生硬，FSL等无法吸引老师眼球

12分作文：Thereareanumberoffactorsaccountingforthissituation.

Firstofall,thegoalofmoststudentstolearnEnglishistospeakitandpasstheexaminationwhichreducestheimportanceofspelling.What’smore,thewideuseofelectronicdevicessuchase-dictionariesandcomputersmakesstudentsnolongerneedtocorrectthewordsbythemselves.使用高分短语，如AF/Twu等/使用复合句：thegoalof…/行文流畅，Firstofall,What’smore的使用使段落衔接较为自然。

第二段遣词造句组段15分作文

Severalfactorscouldaccountfortheproblem.

Tobeginwith,studentslikeaneasywayofstudying,whichcausessomeomissionsandchangesinspelling.Furthermore,thestandardized-test

orientedwayofEnglishlearning,inwhichthehighscorecanbeachievedwithoutspelling,putstudentstotheposition

inwhichtheyhavethequitereasontoignorespelling.用词准确，表达生动丰富。Accountfor（红体字）等词语的使用清晰地阐释了拼写被忽视的原因。使用复合句(绿色)，以及被动语态（紫），句式丰富多变，表达生动。细节与主题密切相关。组织有序，条理清晰，Tbw，Fm作为连接，过渡自然，连贯性非常好第三段遣词造句组段9分SincespellingisoneofthemostimportantfactorsinEnglishstudy,dueattentionshouldbegiventoit.Asforme,Ithink,first,examsshouldaddsomefactorsintoit.Thiscanhelpstudentspaymoreattentiontospelling.Then,schoolsshouldalsoseteffectivemechanismstohelpteachersaswellasthestudentstorealizetheimportance.用词普通/句式单一/切题，句子基本连贯12分AsfarasI’mconcerned,Ifirmlyarguethatweneedtoattachgreatimportancetoword-spelling.Tothestudents,theyshouldwriteEnglishasmuchastheycan.Meanwhile,totheteachers,thedictationsshouldbe

reinforcedinclass.有高分词汇和短语的使用（红色）/使用宾语从句及被动语态（绿）/切题，写出了提纲的内容。Meanwhile使句子衔接连贯。第三段遣词造句组段15分Tochangethissituation,theteachersandthestudentsshouldgivemoreattentiontostudents’spelling,askingthestudentstobeconsciousoftheimportanceofcorrectspellingfromtheverybeginningoftheirEnglishstudy.Ontheotherhand,thestudentsthemselvesaresupposedtobeawarethatcorrectspellingisamustinEnglishstudy.用词贴切，有效地表达了作者的意图，如(红色)/句子连贯，使用-ing形式作伴随状语（绿），宾语从句（紫）/组段切题。与上文衔接自然，段落结构清晰，Ontheonehand,Ontheotherhand衔接手段的使用，使句子过渡自然。高分方法高分词汇

高分句式美化句子结构高分词汇show发人深省的deep目击seetellgood恶化worsendevelopmentbesidesfaceaskindicate,unfold,display,revealthought-provokingwitnessconveyAdvantageousdeteriorateadvancementadditionallyconfrontinquire高分词汇verybadgoodcustomersendappearcausestopexceeding,extremely,intenselydreadful,unfavorable,poor,adversepositive,favorable,promising,perfect,excellent,outstanding,superiorshopper,client,consumer,purchaserdeliveremergetriggerrestrain高分词汇judgetrain培养oftenremove除去intention意向gethelpful有益的communicationdarkevaluatecultivatefrequentlyeliminateinclinationattainbeneficial,rewardinginteractiongloomy高分词汇eternal永远的destroybearemphasizerealclearoldcommonlimitpersuadeperpetual,permanentdevastateendurehighlightauthenticdistinctancientprevailingrestrainconvince高分词汇moderntimestellfromBeunwillingtoBewillingtoBecertainthatFindfaultwith批判ApartfromSomeofcontemporaryagedistinguishbetweenBereluctanttoBeinclinedtoBeconvincedthatMakejudgmentsofthemeritsandfaultsofWiththeexceptionofAvariety/seriesof高分词汇BerichinBegoodatDon’tknowhowtomakethechoiceAllkindsofReducethepressureBeinterestedinMoreandmorepeopleEverycoinhastwosidesInmyopinion…BeabundantinBecompetentinBeinadilemmaAgreatvarietyofAlleviatethepressureSth.appealtosbGrowingindividualsnogardenhasnoweedsFormypart,frommyperspective 美化句子结构并列平行结构IseizeeverychancetotakecoursesthatmayenlargeyhorizonforIwanttobeamanwithsharp,vividandimaginativemind.(词的并列)Ifeveryoneisgrateful,oursocietywillbemoreharmonious,ourfamilywillhavemorehappiness,andwe,asindividuals,willhavemorebrightfutureforself-development.美化句子结构非谓语动词结构：不定式，现代分词，过去分词Giventhefiercecompetitioninthejobmarket,studentsmightaswellmakemoreeffortsthannecessarytotakeupsocialpractice.被动语态：起到更加客观、公正的效果Englishisnowwidelyusedinallfieldsandismorelikelytohelpyougetagoodjobinthetightjobmarket.美化句子结构复合句

信息量大，轻重有别，能提现层次感。与简单句交替使用，使行文波澜起伏，富有层次感和生命力。包括三种类型：名词性从句、形容词性从句、副词性(状语)从句名词性从句：that/whether/how/why/when/where引导，做主语或宾语。形容词性从句：who/whom/whose/as/when等引导，做定语美化句子结构:特殊句式

1.倒装句：OnlyinthiswaycanI/we….Bynomeanscanwe…2.强调句：Takingpart-timejobsisneverwithoutdrawbacks.Littledopeopletakeintoaccounttheseriousofthisproblem.(倒装表强调)It’sstabilitythatdestroyspeople’sambitionandbarricadespeople’ssteps.美化句子结