大学英语四六级图画作文写作策略

大学英语四级图画作文四大要素描述、寓意、分析、评论。写作框架第一段：描述图画中的信息和表达的含义。第二段：具体分析图画中暗含的社会现象。第三段：一般视具体的试题而定，有的要求给出自己的评论、有的要求举例、有的要求提出自己的建议以及针对现象应该采取的措施。

第一段：引言/起始，图画描述，3句

1.总体描述：人物/动物/事物＋动作＋环境

1句

2.挖掘细节词、串连成句：1句

3.文字说明/象征寓意：1句第二段：主体段，意义阐释分析，5句1.主题句：象征寓意，1句2.论证：3句

1）因果论证

2)影响论证

3)举例论证3.小结：概括论证，总结本段1句第三段：结论段，建议措施等，4句1.结论句：1句2.针对双方提建议：2句3.包装结尾、展望未来：1句Onlyinthiswaycanwesolvethisproblem.Itishightimethatwesolvedthisproblem.描述图画的常用词有关图画的名词描述图画的形容词修饰动词的副词“寓意”、“字幕”如何翻译？替换picture的词语drawing

指用线条或色彩绘成的图画。cartoon

指幽默或讽刺性漫画。portrait指肖像，只用于指人。illustration

插画描述图画的形容词

thought-provoking发人深省的enlightening有启迪作用/使人感悟的compelling/striking/intriguing引人注目/引起兴趣profound含义深刻=far-reachingimplicationsinstructive有益的（=informative）（搭配adv.:extremely,highly,most,particularly,quite）amusing令人发笑的ridiculous荒谬可笑的impressive印象深刻的exaggerative夸张的修饰动词的副词graphically/

vividly生动地symbolically象征性地clearly/

explicitly清晰地subtly巧妙地，精细地寓意

implications/messagehaveaprofoundimplicationbepregnantwithmeaningentertainadeepthought字幕caption:wordsprintedwithanillustrationoraphotographinordertodescribeorexplainit（附於插图、照片上的）说明文字1)Weareinformedbythecaptionthat“___”.2)Thecaptionreads/indicatesthat“___”.描述图画时需要遵循以下步骤：寻找出图画的中心事物，并确定中心事物的位置。描述中心事物，可以从动作和状态两个方面来描述。寻找中心事物周围相关的事物，并进行简单的描述。第一段常用首句句式Asisshown/depicted/portrayedinthepicture/cartoon,....Thepictureabovevividlydescribe....Thedrawingabovedoesdemonstratecertainthought-provokingsocialphenomenon.Whatdoestheauthorintendtoconveybydescribing...isthat....Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoonabove,

inthepicturestandsaboy,worriedaboutdisposingofnuclearwaste,whilehisfatherinstructshimtoemptythedustbininhisroomfirst.(33words)Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoonabove,infrontoftheblackboardstandsateacher,teachingmathematics,however,oneofherstudentsholdstheopinionthattheknowledgeheislearningmightbeoutdatedbythetimehe'sinthejobmarket.(42words)Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoonabove,intheclassroonstandsateacher,askingherstudenttoreadaworkofliteratureasifhewerereadingalongtext-message,whilethestudentfeelsratherunpleasant.(37words)Asisvividlydepictedabove,inthecartoon

walktwotravellers,travellingacrossmountainsandgrasslandswithheavybaggagesontheirshoulders.第一段第二句由图片描述上升到文字说明或寓意的阐释Simple

andfunny

asthecartoonis,itreflectsthat....Thepictureimplicitly(含蓄地，暗示地)raisesthequestionoftheimportanceof....Thepictureseemstobehumorousatfirstglance/sight，butonsecondthoughts(=afterreconsideration),youcanfindthefactthat_____.Theprimarypurposeofthepicturesaboveisthatdueattentionshouldbepaidto....Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoonabove,inthepicturestandsaboy,worriedaboutdisposingofnuclearwaste,whilehisfatherinstructshimtoemptythedustbininhisroomfirst.Simpleandfunnyasthecartoonis,itreflectsthatthefatherintendstoadvisehissontodosmallthingsbeforeundertakingbig.Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoonabove,infrontofblackboardstandsateacher,teachingmathematics,however,oneofherstudentsholdstheopinionthattheknowledgeheislearningmightbeoutdatedbythetimehe'sinthejobmarket.Thepictureimplicitlyraisesthequestionoftheimportanceofthefundamentalskillsstudentslearninclasses.Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoonabove,intheclassroonstandsateacher,askingherstudenttoreadaworkofliteratureasifhewerereadingalongtext-message,whilethestudentfeelsratherunpleasant.Theprimarypurposeofthepictureaboveisthatdueattentionshouldbepaidtotheimportanceofbasicskills.Asisvividlydepictedabove,inthecartoonwalktwotravellers,travellingacrossmountainsandgrasslandswithheavybaggagesontheirshoulders.Thepictureimplicitlyraisesthequestionthatlife,whichisfullofupsanddowns,happinessandsorrow,oppotunitiesandchallenges,isneveraneasyroadtotravel.

第二段：即主体段落如何写？topicsentencedevelopment:subidea1

development:subidea

2briefconclusionLinkingdevices主题句（全段核心，全文关键）Thesymbolicmeaningofthepictureistoshowusthatimportanceshouldbeattachedto....Thepurposeofthedraweristoshowusthatdueattentionhastobepaidto....Thepictureillustratestherealmeaningof....Undoubtedly,thedrawinghassymbolicallyrevealedaseriousprobleminourdailylife,....ThecartoonconveysthemeaningthatAisliketheprocessofB.(比喻类)Thepurposeofthepictureistoremindusofthefactthatweshouldnotneglectthesignificanceof....过渡句(“原因如下”）的表述：①Severalfactors,(bothindividualandsocial),couldaccountforthe(negative/positive)phenomenon.②Thereasonsforthephenomenonmaybecomplicated,butwecan,toalargeextent，ascribe/owe/attribute(归结于)ittothefollowingfactors.Thepurposeofthepictureistoremindusofthefactthatweshouldnotneglectthesignificanceoffundamentalskills.（主题句）Thereasonsforthephenomenoncanbeattributed

tothefollowingfactors.（过渡句）找原因！2-3条1.学习基础知识不但能帮助我们获得高等的技能，还能培养我们的情操。2.基本技能永远不会过时，因为它在日常生活和工作中仍然具有实用性。Masteringthebasicskillscannotonlyhelpusacquiretheadvancedskills,butalsocultivateourcharactersalongthewaywelearnit.Thebasicskillswillneverbeoutofdateandtheyremainverypracticalinourdailylifeandwork.1.掌握基础知识不但能帮助我们获得高等的技能，还能培养我们的情操。2.基本技能永远不会过时，因为它在日常生活和工作中仍然具有实用性。下面具体指出几个原因，第一个原因可以用Amongthemostimportantreasonscitedbypeopleis….Obviously,avarietyofcomplicatedfactorscontributetothephenomenon,withthefollowingonebeingtheforemost.第二个原因可以用：Anotherimportantreasonis….Alsoplayingapartis….第三个原因可以用：Thethirdreason,whichcannotbeneglected,isthat….Inaddition,(名词)isalsoresponsibleforthephenomenon.lastbutnotleast,....Amongthemostimportantreasonscitedbypeopleisthatmasteringthebasicskillscannotonlyhelpusacquiretheadvancedskills,butalsocultuvateourcharactersalongthewaywelearnit.Moreover,thebasicskillswillneverbeoutofdateandtheyremainverypracticalinourdailylifeandwork.(55words)foronething,foranotherontheonehand,ontheotherhandThepictureillustratestherealmeaningofdealingwithtrivialthingsfirst.（主题句）Severalfactors

couldaccountforthe

phenomenon.（过渡句）找原因1+21.做小事不仅能够培养我们的情操，而这正是做大事所需要的，而且还能磨砺人的耐性。2.正如一句言语所说，细节决定成败，成功往往取决于小事情上。Doingsmallthingscannotonlyhelpuscultivatethegoodqualitiesthatweneedinundertakingimportanttasks,butalsodevelopourpatience.Asaproverbgoes,itisdetailthatdeterminessuccess,whichwasmadeupofbysmallthings.Thepictureillustratestherealmeaningofdealingwithtrivialthingsfirst.（主题句）Severalfactors

couldaccountforthe

phenomenon.（过渡句）Foronething,doingsmallthingscannotonlyhelpuscultivatethegoodqualitiesthatweneedinundertakingimportanttasks,butalsodevelopourpatience.Foranother,asaproverbgoes,itisdetailthatdeterminessuccess,whichwasmadeupofbysmallthings.(66words)主题句（6选1）+过渡句（2选1）+原因/影响分析1,2（,3）列举影响Itwillexertaprofoundinfluence.Thepositiveeffects,whicharewidelyaccepted,canbelistedasfollows.Thenegativeeffects,whicharegenerallyacknowledged,arepresentedbelow.Tobeginwith…,tomakemattersworse…,worstofall…列举影响法的模板如果全段都讲的是正面影响，主题句可以写成：…isbeneficialinmorethanoneways.如果全段都讲得是负面的影响，主题句可以写成：…isharmfulinmorethanoneways.具体到连接全段的框架可以套用如下句型：Theimmediateresultitproducesis…Theinfluenceisnotconfinedtowhatismentionedabove.What’smore….Perhapsthemostseriousconsequence(obviousadvantage)is…

第三段写作策略结尾段落结尾段的写法有很多，常见的有：主旨总结，提出建议，展望未来等。提出建议Thegeneralpublicissupposedtoenhancetheirawarenessthat...a