2020版新高考英语二轮提分教程文档：写作部分专题二考点通关第3讲

---第3讲？说明文写作点拨V说明文是以说明为主要表达方式，要求用简洁明快的语言来解说事物、阐明事理，从而给读者提供知识的一种文体。近几年高考说明文多数以图表、表格或文字的形式给出提示，并往往融合应用文体进行考查，一般分为场所路线介绍、事物介绍、方式方法或计划安排介绍三大类。时态通常用一般现在时。写说明文宜采用三段式：第一段：主要介绍要说明的对象及说明的目的。第二段：说明事物的主要特征或做事情的方法步骤。第三段：进行总结概括。有句模板1 V.说明方位、路线常用语...islocatedatthefooto/bythesideof/totheeastof/tothenorthof...(2)Infrontofitis…，with...onitsleftand...onitsright.(3)Turningtotheleft,youwillsee...,behindwhichis...(4)Walkingpast...,youwillseethebuildingthatappearsinfrontofyouis...(5)Alongtheroadarelinesoftrees,castingdenseshadeonthesidewalk.(6)Awalkaround...isafeastforthemindaswellastheeyes.(7)Onyourleftliesa(n)...,withallkindsof...init.(8)Nexttothedooragainstthewallthereisa(n)...,inwhichwesittowatchTVeveryevening..说明事物的特点或优势常用语...ducedby...,whichis...(2)Madeof...,itislight,small,andeasytocarry.(3)Containingmuchtopandnewtechnique,...isfamousforitsexcellentqualityandreasonableprice.(4)Itisrichinnaturalresourcessuchascoalandgoldandhasmildweather.(5)Builtinthe16thcentury,thecastlehaswitnessedwhat'scomingandgoinginhistory..说明文格式模板Fromthechart,wecanlearnthat(图表/图画内容)，whichreveals/reflects(f肖作评价).Thereareatleasttwogoodreasonsaccountingfor^件).Foronething,(从社会角度说明/论证).Foranotherthing, 从个人角度说明/论证）.Forexample,（以自己、朋友等为例加以说明）.Lastbutnotleast,伙反面角度说明/论述）.Asaresult,theworryingsituationisurgingusto（建议或措施）.Onlyinthiswaycanwe（展望结果）.Inconclusion/Inbrief,（H次说明观点）.Weshould进一步说明）.辅助练一|1 V下面的柱状图（barchart）显示了你校上周针对“用电脑、手机和纸媒学习”的调查结果。请你用英语给21stCentury报社写一篇短文，报道你校的调查结果，并对此结果发表你的看法。注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。DearEditor,WemadeasurveyinourschoollastweekandI'dliketotellyousomethingabouttheresults.［审题谋篇通思路］本题是关于“用电脑、手机和纸媒学习”的调查结果的写作，可分为三段：第一段：说明本文的目的一一呈现上周调查的结果。第二段：分析图表中数据的含义一一使用各种学习方式与手段所占的比例。第三段：得出结论一一纸媒学习还是占主流。［修订提升争高分］DearEditor,Wemade_asurvey_in_ourschool_last_week_and_I'dliketotellyousomethingabouttheresults.^_^_^_^_^_^_Asisshowninthebarchart,studentsusingpaper-basedmaterialstostudyoccupies47%,followedbythepercentageof38%students,whogetusedto用高级词汇替换：1.getaccustomed_to）usingallthethreemeansofstudy.11%ofthestudentssurveyedprefertousecomputers.Studentswhothinksmartphonescanbebeneficialtotheirstudyaccountfortherestof4%.Itisapparentthatthetraditionalwayofstudythatstudentsreadbooksandtakenoteswithapenisstillthechoiceformoststudents.（用apparently改写：2.Apparently,thetraditionalwayofstudythatstudentsreadbooksandtakenoteswithapen_isstillthechoice_formoststudents.Computersorphonesusageissupposedtodoharmtoeyesightanditisthereasonwhyasmallnumberofstudentschoose用which引导的定语从句改写：3.c-o/mputers_orphonesusage_issupposed_to_doharm_toeyesight,which_is_thereason_whyasmallnumber,_of_studentschoose.）AsfarasIamconcerned,ifusedproperly,allthesemeansofstudycanbenefitus.过关检测（限时：25分钟/篇）请观察所给的图画，并根据你对该图画的理解写一篇英语短文，内容包括：.简要描述图画，并说明该图画所揭露的现象；.分析该现象的利弊（至少各一点）；.提出自己的看法。注意：1.词数100左右；.开头已经给出，不计入总词数；.文章中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,aboyishappywiththefactthat［精彩范文］Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,aboyishappywiththefactthathecandependontheInternettofinishtaskswithoutanydifficulty.Nowadays,studentscangeteasyaccesstomuchinformationtheyneedontheInternet.Ontheonehand,studentsfinditconvenienttosurftheInternetforusefulinformation,whereproblemscanbesolvedwiththehelpofseveralclicks.Ontheotherhand,turningtotheInternettoomuchmaycausestudentstousetheirheadsless.Asaresult,it'slikelythatstudentswillnotdeveloptheirpotentialtothefull,whichisnotbeneficialtotheiroveralldevelopment.Inmyopinion,itisvitalthatstudentsshouldbeawareoftheadvantagesanddisadvantages.TheyshouldknowclearlywhenorunderwhatcircumstancetheyturntotheInternet.Mostimportantly,theyshouldlearntobecreative.（二）请根据下面的示意图及其说明写一篇 100词左右的短文，介绍No.1MiddleSchook说明：.①〜④篮球场(basketballcourt)⑤餐厅⑥学生宿舍 ⑦教师宿舍 ⑧〜⑨花坛(flowerbed);.所有大楼四周都种有树木和花草；.学校占地约8.7公顷。［精彩范文］No.1MiddleSchool,locatedinthewestofthecityonthebankofChengxiRiver,coversanareaofabout8.7hectares.Whenyouentertheschool,youcanseeabigflowerbedinfrontofyou,andtwolargebuildings—thelibraryonyourrightandtheteachingbuildingonyourleft.Walkingonfurther,youwillfindthegym,themostbeautifulbuildingoncampus,infrontofwhichthereisanotherroundflowerbed.Behindit,thereliefourbasketballcourts.Nexttothecourtsisthesportsground.Alongitseastsidestandthreebuildings—thedininghallandtwodormitoriesforthestudentsandteachersrespectively.Allthebuildingsaresurroundedbytreesandflowers.Itisreallyabeautifulschool.强化特训11书面表达（五）（限时：25分钟/篇）现在，越来越多的年轻人喜欢在网上点餐或打电 +话叫外卖，不愿意自己做饭，就这一现象结合下面的提示，写一篇短文。.陈述现象；.说明此现象的原因（至少两点）；.你个人的看法和选择。注意：1.词数100左右；.行文连贯，语篇完整；.文中不得透露个人真实信息。参考词汇：外卖店，外卖餐馆take—outrestaurant[精彩范文]Nowadays,agrowingnumberofyoungpeoplewouldratherorderfoodontheInternetorcallatake—outrestaurantformealsthancookathome.It'snotsurprisingforthemtodoso.Foronething,withthepaceofmodernlifebecomingfasterandfaster,timeisquiteprecious.Intheireyes,itisunnecessarytotaketimetocook.Foranotherthing,homecookingfoodissimplerinkindandlessdelicious,especiallyforthosewhoareparticularaboutfood.Inmyview,ourhealthiscloselyrelatedtowhatweeat.Thebusierweare,themoreattentionweshouldpaytofood.Therefore,Iprefertocookfoodathomeandgoonabalanceddiet.

假定你是李华，是晨光中学白^高三学生。在距离高考 100天的心理课上，老师给出四种物件，让你选出自己最想保留的一件东西，和最不想要的一件东西。请写出活动中你的选择并陈述理由，每件东西至少两个理由，并说明活动意义。textbook小说textbook小说注意：1.词数100左右；.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：物件itemFacingthefouritemsputforwardbymypsychologyteacher,I,aSeniorThreestudent,[精彩范文]Facing_the_four_items_put_forward_by_my_psychology_teacher,_I,_a_Senior_Threestudent,_wouldliketokeepthetextbooksandabandonthecellphone.Thereasonscanbelistedasfollows.With100daystogo,Iknow,comparedwithotherthings,studymustcomefirst.Iwillmakefulluseofmytextbookstoimprovemyselftogetclosertomydreameveryday.What'smore,textbooksarethebestthingsformetogetequippedwithbasicknowledge.Asforthecellphone,itisthelastthingtokeep,foritisthebiggestdistractionforme.Irealizebeinglostinacellphoneisawasteoftime.Also,we,asarule,areforbiddentousecellphonesinclass.Ilovethisactivity,whichmakesmerealizewhatIshouldfocusonandwhatIshoulddropnow.假设你是某校学生，寒假期间，你就老百姓关心的“民生”问题进行了一次问卷调查，下面是这次问卷调查的结果。请根据表格内容写一个调查报告，并着重选择两个方面的内容，分析人们满意或不满意的主要原因。原因部分要求自己设想。

□满意率□满意率注意：1.词数100左右；2.文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。参考词7匚：保险insurance;民生people'slivelihoodDuringthewinterholiday,Iconductedasurveyonthepeople'slivelihoodinmyhometown.［精彩范文］During_the_winter_holiday,_I_conducted_asurvey_on_thepeople'slivelihood_in