2023学年完整版Unit1TeenagelifeSectionⅤWriting教案

SectionⅤWriting建议信写作指导eq\a\vs4\al()文体感知建议信是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告的一种文体。写信时要写明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由，提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要委婉和缓。eq\a\vs4\al()增分佳句1．常用的开头语①Iknowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatingwithothers，andyoumayoftenfeellonely．我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦，你也可能经常感到孤独。②I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell．很高兴收到你的来信，询问我关于学好汉语的意见。③Turntomewheneveryoufeelpuzzled，andIammorethanwillingtogiveyousomemoreadvice．当你困惑的时候就来找我吧，我很乐意给你一些更多的建议。④Herearesometipstohelpyou．/Hereareafewsuggestionstohelpyou．这里有能帮助你的一些建议。2．主体部分常用表达①First(ly)，whynotjoinaclub？Ifyoudothis，youcanmakefriends．首先，为什么不参加一个俱乐部？如果你这样做的话，就会交到朋友。②Second(ly)，youshould/cantrytotalkwithothers．Then/Thatway，youwillfeelbetter．其次，你应该尽力与人交谈。这样，你会感觉好点。③Third(ly)，itwouldbeagoodideaifyoureadabookorlistentomusic．Bydoingthis，youwillcalmyourselfdown．第三，如果你看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意。通过这样做，你会使自己平静下来。④Lastbutnotleast，youshouldtalkwithherfirst．最后但同样重要的是，你应该先和她谈一谈。3．常用的结束语①Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful．希望你会发现这些办法有用。②Astimegoeson，peoplewillknowyoubetterandwillliketomakefriendswithyouifyoucanfollowthesesuggestionsabove．如果你遵从以上建议，随着时间的推移，人们会更加理解你，会愿意和你交朋友的。③Ibelieveyoucantrytoovercomethesedifficultiesonlybyworkinghard．我相信，通过努力，你会克服这些困难的。eq\a\vs4\al()写作模板Dear________，I’mgladtoknowthatyouaskmeforsomeadviceon________．(引出问题)Herearesomeusefultips．First，learntocalmyourselfdownwhenfacing________．Youdon’thaveto________．Second，itisveryimportantto________．Then，italsohelpsto________．Besides，itshouldbeagoodideato________．Youcanalso________．(此三句用不同句式提出建议)Onlyinthiswaycanyoudoitbetter．(倒装句提升句式)Asto________，Isuggest________(有时根据需要具体到某一方面)．Inaddition，________(其他建议)．I’msure________(预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心)．Ihopeyouwillfindmyadvicehelpful．________(祈使句)，andyouwillbe________(好的结果)．Bestwishes!Yours，LiMing经典例题eq\a\vs4\al()写作要求假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条路线可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1．你建议的路线；2．你的理由；3．你的祝愿。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJim，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHuaeq\a\vs4\al()审题谋篇eq\a\vs4\al()词汇推敲1．推荐 recommend2．此外 moreover3．景色 scenery4．令人惊异的 amazing5．选择 choiceeq\a\vs4\al()遣词造句1．完成句子①长江是中国最长的河流，并且是中华文明的母亲河之一。The_Yangtze_River_is_the_longest_river_and_one_of_the_mother_rivers_of_the_Chinese_civilization．②我更喜欢沿着长江旅行。I_prefer_the_tour_along_the_Yangtze_River．③沿江景色令人惊叹。The_scenery_along_the_river_is_amazing．④沿江有很多著名景点。There_are_many_well­known_sightseeing_spots_along_the_river．2．句式升级⑤用同位语结构连接①②句I_prefer_the_tour_along_the_Yangtze_River，the_longest_river_and_one_of_the_mother_rivers_of_the_Chinese_civilization．⑥用with结构连接③④句The_scenery_along_the_river_is_amazing，with_many_well­known_sightseeing_spots．eq\a\vs4\al()妙笔成篇________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：Dear_Jim，I’mhappytoreceiveyourletterandknowyou’recomingtoChina．OfthetwotripstotheYangtzeRiverandMountTai，botharehighlyrecommended．Personally，IpreferthetouralongtheYangtzeRiver，thelongestriverandoneofthemotherriversoftheChinesecivilization．YoucanlearnalotaboutthehistoryofChinaandChinesepeople．Moreover，thesceneryalongtheriverisamazing，withmanywell­knownsightseeingspots．That’swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzeRiverisabetterchoice．Hopeyou’llhaveagoodtimeinChina．Yours，Li_Hua训练假设你是李华，最近你的英国笔友杰克刚刚转入一所新学校。由于他性格内向，不擅长交朋友，所以他感到非常孤独，写信向你求助。请你给他回一封信。注意：1．词数80左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。DearJack，I’msorrytohearthatyouarelonelyinyournewschool．________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear_Jack，I’m_sorry_to_hear_that_you_are_lonely_in_your_new_school．However，thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice．Firstofall，don’tbetooworried．Everyonemayhavesuchbadtimeswhentheymovetoanewenvironment．Second，youshouldgreetyourteachersandclassmateswhenmeetingthemoncampus．Itisalwayseasiertomakenewfriendswhenyous