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雅思大作文高级教材一一法律类一、话题简介法律类鲤思写作话题是所有话题类型中考生们普遍反映最怵的，感觉最无从下手的题目当属法律与犯罪类型的题目。由于这部分内容可能比较脱离考生的实际生活，所以写起来不如环境类、教育类话题那么的得心应手。虽然说这类题目出题的频率相对来说并不是非常的频繁，但是如果学生在备考中没有对此类话题具有针对性的总结和复习的话，相信很难在写作中取得什么理想的分数。最常见的话题类型有两种：.犯罪分子处罚方式即"如何去处理犯罪分子"的问题；具体包括延长监禁时间是最好的处罚方式；应该让罪犯们接受职业教育；劳动体罚是不是最有效的处罚方式；应该加强刑法力度来减少犯罪；是否应该保留死刑等.特殊人群犯罪情况即"什么人犯罪的问题”的问题；具体包括青少年日益上升的犯罪率，女性犯罪或者老年人犯罪等特殊群体犯罪情况等二、法律类话题分类及思路柘展方法.犯罪分子处罚方式：例题：Puttingcriminalsintoprisonisnoteffectiveindealingwiththeproblem.Educationandjobtrainingshouldbeofferedtothem.Doyouagreeordisagree?犯罪问题，是直接关进监狱还是进行教育，你是同意还是不同意呢？思路分析：主体分析法、分类法、反正法主体：Criminals;government;victims;thegeneralpublicArgumentsforprison:1）监狱同教育或就业培训相比有很强的阻吓作用，这样可以有效的抑制犯罪率的上升，让人们不敢犯罪。Comparedwitheducationorjobtraining,prisonsmayhavemoreeffectsonstoppingpotentialcriminalsfromcommittingcrimes.Therefore,itcansharplydecreasethecrimerate.Instarkcontrasttoplacingcriminalsoneducationalcoursesoremploymentretraining,prisonsappearmoreeffectiveindeterringpotential,would-bewrongdoersfromcommittingcrimes,thusdrasticallydecreasingthelikelihoodofrisingcrimerate.Detersbfromdoingsth）监狱更多的对罪犯来说是一种惩罚，因此能够避免再犯。Imprisonmentisalsoawaytopunishpeoplewhohavecommittedcrimes.Asaresult,theyareinthefearofsettingfootintojailseveragainandmaynotcommitacrimeagain.Beinglockedupbehindthebarsisapunitivemeasureimposedoncriminalswhoarehighlyunlikelytoturnintoarecidivistinconsiderationoftheirfearofsettingfootintojailseveragain.Argumentsforeducationandjobretraining1）罪犯在监狱里所被包围的是一群囚犯，这对罪犯的改造不是好的，反而是不好的影响。接受教育可以让罪犯在一个积极的环境里，真正的意识到对与错。Imprisonmenthasthedestructive,ratherthanconstructiveimpactoncriminalswhoarelockedupinprison,surroundedbypeoplewhoprobablyhavecommittedevenmoreseriouscharges.Educationservestocorrectanymisconceptionoreliminatetwistedthoughtstheyhavebyimmersingtheminapositiveenvironment.2）大多数罪犯往往是没有什么文化知识和生存技能，出狱后通常很难找到工作。教育和就业培训能够让他们在日后的生活中靠自己生存下去，而不至于因为没有收入来源而再次误入歧途。Asignificantproportionofcriminalsaresadlyilliteratewithoutadequatefundamentalknowledgeandsurvivalskillsanditwouldn,tbeeasyforthemtofindadecentjobafterbeingreleasedfromthejail.Withconvenientaccesstoeducationandjobretraining,theyareabletosurvivebythemselves,greatlyreducingthechanceofbecomingarecidivistintimeswhentheyarefinanciallychallenged.anincreasingnumberofpeopleanincreasinglypopularissue练习：Nowadays,wearefacingthtncreasinglyseriouscrimesituation.Cancapitalpunishment（deathpenalty）everbejustified合理的Moreandmore+adj.Itcanbeprovedtobejustifiedthat....Whethersthisjustifiedhastriggere（弓|发）aheateddebate.现在我们面临日益严重的犯罪情况，是否应该有死刑？思路分析：主体分析法和分类法Argumentsagainstcapitalpunishment1）死刑只是对罪犯的一种处罚，而并不能够将犯罪行为中受害者生命挽回，或者赔偿其所遭受的伤害Capitalpunishment,whicheventhoughmanagestobringthecriminalstojustice,couldbynomeanscompensateforphysical,andmentalsufferingsinflictedonvictims,orinsomeextremecases,bringbacktheirlives.）无论一个人犯多大的错误，其他人都无权剥夺其生命。（人权）deprivesbofsthItisentirelyunjustifiedtodepriveoneofhis/herrightstoliveregardlessofhowinsanelysevereandcrueltheoffenseshe/shehascommittedare.（Thissubjectmatterhasboiledtothecontroversialissueofhumanrights））死刑犯的尸体的处理（是否可以用于器官移植等等）将是一个非常具有争议的道德问题。Howthebodyofthedeceasedcriminalisgoingtobedisposedof（usedfororgantransplant,forinstance）willbeboundtoraisegravebothethicalandsocialimplications.Argumentsforcapitalpunishment1）如果死刑犯没有受到最为严厉的惩罚，那么这对受害者是不公平的。Itwouldbeonlyfairforthevictimsifthecriminalsaresubjecttothegreatestfearofall---death.2）如果死刑取消的话，那么很多潜在的罪犯就不会顾忌做出一些极为可怕的犯罪行为。Ifcapitalpunishmentisevertobedoneawaywith,thepotentialwrongdoerswouldn,tbedeterredfromcommittingstaggeringlyseriousoffensesamongwhichserialmurderprovesparticularlyappalling.2.特殊人群犯罪情况：例题：【2010.08.05]Inmanypartsoftheworlchildrenandteenagerarecommittingmorecrimes.Whyisthiscasehappening?Howshouldchildrenorteenagersbepunished?2015年6月16H雅思写作范文Insomecountries?ahighproportionofcriminalact,sarecuididittedbyteenagerSrWhyhasthishappened?Whatcanbedonetodealwiththis?原因：.离婚率很高，单亲家庭--父母没有时间管教，关心不够parentsaresobusythattheydon,thavetoomuchtimetogiveparentingtotheirchildren..Notmatureenough,cannotdistinguishrightfromwrong;theylackforself-control本身叛逆期.媒体暴力Solutions」措施具体化，写出具体可以怎么办）e.g公司或政府可以规定一些亲子假 employeesshouldbeprovidedsomeholidaysordayofftobeencouragedtospendmoretimewithkids.Eg.Governmentsortherelevantorganizationsaresupposedtodesignsomebooksorbookletsaboutparentingeducation,whichservetoinstructparentstobettereducatetheirkids.Eg.LimitthemediaaboutunhealthycontentsorprogramsbyimposingseriouscensorshipGovernmentsShouldImposeseriouscensorship/hightaxes/higherpenalties开U罚/highfines onprograms/products/criminals思路分析：主体分析法和分类法青少年走上犯罪的道路(embarkonthecriminalroad)的原因是多种多样的(manifold/various):1)家庭原因：在单亲家庭(singleparentfamily)，缺乏家庭的关爱及正确的引导(lackofconnectednessandlackofparentalcare)，甚至是有些家庭存在着家庭暴力(domesticviolence/familyviolence)，不要给孩子贴上消极意义的标签(label)2)社会原因:(beledastrayinthecomplicatedsociety)复杂的社会背景科技原因：互联网和手机为犯罪提供了新的渠道(anewavenueforcommittingcrimes)withtheadvanceoftheinternetandtechnology,teenagersareexposedtotoomanyunhealthycontents,includingsmoking,onlinegames,drugs,violence,sexandsoon3)学校原因：学生承受的同伴带来的压力及学业压力、竞争压力(peerpressureandstudypressure,theheatedcompetition)4)思想原因媒体上包括电视、电影、广告等上面的暴力和血腥的场面(theviolentscenesonthemedia,pornographicorvulgarformsofmedia)5)心理原因：青少年犯罪心理(psychologyofjuveniledelinquency)练习：Peopleinallmodernsocietiesusedrugs,buttodayyouthareexperimentingwithbothlegalandillegaldrugs,andatanincreasinglyearlyage.Discussthecausesandsomeeffectsofwidespreaddrugusebyyoungpeople.Makeanyrecommendationsyoufeelarenecessarytohelpfightyouthdrugabuse.思路分析：主体分析法和分类法阐述青少年吸毒的根源。1）其中最重要的原因在于许多年轻人由于不思进取而产生的精神空虚。2）其他一些因素也起了推波助澜的作用，比如说，对毒品的无知和好奇，缺乏父母的适当引导等。3）毒品本身的令人上瘾的本质也是不容忽视的。三、常用词汇thought-provoking弓|人深思的far-reaching深远的drawback弊端undertakethedueobligations承担责任break/violate/flout/disobeythelaw触犯法律commitacrime犯罪Offenses/crimes/criminalacts罪行criminal/offender/culprit才日人/perpetrator罪才犯lawbreakerwrongdoeraccomplice/accessory（noun）从犯（后者指帮助犯罪单未直接参与的人）resentsociety/holdagrudgeagainstsociety憎恨社会inmate/convicts囚犯victim受害者trauma心理创伤cell牢房细胞ceiling天花板imprison/incarceratesomeone监禁bebroughttojustice被绳之以法lenient宽容的reform/rehabilitatecriminals改造罪犯lawenforcementagencies执法部门heinouscrime/flagitiouscrime/felony重罪pettycrime/misdemeanor轻罪first-timeoffender初犯的人hardenedcriminals/repeatcriminals惯犯reverttocrime再次犯罪law-abidingcitizens守法的公民abideby/complywiththelaw遵守法律disregard无视...traumatizesomeone给某人造成心理创伤trackdown/huntdown/capture抓捕criminaltendency犯罪倾向高分句型Manyoftheproblemsyoungpeoplenowexperience,suchasjuveniledelinquency,arisefromthefactthatmanymarriedwomennowworkandarenotathometocarefortheirchildren.现在年轻人面临的像青少年犯罪等问题，是源自于许多已婚女性走进职场，无法在家照看孩子。Oncethejuvenilesreachmaturation,theirsociallyunacceptablebehaviorhasgrownintoalifestyleandtheydevelopintocareercriminals.一旦青年人长大后，对社会叛逆的行为就变成了他们的生活方式，进而发展成为职业犯罪。Theinabilitytocompleteassignmentsandgettingbadgradesmaycreateself-esteemproblems,feelingsofalienationorworthlessness.完不成作业、学习成绩不好就会导致自尊心问题，感觉被疏远或是自己毫无价值。Accordingtothelabelingtheory,onceapersonislabeled,hewillbecomesuchakindofpersonasthelabeldescribes.标签理论认为，人一旦被贴上某种标签，就会成为标签所标定的那种人。Therootcausesofcrimearemanyanddiverse.Anyhopeofaddressingthosecausessuccessfullyrequiresmulti-facetedstrategies,whichcanbeimplementedbyneighborhoods,communitiesandvariouslevelsofgovernment.犯罪的根本原因是多重的。成功解决问题的希望在于采取多种策略，需要社区、及各级政府的共同努力。Mostparentsworryaboutthattheirchildrenarevulnerabletotheharmfulimpactinsociety.家长最担心的就是孩子容易受到社会的不良影响。Thesejuvenileoffendersareinneedoftreatmentbecausetheyhaveanegativedispositionandhighpropensitytocontinuecommittingcrime.少年犯需要救治，因为他们性情消极，有极大可能继续犯罪。Foryoungpeoplewhoareaddictedtothecomputergames,itisratherdifficulttodistinguishbetweenfantasyandreality.Grossly/fairly对于沉迷于网络游戏的年轻人来说，很难明辨虚幻与现实。Juvenilecrimeratehasarousedgreatconcerninthesociety.青少年违法犯罪率问题已经成为社会关注程度最高的问题之一。Prisonerscanbeputtoworkincommunityserviceprojects,whichcanprovidetheprisonerswithvaluabletraining,developthesenseofsocialresponsibility.可以让囚犯进行社区服务，这样可以对他们进行有意义的培训，培养他们的社会责任感。五、课堂实战演练题目：Peopleinallmodernsocietiesusedrugs,buttodayyouthareexperimentingwithbothlegalandillegaldrugs,andatanincreasinglyearlyage,somesociologistsclaimthatparentsandothermembersofthesocietyoftensetabadexample.Discussthecausesandsomeeffectsofwidespreaddrugusebyyoungpeopleinourmodernsociety.Makeanyrecommendationsyoufeelarenecessarytohelpfightyouthdrugabuse..开头、结尾和主体部分中文思路这是一篇探讨青少年吸毒的议论文。题目中的论述指出，当今的青少年滥用毒品的现象十分普遍，并且其年龄正日趋年轻化。某些社会学家声称父母和其他社会成员给这些吸毒的青少年树立了一个坏榜样。题目的要求有三方面：一是讨论当今社会青少年吸毒成风的根源所在，二是谈一谈青少年吸毒的不良影响，三是提出一些建议来与这种恶劣倾向作斗争。由此可见，这是一个典型的问题解决型题目，即在主体段中有三个小段落，分别讲述产生的原因，弓I起的后果和解决的办法。1）阐述青少年吸毒的根源。指出其中最重要的原因在于许多年轻人由于不思进取而产生的精神空虚。其他一些因素也起了推波助澜的作用，比如说，对毒品的无知和好奇，缺乏父母的适当引导等。另外，毒品本身的令人上瘾的本质也是不容忽视的。2）阐述青少年吸毒所造成的恶劣影响。而其中最严重的是青少年犯罪率的激增，然后，家庭的破裂不可避免地导致社会的不安定。对于吸毒者本身来说，这种行为恰好是对他们身心的严重摧残，会对他们自身产生非常消极的影响。3）阐述一些切实可行的解决办法。其中最行之有效的方法就是提升公众对毒品的意识使他们充分认识到毒品的巨大破坏力。执法部门也应加强打击力度，对毒品犯罪判以重刑。而对于青少年瘾君子来说，首要任务是让他们尽快恢复健康，然后可以现身说法式地来告诫公众。.范文Peopleinallmodernsocietiesusedrugs,buttodaysyouthareexperimentingwithbothlegalandillegaldrugs,andatanincreasinglyearlyage.Ithasarousedfiercecontroversyastothereasonwhyyoungpeoplechoosetousedrugs.Themostimportantreasonwhyyouthdrugabuseissoprevalentintoday’ssocietyisthespiritualemptinessonthepartofmanyyoungsters.Theyoftenfeelreluctanttostudyor［以…做试验］【句式，……引起了激烈的争论辩论】【药物滥用，滥用药物】【精神空虚】【adj.不情愿的，勉强的；

workhard,sotheyarequiteincapabletodosomethingmeaningfulandtheonlywaytoreleasetheirexcessiveenergyistodosomethingmeaningless.Othercausesofwidespreadyouthdrugabusealsomustbetakenintoaccount.Theseincludeignoranceandcuriosityaboutillegaldrugs,lackofknowledgeandguidancefromadults,andeasyaccesstoandavailabilityofdrugs.Finally,peopleshouldnotignorethefactthatmostillegaldrugsareaddictiveandtheseimmatureteenagerscanhardlyresistthetremendoustemptationoffeelingecstaticundertheinfluenceofthedrugs.顽抗的】【释修精力】【纳入考虑】【对违法药品的无知和好奇心】【同位语从句】【adj.不成熟的】【抵抗巨大的诱惑】【adj.狂喜的；入迷的，出神的】顽抗的】【释修精力】【纳入考虑】【对违法药品的无知和好奇心】【同位语从句】【adj.不成