住宿班11201,科技范文

Somepeoplethinkthatthedevelopmentoftechnologyhasmadeourlifemorecomplex.TowhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreeItissometimesarguedthatourlifehasbecomemorecomplicatedthanbeforebecauseoftechnologicaldevelopment.Personally,Idisagreewiththisidea.Itisundeniablethattechnologybringssometroubles.(Formanypeople,itisdifficulttolearnsomethingnew.)Learningsomethingnewcanbeachallengeforsomepeople.Inmanycases,theadvancementsoftechnologymakeitnecessaryforapersontolearnnewfunctionsandoperations(ineachgenerationofdigitalproducts)everytimethereisanewproduct,whichcanbeabigheadache.Thisismostobviouslytrueformiddleagedandolderpeoplewhohavepoormemoriesandlimitedlearningcapacities.However,theconveniencetechnologybringsismuchgreaterthanthetroublesitgenerates.Firstly,technologymakesiteasierforapersontoacquireinformation.Peopleinthepastwerelimitedtolocalnewspaper,(newspapers)radioandTVservices.Today,technologybreaksgeographicbarriersandprovidesanindividualwithinstantaccesstoanythinghewantstoknowfromanyfield.OneparticularlygoodexampleisthatanIELTScandidatecanfindthescoringcriteriaandpreparationtipsofthetestbytypingrelevantquestionsinasearchengine.Secondly,technologyhaschangedthewaypeoplecommunicate.BeforetheInternetandtelephonescameintoexistence,therewereonlytwomodesofcommunication:face-to-facetalkingandtraditionalmail.However,thisisnolongerthecase.Amancanmaintaincontactwithhisfamilyandfriendsatanytime(anytime)andanywherewithacomputerconnectedtotheInternet.Additionally,smartphonesenablehimtoshareideaswithbroaderaudiencesthroughTwitter,Facebook,Instagramandothersocialnetworkingwebsites.Tosumup,Ibelievethatinspiteofthetroublestechnologyhascaused,theconvenienceithasbroughtismuchgreaterthanmostrealize.对于complex的理解：beforetechnology,peoplelivedmuchsimplerlives,talkingfacetoface,andbeingunawareofwhatwashappeningintherestoftheworld.Now,wehaveinstantaccesstoallkindsofinformation,itcanbeoverwhelmingforsomepeople.wecantalktototalstrangers,whichisbothgoodandbad.Weknowmuchmoreaboutwhatishappeningaroundtheworld.Socialnetworkwebsiteshavetheirplace,butsomepeoplespendtoomuchtimeonthem,forgettingtoliveinthemoment."But"and"also"atthebeginningofasentence.Thesewordsarefinetousewithinasentence,tolinkideastogether,butshouldnotbeusedtostartasentence.3."Anytime"shouldbeoneword"anytime"3."Spacebarriers"doesnotsoundright,itwouldbebettertosay"location"or"distance"4.IELTSisanacronym(首字母缩略词),soalllettersshouldbecapitalsAdvancementUCService:公共事业时可数publicservices；ambulanceandbusservices对顾客的接待，服务；不可数customerserviceBarrier:可数tradebarriers;psychologicalbarriers;thelanguagebarrierAccess:UExpect和want不可以互换；expect更侧重指期望，（demand的意思更多点）Criteria：复数名词Mail：不可数Audience:C演讲，音乐会的听众可以表示单数也可以表复数意思，但不加stheaudiencewas/wereclappingfor10minutes.电视，电影观众就是audiencesTV/movieaudiencesTurnouttobe+N/adj都可以technologyhasfailedatitsmissionofmakingeverybody'slifeeasierasmanypeoplearereactingnegativelytoit.Forinstance,Technologyprogressisdrivingourchildrentowardsthedangerzonewheretheyaregettingmaterialswhichisharmfultothem.Besides,wehavetokissourprivacyandrights