读后续写 爸爸的泡菜坛子讲义 -2022届高考英语二轮复习备考VIP

读后续写爸爸的泡菜坛子一2022届高考英语二轮复习备考作者小时候时常目睹父亲把硬币投进泡菜坛子，为他将来上大学攒钱，等到作者大学毕业，有了工作，也成了家后回到父母家里时，却没看见父亲的泡菜坛子，作者不免思绪万千。作者会再次看到父亲的泡菜坛子吗？ThepicklejarasfarbackasIcanremembersatonthefloorinmyparentsbedroom.Whenhegotreadyforbed,Dadwouldemptyhispocketsandthrowhiscoinsintothejar.AsasmallboyIwasalwaysfascinatedbythesoundsthecoinsmadeastheyweredroppedintothejar.Theylandedwithamerryjinglewhenthejarwasalmostempty.Then,thefullerthejar,thedullerthesound.Takingthecoinstothebankwasalwaysabigjob.Eachtimewedrovetothebank,Dadwouldlookatmehopefully,saying,"Thosecoinsaregoingtokeepyououtofthesmalltown.,,Also,eachtimeheslidtheboxofrolledcoinsacrossthecounteratthebanktowardthecashier,hewouldshoutproudly,“Theseareformysonscollegefund.Hellneverworkatthemill（工厂）allhislifelikeme.”Whenwegothome,wewouldstartfillingthejaragain.Healwaysletmedropthefirstcoinsintotheemptyjar.Wesmiledateachotherastheymadeabrief,happyjingle.“You'llgettocollegeonpennies,"hesaid.Nomatterhowroughthingsgotathome,Dadcontinuedtodrophiscoinsintothejar.EventhesummerwhenDadgotlaidofffromthemill,notasinglecoinwastakenfromthejar.Theyearspassed,andIfinishedcollegeandtookajobinanothertown.Once,whilevisitingmyparents,Iusedthephoneintheirbedroom,andnoticedthatthepicklejarwasgone.Ithadserveditspurposeandhadbeenremoved.AlumproseinmythroatasIstaredatthespotbesidethedresserwherethejarhadalwaysstood.Mydadwasamanoffewwords,andneverlecturedmeonthevaluesofdetermination,perseverance（坚持不懈），andfaith.Thepicklejarhadtaughtmeallthesevirtues.LanguageStudyI.DifficultphraseinsentenceEventhesummerwhenDadgotlaidofffromthemill,notasinglecoinwastakenfromthejar.语境：即使在夏天爸爸被工厂解雇的时候，爸爸也没花罐子里的一分钱。分析：本句中，getlaidoff意为“被解雇”。II.UsefulsentencepatternsThen,thefullerthejar,thedullerthesound.语境：然后，罐子越满，声音变得越沉闷。分析：本句为“the+比拟级，the+比拟级”固定句型结构，表示“越……越……Also,eachtimeheslidtheboxofrolledcoinsacrossthecounteratthebanktowardthecashier,hewouldshoutproudly,“Theseareformysonscollegefund.Hellneverworkatthemillallhislifelikeme.”语境：而且，每次他把装着硬币的盒子从柜台那边递给银行出纳员的时候，他都会骄傲地大喊：“这是给我儿子上大学的基金。他不可能像我一样，一辈子在工厂里工作。”分析：本句中，eachtime是连词短语，意为“每次.・・・・.ReadingCheck阅读上面的文章，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。注意：.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.续写局部分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1：WhenImarried,ItoldmywifeSusanaboutthesignificantpartthelowlypicklejarhadplayedinmylifeasaboy.Paragraph2：Shehandedthedaughterbacktomyfatherandledmeintomyparentsbedroom.写作导引一、语篇研读要想续写内容与所给短文之间逻辑连贯、衔接紧密，必须充分理解所给材料的大意，掌握作者想要传达的意思。本文是一篇记叙文，文章分析如下：二、提问构思基于原文本和续写段落首句提供的信息并结合以上阅读分析，采用围绕中心提问相关问题的方法，构思要续写的两段故事情节，一般分为三步。第一步，根据续写第二段所给出的段首句倒推续写第一段应包括什么内容。根据第二段的段首句“她把女儿还给了父亲，把我领进了父母的卧室”可知，续写第一段要写“作者妻子和女儿之间的事”，这样才能确保续写的两段是相衔接的。第二步，围绕续写第一段所给出的段首句以及上面的分析进行提问构思。Whydidtheauthortellhiswifeofthepicklejar?Whatdidtheauthorswifeseeinhisparentsbedroom?Whydidtheauthorswifeleadhimtohisparentsbedroom?第三步，围绕续写第二段所给出的段首句进行提问构思。Whatdidtheauthorseeinhisparentsbedroom?Howdidtheauthorfeelwhenhesawhisfatherspicklejaragain?Whatwouldtheauthordowhenhesawhisfatherspicklejaragain?三、润色成篇在续写的过程中要注意情节连贯，各局部内容相衔接，即：.两段的续写与所给短文的衔接；.每段的续写与续写段首句之间的衔接；.续写的两段之间的衔接。同时要注意语言风格的一致和语法、句型以及所用词语的准确性。比方，刻画人物形象时运用恰当的形容词使其栩栩如生;描写人物心理活动时使用一些动词或副词使其细微深入。爸爸的泡菜坛子答案ReadingCheckParagraph1：WhenImarried,ItoldmywifeSusanaboutthesignificantpartthelowlypicklejarhadplayedinmylifeasaboy.Inmymind,itdefinedhowmuchmydadhadlovedme.ThefirstChristmasafterourdaughterJessicawasborn,wespenttheholidaywithmyparents.Afterdinner,Jessicabegantocrysoftly,andSusantookherfromDadsarms.“Sheprobablyneedstobechanged,"shesaid,carryingthebabyintomyparentsbedroom.WhenSusancamebackintothelivingroom,therewasastrangemistinhereyes.Paragraph2：Shehandedthedaughterbacktomyfatherandledmeintomyparentsbedroom.Tomyamazement,therestoodtheoldpicklejar,thebottomalreadycoveredwithcoins.Iwalkedovertoit,dugdownintomypocket,andpulledoutafistfulofcoins.