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Lecturer:LeoLeowithus主体段技巧考点：Presentbutinadequatelycoverkeyfeaturesandtheremaybeatendencytofocusondetails【band5】Presentandadequatelyhighlightkeyfeaturesbutdetailsmaybeinaccurate【band6】Clearlypresentandhighlightkeyfeaturesbutcouldbemorefullyextended【band7】难度：技能：原点，区间，举例，最高，次高，最低长度：100-120单词文章结构段落结构1段落结构2时间分配介绍112m总览224m数据339m4小作文时间分配雅思图表作文时态大全动态图（dynamicchart)Between1991and2001,thepopulationincreasedto1.1billion.By2001,thepopulationhadincreasedby100million.Thepopulationhasexperiencedanincreaseof500millionsince1980.From2020to2040,thepopulationwillincreaseto1.8billionThepopulationwillhavedeclinedby700million

by2080.静态图(staticchart)一般现在（没有时间）一般过去（2001/2005）动态图静态图组合图地图流程图40%30%10%20%Task1命题分布原点，区间，举例最大，次大，最小ThechartbelowshowscomponentsofGDPintheUKfrom1992to2000.

IntheproportionalbarchartwecanseehowGDPgeneratedfromITandserviceindustryintheUKfrom1992to2000. Overall,bothsectorsleveledupbutITrosemoredramatically.ItcanalsobeclearlynotedthattheproportionofIThasbeengreaterthanthatofthecounterpartthroughoutthisspan.

In1992,statistically,whereasITindustrytookthelead,accountingforcirca6%,servicesectoronlytookuptwothirdsofthecounterpart.(…)Thechartbelowgivesinformationaboutglobalsalesofgamessoftware,CDsandDVDorvideo. Inthebarchartwecanseehowthreetypesofelectronicproducts:gamessoftware(GS),DVD/video(DV)andCDs,weresoldoutfrom2000to2003worldwide.Itiscomputedintermsofbilliondollars($bn). Overall,comparedwithafallingtrendinCDs,theothertwohaveeincreasinglye.However,CDsstilltookupthelargestmarketamongstthesethree. In2000,whenitcomestofigures,CDsservedthebestsellerduringthisperiod,reachingapproximately$36bn,whilstDVwashalfasbigasthat.Incontrast,GSstoodatthebottom,withonly$13bn.(…)ThechartbelowshowscomponentsofGDPintheUKfrom1992to2000.

In1992,statistically,whereasITindustryaccountedfor6%,servicesectoronlytookuptwothirdsofthecounterpart.

Then,intheperiodof1992-1996,servicesectorleveledupwhilethecounterpartfluctuated.Servicepart,indetail,steadilyincreasedto7%;however,thecounterpartfirstlydemonstratedaslightriseof2%andthendeclinedminimallybyroughly1%. Whenitfinallycomestothespanof1996-2000,althoughsomerisesoccurredinbothdivisions,ITrosemoreobviouslythanservicesector.Tobementioned,whereasservicepartonlyslightlyjumpedfrom7%to8%,ITtill2000climbeddramaticallyto15%,approximatelytwiceasbigasthatin1996.Thechartbelowgivesinformationaboutglobalsalesofgamessoftware,CDsandDVDorvideo.Then,between2000and2002,whereasCDsdeclinedslightly,theresttwodivisionsleveledupsteadily.

Thelargestincrease,inparticular,wenttoDV,

whichwas$8bnhigher.Likewise,asignificantgrowthof$5bncanbefoundinGS.However,by2003,CDshaddeclinedby$3bn.(46words)Whenitcomestothelastperiodof2002to2003,DVandGScontinuedrisingbutCDsremainedunchanged.Indetail,thepreviously-risingtwoareas,theyroseto$31bnand$29bn,respectively.(36words)161wordsThetwographsshowthemainsourcesofenergyinUSAin1980and1990.Modes19852000Walking255237Bicycle5141Car3,1994,806Local

bus429274Longdistancebus54124Train289366Taxi1342Other450585Allmodes4,7406,475ThetablegivestheinformationaboutchangesinmodesoftravelinEnglandbetween1985and2000.动态图静态图组合图地图流程图40%30%10%20%Task1命题分布原点，区间，举例最大，次大，最小Thebarchartbelowshowstheresultsofasurveyconductedbyapersonneldepartmentatamajorcompany.Thesurveyiscarriedoutontwogroupsofworkers:thoseagedfrom18-30andthoseaged45-60,andshowsfactorsaffectingtheirworkperformance.%Theproportional

barcharttellshowtendifferentfactorsaffectperformanceofworkersoftwogroups:18-30yearoldsand45-60yearolds.Byandlarge,exceptforteamspiritandworkenvironment,thesetwogroupsaredifferentlyinfluencedintermsofcategories.Also,theyoungergroupismorelikelytobeinfluencedthanthecounterpart.Statistically,foryoungerpeople,thetoptwofactorsarechancefordevelopmentand

relaxedworkingenvironment(and/orpromotionprospects),whileworkenvironmentisleastconsidered.Toclarify,thefirstoneshowsthegreatestproportionatcirca90%,followedbythesecondstandingat80%.However,workenvironmentreachesthebottom,approachingonethirdofthehighest.Movingontoelders,thepatternisquitedifferent.Thisisespeciallytrueinmoney,which

takesthelion’sshare,takingup70%.Teamspiritisquiteneartoit,butitisstill10%lowerthanthelargest.Instarkcontrast,jobsecurityservestheleastinfluentialelement,roughlyonequarterofthatofteamspirit.169wordsThegraphbelowgivesinformationaboutthepreferredleisureactivitiesofAustralianchildren.Intheproportionalbarchartwecanseehowchildrenaged5-14choosetheirleisureactivitiesbygenderinAustralia,whichrangesfromskateboardingorrollerblading(SR),bikeriding(BR),watchingTVorvideos(WTV),electronicorcomputergames(ECG)toartandcraft(AC).Overall,WTVservesasthemosteprogramforbothgenderswhereastheleastpopularonevariesfromboystogirls.Also,boysaremoreactivethanthecounterpartintermsofparticipatingrates.Statistically,forgirlstudents,whileSRisleastchosen,thetoptwoprogramsgotoWTVandECG.Toclarify,allthegirlsareparticipatinginWTV,followedbyECG,withalargepercentagestandingat60%.However,SRonlytakesupapproximatelyaquarterofhighest.Movingontoboyparticipants,theyshowgreatinterestinWTVandECGbuttendtobeindifferenttoAC.Indetail,WTValsotakesthelead,reaching100%,equalizingthecounterpart.Likewise,thesecondpopulargoestoECGaswell,makingupcirca80%.Instarkcontrast,ACservesthelowestfigure,nearlyonethirdasgreatasWTV.168words动态图静态图组合图地图流程图40%30%10%20%Task1命题分布原点，区间，举例最大，次大，最小ThepiechartshowstheworldwidedistributionofsalesofCoca-Colaintheyear2000andthegraphshowsthechangeinsharepricesbetween1996and2001.

ThepiechartpresentshowtheCoca-Colaproductsweresoldinfivedifferentregionsworldwidein2000(forchartA)whilethelineargraphgiveshowthesharepriceofCoca-Colachangedsince1996to2001(forchartB).Theyaremeasuredinpercentagesanddollars,respectively.Overall,Coca-Colahadsoldout17.1billionbottlesofdrinkby2000andinthesix-yearperiod,itssharepricefluctuatedgreatlywiththehighestin1998.

AnanalysisofthedatainchartAgivesthatthelargest

consumerbelongedtoNorthAmerica,where30.4%ofthetotalvolumewaspurchased,followedbyLatinAmerica,5%lower.However,theMiddleEastremainedfairlysmallconsumersat7%ofthetotalvolumeofsales.IntermsofchartB,In1996,shareswerevaluedatapproximately$35.Then,between1996and1998,however,pricesrosesignificantlyto$70pershare.Theydippedalittleinmid-1997andthenpeakedat$80pershareinmid-98.Whenitfinallycomesto1998-2001,theirvaluefellconsistentlybuttherewasaslightriseinmid-2001.Sample动态图静态图组合图地图流程图40%30%10%20%Task1命题分布原点，区间，举例最大，次大，最小地图主体段技法地图1.确定变化数量（主体写完后，再确定）2.第一幅图静态描写，从中心到密集要点,道路优先3.第二幅图对比描写，一一对应4.图中词汇必须照抄，不能改动5.关键词：位于，方位，转变ThemapbelowshowsthedevelopmentofthevillageofRyemouthbetween1995andthepresent.HerearetwopicturesreferringtothelayoutofVillageofRyemouthovertwoperiods:1995andthepresent.Asawhole,recentcoupleofdecadeshavewitnessedeightmajorchangestransformingthissmallfishvillageintoamodernresortwithcompletefacilities.Asshown,whileitwasstillin1995,aneast-westdirectionroadmetanotheronthesoutheastcornerofthevillage,withacaféandahotelstandingbythecrosspoint.Lookingatthehorizontalmainroad,therewerearowofshopsandfishmarketsonbothsidesoftheroad,infrontofwhichafishingportcouldbefoundonthesea.Thenorthwestmodationunitswereequallyplacedattheendoftheotherroadandinthenortheastpart,afarmandaforestparkwerelocated.Movingontothenextpicture,wecanseegreatchangesinalldirections.Indetail,acarparkisnewlyconstructedaroundthecrosssection.Themostnoticeablechangegoestoseasidearea:thefishingportisremovedandthefishmarketandshopsarereplacedbyapartmentsandrestaurants.Astothechangesontheotherroad,clearlymorehousesareerectedwhileonthenortheastcorner,wecanseefarmusedasagolfcourseandwoodsaremadewayforatenniscourt.ThediagramsbelowshowthedevelopmentofthevillageofKelsbeybetween1780and2000流程图主体段技法流程图1.确定流程步骤（数字+整体处理）2.每张图对应1-2句描写3.联想图片背后的内容（自然规律+社会工序）4.图中词汇必须照抄，不能改动5.注意流程步骤连词HighpressuredwaterThediagramsbelowshowsthestagesintheprocessofglassrecycling.Theflowchartdescribeshowglassisrecycled,whichgenerallyincludesthreemajorstepsturningthesecond-handglassintobrand-newoneforsales.Asshown,intheverybeginning,thesecond-handandthrown-awayglassproductsarecollectedandclassifiedintoseveralsorts.Then,theyaresenttoaplacec