News-writing新闻写作课件

a1Newswriting--basicknowledgea1Newswriting--basicknowleda2Definition“Manbitesdog”definitionNews：anythingthatisnewsworthyNewsvalue：timelinessofaneventimportanceofaneventprominenceofthepeopleorthingconcerninganeventuniquenessofaneventhumaninteresta2Definitiona3Stylesofnews

新闻的种类很多，按分类标准的不同，有各种不同的分类方法。如按照事件的性质分类：硬新闻（hardnews）：硬新闻也就是“纯新闻消息报道”，指题材严肃，具有一定时效性的客观事实报道软新闻（softnews）：软新闻是指情感味浓，写作方法诙谐，轻松幽默的社会新闻，不注重时效性。新闻英语中常见的体裁主要有三大类：消息（newsreport）特写（feature）新闻评论（commentaries/columns/rewiew/editorial）。a3Stylesofnews

新闻的种类很多，按分类标准a4Anewsreporta4Anewsa5LedeThemostimportantpartofanynewsstoryisthelede.Theledeistheveryfirstsentenceofanewsstory.Init,thewritersummarizesthemostnewsworthypointsofthestoryinbroadbrushstrokes.Ifaledeiswell-written,itwillgivethereaderabasicideaofwhatthestoryisabout,evenifsheskipsovertherestofthestory.a5LedeThemostimportantparta6Example:

TwopeoplediedinarowhousefireinNortheastPhiladelphialastnight.Fromthisledeyougetthebasics:Twopeoplekilled.Rowhousefire.NortheastPhiladelphia.ThenQuestions：Whatcausedthefire?Whowaskilled?Whatwastheaddressoftherowhouse?.......Whattoputintoaledeandwhattoleaveout??

Givethemajorpointsofthestory,butleavethesmallerdetailsforlater.a6Example:

Twopeopledieda7

TheFiveWsandtheH

Who,What,Where,When,WhyandHow.Who—goldminers

What—werekilled

When—Thursday（Nov．22）

Where—inwesternColombia

Why—thewallsofmineweresoftenedbyrain

How—（werekilled）bycrasha7TheFiveWsandthea8

Sometimesoneofthoseelementswillbemoreinterestingthantherest.Ex.acelebritywhodiesinacarcrash.Whatmakesthestoryinterestingisthefactthatacelebrityisinvolved.Acarcrashinandofitselfisall-toocommon.Soyou'llwanttoemphasizethat"who"aspectofthestoryinyourledea8Sometimesoneofthoseea9BodyInvertedPyramid

Newsstoriesarewrittenintheinvertedpyramidformat.Itmeansthatthemostimportantinformationgoesatthetop,orbeginningofthestory,andtheleastimportantstuffgoesatthebottom.a9BodyInvertedPyramida10a10a11Whichonetochoose?Keepyourwritingtight

1.OnewaytodothisistofollowtheS-V-Oformat,whichstandforSubject-VerbObject.Ex:Shereadthebook.Thebookwasreadbyher.a11WhichKeepyourwritingtiga12

Thefirstoneiswritteninthe

S-V-O

format:She(subject)read(verb)thebook(object).

Short、tothepoint(fourwords)、close、vividThesecondsentencedoesn'tfollowS-V-O.Connectionsevered、watery、unfocused、longera12

Thefirstoneiswrittenia132.AvoidtoomanyclauseEX:OfficerJoanLanton,whowasatthesceneofthemurder,whichoccurredonElmStreet,describedthesceneasgrislyandsaidtwosuspectsarebeingsought.OfficerJoanLantonwasatthesceneofthemurder,whichoccurredonElmStreet.Shedescribedthesceneasgrislyandsaidtwosuspectsarebeingsought.a132.Avoidtoomanyclausea143.JustOneorTwoIdeasPerSentence

Sentencesalsogettoolongwhenyoutrytocramtoomanyideasintothem.Ex:Thepresident,whowassufferingfromacold,whichhecaughtlastweekinNorway,signedthetreaty,whichhehadoriginallyopposed,becausehesaidthechangesthathadbeenmadeweresound.Thissentenceisstuffedwithfourorfiveideas.Theresultisaconfusingmess.Better:Thepresidenthadoriginallyopposedthetreaty.Buthesigneditanyway,sayingthechangesthathadbeenmadeweresound.AttheceremonyhewassufferingfromacoldthathecaughtlastweekinNorway.a143.JustOneorTwoIdeasPea154.EditandrewriteyourselfAsyouwrite,beonthelookoutforexcesswordsthatcanbecut.Whenyou'redone,readyourstoryoutloudandlistenforlongwindedsentences.Anysentencethatcan'tbeeasilyreadinasinglebreathshouldusuallybetrimmed.a154.Editandrewriteyoursela16Tipsforpractice先百度中文消息稿，根据上述的新闻英语特点，试着写一篇，交代好5W和主要的相关事实。然后去ChinaDaily或者Xinhua找相关的英语报道（善用检索），对比、修改。这样坚持下来就会有提高。

在平时阅读新闻，收听广播时还要注意各大通讯社自己的写作特点，用词和风格，这样才能更加惟妙惟肖。a16Tipsforpractice先百度中文消a17http://www.bbc.co.uk/academya17http://www.bbc.co.uk/academa18NewstypeNews(消息)

动态消息经验消息

综合消息

评述性消息

简明消息

人物消息a18NewstypeNews(消息)动态a19Newstype通讯

人物通讯工作通讯

风貌通讯

社会观察通讯a19Newstype通讯人物通讯a20Newstype评论

社论

短评、编后语专栏评论a20Newstype评论社论a21Newstype新闻特写

人物

事件场面a21Newstype新闻特写人物a22Newstype专访

人物专访事件专访

科学专访

问题专访a22Newstype专访人a23消息定义：指报道事情的概貌而不讲述详细的经过和细节，以简要的语言文字迅速传播新近事实的新闻体裁，也是最广泛、最经常采用的新闻基本体裁。写法：消息写法：标题、导语、主体、背景、结语a23消息定义：指报道事情的概貌而不讲述详细的经过和细节，a24Newswriting--basicknowledgea1Newswriting--basicknowleda25Definition“Manbitesdog”definitionNews：anythingthatisnewsworthyNewsvalue：timelinessofaneventimportanceofaneventprominenceofthepeopleorthingconcerninganeventuniquenessofaneventhumaninteresta2Definitiona26Stylesofnews

新闻的种类很多，按分类标准的不同，有各种不同的分类方法。如按照事件的性质分类：硬新闻（hardnews）：硬新闻也就是“纯新闻消息报道”，指题材严肃，具有一定时效性的客观事实报道软新闻（softnews）：软新闻是指情感味浓，写作方法诙谐，轻松幽默的社会新闻，不注重时效性。新闻英语中常见的体裁主要有三大类：消息（newsreport）特写（feature）新闻评论（commentaries/columns/rewiew/editorial）。a3Stylesofnews

新闻的种类很多，按分类标准a27Anewsreporta4Anewsa28LedeThemostimportantpartofanynewsstoryisthelede.Theledeistheveryfirstsentenceofanewsstory.Init,thewritersummarizesthemostnewsworthypointsofthestoryinbroadbrushstrokes.Ifaledeiswell-written,itwillgivethereaderabasicideaofwhatthestoryisabout,evenifsheskipsovertherestofthestory.a5LedeThemostimportantparta29Example:

TwopeoplediedinarowhousefireinNortheastPhiladelphialastnight.Fromthisledeyougetthebasics:Twopeoplekilled.Rowhousefire.NortheastPhiladelphia.ThenQuestions：Whatcausedthefire?Whowaskilled?Whatwastheaddressoftherowhouse?.......Whattoputintoaledeandwhattoleaveout??

Givethemajorpointsofthestory,butleavethesmallerdetailsforlater.a6Example:

Twopeopledieda30

TheFiveWsandtheH

Who,What,Where,When,WhyandHow.Who—goldminers

What—werekilled

When—Thursday（Nov．22）

Where—inwesternColombia

Why—thewallsofmineweresoftenedbyrain

How—（werekilled）bycrasha7TheFiveWsandthea31

Sometimesoneofthoseelementswillbemoreinterestingthantherest.Ex.acelebritywhodiesinacarcrash.Whatmakesthestoryinterestingisthefactthatacelebrityisinvolved.Acarcrashinandofitselfisall-toocommon.Soyou'llwanttoemphasizethat"who"aspectofthestoryinyourledea8Sometimesoneofthoseea32BodyInvertedPyramid

Newsstoriesarewrittenintheinvertedpyramidformat.Itmeansthatthemostimportantinformationgoesatthetop,orbeginningofthestory,andtheleastimportantstuffgoesatthebottom.a9BodyInvertedPyramida33a10a34Whichonetochoose?Keepyourwritingtight

1.OnewaytodothisistofollowtheS-V-Oformat,whichstandforSubject-VerbObject.Ex:Shereadthebook.Thebookwasreadbyher.a11WhichKeepyourwritingtiga35

Thefirstoneiswritteninthe

S-V-O

format:She(subject)read(verb)thebook(object).

Short、tothepoint(fourwords)、close、vividThesecondsentencedoesn'tfollowS-V-O.Connectionsevered、watery、unfocused、longera12

Thefirstoneiswrittenia362.AvoidtoomanyclauseEX:OfficerJoanLanton,whowasatthesceneofthemurder,whichoccurredonElmStreet,describedthesceneasgrislyandsaidtwosuspectsarebeingsought.OfficerJoanLantonwasatthesceneofthemurder,whichoccurredonElmStreet.Shedescribedthesceneasgrislyandsaidtwosuspectsarebeingsought.a132.Avoidtoomanyclausea373.JustOneorTwoIdeasPerSentence

Sentencesalsogettoolongwhenyoutrytocramtoomanyideasintothem.Ex:Thepresident,whowassufferingfromacold,whichhecaughtlastweekinNorway,signedthetreaty,whichhehadoriginallyopposed,becausehesaidthechangesthathadbeenmadeweresound.Thissentenceisstuffedwithfourorfiveideas.Theresultisaconfusingmess.Better:Thepresidenthadoriginallyopposedthetreaty.Buthesigneditanyway,sayingthechangesthathadbeenmadeweresound.AttheceremonyhewassufferingfromacoldthathecaughtlastweekinNorway.a143.JustOneorTwoIdeasPea384.EditandrewriteyourselfAsyouwrite,beonthelookoutforexcesswordsthatcanbecut.Whenyou'red