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衢州二中Mar.1.2006英语高考书面表达运用策略tobewithus!tobewithus!编辑ppt

国家教育部于2000年提出了修改中学课程标准的意见，其指导思想是：一个宗旨（素质教育）、二个重点（创新精神和实践能力）、三个面向（面向未来、面向国际、面向竞争）。同时提出了英语素质教育的目的和内容：激发和培养学习兴趣，帮助学生树立自信心，形成有效的学习策略，养成良好的学习策略，养成良好的学习习惯、掌握一定的语言知识和基本技能，建立初步的语感，获得基本的语言运用能力，开发智力、培养观察、记忆、思维、想象、创造能力，了解文化差异，增强世界意识，为学生的发展和终身学习打下良好的基础。在如此背景下进行的本研究项目的意义在于既符合国家对中学外语教学所提的要求和目标，也将写的训练贯穿于日常教学活动的全过程，寓写于听说读等诸方面的训练中，从而使学生达到真正全面提高写的能力的目的。同时对中学外语教师指导学生如何写好英语作文也极具参考价值和帮助作用。前言编辑ppt

目前国内就中学生英语写作课题尚缺乏较完整、系统和科学的研究，更勿论提出有份量乃至权威的实验报告，用以指导我国学生的英语写作。而随着我国经济与国际接轨及加入世贸组织后，英文写作的重要性正在日益凸现，我们知道，语言交际，就是传递和接受信息。传递信息就是说和写，接受信息就是听和读。听和说是口头交际，读和写是书面交际，我们不仅要听懂别人说的、看懂别人写的，而且还要自己能说，且要说得地道，写得洋气，这样才算是真正实现了用英语进行交际的目的。英语的听说读写四者密不可分，相互渗透，互为基础，又呈螺旋式提高。写的能力要在听说读的基础上培养和提高，而写的训练又能进一步提高听说读的能力，因此，今后有关中学生英文写作的研究将会越来越引起重视，并将进一步深化、细化。中文和英文毕竟是两种不同的语言，差异很大。我们在写英文的时候经常会出一些错误，一部分是最基本的语法错误，这里我们把英文写作中常犯的错误列出一部分，以引起我们的注意。另一部分是由于东西方文化的差异所带来的不同思维方式所造成的。写作研究的现状和发展趋势编辑ppt第一章历年高考作文评析一、

1989年全国高校招生统一考试英语书面表达编辑ppt（一）题目要求一个国际青年参观团正在访问我国某城市，你负责安排他们的参观活动。请起草一份通知，准备向参观团成员宣读。通知必须用一段话说明以下几点：

1.参观日期：7月22日，星期六。

时间：早餐后8点出发。午餐在参观地吃。下午回来。

2.参观内容：分四组，每组参观一个地方：工厂、学校、农场或医院。

3.欢迎每人参加一组活动。请选择好参观地点，并在今晚9点前到服务台(theServiceDesk)签名。

编辑ppt满分作文：Ladiesandgentlemen,MayIhaveyourattention,please?Welcometoourcity!I'mverygladtotellyouourtripplans.Therearefourchoices,includingfactories,schools,farms,andhospitals.It'suptoyoutodecidewhichgroupyouhaveinterest.We'resupposedtogetgoingat8o'clocktomorrowmorningrightafterbreakfast,andyoudon'thavetotakeanyfoodwithyousincelunchwillbeservedatthesite.Pleasemakesuretheplacethatyoufeellikegoingandsignupattheservicedeskbefore9p.m.!Thankyou!编辑ppt其它可用于本篇作文的好句子：1.Youwillbeputintofourgroups.2.Wehavefourtripplansforyoutochoosefrom.3.Youaresupposedtobeinanyofthefourgroups.4.Therearefourchoices.It’suptoyoutodecidewhichoneisyours.5.Chooseaplacewhichyoumayfeellikevisiting.6.We’llgetgoingat8o’clocktomorrowmorningrightafterbreakfast.7.Thetripisscheduledforawholeday,soI’mafraidwe’llhavelunchonsite.8.Inaddition,youdon’thavetotakeanyfoodwithyou,sincelunchwillbeservedattheplaceyouwillbevisiting.9.Alwaysstaywithyourguide,justtobeonthesafeside.10.Tomakesurethatthevisitsarewellplanned,weneedyoutosignupforyourtripby9:00P.M..11.Thankyouforlistening.编辑ppt2003年全国高校招生统一考试英语书面表达（一）

题目要求假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房的面积为25平方米，月租500元。

编辑pptDearBob,ItwasgreattohearfromyouandIamverygladyouwillbecomingheretostudyChinese.Ihavedonesomeresearchforyouandfoundaniceapartment,onlyonebusstopawayfromyourschool.Itisnotthatbig,only25squaremetres,butIthinkitisfineforyourneeds.Itconsistsofasmallbathroomandakitchen,andabedroom.Therentis500yuanpermonth,isthissuitabletoyourbudget?Ifitistooexpensive,pleaseletmeknowassoonaspossiblesoIcanmakefurtherarrangementsforyou.OnceagainIamveryexcitedthatyouwillbecomingheretostudy!Iamlookingforwardtomeetingyou.(124words)外教作文编辑ppt高考范文DearBob,

I’msogladtolearnthatyouarecominginSeptember.I’vefoundaplaceforyou.It’sasmallflatof25squaremetres,withabedroom,abathroomandakitchen.Inthebedroomthereisabed,asofa,adeskandachair.Therentis500yuanpermonth.TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet,whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.BusNo.11cantakeyoustraighttotheschool.Infact,it’sonlyonestop.Doyouthinkyou’dlikeit?Ifnot,Icantryandfindanotherplaceforyou.Justletmeknow.(108words)编辑ppt满分作文DearMrSmith,IamverypleasedtoreceiveyourletterandevenmorepleasedtolearnthatyouwillcometoChinatostudyChinese.Ihavefoundanapartmentforyou.Theapartmentisonthethirdfloorofasix-storeyedbuilding,whichislocatedonaquiettree-linedstreet—FangcaoStreet.FangcoStreetisonlyonestopawayfromJianxinChineseSchool,whereyouareplanningtostudythissummer.Theapartmenthasabedroom,inwhichthereisacomfortablesofa,adeskforofficeandasinglebed.Insidethereisalsoabathroomandakitchen.Theapartmentoccupiesanareaof25squaremeters.Therentis500yuanpermonth.Ihopethattheapartmentswillmeetyourexpectations,andIwillhelpyouwithanyadditionalrequirementsthatyoumighthave.

Allthebest.(138words)编辑ppt其它可用于本篇作文的好句子：1.

Theflatisinagreatlocation.ItisonlywalkingdistancetoJianxinChineseSchool.2.

Theapartment,whichis25squaremetresinsize,isinabuildingatFangcaoStreet.3.

Theflatislocatedonemileuptheschool.4.

FangcaoStreetisthefinestresidentialareainthecity.5.

TheapartmentislocatedneartheschoolandtheTrainStation,wherethebiggestshoppingandentertainmentCenterissituated.6.

Situatedononeofthelongestshoppingstreets,thisApartmenthasagoodtrafficconnectiontomanyofthecity'smostvisitedtouristdestinations.编辑ppt7.

Theapartmentissituatedonaquietstreetonlyfiveminutesawayonfootfromtheschool.8.

It'sonlyfewminutesawayonfootfromtheflat.9.

Theapartmentisclosetobusroutesandmotorways.10.

Closetothecenterofthecity,theschoolisafewminutesaway.11.

Astone'sthrowawayisJianxinChineseSchool,whichiswell-notedamongforeignfriendshere.12.

JustonebusstopawayisJianxinSchool.Nearbyisabeautifulpedestrianstreet,whereyouwillfindmanyofsmallshopsandrestaurants.编辑ppt13.

Publictransportationisexcellent.14.

OnFangcaoStreetmanybuslinesintersect,makingitaverygoodstartingpointforexploringthecity.15.

Theroomisbeautifullydecorated.16.

Assoonasyoustepintothebedroom,youcanseeasofastandingagainstthewall,justfacingthedoor.17.

Abathroomandakitchenarealsoavailable.18.

Theapartmentsizeis25sqm.19.

Thekitchenisfullyequipped.Thebathroomisnicewithamodernbathtub.20.

Ifyouareinterestedinthisapartmentemailmeortelephone010-504287.编辑ppt04年浙江省高考英语卷书面表达解析一、题目

假设你是李越,你的加拿大笔友Steve来信说,他和他的一些同学正在学中文,请你推荐两本学中文的词典，根据下表提供的信息,请你给他写一封回信.英汉/汉英词典新华字典

收词(字)18,000(英语)20,000(汉语)

10,000

价格52元11元

特点大量例子、用法说明,适合初学者中国最常用的汉语字典编辑ppt不少教师认为本案起点比较低，尖子生发挥水平的空间比较少，连“初中毕业生”都可以“应付”。但是评卷结果却让人大跌眼镜：该题的全省平均得分只有12.58分，满分（25分）者更是凤毛麟角。二、写作解析编辑ppt１、这种英汉、汉英的方式使得学生能更方便地查找参照词。２、这本字典实际上是“双向”字典：一半是英汉，一半是汉英，分别拥有20,000个汉字和18,000英语单词。３、这本字典大约有10,000字。４、英汉部分的英语单词后面都有相对应的汉语。５、所有的汉字都有英语翻译，这些翻译有助于更精确地理解汉字。６、尽管没有小本的《新华字典》那样容易携带，《英汉/汉英》字典还是更受学生们的欢迎。７、对于常见的单词来说，它还含有充足的例子。８、它提供了大量的用法注解。三、语句使用建议编辑ppt9、它有相当多的例句和注解。10、由于其易用和全面，我也经常使用这本字典。11、我向所有中文学习者推荐这本字典。12、因为它拥有其他字典不曾拥有的东西，所以我说它很有用。13、平均三个中国人就有一个拥有这本字典。14、总体上说，它特别有用，是本很有价值的字典。15、与其他字典相比，这本字典十分有用。16、总而言之，要选汉语字典，这是最好的选择之一。编辑ppt1、TheEnglish-Chinese,Chinese-Englishformatmakesitconvenientforstudentstocross-referencewords.2、Thisdictionaryisactuallyatwo-waydictionary:onehalfisEnglish/ChineseandtheotherhalfisChinese/English,containingsome20,000Chinesewordsand18,000Englishwords.3、Thisdictionaryhasroughly10,000words.4、TheE/CsectionhastheEnglishwordfollowedbytheChineseequivalent.5、AllChinesecharactersarefollowedbyEnglishtranslation,whichhelpsyouunderstandthecharactersmoreaccurately.6、WhilenotasportableasthesmallerXD,theE/CC/Ewasmorewarmlywelcomedbymystudents.7、Forcommonwordsitalsoincludesefficientexamples.8、Itprovideslotsofusagenotes.编辑ppt

9、Ithasagoodnumberofexamplesentenceswithnecessaryusagenotes.10、Iusethisdictionaryalotduetoitseaseofuseanditscompleteness.11、IhighlyrecommendthisdictionaryforalllearnersofmandarinChineselanguage.12、IhavefoundthisdictionarytobeveryhelpfulbecauseithaswhatmanyChinesedictionariesdonothave.13、Onaverage,oneinthreeChineseownacopyofthedictionary.14、Overall,itisextremelyusefulandagoodvalue.15、Thisdictionaryisincrediblyusefulcomparingtootherones.16、Inshort,it'soneofyourbestoptionsforaChinesedictionary.编辑ppt1、高考范文DearSteve,I’msopleasedtolearnthatyouandyourclassmatesarelearningChinese.I’dliketorecommendthefollowingtwodictionaries.TheEnglish-ChineseChinese-EnglishDictionaryisreallyagoodoneforbeginners.Ithas18,000Englishwordsand20,000Chinesewords.Besidesplentyofexamples,ithasmanynotestellingyoubowtouseaword.XinhuadictionaryisthemostpopularChinesedictionary,andithasavocabularyof10,000words.ItmayalsobeusefultosomeadvancedlearnersofChinese.Ofthetwo,ECCEDisthemoreexpensive,costing52yuan,andXDcosts11yuan.Pleaseletmeknowifyouwantmetobuythesedictionaries.(111words)四、范文欣赏编辑ppt2、考场高分范文DearSteve,ThankyouverymuchforyourlastletterwhichaskedmesomethingabouthowtochooseadictionaryforlearningChinese.HereIstronglyrecommendyouthefollowingtwowhichmaybeusefultoyou.OneofthemistheEnglish-Chinese/Chinese-EnglishDictionary,whichwillcostyou52yuan.Itcontainssome18,000Englishwordsand20,000Chinesewords.Asithaslotsofexamplesshowinghowtousethewords,itwillbemuchvaluableforthebeginnerslikeyou.Theotherone,XinhuaDictionary,whichchargesyouonly11yuanandhasacollectionof10,000Chinesewords.ItisthemostcommonlyusedoneinChina.IfyouneedmyhelpwithyourChinesepleasewritetome.(120words)编辑ppt3、教师范文DearSteve,Verygladtohavereceivedyourletter,sayingthatyouandyourclassmatesarelearningEnglish.IwishyougoodluckwithyoureffortsinChineselearning.InyourletteryoualsoaskwhatChinesedictionariestouse.HerearethetwothatIhighlyrecommend.Anidealtoolforstudy,theEnglish-Chinese&Chinese–Englishdictionarycollects20,000Chinesewordsand18,000Englishwords.Abundantexamplesillustratehowandwhenawordcanbeused.Asamust-havereferenceforbeginners,thedictionaryisworththeprice,52yuan.TheXinhuaDictionary,consistingof10,000Chinesewords,hasbeenthemostinfluentialChinese-onlydictionaryavailable.Thedictionaryisrelativelysmall,easytocarryandaffordable,costingonly11yuan.Ifyouhavefurtherquestions,letmeknow.(128words)编辑ppt《普通高校招生全国统一考试大纲》中英语学科书面表达的“评分标准”中指出，评分时，应该注意“应用词汇和语法结构的数量、上下文的连贯性和语言的得体性”；最高档次的给分要求中还要求考生能够“应用较多的语法结构和词汇；……尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇，具备较强的语言用用能力；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑”等等。这些要求在上述三篇范文中，尤其是最后两篇范文中，都有较好的体现。五、范文评析编辑ppt范文中能够通过从属连词（第2篇）、非限制性定语从句（第2篇）、同位语（第3篇）和现在分词短语（第1、3篇）等语法结构来构建长句，使多个要点能够在一个句子中得以表达，从而使意义更为连贯、文章更为流畅。本案的并列信息比较多，如价格、拥有词汇量等，但是上面提到的多种语法结构的运用，使文章摆脱了内容上的乏味，变得很耐读.范文中也体现了较强的词汇运用能力。在“考场高分范文”中，contain、charge、acollectionof等的正确运用，无疑为文章增色不少；而“教师范文”中的用词亦有可圈可点之处，通过efforts、collect、abundant、illustrate、consistof、influential、available、relatively等词，彰显了作者的词汇量，这与评分标准中的要求也是相吻合的。编辑ppt05年浙江卷英语书面表达一、题目（满分30分）你的英国朋友正在做一个课题：世界各地的生日庆祝方式。他请你介绍中国学生过生日的方式。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文：（一）通常方式：1.生日聚会2.生日礼物3.生日祝福（二）我认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由﹡词数：100-120编辑ppt二、高考范文Chinesestudentscelebratetheirbirthdaysindifferentways,butthemostcommonwayistohavefundrinking,singinganddancing.Onthebirthday,oneusuallyreceivesnicegiftsandgoodwishesfromfriendsandparents.Sometimes,parentswillprepareaspecialdinneroracaketoshowtheirlovefortheirchildren.Sincebirthdaycelebrationisoneoftheimportantactivitiesinone’slife,itcanbedoneinmoremeaningfulways.Forexample,wecanbuysomeflowersorcookadeliciousmealforourmothersonthatday.Inthisway,weexpressthankstoourparentsinreturnfortheirlove.(105words)编辑ppt三、考场优秀作文InChina,themostcommonwaytocelebrateabirthdayistoholdabirthdayparty.Thebirthdaypersonusuallyinvitessomeclassmatesandotherrelativestothepartyinwhichhisfamilymembersandfriendswillgettogetherandhaveagoodtime.Abigcakewithcandlesonitisoftenseenandthebirthdaysongissungontheoccasion.Peoplewhoareinvitedwillbringgiftsaswellastheirbetwishes.However,Ithinkthereisanotherwaytomakeabirthdaycelebrationmoremeaningful,todoagooddeedformothers.Wecanhelpthemcookingorcleaning.Althoughthiswon’thelpthemmuch,weatleastshowourloveforthem.(119words)编辑ppt四、教师范文InChinabirthdaypartiesareimportantsocialgatheringswherefriendsandrelativeswouldbringgiftstothechildhavingtheirbirthday.Birthdaycardswithwarmwordsofgoodwishesareoftensent.Afeastisusuallygiventotheguestsandnoodles,extra-longtosymbolizelonglife,areservedinhonorofthebirthdaychild.Althoughthesetraditionshavebeenpracticedforgenerations,peoplecancreatebirthdaytraditionsoftheirown,whichIthinkshouldfocusonthanksgivingratherthanconsumption.Childrenshouldsetasidesometimethinkingwhattheyarethankfulforandwhattheycandoinreturn.Onealternativeistohelpwashthedishesatnightordootherchoresfortheirmothersbecauseitistheirmothers'"birth"day.(124words)编辑ppt五、可用于本题的一些好句子BirthdaypartiesarealwaysamongthehighlightsofeachyearforChinesestudents.Alotofpeopleareinvitedincludingneighbors,friendsandco-workerseveniftheydon'thavekidsaroundthebirthdaychild'sage.Adultscongratulatechildrenonbecomingayearolderbypresentingthemwithredenvelopesthatcontain"LuckyMoney."编辑pptWhenboysorgirlsturn10,theyhaveahugeparty.Onthedaywehaveafamilydinnerwithlotsofinvitedguests.Itdoesnotseemlikeabirthdaywithoutnoodles.Thecelebrationincludesnoodlesrepresentinglonglife.Thebirthdaychildwearsentirelynewclothestomarktheoccasion.Oneofthebest-receivedgiftsistheredenvelopeofmoney.LikeBritishstudents,themajorityofChinesechildrencelebratebirthdayswithacaketoppedwithlightedcandles.Whenthecakeissetbeforetheguestofhonor,heorsheissupposedtomakeawish,withouttellinganyonewhatitis.编辑pptAcakeismade,andcandlesareputontopbasedonhowoldthepersonis.Attheendofthe"happybirthday"song,thebirthdaypersonblowsoutthecandlesandallguestsapplaudorcheer.Thebirthdaychildcanchoosewheretoeatoutthatnight.Thekidsaretakenouttotheirdesiredplacewheretheycanbuyanythingtheywantwithinacertainpricerange.Ithinkweshouldcreateourowntraditions,makingbirthdaycelebrationmorespecialandunique.Thebirthdaypersongetspresentsbutalsomustgiveonepresenttotheentirefamily.Wecanvisitthehospitalwherewewereborn.Insteadofgivingmoneyasagift,parentscanbuytheirchildrenbooks.Eachyearadifferentthemeshouldbechosenforthebirthday.编辑ppt六、评价与指导1.英语书面表达的题型从过去详细的中文提纲，慢慢演化为简洁的图画列表，到今天某一话题下的自由表达，走过了20多年的道路。本年度的书面表达半开放的命题方式，既是对新课程理念的响应，也是20多年探索的最新选择，应该说这一步并非是试探或偶然，而是走得非常坚决。编辑ppt2．开放或半开放的作文模式，写作容易落入俗套，因此这种题型要挑战我们过去英语作文只关注语言表达的狭隘思维，转而更多地去关注新的主意甚至是立意。“教师范文”中的…becauseitistheirmothers'"birth"day一句，就是很好的“主意（理由）”，是寻常作文中不易发现的亮点。如果能够提出新鲜的主意，如Wecanvisitthehospitalwherewewereborn等，相信可以赢得更多的赞赏分。然而新鲜的主意，并非能天上掉得下来，而是要仰仗大量的阅读和输入。越开放的作文题目，越要求平时有大量的阅读经历。课堂上积极回应教师的brainstorming、mindmap等任务，认真倾听同学发言也不无裨益。编辑ppt3.开放或半开放的作文模式，题干通常比较简洁，因此要更加注意审题。在本例中，同学们比较容易忽略“更有意义”、“理由”等信息。忽略前者，容易导致思想内容不够积极。比如有同学说：Wecanplaytricksonthebirthdayperson，或者：kissingisthebestwaybecauseitdoesn’tcostmuch，就有调侃的意味，不够恰当。忽略后者，容易导致文章内容不够充实，比如有同学说Weshouldsaythankstoourparentsandgivethempresentsinstead，接着就嘎然而止，缺乏了细致性和丰富性。编辑ppt一、故事或人物介绍

第二章美国学生习作赏析编辑pptFire!（ByRebekah,Grade5,Homeschooled,Dillsboro,Indiana,USA）

"Fire!Fire!"someoneyelledfromacrossthestreet.IlookednextdoortoseemybestfriendSarah'shouseonfire!Soonabigcrowdhadgatheredtowatchthehouseburn.Itwas3:30AM.Thefiretrucksweren'teventhereyet.Iwondered“WasSarahok?Whatwashappeninginthehousethattooksolong?”ThenextthingIknewwasrunninguptoSarah'shouse.AtthatmomentsomeonewasrunningoutandIcouldseeitwasJohn,Sarah'solderbrother.EveryonewasoutbutSarah.Thenitwas7:30AMandeveryonewasstartingtogohomeandthefiretruckshadcomeandgone.IhadtogobeforeitwasoversoIdidn'tseeanything.Thenextmorningonthe11:00o'clocknewstheyweretalkingaboutthefirethenightbeforeanditsaidthatKaye,Sarah'slittlesister,washurt!TheyalsosaidthatSarahdiedsavinghersister.ThatwasaweekagoandIjustgotbackfromSarah'sfuneral(葬礼),andIhopeonedaytoseeheragain.

编辑ppt二、事件

1．TerrorismOneTuesday,Iwokeup,gotdressedandhadmybreakfast.Iwenttoschool,thinkingitwouldbejustanotherboringday,butIsawthattheclasseswerenotlinedup.Everyonewascrowdedinside.Why?"Didyouhearthenews?"Dani,myfriend,asked."Whatnews?"Iresponded."AbouttheWorldTradeCenter."IdidnotknowwhattheWorldTradeCenterwas,andIamstillnottoofamiliarwithit.ItriedactingasifIknewwhathewastalkingabout."Whathappened?"Iasked."Itgotbombed,"saidDani."Isn'titsad?""Yeah,"Isaid,stillnotknowingwhathewastalkingabout.Whenthebellrangeverybodywentintothelibrary.Theprincipaltalkedtotheclassesabouttheattacks.Theneverybodywenttotheirnormalclass.MinewasP.E.BeforeIknewit,schoolwascanceledfortherestoftheday.IwasprettysadwhenIgottoknowmoreaboutthenews.ButIdidn’tunderstandwhymyschoolclosed.Ithoughtthatschoolwasasafeplacetobe.(182words)编辑ppt三、地点或情况介绍

1．MallofAmericaWhenwearrivedinBlaine,weheadedstraighttoMallofAmerica.ItwasthebiggestmallIhaveeverseeninmylife.ItmustbetwentytimesthesizeofOakView,Ithought!Wewerereallyhighup.Whenmyfamilysteppedthroughthedoors,Ilostmybreath.Itwasgigantic!Icouldnotbelieveit!Therewerestoresafterstores.Ihadneverseensomanystoresinonelittlesectionofthemall."Wow!"Isaid."Thisisahugeindooramusementpark!"Aswewalkedthroughtobuytickets,wesawrides,games,food,toys,andclothes.Then,attheticketstandIsawmysoccerteammateKelley.Iyelled"Hey,Kelley."Wesaid,"Hi"andourfamiliesstartedtalking,whileourdadsboughtthetickets.Wewentonalltheridestogether,butIskippedthree.MybrotherwantedtogoshoppingandsodidI,sowesaidgood-byetoKelleyandhisfamily.Wespentthreehoursshoppinganddidnotevengetthrough1/8ofthestore.Then,wehadtogobacktothehotel.IhadafantasticdayandIwillneverforgetit.（198words）

编辑ppt1．TheRollerCoaster(云霄飞车)(ByJustin,Grade7,MasonMiddleSchool,Waterford,Michigan,USA)Beep...Beep...,Iwokeup,hitthealarmclockandrusheddownthehalltomydad’sroomandtriedtowakehimup."Dadwakeup!It's8:30.We’vegottohurryandgetready!"ItwasabrightandsunnyThursdaymorning.ThereasonwewereinsuchabigrushwasthatwehadwokenupahalfhourlaterthanweweresupposedtoandweweregoingtotheChildren’sPalace.Bythetimewegotreadyitwas9:15.Wewereoffassoonaswecould.Duringthe20-minutecarrideIlistenedtomyCDplayer.Wewerefinallythere.Irantotheentranceandwaitedformydad.Wewaitedinlineforahalfanhourbeforewegotonarollercoasteranditwasawesome!Weracedaroundthetrack.Itfeltlikemyheartwasgoingtoexplodebecauseoftheexcitement!ThatwasoneofthecoolestrollercoastersI'veeverbeenon.Afterwegotoff,Iknewthatthatwasmyfavoriterollercoaster.(186words)四、活动编辑ppt五、观点

1.HowtobeaFourthGraderIamafourthgradestudentinFlorida.Iwouldliketosharewithyoumyexperiencebeingafourthgrader.Isthereanythirdgradestudentwhowantstoknowhowtobeabletopassfourthgrade?Well,youshouldreadthis.Ifyoudon'treadthis,youmightflunkoutoffourthgrade.Tobeginwith,beforeyoucanpassfourthgrade,youhavetolearnhowtobeagoodwriter.Especiallyifyouwouldliketogetagoodgradeonyourreportcard,youhavetokeeppracticingyourwriting.Believeitornot,therearemanywritingtestsinfourthgrade,suchastheFloridaStateWritingTest,inwhichyouhavetowritefiveparagraphsandfinishinforty-fiveminutes.Anotherreasonwhywritingissoimportantisbecausewithgoodwriting,youcanexpressyourideaswell.Thiswillhelpyouwhenyouworkonaschoolproject.Secondly,youhavetobeorganizedwhenyouareinfourthgrade.Forexampleifyouareorganized,thenyoucouldfindyourbooks,homework,someschoolpapersandfoldersrightaway.Also,youwouldnotwastetoomuchtimelookingforyourbooksorpencilsinamessydesk.Forthisreason,youwillhaveaprettyorganizeddeskandnotloseanythingsoeasily,sinceyouareanorganizedperson.编辑pptAnotherimportantthingyouneedtodoinfourthgradeistolistentoyourteacherallthetime,evenifyouthinkthatyouareaverysmartstudent.Everyteacherlikesstudentswhopayattention.Thestudentwhopaysattentionandlistenstotheteacherusuallyknowswhattodoandhowtodoalltheschoolprojectsorhomeworkthefirsttimethedirectionsaregivenbytheteacher.Ialwaysfollowmyteacher'sinstructionintheclassroom.Thelastthingyouwillneedtodointhefourthgradeistomakeagoodplanandtostudyyourhomeworkeverydayafterschool,soyouwillbereadyfortheschoolexaminationanytime.Ithinkthatagoodstudentshouldnotplayallthetime.Agoodstudentshouldnotwatchtoomuchtelevisionathome.Youshouldprepareforalessoneveryday.Inotherwords,youfinishyourstudyfirst;thenyoucanplaywithyourfriendsorgotoasleep-overbirthdayparty.Nowyouknowthatitisnottooeasytobeafourthgrader,butifyouhavereadthisandfollowmyadvice,Ibelievethatyoushouldnothaveanyproblemsinfourthgrade,andyouwillbeabletopassfourthgradeinanyfourthgradeteacher'sclass.Ihopeyouwillenjoyyourfourthgrade,andIhopeyouwillbeagreatfourthgradestudent.(471words)编辑ppt六、校园生活1．MyFirstWeekofFifthGradeOnthefirstdayoffifthgrade,Iwasverynervousandexcited.Youknowhoweveryonetriestomakeagoodimpressiononthefirstday?Well,ittookmeatleastonewholehourtodomyhair!OnMonday,wewerequitebusygettingadjustedtoournewyearofschool.Welearnedaboutwhatthefifthgradeteacherscalled"communityservice."Acommunityserviceiswhatfifthgradestudentsmustdowhentheygetintrouble.Someofthejobsincludepullingweeds,sweepingthesidewalks,orpickinguprocksfromtheoldsoccerfield.Onthesecondday,westartedtoputournotebookstogether.Thatwaswhatwedidmostoftheday.Afewdayslaterwestartedtoplantatree.Nothingtoit-justabitofhardwork.EveryMondayafterschool,youcansignuptogotoasinginggroup.Inthespringwegettotraveloutofthestate.Thetripswereablast.SingingandtravelingiswhatGrade4isallabout!ThefirstweekofschoolletmeseehowmuchfunIwouldhaveintheyearahead.I'mlookingforwardtotherestofmyyearinfifthgrade.编辑ppt1.Boysandgirls,MayIhaveyourattention,please?Ihaveanannouncementtomake.Year5'sschooltripnexthalf-term,onFriday,5thJuly,willbeavisittoKentwellHallinSuffolk,atripbackintimetothesixteenthcentury.Wewillleaveschoolpromptlyat8a.m.andexpecttoreturnby6p.m.WevisitedKentwelllastyearand,althoughitisalongdayandmoreexpensivethantheusualschooltrips,itisawonderfulexperienceforthechildrenandwellworththeextramoneyandthelongjourney.EveryonewilldressupinTudorcostume,whichisverysimpleanddetailsareattachedtohelp!Thechildrenwillalsolearnhowtospeakaspeopledidin1539andwillexperiencelifeasitwasatKentwellinthelastyearsofHenryVIII‘sreign(统治).That’sall.Thankyou.(146words)七、通知、信件等文件编辑ppt第三章短文改错考题预测及说明

短文改错考查考生对语言的评价能力．测试考生发现、判断和纠正语篇错误的能力．要求学生有扎实的语言基本功．短文改错的主要目的不仅在于考查考生是否能识别错误，还在于通过要求纠正错误，考查考生是否正确熟练地掌握了语言基本规则．用学过的语言知识来监察语言的输出就是一种语言的能力．做短文改错题时，不公要注意单纯独立的语法或词的错误，还要注意篇章上的错误．短文改错常见如下错误有多词、缺词、错词等，但１０行中有一行是正确的．提高改错能力的关键：一是基本概念清楚；二要阅读细心；三要做一定量练习．编辑ppt

短文改错不是语法改错，更不是单选的变种，它重在考查考生在语篇阅读中的校验能力．这方面能力强，短文写作中的错误就少．一般来说，短文写的非常好的同学的短文改错能力也较强．近年来短文改错有如下特点：(1)语言材料取自于学生习作或类似学生的习作．(2)是常见话题或学生身边事．(3)选篇的难度与学生高三学段应有的难度相当．(4)语言简单易懂．(5)绝少生僻的语言现象或过于繁难的语句结构．编辑ppt中国人说话重复很多，代词用得不如英文多。比如，我们说“男孩有男孩的特点，女孩有女孩的特点”，不会说成“男孩有他们的特点，女孩有她们的。”而英文却通常是这么说的：Boyshavetheirtraits,girlstheirs.因此，我们写英文很可能在代词方面出错误。语法错误_________第一节代词错误（4－1）第一节代词错误1.Beforeleavingtheclassroom,weusuallycleantheteacher'sdeskfirstandourlater.（提示：注意物主代词的用法。名词性物主代词有：mine,yours,his,hers,ours,theirs,its等。这句话中our应是ours表示ourdesks。）编辑ppt2.Everyoneinourdormitorytakestheroomasthesecondhome.语法错误_________第一节代词错误（4－2）3.Iamlookingforaflat.I’dlikeitwithagarden.（提示：everyone与everyone是不同的，everyone应与of短语连用，如：everyoneofus等。）（提示：英语中用以指代前面出现的单数名词的代词较多，如it,one,that等，而犹以it最为常见。学生往往倾向于用it指代任何单数名词。此处的it，实是指不确定的某一公寓（aflat）,应用one来指代为佳。）编辑ppt语法错误_________第一节代词错误（4－3）4.Eachboyhashimself’sfavoritetoys.（提示：反身代词表达“自己”的概念。学生易根据名词所有格的构成规则，生造出himself’s的表达方式，这是大错特错的。此句宜改为:

Eachboyhashisownfavoritetoys.

Eachboyhasfavoritetoysofhisown.

)编辑ppt语法错误_________第一节代词错误（4－4）5.Youcansitatbothendsoftheboat.（提示：英语中有both,either,neither等词，都是对“两个”的概念作出不同的陈述。中国学生易将“两”的概念无限放大，而忽略了他们各自的内在意义，如both表示“两者全部”；either表示“两者中取一”。根据“一个人在同一时间只能坐在一个地方”的基本常识，此句应改为：Youcansitateitherendoftheboat.）编辑ppt

中文句子结构是意合，也就是说词与词在意义上合成一句话。英文的句子结构则是形合，它用连词合成句子。比如：中文说“他不来，我不去”。英文不可以说Hedoesn'tcome,Iwon'tgo，而应说成Iwon'tgountil/before/unless