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CONTENTS目录概要写作评分标准及得分要点01概要写作得分技巧02CONTENTS目录概要写作评分标准及得分要点01概要写1CONTENTS目录概要写作评分标准及得分要点01概要写作得分技巧02CONTENTS目录概要写作评分标准及得分要点01概要写作得2
评分标准档次内容语言A55B44C33D22E11F00评分标准3评分标准1.本题总分为10分,其中内容5分,语言5分。2.评分时应注意的主要方面:内容要点、信息
呈现的连贯性和准确性。3.词数超过60,酌情扣分。评分细则评分标准1.本题总分为10分,其中内容5分,语言5分。4内容部分能准确、全面地概括文章主旨大意,并涵盖主要信息。语言部分A.能用自己的语言连贯、正确地表述。A档给分要求评分标准内容部分A档给分要求评分标准5Moustache(胡子)
forCash“Movember”,astheannualeventisknown,seesmenincountriesincludingtheUK,USandAustraliagrowouttheirfacialhairwhilecollectingsponsorshipmoneyfromfriends,familyandcolleagues,withthemoneygoingtocancercharities.Themonthofnoshavingbeganunofficiallyin2003,whenapairofmenfromAustraliapersuadedtheirfamilytojointhemingrowingamoustacheinordertoencouragementogetthemselvescheckedforcancer,whichisseenasdistastefulbysomemales.Ayearlater,thegroupdecidedtosetuptheMovemberFoundation,askingfriendsandcolleaguestoofferdonationsofmoneytosupporttheirefforts,andraisedamassiveA$54,000whichwassharedbetweenanumberofhealthprojects.Withthanksmostlikelytosocialmedia,Movembersoonwentglobalandthefoundationnowoperatesworldwide,havingraisedover£440millionsince2004.Theeffectsofthefundraisingarewide-reaching,whichhadmadeasignificantdiscoveryinthetreatmentofcancer.Theissueofsomemenbeingtooself-willedtovisittheirdoctorforacheckup,orperhapsbeingraisedinacultureof“toughitout”,hasledsomemalestoneglecttheirhealth,whichmaymeanitcouldbetoolateifsomethingpotentiallydeadlydiddevelop.However,Movemberishelpingtobreakdowntheshameofmalehealthbymakingitmoreaccessible,meaningthatmenaremorelikelytovisittheirdoctors.Theyfoundawaytoappealtomeninawaythatothercampaignsjustdon’t–withasortofblokey①jokiness.
blokey:behavinginawaythatissupposedtobetypicalofmen,especiallymenenjoyingthemselvesinagroup.”“Itssuccessisduetoitswaytohavemenvisittheirdoctorswithblokeyjokiness.(要点5)MengrowmoustacheformoneyusedforcancercharitiesinMovember.(要点1)In2003,twomenstartedMovember.(要点2)In2004,thefoundationwassetup.(要点3)
Sincethenithasgoneglobalandraisedlotsofmoney.(要点4)Moustache(胡子)forCash“Mo6Movemberisanannualeventwhenmenstopshavingtoraisemoneyforcancercharities.SomeAustraliamenfirststartedittoencouragementodocancerchecksregardlessofdiscrimination.Thankstosocialmedia,Movemberspreadsglobally,resultinginadvancementincancertreatment.TheaimofMovemberistoprovideaneasyaccesstocheckupsformen.(58)3+4=71“Movember”,anannualeventstartedinAustraliain2003appealstomenstogrowoutmoustachetoraisemoneyforcancercharities.Withthehelpofmediaitspreadsworldwideandhelphumanstreatcancer.Movemberhelpstobreakdownmen'sshameofvisitingdoctorsthroughblokeyjokinesstoletmentoconcernabouttheirhealth.(56)4+3=72评分范例语言连贯语法错误缺少要点2和要点3缺少要点3内容部分B.能准确概括文章主旨大意,但遗漏个别主要信息。(4分)C.能概括文章主旨大意,但遗漏部分主要信息。(3分)语言部分B.能用自己的语言较连贯、正确地表述,但有个别语言错误。(4分)C.基本能用自己的语言连贯、正确地表述,但连贯性较差,且有少量不影响表意的语言错误。(3分)Movemberisanannualeventwh7“Movember”isanannualeventencouragingmentogrowouttheirmoustachewhilecollectingmoneyforcancercharities.TheeventisinitiallylaunchedbyapairofmenwhosetuptheMovemberFoundationayearlater,whichhasraisedmuchmoneyandoperatesworldwidenow.Movembercanhelpmanbreakingdowntheshameofmalehealthbymakingitmoreaccessible,whichishelpfultocancertreatment.(68)4+3-1=63“Movember”seesmengrowouttheirfacialhair.Theissueofsomemenbeingraisedinacultureof“toughitout”hasledsomewomentoneglecttheirhealth.However,Movemberishelpingtobreakdowntheshameofmalehealth.Theyfoundawaythatmenenjoyingthemselvesinagrouptoappealtomen.(57)1+1=24评分范例字数限制内容及语言缺少要点5只有要点1和要点5部分关键词没有用自己的话表述内容部分E.几乎不能概括文章的主旨大意,未涉及文中有意义的相关信息。(1分)语言部分E.几乎不能用自己的语言连贯、正确地表述。(1分)“Movember”isanannualevent8CONTENTS目录概要写作评分标准及得分要点01概要写作得分技巧02CONTENTS目录概要写作评分标准及得分要点01概要写作得9Concise!!!1Determinethetypeofwritingandidentifythetopicaswellastheauthor'spurpose.Dividethepassage&summarizethemainideaofeachpart.Determine&Divide3Addsometransitionalwordstomakethepassagesmooth.Checkthesummary.(tense,spell,etc.)Add&Check2Highlightthekeyinformation.Rewritethesamemeaning.(usingyourownwords,phrasesorstructures)Highlight&
RewriteSummaryStepsConcise!!!1Determinethetype10030102衔接(照应、替代、省略、连接和词汇衔接)逻辑同义转换:近义词、同义词等替换句子重构:调整词类、时态、语态等语言提炼(删除细节、删除具体例子、避免重复)整合要点SkillsofSummaryWriting030102衔接逻辑同义转换:近义词、同义词等替换语言提炼11Part1段落概括Part1段落概括12PRACTICE1However,moreresearchiscalledfortoensureitssecurity.Butmoreresearchisneededtoassureitssafety.(2017崇明区一模)同义转换PRACTICE1However,moreresear13PRACTICE2Peoplereadpoemsforenjoymentaswellasacademicpurposes.Whydowereadpoetry?Firstobviousone:becauseweenjoyit.Theonlyotherreasonisforacademicpurposes,andthat'snotwhythisishere.(2017奉贤区二模)H&RA&CPeoplereadpoemsforenjoyment.Peoplereadpoemsforacademicpurposes.aswellas/and调整词类PRACTICE2Peoplereadpoemsfo14PRACTICE3Thebeststrategytoachievegoodresultsintheexamistostudybooksearly.So,it'stheexamtimeagain—haveyoudonethenecessaryworktogetgoodmarks?Sleepingwiththetextbookunderthepillowinthehopethatknowledgewillbemagicallyabsorbedintoyourbrainasyousleepdoesn'twork.Thebeststrategyistospaceyourpracticeout,ratherthancraw(死记硬背)italltogether.Itmeanshitthebooksearly!
(2017虹口区一模)H&RA&Ctoachievegoodresultstostudybooksearly提炼(删除细节、删除具体例子、避免重复)PRACTICE3Thebeststrategyto15PRACTICE4Aninterestingstorymotivates/inspiresustoreadcontinuously,foritreflectsourreallives.Agoodstoryencouragesustoturnthenextpageandreadmore.Wewanttofindoutwhathappensnextandwhatthemaincharactersdoandwhattheysaytoeachother.Wemayfeelexcited,sad,afraid,angryorreallyhappy.Thisisbecausetheexperienceofreadingorlisteningtoastoryismuchmorelikelytomakeus'feel'thatwearepartofthestory,too.Justlikeinour'real'lives,wemightloveorhatedifferentcharactersinthestory.Perhapswerecognizeourselvesorothersinsomeofthem.Perhapswehavesimilarproblems.(2017宝山区一模)H&RA&CforAninterestingstorymotivates/inspiresustoreadcontinuouslyitreflectsourreallives提炼(删除细节、删除具体例子、避免重复)PRACTICE4Aninterestingstory16PRACTICE5AstudyshowsworkstillupsetspeoplethoughcompaniesaretryingtomakeworkplacesfunInordertomaketheiremployeeshappier,companiesaroundtheworldhavebeenbusyinstallingplayequipmentintheworkplace.Tablefootball,computergamesandactionfigureshavebecomecommoninsomeworkplaces.Despiteallthiseffort,unfortunately,workstillmakespeopleunhappy.AccordingtoastudybytheLondonSchoolofEconomics,theplacewherepeoplefeelmostmiserableiswork.(2017崇明区二模)D&DH&RA&Cthoughcompaniesaretryingtomakeworkplacesfunworkstillupsetspeople调整词类PRACTICE5Astudyshowsworks17Part1不同体裁概要写作Part1不同体裁概要写作18概括的形式
文体主题句支撑句议论文记叙文说明文文章论点(一句)文章论据(两三句)故事的写作目的/主题(一句)故事大意(两三句)说明的对象/观点/现象解释/分述概括的形式文章论点(一句)文章论据(两三句)故事的写作目的19Example1Gettingupearlyhasbeenregardedasagoodhabitsinceancienttimes.Manyyearsago,peoplethoughtthatifwewenttobedearlyandgetupearly,wewouldbeenergeticthewholeday.Therefore,gettingupearlyisofgreatimportancetousall.Infact,morningisthebesttimeofaday.Inthemorning,theairisthefreshestandpeopleareusuallyinthebestconditions.Manyofusmayhavetheexperiencesthatwememorizesomethingsmorequicklyandaccuratelyinthemorningthananyothertimeoftheday.Ifwedosomemorningexerciseoronlytakeashortwalkinthemorning,wecanbuildourbodiesandbecomemuchhealthier.Alsowewillhaveenoughtimetomakeaplanandgetreadyforourworkorstudyofthedayifwegetupearly.However,ifwegetuplate,wewillprobablyhavetodoeverythinginagreathurry.Letusremembergettingupearlyisagoodhabitandtryourbesttokeepit.Ifwesticktogettingupearlyeveryday,wewillcertainlybenefitalotfromit.D&D议论文D&DExample1D&D议论文D&D2021论点
论据议论文概括的形式3结论
21论点论据议论文概括的形式3结论21Gettingupearlyhasbeenregardedasagoodhabitsinceancienttimes.Manyyearsago,peoplethoughtthatifwewenttobedearlyandgetupearly,wewouldbeenergeticthewholeday.Therefore,gettingupearlyisofgreatimportancetousall.Infact,morningisthebesttimeofaday.Inthemorning,theairisthefreshestandpeopleareusuallyinthebestconditions.Manyofusmayhavetheexperiencesthatwememorizesomethingsmorequicklyandaccuratelyinthemorningthananyothertimeoftheday.Ifwedosomemorningexerciseoronlytakeashortwalkinthemorning,wecanbuildourbodiesandbecomemuchhealthier.Alsowewillhaveenoughtimetomakeaplanandgetreadyforourworkorstudyofthedayifwegetupearly.However,ifwegetuplate,wewillprobablyhavetodoeverythinginagreathurry.Letusremembergettingupearlyisagoodhabitandtryourbesttokeepit.Ifwesticktogettingupearlyeveryday,wewillcertainlybenefitalotfromit.D&D议论文D&D论点论据1论据2论据3结论Gettingupearlyhasbeen22H&RGettingupearlyhasbeenregardedasagoodhabitsinceancienttimes.Manyyearsago,peoplethoughtthatifwewenttobedearlyandgetupearly,wewouldbeenergeticthewholeday.Therefore,gettingupearlyisofgreatimportancetousall.Infact,morningisthebesttimeofaday.Inthemorning,theairisthefreshestandpeopleareusuallyinthebestconditions.Manyofusmayhavetheexperiencesthatwememorizesomethingsmorequicklyandaccuratelyinthemorningthananyothertimeoftheday.Ifwedosomemorningexerciseoronlytakeashortwalkinthemorning,wecanbuildourbodiesandbecomemuchhealthier.Alsowewillhaveenoughtimetomakeaplanandgetreadyforourworkorstudyofthedayifwegetupearly.However,ifwegetuplate,wewillprobablyhavetodoeverythinginagreathurry.Letusremembergettingupearlyisagoodhabitandtryourbesttokeepit.Ifwesticktogettingupearlyeveryday,wewillcertainlybenefitalotfromit.gettingupearlyinthemorningisagoodhabit(删除细节、删除具体例子)abettermemory(同义转换、调整词类)betterpreparationfortheday(同义转换、调整词类)healthierbody(句子重构)
benefitusalotHighlightthekeyinformationandrewrite论点论据1论据2论据3结论H&RGettingupearlyhasbe23A&Cgettingupearlyinthemorningisagoodhabitabettermemorybetterpreparationforthedayhealthierbody议论文benefitusalotgettingupearlyisagoodhabitandtryourbesttokeepitThepassagemainlytellsusgettingupearlyinthemorningisagoodhabitthatwillbenefitusalot.Addsometransitionalwords删除,避免重复论点
论据结论Itenablesustohaveabettermemory,healthierbodyandbetterpreparationfortheday.A&Cgettingupearlyinthemor2421论点
论据议论文概括的形式3结论
gettingupearlyinthemorningisagoodhabitabettermemorybetterpreparationforthedayhealthierbodybenefitusalotgettingupearlyisagoodhabitandtryourbesttokeepit
Possibleanswer:Thepassagemainlytellsusgettingupearlyinthemorningisagoodhabitthatwillbenefitusalot.Itenablesustohaveabettermemory,healthierbodyandbetterpreparationfortheday.21论点论据议论文概括的形式3结论gettingup25高考概要写作专题课件26Concise!!!1Determinethetypeofwritingandidentifythetopicaswellastheauthor'spurpose.Dividethepassage&summarizethemainideaofeachpart.Determine&Divide3Addsometransitionalwordstomakethepassagesmooth.Checkthesummary.(Tense,spell,etc.)Add&Check2Highlightthekeyinformation.Rewritethesamemeaning.(usingyourownwords,phrasesorstructures)Highlight&
RewriteSummaryStepsConcise!!!1Determinethetype27Example2HopeNothinginmylifehadpreparedforwhatIhadtodo.Choosingmywordscarefully,andfightingtostaycalm,Itoldmy4-year-olddaughterthathergrandmotherhadsufferedastroke(中风),thatshewasunconscious,andthatthedoctorssaidshewouldprobablyneverwakeup.Asshemovedclosertome,Amelialookedatme,eyesbright,andsaid,“MaybeGrandmawillbeokay.““Maybeshewill,“Isaid,keepingbackthetears.ButIknewbetter.IwasflyinguptoMytleBeach,SouthCarolina,fromourFloridahomeinthemorningtosaygood-byetomymom.Therestofthatawfulweek,Ijoinedmybrotherandfathersittingbymymother’ssideinthehospitalroom.Iheldherhandandtalkedtoher.Itoldherthatwestillneededher.Itoldherthatitwasn’ttimetoleaveyet.ItoldherhowmuchIlovedher.AndItoldherthatherlittlegranddaughter,Amelia,believedthatshe’dgetbetter.Thedoctors,withallyearsoftrainingandexperience,offerednohopeforrecovery.Thedamagewassimplytooextensive.Acoupleofweekslater,anoddthinghappened.Momwokeup!Andthenshepreservedthroughalongandtoughprocessofrestorationtohealth,duringwhichshehadtolearntowalk,read,andwritealloveragain,andeventuallyreturnedhometoDad.Theonlyonewhowasn’tshockedwasAmelia.Thedoctorscouldn’texplainit.Ameliadidn’tneedto.Hopecameasnaturallytoheraspossible.Sowhyarewesoafraidtohopesometimes?Maybeit’sbecauseovertheyears,life’sdisappointmentscanturnustodisillusionment(理想破灭).Howmanytimeshaveyouheardsomeonesay,“Hopeforthebest,expecttheworst?”That’snotreallyhopeatall.Hopeisbeingabletolookatourworldwithallofthejoyandwonderofachild.D&D记叙文D&DExample2HopeD&D记叙文D&D28记叙文概括的形式1叙事2结果3意图(whodidwhat)记叙文概括的形式1叙事2结果3意图(whodidwhat29HopeNothinginmylifehadpreparedforwhatIhadtodo.Choosingmywordscarefully,andfightingtostaycalm,Itoldmy4-year-olddaughterthathergrandmotherhadsufferedastroke(中风),thatshewasunconscious,andthatthedoctorssaidshewouldprobablyneverwakeup.Asshemovedclosertome,Amelialookedatme,eyesbright,andsaid,“MaybeGrandmawillbeokay.““Maybeshewill,“Isaid,keepingbackthetears.ButIknewbetter.IwasflyinguptoMytleBeach,SouthCarolina,fromourFloridahomeinthemorningtosaygood-byetomymom.Therestofthatawfulweek,Ijoinedmybrotherandfathersittingbymymother’ssideinthehospitalroom.Iheldherhandandtalkedtoher.Itoldherthatwestillneededher.Itoldherthatitwasn’ttimetoleaveyet.ItoldherhowmuchIlovedher.AndItoldherthatherlittlegranddaughter,Amelia,believedthatshe’dgetbetter.Thedoctors,withallyearsoftrainingandexperience,offerednohopeforrecovery.Thedamagewassimplytooextensive.Acoupleofweekslater,anoddthinghappened.Momwokeup!Andthenshepreservedthroughalongandtoughprocessofrestorationtohealth,duringwhichshehadtolearntowalk,read,andwritealloveragain,andeventuallyreturnedhometoDad.Theonlyonewhowasn’tshockedwasAmelia.Thedoctorscouldn’texplainit.Ameliadidn’tneedto.Hopecameasnaturallytoheraspossible.Sowhyarewesoafraidtohopesometimes?Maybeit’sbecauseovertheyears,life’sdisappointmentscanturnustodisillusionment(理想破灭).Howmanytimeshaveyouheardsomeonesay,“Hopeforthebest,expecttheworst?”That’snotreallyhopeatall.Hopeisbeingabletolookatourworldwithallofthejoyandwonderofachild.D&D记叙文D&D叙事结果意图HopeD&D记叙文D&D叙事结果意图30H&RHopeNothinginmylifehadpreparedforwhatIhadtodo.Choosingmywordscarefully,andfightingtostaycalm,Itoldmy4-year-olddaughterthathergrandmotherhadsufferedastroke(中风),thatshewasunconscious,andthatthedoctorssaidshewouldprobablyneverwakeup.Asshemovedclosertome,Amelialookedatme,eyesbright,andsaid,“MaybeGrandmawillbeokay.““Maybeshewill,“Isaid,keepingbackthetears.ButIknewbetter.IwasflyinguptoMytleBeach,SouthCarolina,fromourFloridahomeinthemorningtosaygood-byetomymom.Therestofthatawfulweek,Ijoinedmybrotherandfathersittingbymymother’ssideinthehospitalroom.Iheldherhandandtalkedtoher.Itoldherthatwestillneededher.Itoldherthatitwasn’ttimetoleaveyet.ItoldherhowmuchIlovedher.AndItoldherthatherlittlegranddaughter,Amelia,believedthatshe’dgetbetter.Thedoctors,withallyearsoftrainingandexperience,offerednohopeforrecovery.Thedamagewassimplytooextensive.(whodidwhat)mylittledaughter,Amelia,fullofhopeaboutmymother’sstrokeDoctorswerepessimisticaboutmymother’sstrokeourfamilygatheredtobidfarewelltoherinhospitalIpassedonAmelia’shope要点整合同义转换叙事HighlightthekeyinformationandrewriteH&RHope(whodidwhat)mylittl31H&RHopeAcoupleofweekslater,anoddthinghappened.Momwokeup!Andthenshepreservedthroughalongandtoughprocessofrestorationtohealth,duringwhichshehadtolearntowalk,read,andwritealloveragain,andeventuallyreturnedhometoDad.Theonlyonewhowasn’tshockedwasAmelia.Thedoctorscouldn’texplainit.Ameliadidn’tneedto.Hopecameasnaturallytoheraspossible.Sowhyarewesoafraidtohopesometimes?Maybeit’sbecauseovertheyears,life’sdisappointmentscanturnustodisillusionment(理想破灭).Howmanytimeshaveyouheardsomeonesay,“Hopeforthebest,expecttheworst?”That’snotreallyhopeatall.Hopeisbeingabletolookatourworldwithallofthejoyandwonderofachild.sherecoveredshecamebackhomeafteraperiodofrestorationHopedoesbringpeopleintroubleamazement.同义转换结果意图HighlightthekeyinformationandrewriteH&RHopesherecoveredshecame32A&Cmylittledaughter,Amelia,fullofhopeaboutmymother’sstrokeDoctorswerepessimisticaboutmymother’sstrokeourfamilygatheredtobidfarewelltoherinhospitalIpassedonAmelia’shopesherecoveredDoctorswerepessimisticaboutmymother’sstrokewhilemylittledaughter,Amelia,fullofhope.IpassedonAmelia’shopewhenourfamilygatheredtobidfarewelltoherinhospital.AddsometransitionalwordsIncredibly,sherecoveredandcamebackhomeafteraperiodofrestoration.叙事
结果意图Hopedoesbringpeopleintroubleamazement.shecamebackhomeafteraperiodofrestorationA&Cmylittledaughter,Amelia,33记叙文概括的形式(whodidwhat)Doctorswerepessimisticaboutmymother’sstrokewhilemylittledaughter,Amelia,fullofhope.IpassedonAmelia’shopewhenourfamilygatheredtobidfarewelltoherinhospital.Incredibly,sherecoveredandcamebackhomeafteraperiodofrestoration.Hopedoesbringpeopleintroubleamazement.
Possibleanswer:Doctorswerepessimisticaboutmymother’sstrokewhilemylittledaughter,Amelia,fullofhope.IpassedonAmelia’shopewhenourfamilygatheredtobidfarewelltoherinhospital.Incredibly,sherecoveredandcamebackhomeafteraperiodofrestoration.EveryonewasastonishedexceptAmelia.Hopedoesbringpeopleintroubleamazement.(55words)1叙事2结果3意图记叙文概括的形式(whodidwhat)Doc34Example3Aroundtheworld,musictherapy(疗法)isbeingusedtotreatdifferentmedicalconditionsandillnesses.Someofthewayspeopleusemusictherapyaretoreducepain,suchasinchildbirthorduringcancertreatments,ortostimulatebrainactivityafteraninjuryormoneyloss.Musictherapyhasalsobeensuccessfulinaidingchildrentoovercomedisabilities.Childrencanmovetheirbodieswiththemusicandstampalongtothebeat.
Whyismusicausefultherapy?Musicissoothingandrelaxing,butitalsostimulatesourbrains.Emotionallyandphysically,werespondtothesoundsofmusic.Butthecomplexityofmusic(thedifferenttempos,rhythms,melodiesandharmonies)provokes(激发)thebiggestresponse.Thus,classicalmusicismosttypicallyusedfortherapiesduetocomplexsoundsandpatterns.Althoughraporhiphopmightbefuntolistento,it’sunlikelythatsuchstylesofmusicwouldproducethesamekindoftherapeuticeffect.Playingamusicalinstrumentratherthansimplylisteningtomusiccanalsobetherapeuticforsomepeople,helpingrelievestressandanxiety.
Musichasbeenshowntoreducepainincancerpatientsbyincreasingthereleaseendorphins(内啡肽).Endorphinsarethebody’snaturalpainkillers,andwhenwelistentomusic,ourbrainsrespondbyreleasingthesenaturalpainkillers.Ithasalsobeenknowntocontributetothebraindevelopmentofthebabieswhohavejustbeenbornandevenbabiesstillinthemother’swomb.Certaintypesofmusichavealsobeenfoundtolowerbloodpressureandslowaperson’sheartrate.Manypeoplearehopefulthatmusiccouldreplacetheneedforsomemedications(药物)thatarenormallyusedtotreatcertainillnesses.Atpresent,musictherapyisusedinavarietyofsettingssuchashospitals,rehabilitationcenters,nursinghomes,daycares,andschools.
Althoughmusictherapyisnotyetconsideredamainstreamtreatment,itisrecognizedmoreandmoreasausefuladditiontotraditionaltreatment.Sonexttimeyouarefeelingloworstressedout,putonsomerelaxingmusicandletthemusichealyou.D&D说明文D&DExample3D&D说明文D&D35描写事物性质功用针对某个问题提出的解决方案或措施说明文概括的形式介绍某现象及其原因和结果对象+性质功用+利好问题+解决方法现象+原因+结果010203针对某个问题提出的解决方案或措施说明文概括的形式介绍某现象及36D&D说明文D&D现象原因结果Aroundtheworld,musictherapy(疗法)isbeingusedtotreatdifferentmedicalconditionsandillnesses.Someofthewayspeopleusemusictherapyaretoreducepain,suchasinchildbirthorduringcancertreatments,ortostimulatebrainactivityafteraninjuryormoneyloss.Musictherapyhasalsobeensuccessfulinaidingchildrentoovercomedisabilities.Childrencanmovetheirbodieswiththemusicandstampalongtothebeat.
Whyismusicausefultherapy?Musicissoothingandrelaxing,butitalsostimulatesourbrains.Emotionallyandphysically,werespondtothesoundsofmusic.Butthecomplexityofmusic(thedifferenttempos,rhythms,melodiesandharmonies)provokes(激发)thebiggestresponse.Thus,classicalmusicismosttypicallyusedfortherapiesduetocomplexsoundsandpatterns.Althoughraporhiphopmightbefuntolistento,it’sunlikelythatsuchstylesofmusicwouldproducethesamekindoftherapeuticeffectPlayingamusicalinstrumentratherthansimplylisteningtomusiccanalsobetherapeuticforsomepeople,helpingrelievestressandanxiety
Musichasbeenshowntoreducepainincancerpatientsbyincreasingthereleaseendorphins(内啡肽).Endorphinsarethebody’snaturalpainkillers,andwhenwelistentomusic,ourbrainsrespondbyreleasingthesenaturalpainkillers.Ithasalsobeenknowntocontributetothebraindevelopmentofthebabieswhohavejustbeenbornandevenbabiesstillinthemother’swomb.Certaintypesofmusichavealsobeenfoundtolowerbloodpressureandslowaperson’sheartrate.Manypeoplearehopefulthatmusiccouldreplacetheneedforsomemedications(药物)thatarenormallyusedtotreatcertainillnesses.Atpresent,musictherapyisusedinavarietyofsettingssuchashospitals,rehabilitationcenters,nursinghomes,daycares,andschools.
Althoughmusictherapyisnotyetconsideredamainstreamtreatment,itisrecognizedmoreandmoreasausefuladditiontotraditionaltreatment.Sonexttimeyouarefeelingloworstressedout,putonsomerelaxingmusicandletthemusichealyou.D&D说明文D&D现象原因结果Aroundthe37H&RAroundtheworld,musictherapy(疗法)isbeingusedtotreatdifferentmedicalconditionsandillnesses.Someofthewayspeopleusemusictherapyaretoreducepain,suchasinchildbirthorduringcancertreatments,ortostimulatebrainactivityafteraninjuryormoneyloss.Musictherapyhasalsobeensuccessfulinaidingchildrentoovercomedisabilities.Childrencanmovetheirbodieswiththemusicandstampalongtothebeat.Musictherapyisausefulwaytotreatillness.同义转换现象HighlightthekeyinformationandrewriteH&RAroundtheworld,music38H&RWhyismusicausefultherapy?Musicissoothingandrelaxing,butitalsostimulatesourbrains.Emotionallyandphysically,werespondtothesoundsofmusic.Butthecomplexityofmusic(thedifferenttempos,rhythms,melodiesandharmonies)provokes(激发)thebiggestresponse.Thus,classicalmusicismosttypicallyusedfortherapiesduetocomplexsoundsandpatterns.Althoughraporhiphopmightbefuntolistento,it’sunlikelythatsuchstylesofmusicwouldproducethesamekindoftherapeuticeffect.Playingamusicalinstrumentratherthansimplylisteningtomusiccanalsobetherapeuticforsomepeople,helpingrelievestressandanxiety.
Musichasbeenshowntoreducepainincancerpatientsbyincreasingthereleaseendorphins(内啡肽).Endorphinsarethebody’snaturalpainkillers,andwhenwelistentomusic,ourbrainsrespondbyreleasingthesenaturalpainkillers.Ithasalsobeenknowntocontributetothebraindevelopmentofthebabieswhohavejustbeenbornandevenbabiesstillinthemother’swomb.Certaintypesofmusichavealsobeenfoundtolowerbloodpressureandslowaperson’sheartrate.Manypeoplearehopefulthatmusiccouldreplacetheneedforsomemedications(药物)thatarenormallyusedtotreatcertainillnesses.Atpresent,musictherapyisusedinavarietyofsettingssuchashospitals,rehabilitationcenters,nursinghomes,daycares,andschools.
同义转换原因HighlightthekeyinformationandrewriteTheprincipleofmusictherapyistoincreasethereleaseofendorphinstohelptreatment.ourbraincanbestimulatedb
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