写作抢分-英语一第六节

2019考研英语（一）写作抢分班第六节五大必背范文之五微信公众号：王江涛微博：新东方王江涛一、真题透视：1、1995：DIRECTIONS:A)Title:The“ProjectHope”B)Timelimit:40minutesC)Wordlimit:120-150words(notincludingthegivenopeningsentence)D)YourcompositionshouldbebasedontheOUTLINEbelowandshouldstartwiththegivenopeningsentence:“Educationplaysaveryimportantroleinthemodernizationofourcountry.”E)YourcompositionmustbewrittenneatlyontheANSWERSHEET.OUTLINE:1.Presentsituation2.Necessityoftheproject3.Mysuggestion2、2001：Directions:Amongalltheworthyfeelingsofmankind,loveisprobablythenoblest,buteveryonehashisorherownunderstandingofit.Therehasbeenadiscussionrecentlyontheissueinanewspaper.Writeanessaytothenewspaperto1)Showyourunderstandingofthesymbolicmeaningofthepicturesbelow.2)Giveaspecificexample,and3)Giveyoursuggestionastothebestwaytoshowlove.3、2006小作文：Directions:YouwanttocontributetoProjectHopebyofferingfinancialaidtoachildinaremotearea.Writealettertothedepartmentconcerned,askingthemtohelpfindacandidate.Youshouldspecifywhatkindofchildyouwanttohelpandhowyouwillcarryoutyourplan.4、2013-2小作文：Directions:Supposeyourclassistoholdacharitysaleforkidsinneedofhelp.Writeyourclassmatesanemailto1)informthemaboutthedetails,and2)encouragethemtoparticipate.二、大作文五大必背范文之五：2001年真题(P.136)Directions:Amongalltheworthyfeelingsofmankind,loveisprobablythenoblest,buteveryonehashisorherownunderstandingofit.Therehasbeenadiscussionrecentlyontheissueinanewspaper.Writeanessaytothenewspaperto1)Showyourunderstandingofthesymbolicmeaningofthepicturesbelow.2)Giveaspecificexample,and3)Giveyoursuggestionastothebestwaytoshowlove.

第一段：意义阐释第一句：当我们用到“爱”这个词时，我们不仅仅指对异性的吸引，这是对这个词非常狭隘的解释。（让步，否定表层含义）Whenweusetheword“love”,wedonotsimplymeananattractiontoapersonoftheoppositesex,whichisaverynarrowdefinitionoftheword.

第二句：主题句（象征寓意）下面这幅画阐释了爱的真正含义，它强调了这一事实：爱心是情感力量，不论我们周围的世界多么黑暗，它都能支撑我们。Thepicturebelowillustratestherealmeaningoflove,bystressingthefactthatloveisemotionalstrength,whichcansupportusnomatterhowdarktheworldarounduses.第三句：解释论证事实上，历史上处于不同文化中的人们都把爱视为人类最高尚的情感。Asamatteroffact,throughouthistorypeopleofmanydifferentcultureshaveregardedloveasthemostsublimeofhumanemotions.

第二段：举例论证：第一句：承上启下举一个例子证明爱心的力量。第一句：Takeanexampletoillustratethepoweroflove.

第二句：主题句我们应该记得2008年中国各族人民如何响应号召去支援四川地震中的受难者。第二句：WeshouldrememberhowChinesepeopleofallethnicitiesrespondedtothecalltohelpthevictimsofthedeadlyearthquakeinSichuanProvincein2008.第三句：分论点一尽管他们的收入按照国际标准衡量还处于低水平，但是全国人民毫不犹豫地尽其所能捐献——不管是钱，还是物品——去帮助那些受难的同胞们。

第三句：Althoughtheiresarelowbyinternationalstandards,peoplealloverthecountrydidnothesitatetodonatewhatevertheycould——beitmoneyorgoods——tohelptheirneedyfellowcitizens.

第四句：分论点二并且，他们这么做不求回报。第四句：Furthermore,theydidthiswithnothoughtofgainorreward.

第三段：建议措施：第一句：结论句我认为，表示爱心的最好方式是帮助比我们更加不幸的人。Itismyviewthatthebestwaytoshowloveistohelppeoplewhoaremoreunfortunatethanweare.第二句：解释论证我们应该随时准备向有困难的人伸出援助之手，无论他们是自己的家人还是素昧平生的陌生人。Weshouldalwaysbereadytogiveahelpinghandtothosewhoareintrouble,nomatterwhethertheyarefamilymembersorcompletestrangers.第三句：小结只有这样，我们才能助一臂之力，把世界变成一个更美好的地方，因为，正如图所示，悲伤的阴影越黑暗，爱心之灯的光芒就越闪亮。Onlybydoingsocanwehelptomaketheworldabetterplace,for,asthepictureshows,thedarkertheshadowsofsorrowe,themorebrightlythelampofloveshines.(242words)二、感谢信：P.182Directions:Afterbeinginvolvedinanaccident,youwerelookedafterbyanotherperson.Writeaspeciallettertoexpressyourthanks.亲爱的小强：

我写信是为了表达我衷心的感谢。我指的是那天我被一辆出租车所撞从自行车上摔下来的不幸事件。DearXiaoqiang,Iamwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltgratitude.Iamreferringtothatunfortunateaccidenttheotherday,whenIwasknockedoffmybikebyataxi.

如果没有您及时为我救助，恐怕这场事故的后果会更严重。大家一致认为正是您在那个紧要关头的快速反应带来了令人满意的后果。Ifithadnotbeenforyourtimelyassistanceingivingmefirstaid,Ifearthattheconsequencesoftheaccidentmighthavebeenmuchserious.Everyoneagreesthatitwasyourquick-wittedresponseinthatemergencythathasledtothissatisfactorye.

尽管现在越来越多的人谈论到大公无私的必要性，但是很少看到有人言行一致。如果有更多人像您一样，世界会更加美好。

您真诚的，

李明

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