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Howtogetonwithourparents

Step1:examinethetopicStyle:______________________________________

tense:______________person:_______________Paragraphs:Paragraph1:Paragraph2:Paragraph3:议论文（ArgumentativeWriting）

presentfirstthecommonproblem:parentscareforeverythinghowparentscareforeverythignofusthewaytosolvetheproblemSixstepsforthewritingprac2Step2:listthemainpoints

thesameproblemcareforeverythingmakethegenerationgapdeeperworryabouteverythingmakeusgrowuphealthilyandlive

happilymoreunderstandingbetween…Step2:listthemainpoints3Step3:makesomesentences:Wehavethesameproblem.Ourparentscareforeverythingofus.Theyalwaystelluswhatweshoulddo.Theydonotletusdowhatweliketodo.Thegenerationgapisdeeper.Thepurposeistomakeusgrowhealthilyandhappily.Wearepartoftheirlife.Wecarrytheirhopeandexpectation.Weshouldunderstandeachother.Inthisway,wecangetonwellwitheachother.Step3:makesomesentences:4Step4&5:connectthesentencesandmakesomeappolishment.Step6:Copyitoutcarefullyandclearly.Step4&5:5

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Ourparentsconcernabouteverythingthatwehavedone,whichmakeusannoyed.Theyalwaysworryabouteverythingandeverybody,suchasourstudy,entertainmentandfriends.Asisoftenthecase,theysometimeslookourdiarywithoutourpermit.“It’sgoodforyou.”explaintheyeverytimeweaskthemwhy.Childrenasweare,therearesomebasicpersonalrights,whichshouldbeprotected.Howtogetonwellwithourparents?It’saproblem.However,thereisnoreasonforustobeagainsttoourparentsjustbecauseofit.Onlywhenwetryourbesttocommunicatewiththemcanwemakeeachofusunderstand.It’syoursincerityandpatiencecancalltheirrespectonyou.Whynothaveatry?_______makes_____read___________permission＼∧thatProofreading(findou6

Suggestionsformakingourwritingoutstanding:advancedwordsandphrases;differentabundantsentencepatterns;correctconjunctions.Suggestionsformakingour7Somecopiesfromourhomework:Copy1:

Itseemsthatourparentscaretoomuchaboutus.

Forexample,theyaretellinguswhatweshoulddoandwhatwemustn’tdoallthetimeandtheyalsoworryaboutallthatwedo.Inordertokeepusgrowinghealthilyandhappily,theyevenwantustostayathomeforawholedayatweekendsifpossible.However,wefeelitdifficulttobreatheundersuchheavypressure.Wewanttohavemorefreedomandmakedecisionsbyourselves.

Allinall,weshouldgivemoreunderstandingtoourparents.Asweknow,alltheparentslovetheirchildren.Soifweshowourlovetothemproperly,theywillunderstandus,too.16Somecopiesfromourhomework:8Copy2:Whatwemustfacewithisthatourparentsalwaysgeteverythingofusundercontrol,whichmakesusfeelratheruncomfortable.Toourdisappointment,parentsalwaysworryaboutwhatweweareveryday,howwebehaveatschoolandourstudies,ourmeals,eventhefriendswehavemade.What’smore,theyoftensaythattheintensionfortheseistoletusgrowuphealthilyandhappily.Forfearoftheirfeelingsad,wehavetoactastheyrequire,ratherthansayaword.ChildasIam,Ientirelyunderstandmyparents.Ithinkthekeytoitistounderstandthem.Ontheotherhand,weshouldmakeourparentsunderstandus,either.Withthelovebetweenparentsandus,wecanleadacomfortableandsensefullife!19Copy2:199Copy3:Itisbelievedthatourparentsalwayspayattentiontoeverythingwedo.Theymakeitarulethatwhateverwedo,weshouldtellthem.Forexample,tellthemthereasonandyoucangetthemoneywhichyouaskfor.Tellthemwhereyougoandthenyoucangoout.Theyalwaysworryaboutus.Theytakeitforgrantedthatwhatevertheydoforusisgood.Theyonlywantustolivehappilyandhealthily.However,hardlydotheychangetheirmindnomatterhowwecomplain.Theapproachtosolvetheproblemistounderstandourparentsandmakeourselvesunderstood.Onlyinthiswaycanwegetonwellwithourparents.20Copy3:2010Copy4:Ourparentscareforeverythingwedo.Theyalwaystelluswhatweshoulddoandstopusdoingwhateverweliketodo,whichmakesourgenerationgapdeeper.However,asourparents,whatevertheydoismakeusgrowuphealthilyandlivehappily.Fromthetimewewereborn,theyworryaboutwhatweeat,howmuchsleepwegetandhowwebehaveatschool.Infact,wehavebeenbecomgpartoftheirlivesandcarryingalltheirhopesandexpectationsfromourbirth.Itistheywhobringourlivesaswellascomfortinlife.Therefore,moreunderstandingbetweenusisamusttoshortenourgapandimproveourrelationship.Onlyinthiswaycanwegetonwellwitheachotherandenjoythecompanionship.(apossibleversion)Copy4:(apossibleversion)11Somewonderfulsentencesfromourhomework:1.Notuntilweunderstandourparents’concernandhopeonuscanwefeelthelovedeeplyfromtheirhearts.2.Whatreallymakesusuncomfortableisthatourparentsworryabouteverythingwehavedone.3.Thebetterweunderstandourparents,theeasieritwillbetogetalongwiththem.4.Onlywhenwetryourbesttocommunicatewiththemcanwemakeeachofusunderstood.5.Wehaveeveryreasontobelievetheirpurposeofourgrowinguphealthilyandhappily.6.Ourparentsmanageeverythingofus,whichisbeyondwhatwecanstand.7.Whattheydon’tknowisthatitwilltakeawayourfreedomandmakeusunhappy.Somewonderfulsentencesfrom12Sixprinciplesofmakingsentences(造句成文六大原则)：1.advancedwords(高级词汇原则)2.adverbialadvanceed(状语提前原则)3.phrasespreferred(短语优先原则)4.compoundsentence,compositesentenceandsentenceofspecialkind(并列句、复合句和特殊句式原则)5.longandshortsentencesalternately(长短句交替原则)6.passagesinparagraphs(短文分段分层原则)Sixprinciplesofmakingsente13Fivecharacteristicsofoutstandingwriting:(高分作文的五大特性)1.senseoforder(条理性:段落完整，层次分明）2.accuracy(准确性:语法准确，用词精当）3.fluency(流畅性:层次清晰，行文连贯）4.conciseness&variety(简洁、多样性:语言简洁，不重复）5.ideologicalcontent(思想性:文章立意高，表达个人观点内容积极向上）Fivecharacteristicsofoutsta14演讲完毕，谢谢观看！演讲完毕，谢谢观看！15writingwriting16Sixstepsforthewritingpractice:

Howtogetonwithourparents

Step1:examinethetopicStyle:______________________________________

tense:______________person:_______________Paragraphs:Paragraph1:Paragraph2:Paragraph3:议论文（ArgumentativeWriting）

presentfirstthecommonproblem:parentscareforeverythinghowparentscareforeverythignofusthewaytosolvetheproblemSixstepsforthewritingprac17Step2:listthemainpoints

thesameproblemcareforeverythingmakethegenerationgapdeeperworryabouteverythingmakeusgrowuphealthilyandlive

happilymoreunderstandingbetween…Step2:listthemainpoints18Step3:makesomesentences:Wehavethesameproblem.Ourparentscareforeverythingofus.Theyalwaystelluswhatweshoulddo.Theydonotletusdowhatweliketodo.Thegenerationgapisdeeper.Thepurposeistomakeusgrowhealthilyandhappily.Wearepartoftheirlife.Wecarrytheirhopeandexpectation.Weshouldunderstandeachother.Inthisway,wecangetonwellwitheachother.Step3:makesomesentences:19Step4&5:connectthesentencesandmakesomeappolishment.Step6:Copyitoutcarefullyandclearly.Step4&5:20

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Ourparentsconcernabouteverythingthatwehavedone,whichmakeusannoyed.Theyalwaysworryabouteverythingandeverybody,suchasourstudy,entertainmentandfriends.Asisoftenthecase,theysometimeslookourdiarywithoutourpermit.“It’sgoodforyou.”explaintheyeverytimeweaskthemwhy.Childrenasweare,therearesomebasicpersonalrights,whichshouldbeprotected.Howtogetonwellwithourparents?It’saproblem.However,thereisnoreasonforustobeagainsttoourparentsjustbecauseofit.Onlywhenwetryourbesttocommunicatewiththemcanwemakeeachofusunderstand.It’syoursincerityandpatiencecancalltheirrespectonyou.Whynothaveatry?_______makes_____read___________permission＼∧thatProofreading(findou21

Suggestionsformakingourwritingoutstanding:advancedwordsandphrases;differentabundantsentencepatterns;correctconjunctions.Suggestionsformakingour22Somecopiesfromourhomework:Copy1:

Itseemsthatourparentscaretoomuchaboutus.

Forexample,theyaretellinguswhatweshoulddoandwhatwemustn’tdoallthetimeandtheyalsoworryaboutallthatwedo.Inordertokeepusgrowinghealthilyandhappily,theyevenwantustostayathomeforawholedayatweekendsifpossible.However,wefeelitdifficulttobreatheundersuchheavypressure.Wewanttohavemorefreedomandmakedecisionsbyourselves.

Allinall,weshouldgivemoreunderstandingtoourparents.Asweknow,alltheparentslovetheirchildren.Soifweshowourlovetothemproperly,theywillunderstandus,too.16Somecopiesfromourhomework:23Copy2:Whatwemustfacewithisthatourparentsalwaysgeteverythingofusundercontrol,whichmakesusfeelratheruncomfortable.Toourdisappointment,parentsalwaysworryaboutwhatweweareveryday,howwebehaveatschoolandourstudies,ourmeals,eventhefriendswehavemade.What’smore,theyoftensaythattheintensionfortheseistoletusgrowuphealthilyandhappily.Forfearoftheirfeelingsad,wehavetoactastheyrequire,ratherthansayaword.ChildasIam,Ientirelyunderstandmyparents.Ithinkthekeytoitistounderstandthem.Ontheotherhand,weshouldmakeourparentsunderstandus,either.Withthelovebetweenparentsandus,wecanleadacomfortableandsensefullife!19Copy2:1924Copy3:Itisbelievedthatourparentsalwayspayattentiontoeverythingwedo.Theymakeitarulethatwhateverwedo,weshouldtellthem.Forexample,tellthemthereasonandyoucangetthemoneywhichyouaskfor.Tellthemwhereyougoandthenyoucangoout.Theyalwaysworryaboutus.Theytakeitforgrantedthatwhatevertheydoforusisgood.Theyonlywantustolivehappilyandhealthily.However,hardlydotheychangetheirmindnomatterhowwecomplain.Theapproachtosolvetheproblemistounderstandourparentsandmakeourselvesunderstood.Onlyinthiswaycanwegetonwellwithourparents.20Copy3:2025Copy4:Ourparentscareforeverythingwedo.Theyalwaystelluswhatweshoulddoandstopusdoingwhateverweliketodo,whichmakesourgenerationgapdeeper.However,asourparents,whatevertheydoismakeusgrowuphealthilyandlivehappily.Fromthetimewewereborn,theyworryaboutwhatweeat,howmuchsleepwegetandhowwebehaveatschool.Infact,wehavebeenbecomgpartoftheirlivesandcarryingalltheirhopesandexpectationsfromourbirth.Itistheywhobringourlivesaswellascomfortinlife.Therefore,moreunderstandingbetweenusisamusttoshortenourgapandimproveourrelationship.Onlyinthiswaycanwegetonwellwitheachotherandenjoythecompanionship.(apossibleversion)Copy4:(apossibleversion)26Somewonderfulsentencesfromourhomework:1.Notuntilweunderstandourparents’concernandhopeonuscanwefeelthelovedeeplyfromthei