高考概要写作之找要点(一)课件

概要写作之找要点概要写作之找要点1Whatisasummary?

It'sa

shortstatement(陈述)thatcoversonlythemainpoints

ofsth,notthedetails.牛津高阶英汉双解词典》概要：用简短扼要(brief)的语言客观(objective)全面(thoroughly)呈现要点。Whatisasummary?

It'sashor2Example：Agroupofgreatteachersfromotherclasseshappilycametoourbeautifulandfriendlyclass.Ignore:theunnecessarydetailsThemainidea:Teacherscame（toourclass）Example：3要求01020304a60-wordsummary（一段60词）cover4-5points（4-5个要点）useyourownwords（自己的语言）usethebriefsentences（简明扼要）05properconnection

(恰当衔接）Part1

Requests?(高考写作要求）要求01020304a60-wordsummary（41WrongTopic(主旨和原文不符）2WrongPoints/lackpoints（要点错误/少要点）3Notcompleteordetails(要点不全/细节作要点）◆While

writing1.WithoutOwnLanguage(抄原句，无自己语言）2.PoorVocabulary(词汇简单，无丰富词汇句式）3.Notbriefandlogical(不简洁，不连贯）4.Otherproblems(书写/分段/拼写/词句错误等）Part2Problemsonsummarywriting

◆While

reading1WrongTopic(主旨和原文不符）Part25技巧01020304Skimmingforthetopicorpurpose略读知主题/意图Scanningforthetopicsentence寻读找主题句Skippingforthekeypointsorsub-points跳读找主次要点Listallthepointsinaform用表格,列要点Part3SkillsofReadingforpoints05Fastreadingforthegenre快读定体裁【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐技巧01020304Skimmingforthetop6A:a

narration(记叙文）--tellsastoryoreventB:anexposition（说明文）--explainsthorshareinformationC:anargumentation（议论文）---makesbbelievetheauthor'sopinionWhydoweneedtoknowthegenre?Narration(记叙文)1.story(5w+1h):who,what,whenwhere,why,how)2.event（beginning-development-ending)Exposition(说明文)1.介绍事物→描述性质/功用2.问题→解决方法3.现象→原因→本质Argumentation(议论文)thetopic→thesupportingevidence→writer’sviewSkill1.

Fastreadingforthegenre【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐A:a

narration(记叙文）--tellsa7Skill2--

Skimmingfor

thetopicorpurposeWhy?Knowingthetopiccanhelpus:1.leaveoutunnecessarydetails(删除无关细节）2.presentallthepointscorrectly（正确呈现要点）【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐Skill2--Skimmingforthetop8OneonlinebloggerstatesthatheoriginallypaidforanentireCDandthatheshouldbeabletodowiththematerialwhateverhewants.WhydosomanypeoplegotoseefootballmatchesandNBAgames？Itisbecausetheyenjoythegames,andtheyarewillingtopaytowatchtheperformances.Forexample,DaVinci’spaintingMonaLisa(蒙娜丽莎）wasboughtfortoomuchmoneybecauseitstandsforthetopskillsinit.What’smore,sportsstarsusuallyareatthetopoflevelintheirfields.thetopic→thesupportingevidence→writer’sview次要点常出现：列举项目中/段中频度高/逻辑关系Tip5：TheformmakestheoutlineclearlyandlogicalforlaterwritingSkill3-DiscoverthetopicsentencesbelowandthinkabouttheirlocationTip4-LeaveoutunnecessaryexamplesordetailsOneonlinebloggerstatesthatheoriginallypaidforanentireCDandthatheshouldbeabletodowiththematerialwhateverhewants.Totrulyunderstandtheinfluenceofmusicpiracy(盗版行为)oncreators,onemustunderstandhowmanypeopleareinvolvedintherecordingprocess.合并改写：Nowadays,itisregardedasathefttosharemusiconlinewithoutpermission.event（beginning-development-ending)1WrongTopic(主旨和原文不符）Becauseofthesportsstars,ourlifebecomesmoreexciting.Otherproblems(书写/分段/拼写/词句错误等）【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐DoesthepointsneedtocontainMonalisa?Why?【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐Scientistsfindthatthehard-workingpeoplelivelongerthanaveragemenandwomen.Careerwomenarehealthierthanhousewives.Evidencesshowthatthejoblessareinpoorerhealththanjob-holders.Aninvestigationshowsthatwhenevertheunemploymentrate(失业率）increasesby1%，thedeathrateincreasescorrespondingly(相应地)by2%.Allthiscomesdowntoonepoint：workishelpfultohealth.A:Hard-workingpeoplelivelongerB:HousewivesarehealthierC:UnemploymentrateanddeathrateD:Workisgoodforhealth【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐Oneonlinebloggerstatesthat9Skill3-Discoverthetopicsentencesbelowandthinkabouttheirlocation

B1U2StandardandDilaets(expositon说明文)Para1:Believeitornot,thereisnosuchthingasstandardEnglish.(段落第2句,前面是一个问句）Para2:AmericanEnglishhasmanydialets.(段落第2句）Para3:Geographyalsoplaysapartinmakingdialects.(段落第1句）Tip1---Topicsentencecanbethefirstorthelastsentenceortheanswerofaquestion.(西方喜欢开门见山，主题句常见句首，也有句尾和问句后的答句）【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐Skill3-Discoverthetopicsen10Consolidaton---underlinethetopicsentence

Whyisworkgoodforhealth？

Itisbecauseworkkeepspeoplebusy，awayfromloneliness.Researchesshowthatpeoplefeelunhappy，worriedandsolitarywhentheyhavenothingtodo.Instead，thehappiestarethosewhoarebusy.Besides，workgivesonethesenseoffulfillment(满足感)andasenseofachievement(成就感）.Workmakesonefeelhisvalueandstatusinsociety.Whenawriterfinisheshiswritingoradoctorsuccessfullyoperatesonapatientorateacherseeshisstudentsprogress，theyarehappybeyondwords.Tip2--Whenyouscan,payattentiontothelinkingwordssuchasfirst,besides,ontheotherhand【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐Consolidaton---underlinethet11Skill4-Skipping

forthekeypointsorsub-pointsSkippingfor

thesignalwordsaspoints主要点信号词：1.结果关系（so/asaresult)2.转折后（however/but，tobehonest）次要点常出现：列举项目中/段中频度高/逻辑关系Whilesportsareforfun,itdoesnotmeanthattheyarenotimportanttopeople’slife.WhydosomanypeoplegotoseefootballmatchesandNBAgames？Itisbecausetheyenjoythegames,andtheyarewillingtopaytowatchtheperformances.Becauseofthesportsstars,ourlifebecomesmoreexciting.Somesportsstarsgethonorfortheircountry,andtheircountrymenareproudofthem.Theydogoodtothepeople'smentalhealth.

Underlinethecentralpointsandsubpoints

(用下划线划出中心论点和次要点）

Tip3--Whenwriting,connectallpointsbrieflyWhy表示结果(enjoythegames为keypoints，几个because后是次要点(exciting,gethonor,dogoodto

)Summary:

Weappreciatethegamesfortheymakeourlifeexcitingandtheyaregoodforourmind.【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐Skill4-Skippingforthekey12

What’smore,sportsstarsusuallyareatthetopoflevelintheirfields.Inthisworld,youhavetopayifyouwantthebest.Forexample,DaVinci’spaintingMonaLisa(蒙娜丽莎）wasboughtfortoomuchmoneybecauseitstandsforthetopskillsinit.Moststarsaregreatintheirownfieldnotonlybecauseoftheirtalentsbutalsobecauseoftheirhardtraining.Theyhavetokeepperformingattheirpeak(尖端）toearnthatgoodearnings.DoesthepointsneedtocontainMonalisa?Why?Tip4-LeaveoutunnecessaryexamplesordetailsNo,itisonlyforthemainpoints:youhavetopayifitisthebest.Sub-points:talents,hardtraining(=keepperforming)Consolidation-Skimforcentralpoints&subpoints

【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐What’smore,sportsstars13Skill5-Listallthepointsintheform(用表格列要点)Tip5：TheformmakestheoutlineclearlyandlogicalforlaterwritingTopic

logicMainidea(para1-)Supportingdetailsrewriting【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐Skill5-Listallthepointsin14Part4--SummaryWriting:---Howtolookforthekeypoints

1.知文体（genre)-理解思路(outline)

2.知话题（topic)----找全要点(allpoints)3.主题句topicsentence-段首尾和问题后

4.主次要点(CPandSP)----合并，改写，删细节5.列表格（form)--弄懂层次和逻辑（outline&logical)【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐Part4--SummaryWriting:---Ho15

阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

①Throughouthistory,musicspreadamongpeopleofdifferentcultures.

Intoday’stechnologicaladvancedsociety,

however,peoplespreadmusiconline,sometimeswithoutanartist’spermission.Thiscanleadtomanyproblems,andmusiccompaniesarenowdealingwiththispractice.Sharingmusiconlinewithoutpermissionistheft(偷窃).

②Sharingmusiconlinepreventsrecordingcompaniesfrommakingmoneyfromtheirefforts.Theysaythatsharingmusiconlinehasresultedinahugedropinprofitsandsalesoverthepast10years.PeoplewhofindmusicforfreeonlinearenotpayingforCDsoreveryMP3downloaded.Totrulyunderstandtheinfluenceofmusicpiracy(盗版行为)oncreators,onemustunderstandhowmanypeopleareinvolvedintherecordingprocess.Forthesaleofeachalbum,profitsmustbesharedamongmusicians,soundengineers,musicproducers,managers,advertisers,andthecompanysellingtheproduct.Manypeoplebelievesharingmusiconlyaffectstherecordingartist,buttherealityisthatsharinghurtsbusinessofallthecompaniesinvolved.【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要16

③Therearemanypeoplewhodon’tseetheharminsharingmusiconlineandeventhinktheyhavetherighttodoit.OneonlinebloggerstatesthatheoriginallypaidforanentireCDandthatheshouldbeabletodowiththematerialwhateverhewants.Whilehemayhavelegallypaidforthemusic,hedoesnothavetherighttoprovidepermission,whichmeanspeoplelikethebloggerarethieves.④Althoughwedon’tspreadtoday’smusicinthesamewaywedidbefore,there’snodoubtthatpeoplearoundtheworldlovetosharemusic.However,internetpiracywouldpreventmusiciansfromcontinuingproducingalbumsforfearoftheft.Therefore,ifpeoplewanttocontinuelisteningtotheirfavoriteartists,theyneedtobuytheirmusicsothatartistswillmakeenoughprofitstocontinuetheirmusiccareers.【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐③Therearemanypeoplewh171.知文体（genre)-理解思路(outline)

本文是一篇Argumentation(议论文)thetopic→thesupportingevidence→writer’sview未允许的网上音乐分享是盗窃--盗版会影响唱片相关人的利益/即使购买唱片也不能随意分享--保护音乐版权2.知话题（topic)----找全要点(allpoints)Sharingmusiconline【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐1.知文体（genre)-理解思路(outline)【18a60-wordsummary（一段60词）Forthesaleofeachalbum,profitsmustbesharedamongmusicians,soundengineers,musicproducers,managers,advertisers,andthecompanysellingtheproduct.Researchesshowthatpeoplefeelunhappy，worriedandsolitarywhentheyhavenothingtodo.Thiscanleadtomanyproblems,andmusiccompaniesarenowdealingwiththispractice.PoorVocabulary(词汇简单，无丰富词汇句式）Forthesaleofeachalbum,profitsmustbesharedamongmusicians,soundengineers,musicproducers,managers,advertisers,andthecompanysellingtheproduct.Skill4-Skippingforthekeypointsorsub-points3Notcompleteordetails(要点不全/细节作要点）转折后（however/but，tobehonest）Part1Requests?(高考写作要求）【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐A:a

narration(记叙文）--tellsastoryoreventWhat’smore,sportsstarsusuallyareatthetopoflevelintheirfields.Agroupofgreatteachersfromotherclasseshappilycametoourbeautifulandfriendlyclass.Allthiscomesdowntoonepoint：workishelpfultohealth.D:WorkisgoodforhealthScientistsfindthatthehard-workingpeoplelivelongerthanaveragemenandwomen.Themainidea:Teacherscame（toourclass）Researchesshowthatpeoplefeelunhappy，worriedandsolitarywhentheyhavenothingtodo.3.主题句topicsentence-段首尾和问题后

Para1:Sharingmusiconlinewithoutpermissionistheft(偷窃).Para2:Manypeoplebelievesharingmusiconlyaffectstherecordingartist,buttherealityisthatsharinghurtsbusinessofallthecompaniesinvolved.Para3:Therearemanypeoplewhodon’tseetheharminsharingmusiconlineandeventhinktheyhavetherighttodoit.

Para4:Therefore,ifpeoplewanttocontinuelisteningtotheirfavoriteartists,theyneedtobuytheirmusicsothatartistswillmakeenoughprofitstocontinuetheirmusiccareers.【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐a60-wordsummary（一段60词）3.主题194.主次要点(CPandSP)----合并，改写，删细节Para1:Sharingmusiconlinewithoutpermissionistheft(偷窃).Intoday’stechnologicaladvancedsociety,

however,peoplespreadmusiconline,sometimeswithoutanartist’spermission.合并改写：Nowadays,itisregardedasathefttosharemusiconlinewithoutpermission.Para2:Manypeoplebelievesharingmusiconlyaffectstherecordingartist,buttherealityisthatsharinghurtsbusinessofallthecompaniesinvolved.合并改写：Actually,notonlydoesitaffectrelevantrecordingmusiciansbutalsodoesharmtobusinessinvolvedintherecordingprocess.【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐4.主次要点(CPandSP)----合并，改写，204.主次要点(CPandSP)----合并，改写，删细节Para3:Therearemanypeoplewhodon’tseetheharminsharingmusiconlineandeventhinktheyhavetherighttodoit.

Whilehemayhavelegallypaidforthemusic,hedoesnothavetherighttoprovidepermission,whichmeanspeoplelikethebloggerarethieves.合并改写：However,manypeopletakenonoticeoftheharm.Eventhoughtheypurchasemusic,theycan'tshareitonline.Para4:Therefore,ifpeoplewanttocontinuelisteningtotheirfavoriteartists,theyneedtobuytheirmusicsothatartistswillmakeenoughprofitstocontinuetheirmusiccareers.合并改写：Ifwewantthemusicianstocontinueproducingalbumsforustoappreciate,weneedtoprotectmusicians’copyright.(要点4)【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐4.主次要点(CPandSP)----合并，改写，21C:UnemploymentrateanddeathrateThiscanleadtomanyproblems,andmusiccompaniesarenowdealingwiththispractice.1WrongTopic(主旨和原文不符）【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。主题句topicsentence-段首尾和问题后Scientistsfindthatthehard-workingpeoplelivelongerthanaveragemenandwomen.Para4:Therefore,ifpeoplewanttocontinuelisteningtotheirfavoriteartists,theyneedtobuytheirmusicsothatartistswillmakeenoughprofitstocontinuetheirmusiccareers.列表格（form)--弄懂层次和逻辑（outline&logical)Whyisworkgoodforhealth？Itisbecauseworkkeepspeoplebusy，awayfromloneliness.Listallthepointsinaform用表格,列要点(要点3)Ifwewantthemusicianstocontinueproducingalbumsforustoappreciate,weneedtoprotectmusicians’copyright.Argumentation(议论文)a60-wordsummary（一段60词）OneonlinebloggerstatesthatheoriginallypaidforanentireCDandthatheshouldbeabletodowiththematerialwhateverhewants.Tip1---Topicsentencecanbethefirstorthelastsentenceortheanswerofaquestion.Para4:Therefore,ifpeoplewanttocontinuelisteningtotheirfavoriteartists,theyneedtobuytheirmusicsothatartistswillmakeenoughprofitstocontinuetheirmusiccareers.WhydosomanypeoplegotoseefootballmatchesandNBAgames？Itisbecausetheyenjoythegames,andtheyarewillingtopaytowatchtheperformances.【写作提示】这是一篇议论文。文章论述目前音乐版权问题的严重性,并指出不保护音乐版权的危害。文章结构清楚,写作时可以根据自然段的段意概括要点。注意句子的多样性和句子之间的连贯性。【参考范文】Intoday’ssociety,itisthefttosharemusiconlinewithoutartists’permission.(要点1)Ithurtsallrelevantcompaniesandpeopleinvolvedintherecordingprocess.(要点2)However,manypeopletakenonoticeoftheharmandeventhinksharingmusiconlineistheirright,notknowingmostmusiciscopyrighted.(要点3)Ifwewantthemusicianstocontinueproducingalbumsforustoappreciate,weneedtoprotectmusicians’copyright.(要点4)【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐C:Unemploymentrateanddeath22概要写作之找要点概要写作之找要点23Whatisasummary?

It'sa

shortstatement(陈述)thatcoversonlythemainpoints

ofsth,notthedetails.牛津高阶英汉双解词典》概要：用简短扼要(brief)的语言客观(objective)全面(thoroughly)呈现要点。Whatisasummary?

It'sashor24Example：Agroupofgreatteachersfromotherclasseshappilycametoourbeautifulandfriendlyclass.Ignore:theunnecessarydetailsThemainidea:Teacherscame（toourclass）Example：25要求01020304a60-wordsummary（一段60词）cover4-5points（4-5个要点）useyourownwords（自己的语言）usethebriefsentences（简明扼要）05properconnection

(恰当衔接）Part1

Requests?(高考写作要求）要求01020304a60-wordsummary（261WrongTopic(主旨和原文不符）2WrongPoints/lackpoints（要点错误/少要点）3Notcompleteordetails(要点不全/细节作要点）◆While

writing1.WithoutOwnLanguage(抄原句，无自己语言）2.PoorVocabulary(词汇简单，无丰富词汇句式）3.Notbriefandlogical(不简洁，不连贯）4.Otherproblems(书写/分段/拼写/词句错误等）Part2Problemsonsummarywriting

◆While

reading1WrongTopic(主旨和原文不符）Part227技巧01020304Skimmingforthetopicorpurpose略读知主题/意图Scanningforthetopicsentence寻读找主题句Skippingforthekeypointsorsub-points跳读找主次要点Listallthepointsinaform用表格,列要点Part3SkillsofReadingforpoints05Fastreadingforthegenre快读定体裁【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐技巧01020304Skimmingforthetop28A:a

narration(记叙文）--tellsastoryoreventB:anexposition（说明文）--explainsthorshareinformationC:anargumentation（议论文）---makesbbelievetheauthor'sopinionWhydoweneedtoknowthegenre?Narration(记叙文)1.story(5w+1h):who,what,whenwhere,why,how)2.event（beginning-development-ending)Exposition(说明文)1.介绍事物→描述性质/功用2.问题→解决方法3.现象→原因→本质Argumentation(议论文)thetopic→thesupportingevidence→writer’sviewSkill1.

Fastreadingforthegenre【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐A:a

narration(记叙文）--tellsa29Skill2--

Skimmingfor

thetopicorpurposeWhy?Knowingthetopiccanhelpus:1.leaveoutunnecessarydetails(删除无关细节）2.presentallthepointscorrectly（正确呈现要点）【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐Skill2--Skimmingforthetop30OneonlinebloggerstatesthatheoriginallypaidforanentireCDandthatheshouldbeabletodowiththematerialwhateverhewants.WhydosomanypeoplegotoseefootballmatchesandNBAgames？Itisbecausetheyenjoythegames,andtheyarewillingtopaytowatchtheperformances.Forexample,DaVinci’spaintingMonaLisa(蒙娜丽莎）wasboughtfortoomuchmoneybecauseitstandsforthetopskillsinit.What’smore,sportsstarsusuallyareatthetopoflevelintheirfields.thetopic→thesupportingevidence→writer’sview次要点常出现：列举项目中/段中频度高/逻辑关系Tip5：TheformmakestheoutlineclearlyandlogicalforlaterwritingSkill3-DiscoverthetopicsentencesbelowandthinkabouttheirlocationTip4-LeaveoutunnecessaryexamplesordetailsOneonlinebloggerstatesthatheoriginallypaidforanentireCDandthatheshouldbeabletodowiththematerialwhateverhewants.Totrulyunderstandtheinfluenceofmusicpiracy(盗版行为)oncreators,onemustunderstandhowmanypeopleareinvolvedintherecordingprocess.合并改写：Nowadays,itisregardedasathefttosharemusiconlinewithoutpermission.event（beginning-development-ending)1WrongTopic(主旨和原文不符）Becauseofthesportsstars,ourlifebecomesmoreexciting.Otherproblems(书写/分段/拼写/词句错误等）【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐DoesthepointsneedtocontainMonalisa?Why?【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐Scientistsfindthatthehard-workingpeoplelivelongerthanaveragemenandwomen.Careerwomenarehealthierthanhousewives.Evidencesshowthatthejoblessareinpoorerhealththanjob-holders.Aninvestigationshowsthatwhenevertheunemploymentrate(失业率）increasesby1%，thedeathrateincreasescorrespondingly(相应地)by2%.Allthiscomesdowntoonepoint：workishelpfultohealth.A:Hard-workingpeoplelivelongerB:HousewivesarehealthierC:UnemploymentrateanddeathrateD:Workisgoodforhealth【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐Oneonlinebloggerstatesthat31Skill3-Discoverthetopicsentencesbelowandthinkabouttheirlocation

B1U2StandardandDilaets(expositon说明文)Para1:Believeitornot,thereisnosuchthingasstandardEnglish.(段落第2句,前面是一个问句）Para2:AmericanEnglishhasmanydialets.(段落第2句）Para3:Geographyalsoplaysapartinmakingdialects.(段落第1句）Tip1---Topicsentencecanbethefirstorthelastsentenceortheanswerofaquestion.(西方喜欢开门见山，主题句常见句首，也有句尾和问句后的答句）【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐Skill3-Discoverthetopicsen32Consolidaton---underlinethetopicsentence

Whyisworkgoodforhealth？

Itisbecauseworkkeepspeoplebusy，awayfromloneliness.Researchesshowthatpeoplefeelunhappy，worriedandsolitarywhentheyhavenothingtodo.Instead，thehappiestarethosewhoarebusy.Besides，workgivesonethesenseoffulfillment(满足感)andasenseofachievement(成就感）.Workmakesonefeelhisvalueandstatusinsociety.Whenawriterfinisheshiswritingoradoctorsuccessfullyoperatesonapatientorateacherseeshisstudentsprogress，theyarehappybeyondwords.Tip2--Whenyouscan,payattentiontothelinkingwordssuchasfirst,besides,ontheotherhand【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐Consolidaton---underlinethet33Skill4-Skipping

forthekeypointsorsub-pointsSkippingfor

thesignalwordsaspoints主要点信号词：1.结果关系（so/asaresult)2.转折后（however/but，tobehonest）次要点常出现：列举项目中/段中频度高/逻辑关系Whilesportsareforfun,itdoesnotmeanthattheyarenotimportanttopeople’slife.WhydosomanypeoplegotoseefootballmatchesandNBAgames？Itisbecausetheyenjoythegames,andtheyarewillingtopaytowatchtheperformances.Becauseofthesportsstars,ourlifebecomesmoreexciting.Somesportsstarsgethonorfortheircountry,andtheircountrymenareproudofthem.Theydogoodtothepeople'smentalhealth.

Underlinethecentralpointsandsubpoints

(用下划线划出中心论点和次要点）

Tip3--Whenwriting,connectallpointsbrieflyWhy表示结果(enjoythegames为keypoints，几个because后是次要点(exciting,gethonor,dogoodto

)Summary:

Weappreciatethegamesfortheymakeourlifeexcitingandtheyaregoodforourmind.【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐Skill4-Skippingforthekey34

What’smore,sportsstarsusuallyareatthetopoflevelintheirfields.Inthisworld,youhavetopayifyouwantthebest.Forexample,DaVinci’spaintingMonaLisa(蒙娜丽莎）wasboughtfortoomuchmoneybecauseitstandsforthetopskillsinit.Moststarsaregreatintheirownfieldnotonlybecauseoftheirtalentsbutalsobecauseoftheirhardtraining.Theyhavetokeepperformingattheirpeak(尖端）toearnthatgoodearnings.DoesthepointsneedtocontainMonalisa?Why?Tip4-LeaveoutunnecessaryexamplesordetailsNo,itisonlyforthemainpoints:youhavetopayifitisthebest.Sub-points:talents,hardtraining(=keepperforming)Consolidation-Skimforcentralpoints&subpoints

【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐What’smore,sportsstars35Skill5-Listallthepointsintheform(用表格列要点)Tip5：TheformmakestheoutlineclearlyandlogicalforlaterwritingTopic

logicMainidea(para1-)Supportingdetailsrewriting【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐Skill5-Listallthepointsin36Part4--SummaryWriting:---Howtolookforthekeypoints

1.知文体（genre)-理解思路(outline)

2.知话题（topic)----找全要点(allpoints)3.主题句topicsentence-段首尾和问题后

4.主次要点(CPandSP)----合并，改写，删细节5.列表格（form)--弄懂层次和逻辑（outline&logical)【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐Part4--SummaryWriting:---Ho37

阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

①Throughouthistory,musicspreadamongpeopleofdifferentcultures.

Intoday’stechnologicaladvancedsociety,

however,peoplespreadmusiconline,sometimeswithoutanartist’spermission.Thiscanleadtomanyproblems,andmusiccompaniesarenowdealingwiththispractice.Sharingmusiconlinewithoutpermissionistheft(偷窃).

②Sharingmusiconlinepreventsrecordingcompaniesfrommakingmoneyfromtheirefforts.Theysaythatsharingmusiconlinehasresultedinahugedropinprofitsandsalesoverthepast10years.PeoplewhofindmusicforfreeonlinearenotpayingforCDsoreveryMP3downloaded.Totrulyunderstandtheinfluenceofmusicpiracy(盗版行为)oncreators,onemustunderstandhowmanypeopleareinvolvedintherecordingprocess.Forthesaleofeachalbum,profitsmustbesharedamongmusicians,soundengineers,musicproducers,managers,advertisers,andthecompanysellingtheproduct.Manypeoplebelievesharingmusiconlyaffectstherecordingartist,buttherealityisthatsharinghurtsbusinessofallthecompaniesinvolved.【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐【名校课堂】获奖PPT--学年浙江高考概要写作之找要点（一）推荐（最新版本）推荐阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要38

③Therearemanypeoplewhodon’tseetheharminsharingmusiconlineandeventhinktheyhavetherighttodoit.OneonlinebloggerstatesthatheoriginallypaidforanentireCDandthatheshouldbeabletodowiththematerialwhateverhewants.Whilehemayhavelegallypaidforthemusic,hedoesnothavetherighttoprovidepermission,whichm