新增作文范文、万能模板-pets三级写作专题

英语培训

PETS3写作专题小作文（A节）备考点拨与实践大作文（B节）备考点拨与实践模拟/预测题ByProf.LiPartI

应用文写作（A节）

定义：应用、实用、简易写作考点：基础语言+规范格式+信息点+语言点方法及应试概要理论：格式正式文体，非正式文体数据：100（±30）字、8句话、3段式；

15-20分钟、10分题类型：

邀请信、祝贺信、感谢信、推荐信、介绍信、 申请信、求职信、询问信、投诉信、私人信函、 通知、便签及便条等方法：悉格式练模版背句式塑亮点得高分基本类型与黄金模版写作流程

参考范文

常用句型呼语和落款相对固定“邀请信”

之黄金模版：

向对方发出邀请阐述邀请原因意义指出时间地点表达期盼和谢意邀请信常用句型：I’mpleasedtoinviteyoutoattend…It’smypleasure/agreathonorto…Wearelookingforwardtoseeingyou.Wesincerelyhopeyoucouldcome.Ihopeyouwon’tdeclinemyinvitation.祝贺信常用句型：I’mdelightedtohearthatyou…Congratulationsonyour…Acceptmyheartiestcongratulationson…Bestwishesforcontinuedprogressandsuccess.Weareallproudofyou!“祝贺信”之黄金模版

简述对方成就再次表达祝福表达祝贺感谢信常用句型：Iamgratefultoyoufor…Icanneverthankyouenough.Itwasreallykindandgenerousofyou.Manythanksforyourkindnessandhospitality.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressourwarmthankstoyou.Pleaseacceptmysincereappreciationfor…“感谢信“之黄金模版

指出致谢缘由阐述致谢细节再次表达感激之情表达谢意申请信常用句型：

Iwouldliketoapplyforadmissiontoyourcollege.Ihopeyouwillkindlysendmeanapplicationform.Iwouldgreatlyappreciatereceivingcopiesoftherequiredapplicationformsandinstructions.“申请信”之黄金模版

陈述相关信息对推荐人的评价表明个人愿望点明推荐人及推荐理由求职信常用句型：

Iwishtoapplyforthepositionof…whichyouadvertisedin...Ihavebeenworkingin…sincemygraduation,andhavethereforeattainedafairknowledgeandexperienceinthisfield.Hopingthatmyqualificationswillmeetyourfavorableconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.IwouldbegratefulifIhaveanopportunitytotalkwithyou.“求职信”之黄金模版

表明求职愿望个人简历介绍消息来源指出求职优势提出获职打算请求回复并致谢辞职信申请信介绍信询问信投诉信备忘录通知私人信函及便签等PRACTICE1

Directions:(15minutes) YouwanttocontributetoProjectHopebyofferingfinancialaidtoachildinaremotearea.Writealettertothedepartmentconcerned,askingthemtohelpfindacandidate.Youshouldspecifywhatkindofchildyouwanttohelpandhowyouwillcarryoutyourplan.

Writeyourletterwithabout100words. WriteitonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyournameattheendoftheletter;useLiMinginstead.Youdonotneedtowritetheaddress. (10points)

OnepossibleversionTowhomitmayconcern, IamwritingtoaskyouwhetheryoucouldhelpmefindachildinaremoteareatowhomIwilloffermyfinancialaid. Itwouldbemosthelpfuliftherecipientofmyfinancialassistanceisaprimaryschoolgirllivinginthewesternregionofmycountry.Girlsinpoorregionsareoftenforcedtodropschoolbecauseofpoverty,andIhopeoneofthemcanhavethechancetofinishschoolingwithmyhelp.Thecandidateshouldbeagirlattheageof8-10andherpreviousscorereportsshouldproveherpotentialtobeanoutstandingstudentinthefuture.

Iwouldliketogivethegirlmyfinancialsupportannuallyuntilshegraduatesfromcollege.Themoneywillcoverhertuitionfeeandotherexpensesatschool.Besides,Iwillcorrespondwithherfrequentlysothatshecanseekadvicewheneversheneeds. Ireallyappreciateyourhelpandlookforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiMingPRACTICE2

Directions:(15minutes)

TwomonthsagoyougotajobasaneditorforthemagazineDesigns&fashions.Butnowyoufindthattheworkisnotwhatyouexpected.Youdecidetoquit.Writealettertoyourboss,Mr.Wang,tellinghimyourdecisionstatingyourreason(s),andmakinganapology.

Writeyourletterwithabout100words. WriteitonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyournameattheendoftheletter;useLiMinginstead. Youdonotneedtowritetheaddress. (10points)

OnepossibleversionDearMr.Wang, IwouldliketoinformyouthatIwillberesigningastheeditorofDesigns&Fashions.IhavebeenemployedfromNovember,2004.IplantoleaveonJan.31,2005. Thankyouverymuchforhavinggivenmethisopportunitytobeaneditorofsucharespectedmagazine.However,IfindthattheworkingstyleinthefashioncircleistotallydifferentfromwhatIhaveexperiencedbefore,andIfinditverychallengingtocommunicatewiththosefashiondesignersandpeopleinthefashioncircle.Besides,workingovertimefrequentlymakesitimpossibletokeepmyselfhealthyandenergetic,whichIbelieveisnotbeneficialtothemagazine. Pleaseacceptmyapologyforanyinconveniencecausedbymyresignation.Yoursfaithfully,LiMing真题演练小作文：新搬来的邻居日日夜夜装修，写一封投诉信。真题演练小作文：你的朋友获得了博士学位，写信祝贺他，并告诉他你下周要去纽约出差，到时可以去看他。

真题演练小作文：你在旅游途中感冒了，幸亏导游照顾你，你写信给旅行社领导表示感谢。

真题演练小作文：写信给公司各部门，通知下周举行圣诞晚会，请同事准时到场。

PartII

短文写作（B节）考点：理解力 +语言组织力 +信息点 +语言点应试方法指南相关数据：120（±40）字、12句话、4段式

20-25分钟、20分题三类命题：提纲；图画+提纲；图表+提纲要求：

内容切题 表达清晰 意义连贯 语言规范方法：认真审题列出提纲快速写作增添亮点修改誊正图画式作文

之黄金模版反映现实，表赞成型：Part1—Asisshowninthepicture,…Noonecandenythat…Totake…forexample…Part2—Thereareseveralcausesfor…First…Second…Finally…(2paragraphs)Part3—Thus,thesearethereasonswhywemust…图画式作文

之黄金模版揭露现实，表反驳型：Part1—Itcanbeseenfromthecartoon/picturethat…Nowadaysthereismuchdiscussionastothephenomenonthat…Thisisindeedaproblemthatweshouldnotneglectanymore.Part2—Therearemanyreasonsfortheproblem.Inthefirstplace…Secondly…Whatismore…(2paragraphs)Part3—Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayseethatitistimeforustotakemeasuresto…Thefirststepis…Andthen…Finally…或者Tosummarize…hasalreadycausedpublicattention.Andweshouldtakeeffectivemeasuressuggestedaboveto…3-partWritingOpeningparagraphBodyparagraphsConcludingparagraphOpeningParagraphAnopeningsentenceThesisstatement

BodyparagraphsPar.1

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B.supportingsentences1,2,3,etc. C.concludingsentencePar.2

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ConcludingparagraphRestatementsentencesAppropriatecomments

AccordingtoChineseculture,

themostsuccessfulwritingisjustlike--

Aphoenix’sheadApig’sstomachAleopard’stail图画式作文

之黄金模版对某一现象，自我表态型Part1–Ascanbeseeninthepicture…Part2—Differentpeople,however,havedifferentopinionsonthismatter.Somethinkthat…Othersarguethat…Thereisnodoubtthat…Forexample…Asaconsequence,…Part3—AsfarasIamconcerned,Isupporttheviewthat…because….Somyconclusionisthat…图表式作文

之黄金模版Part1—Asisshowninthetable/picture,…droppedfrom…in1994to…in1996.rise,increase,reduceAccordingtothefiguresgiveninthetable,…hasgreatlyincreased/decreasedinthepast…years/decades,reaching…in1996.Fromthetablewecanalsoseethattherehasbeenasharpdecline/risein…It’sclearthat…Part2—Thereareatleasttworeasonsfor…Ontheonehand,…Let’shaveanexampletoillustratethegreatincreasein…Ontheotherhand,…isduetothefact…Inaddition,…isresponsiblefor…Maybetherearesomeotherreasonstoshow…Butitisgenerallybelievedthatthementionedreasonsarecommonlyacceptable.Part3—AsfarasIamconcerned,Itrustthat…Somyconclusionisthat…Iamsuremyopinionisbothsoundandwell-grounded.“差作文”的种种“共性”！

书写差，无美感，看不清，无法读下去；不通顺，“三无”：无段落、无结构、无明显主题；笑料多，出现很多基本语法错误，拼写错误；不达意，词汇量很小词不达意，缺乏表达能力；乱堆砌，不像一篇文章，仅是把一些不连贯的词语拼凑到一起;Howtowritegoodsentences?一、句子要简洁Aheroisnothingbutaproductofhistime.时势造英雄。写作要求精练，因为，简洁的表达能起到更加强调的作用。我们要写出效果好、影响大的文章，就要想方设法1）避免使用空洞、多余的短语；2）避免过多地使用较长的句子结构，如并列句和从属句等；3）避免不必要的重复。请看下面各例：1）OwingtothefactthatIhadalotofworktodo,itwasn’tpossibleformetoaccepttheirinvitation.本句要表达的意思很简单，可是一堆空洞的短语使句子显得很累赘，改为下面的句子就简洁明了多了。Iwastoobusytoaccepttheirinvitation.2)Heisamanwhoishonest,whoalwayspayshisjustdebts,andwhoobservesthegoldenrulesinhisdealingswithothers.英语中比较重要的从属概念可用从句的形式表达，其它次要的概念常用词或短语来表达，因为句子比短语显得更重要。过多地使用从句会把次要的与主要的概念混为一谈，削弱句子的重点。该句可改为：Heisanhonestmanwhoalwayspayshisjustdebts,andwhoobservesthegoldenrulesinhisdealingswithothers.3)Myhometownisaquiet,peacefulplace.Itisquietandpeacefulbecauseofthesmallnumberofpeoplelivingthere.有时为了构成平行的句子结构或达到强调的目的，我们会重复使用某些词语。但是，无目的地重复会导致笨拙。所以本句可改为：Myhometownisaquiet,peacefulplacebecauseofthesmallnumberofpeople.二、语言要生动写作时要吸引读者的兴趣，句子就需生动、充满活力。平淡无味的句子会使人生厌，注意力分散。但要写出生动的句子就必须注意做到：1.交错使用长短句长句和短句各有各的特点，各有各的用场。长句结构复杂、容量大，能表达比较复杂的内容，叙事具体、说理严密。短句结构简单、短小精悍、明白易懂。在写作中应当交错使用长句和短句，使句子的长短多样化，增加语言的表现力。请看下面的一段话：Ireturnedtomyroom.Therewasanoteundermydoor.ItwasfromBob.Hesaidhewasinthetownlookingforajob.Hehadn'tfoundanythingyet.Headdedthathewassorrytohavemissedme.这里出现的是一连串的短句，读起来使人感到单调乏味，而且各句之间所固有的逻辑关系没能用句法手段表达出来。为了使文字更为生动，意义更加明确，可做如下改动：WhenIreturnedtomyroom,IfoundanotefromBobunderthedoor.Hesaidhewasinthetownlookingforajob,buthadn’tfoundanythingyet.Headdedthathewassorrytohavemissedme.(2)既可以用肯定式也可以用否定式,例如:例1：Ishallgothereunlessitrains.Ishallgothereifitdoesn'train.例2：Theirdailylivesdon’tprovidethemwiththeexerciseneededtokeepthemhealthy.Theirdailylivesfailtoprovidethemwiththeexerciseneededtokeepthemhealthy.2.灵活使用多样句式要达到语言的生动性，写作时就要经常地变换句型和句子结构及表达思想的方式。切忌所有的句子都用相同的句型或句子结构，使文章读起来单调乏味。在考虑英语句式的变化时,我们一般从以下几个方面入手:(1)既可以用主动式也可以用被动式,例如:例1：Today,weusemachinesnotonlyinindustrybutinothersectorsofnationaleconomyaswell.Todaymachinesarewidelyusednotonlyinindustrybutinothersectorsofnationaleconomyaswell.例2：Somepeoplebelievethatitwillbepossibleforautomaticmachinestoreplacecompletelyinthefuture.Itisbelievedbysomepeoplethatitwillbepossibleforautomaticmachinestobereplacedcompletelyinthefuture.(3)某些修饰成分既可以用在句子前面也可以用在后面,还可以用在中间,例如:例1：Withacar,peoplecangetaroundfreely.Peoplecangetaroundfreelywithacar.例2：Infact,speakingisoneofthemostimportantmeansofcommunication.Speakingisinfactoneofthemostimportantmeansofcommunication.(4)既可以是正常语序也可以是倒装语序,例如:例1：AnewtypeofTVsetwasamongtheproductsondisplay.AmongtheproductsondisplaywasanewtypeofTVset.例2：Wedidnotrealizetheproblemofenergycrisisuntiltheendoflastcentury.Notuntiltheendoflastcenturydidwerealizetheproblemofenergycrisis.(5)既可以用简单句也可以用并列句或者主从复合句,例如:例1：Nowadaysalotofpeopleworkinoffice,spendingmostoftheirtimeindoors.Nowadaysalotofpeopleworkinofficeandtheyspendmostoftheirtimeindoors.例2：Therearemanymeansofgettinginformationandtheyenableustokeepupwithwhatisgoingonintheworld.Therearemanymeansofgettinginformationwhichenableustokeepupwithwhatisgoingonintheworld.3.善用形象化语言适当地使用一些修辞手法如比喻、夸张、排比、拟人等能更形象、更深刻地说明事理，增加文章的活力。例如：Inthemorningthedusthunglikefog,andthesunwasasredasripenewblood.(明喻)Hisdaughteristheappleofhiseyes.(暗喻)Anideaspokewithinhim,racingthroughhismind.(拟人)Hisvoicewasloudenoughtowakethedead.(夸张)Manyofusallowourchildrentoeatjunk,watchjunk,listentojunk,talkjunk,playwithjunk,andthenwearesurprisedwhentheyturnouttobesocialjunkies.(排比)4.恰当使用英语习语写作时适当地使用习语、成语等也是使语言生动活泼的好办法。如：Onceamanisdead,thereisnohelping;youcan’trekindlethesparkoflifeinhim.本句中的thereisnohelping是汉语式的英语，不符合英语的习惯说法。这里虽然用了比喻，但更改了原来的主语，句子显得罗嗦、笨拙。如果改成下面的习惯表达，句子变得既简洁又生动。Onceamanisdead,hecan’tbebroughtbacktolife.再如Thecommitteerefusedtolistentoourrequest.如果被改成Thecommitteeturnedadeafeartoourrequest.句子生动，增加了文采。友情提示句式多样化是英语作文取得高分的灵丹妙药，请你一定要勤学苦练，掌握这一招。另外，在使用一些修辞方法和英语习语的时候，要注意尽量避免老套的比喻或尽人皆知的习语。范文一（创新）Withtheeconomicglobalizationingincreasinglyintensive，inventionorinnovationhaseoneofcentraltopicaroundtheworld.Manycountriesseeitasthekeytodeveloptheireconomy.Ourgovernment，withnoexception，regarditas“thesoulofournation.”What，however，canwebenefitfromit？Firstofall，inventionorinnovationcanenhanceoverallnationaleconomy，whichisimportanttoheightenournationstatusintheworld.Additionally，iffactorieshavetheabilitiesininvention，thefactorieswillbebooming.Asaresult，theycanprovideourpeoplewithmorejobsanditwillmakeournationmorestable.Whatismore，amajorityofnewproductsmaybeavailablethroughinvention.Therefore，itisalsosignificantfactorforimprovingourlivingstandards.Owingtosuchbenefits，nowondermoreandmorecountriesfocusoninventiontoday.Recognizingitsimportanceisonlythefiststeptoadvocateinventionorinnovation，andsomeeffectivemeasuresshouldbetakenforit.Foronething，ourauthorityshouldcontinuetoenlargetherecruitofgraduate.Foranother，theconditionsofscientistsandskilledworkersshouldbefurtherimproved.Onlyinthisway，can“thesoulofournation”befullyembodiedandournationhaveabrighterfuture.范文二（保护环境）Fromthiscartoon，wecanseethatatthetopendoftheriver，isachemicalfactoryandapapermakingfactorywhichsendoutandpoisonouswastes.Andtheriverhasbeenseriouslypolluted，whichcanbeseenfromthecolorofit.Alongthis“black”river，thereareafewpeoplesellingfreshwaterwhichmusthavebeentakenfromfarawayplaces.Atthefirstglance，itisverystrangetoushowcanpeoplesellwateralongtheriver，butthisisthecase，becausethewaterinthisriverisundrinkable.Thispresentsaserioussocialproblem——environmentalpollution.Withthedevelopmentofeconomy，ourlivingstandardshavebeengreatlyimproved.Butwecan‘tignorethefacttheairwetakeinandthewaterwedrinktodayarenotasfreshandcleanastheyusedtobe.Somekindsofpollutioncanevenbedeadlytopeople.Itishightimethatwetooksomemeasurestosolvetheproblem.Ithinkwecanfirstcallpeople’sattentiontothisproblemsothattheywillbeawareoftheseriousconsequencesofit.Then，wecanpasscertainlawstorestrainthefactoriesfromsendingoutwastes.Finally，wecandomoreresearchworktofindoutwaystodealwiththewastes.真题演练大作文：妈妈1说：快把梨吃掉，别给奶奶看到，妈妈2说：快挑个大的梨给奶奶送去。请你分析一下这个情况。小作文：新搬来的邻居日日夜夜装修，写一封投诉信。真题演练大作文：小学生参加军训，谈谈你的观点。

真题演练大作文：国庆假期，很多人去风景点游玩，造成过分拥挤的情况，请你分析并给出解决方案。真题演练看图作文，第一个图是爷爷送小孩上学，小孩高兴地说：终于可以上学了。第二个图是放学了，爷爷领着小孩出校门，小孩说：原来上学就是做作业。

真题演练大作文：图表：在美国，超重的孩子逐年上升，分析原因和后果。PartIII

预测作文题信不信由你，考不考由他！不打无准备之仗，不参加无预测之考试！PRACTICEAscanbeseenfromthepictures,thekidisreallylivinglikeabirdinacage.Hewillevenfeeluneasywhensmellingfragranceofflowersorhearingbirdssingingonceinawhile,forfearofhis“considerateandcritical”parents.Thereisnothinginherlifebutpilesofhomeworkarrangedbyherteachersandparentsfromdawnuntildark.That’strueoftoday’sschoolstudents—theyareforeverlearningwhatisneverendingbothatschoolandathome.There’snodoubtthateverybodyknowsandnobodydeniestheseverefactthatitdoesmoreharmthangoodtothechildreneitherphysicallyorpsychologically.What’sworse,thissuperficialprocessdoesn’tnecessarilymeanultimatesuccess.Franklyspeaking,threegroupsofpeoplearetoberesponsibleforit.Firstandforemost,ourgovernmentmusttakeimmediateeffectivemeasurestoplan,regulateandmonitorourbasicandgeneraleducationactivitiestomakesureallthechildrenshouldandcouldonlyparticipateinthecompulsorynormalefficientschooleducation.Then,ourparentsshouldchangetheirout-of-dateconceptofeducationinthelightofcontempo