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2014年6月19日雅思写作范文（教育话题）

题目：Somepeoplethinkadultsshouldlearnpracticalskillsbythemselves,whileothersthinktheyshouldlearnwithteachersintheclassroom.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.

Thereisnodoubtthatadultsshouldkeeplearningnewskillstoremaincompetitiveintheworkplace.Whethertheyshouldlearntheseskillsbythemselvesorwithteachersisatopictodebate.

Self-learningmeansthatlearnerswouldhaveaflexibleschedulewithoutthelimitoftimeandspace.Mostadultshaveafamilytosupportandtheirworkmaykeepthembusyeveryday.Itisdifficultforthemtoallocateafixedtimeslottotakepartinatrainingcourse.Unlikechildren,adultshavemoreself-controlanddiscipline,whichmakesitpossibleforthemtolearnbythemselvesintheirsparetime.Besides,somepeoplepreferself-learningratherthanclassroomlearning,becausethelattertendstoplaceanemphasisontheoreticalknowledge..优选文档

Ontheotherhand,somepeopleadvocatelearningwithteachersinformaltrainingclasses.Qualifiedteacherswouldhelpstudentslearninafastandsystematicway.Whenpeoplelearnpracticalskills,experienceis

particularimportant.Theteacher’guidanceswouldhelpstudentsavoidmakingmistakesandwastingtime.Inatrainingclass,thestudentswouldknowsomeclassmatesandwastingtime.Inatrainingclass,thestudentswouldknowsomeclassmates,whowouldbecometheirpersonalresourcesintheirfuturecareers.

Inmyopinion,whenanadultdecidestolearnacertainskill,heorshe

shouldtakevariousfactorsintoconsideration.Self-learningismoresuitableforpeoplewhosetimeandfinanceislimited,butmoredisciplineisrequiredinthispattern.Forthosewhocanaffordthetimeandmoney,attendingatrainingclasswouldbeamoreeffectivewaytolearnpracticalskills,particularlycomplicatedskillswhicharedifficulttolearnbystudentsthemselves.

分析：

这个题是2010年7月15号的原题，属于教育话题中比较少见的成人教育。能够从成人学习的一些特点来张开。

第一，自学的利处是什么？灵便的时间安排flexibleschedule，没有时间和地址的限制

withoutthelimitoftimeandspace。成年人不像少儿，他们的特点是工作忙，有养家的压力supportthefamily，可是他们比少儿多了自控和自律，self-controlanddiscipline（剑4-4考官

范文的原词）。其他，去教室学习更重视理论placeanemphasisontheoreticalknowledge，

而题目是对于成年人学习适用技术的practicalskills。

那么和老师学习的利处是什么？老师都是专业人士qualified，有正确的指导guidance，

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都是职场小伙伴啊personalresources（又是剑5-2考官范文的原词）。

最后总结，自学self-learning合合时间和经济条件有限的学生，而有钱有闲的学生能够

选择去和老师学，特别是学一些复杂的技术complicatedskills。

2014年5月24日雅思写作范文（教育类）

题目：Manyyoungpeopleleaveschoolwithanegativeattitudetowardslearning.Whatarethereasonsandhowcanweencouragethemtostudy?

Inrecentyears,despitetheincreasinglevelofeducationthroughouttheworld,thedropoutrateisveryhighinsomeareasbecausemanystudentschoosetogiveupschooling.Therearesomereasonsthatmayccountforthisphenomenon.

Themainreasonispossiblythegrowingrecognitionthatschoollearning

isnotusefulforpeople’successaftergraduation.Itseemsthatthepurposeoflearningistopassexaminationsandobtainqualifications.Assomestudentsdonotseeanypracticalvalueofwhattheyarelearning,theylosetheirinterestinstudyandchoosetoleaveschool.Ifweconsiderthehighunemploymentrateamonguniversitygraduates,wecanunderstandwhymanyyoungpeopledonotwanttocontinuehighereducation.

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Anotherreasonisassociatedwiththechangeofsocialenvironment.Youngpeoplearelivinginafast-changingworldwithvariouskindsoftemptationsanddistractions.Whenpeopletendtocompeteinmateriallife,wealth,insteadofknowledge,hasbecomethemaincriterionfor

measuringaperson’ssuccess.Somehigh-techproducts,suchasmobilephonesandtheInternetprovideeasyaccesstoinformation,buttheyalsodistractyoungpeoplefromtheirstudy.

Tohelpstudentsdevelopapositiveattitudetowardslearning,thefirstthingweshoulddoistohelpthemrealizetheimportanceofstudy.Formaleducationenablespeopletolearnawiderangeofsubjectsandlayasolidfoundationforfuturedevelopment.Studiesshowthatin

workplaceemployee’averagessalariesincreasewiththeirlevelsofeducation.Asforthedistractionfromtheoutsideworld,parentsandteachersshouldtakemoreresponsibilitiesandprotectthestudentsfromtheadverseinfluenceofthesocialenvironment.

分析：

2014-04-12教育的目的：对社会有益vs实现个人理想（教育类话题）

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题目：Somepeoplebelievethepurposeofeducationisto

preparepeopletobeusefulmembersforsociety.Otherssay

thatthepurposeofeducationistoachievepersonal

ambitions.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.。

Thepurposeofeducationisdifficulttodefineandpeoplefromdifferentbackgroundsmayhavevaryingopinionsaboutthisissue.

Thereisawiderecognitionthatthegoalofeducationistocultivateusefulmembersforthesociety.Inmanycountries,schoolsarefundedorsubsidizedbythegovernment;therefore,peopleexpectthegraduatestocontributeinreturntothesociety,consideringtheknowledgeandskillsthattheyacquirethroughgoodeducationThis.factmakespeoplebelievethatthepurposeofeducationistopreparequalifiedpersonalforthedevelopmentofthesociety.

However,somepeoplearguethat,fortheperspectiveofstudents,thepurposeofeducationistoachievetheirpersonalambitionsorrealizetheirowndreams.Thisviewpointisadvocatedparticularlyamongpeoplewhoneedtopaythetuitionfeebythemselves,asnotallcountriesprovidefreeandhighqualitycompulsoryeducation.Moreover,ifpeoplebearinmind

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thattheycanliveabetterlifeinthefuturebystudyinghardinschool,theyarelikelytobemoremotivatedintheirstudy.Whenweconsiderthefactthatpeoplewithhighereducationlevelusuallyenjoybetterlivingconditionconditionsandhighersocialstatus,itseemstobetruethatthe

purposeofreceivingeducationisforone’spersonalwelfareand

aspirations.

Inmyopinion,educationshouldservebothpurposes:theprosperityofthesocietyandthefulfillmentofpersonalambitions.Ifweoveremphasizethebenefitsthateducationcanbringtothesociety,individualsmaylosetheirmotivationinstudy.Ontheotherhand,itisalsowrongforapersontoforgetthesocialresponsibilitythatheorsheshouldtake.Withoutdevotionandcommitmenttothewell-beingofallsocialmembers,theproductsofeducationwouldbeselfishpersonnelwithqualifications.

文章的正方写的是为了社会而念书，给出了以下几条原因：有很多国家的教育是免费的（比方除了中国以外的某些国家），政府开销给你念书，所以希望你能够回报社会（contributeinreturntothesociety）。其他，不论你的主观目的是什

么，当你受了教育今后你就有更大的能力为社会做贡献（servethesociety），所以为了社会而念书的原因能够建立。

反方是为了个人的成就和理想而念书。我们仍旧能够谈谈学费问题，当你在交

纳各样学杂费择校费补课费考试费的时候，莫非你此时心里想的是国家社稷？比方说你出国留学，花了几十万，莫非是为了学成今后报效祖国？这么思想尊贵的人毕竟是少许。我们不能够够忽略一个事实，受教育能够让人找到好的工作，过更好的生活，有更高的社会地位（socialstatus），所以念书为了个人发展，这样的见解也是原因充分的。若是大家念书为了个人前途和理想（ambitionandaspiration），应当会更有动力（bemoremotivated）。

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结论段仍旧是我们的折中式写法：若是念书只为社会，那么很多人会失去学习动力（losemotivation），可是每个受教育的人都应当肩负自己的社会责任。若是念书只为自己的话，那么教育的产品将会是一些拿着高学历的自私自利的人

2013-03-02

题目：UniversitiesandcollegesarenowofferingqualificationsthroughdistancelearningfromtheInternetratherthanteachersintheclassroom.Doyouthinktheadvantagesofthisdevelopmentoutweighthedisadvantages?

范文：

Inrecentyears,withtherapiddevelopmentoftheInternet,agrowingnumberofuniversitiesandcollegesareofferingdiplomasanddegreestostudentswhohaveattendedtheiron-onlinecoursesCompared.withthetraditionalwayoflearningintheclassroom,theirnewpatternhasmanybenefitsinsomeaspects.

Firstofall,distancelearningisflexibleintermsoftimeandspace,aslongasstudentshaveaccesstotheInternet.Theyenjoyedmorefreedom1

inarrangingtheirschedule,whichisparticularlyconvenientforthosewhohavefamiliestolookafterorhaveotherworktodo.Withouttheneedoftravelling,studentscanchooseuniversitieslocatedinothercities,

时间灵便

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orevenforeigncountries2.Also,thosewholiveinruralandremoteareashavemoreopportunitiestoreceivehighqualityeducationMoreover.,coursescanberecordedandmadeintovideoprograms,studentsocanlistentoprogramsoverandoveruntiltheyfullyunderstandthecontent.Forlecturers,theydonothavetorepeatthesamecontentindifferentclasses,whichsavesthemagreatdealoftimeandenergy.

However,distancelearningalsohasdrawbacksduetothelackofface-to-facecommunication.Thisnewmodefocusonimpartingandreceivingknowledge,withoutinteractionbetweenteachersandstudents.EventhoughteacherscananswerquestionsviatheInternet,studentswouldfellasenseofisolation.Intraditionalclassrooms,studentscancommunicatewitheachotherandlearnhowtogetalongwiththeirpeers.Thisisanimportantpartofeducationprograms,butcannotbeachievedthroughdistancelearning.

Inconclusion,distancelearningmakeseducationmoreflexibleandefficient,butitcannotreplacelearningwithteachersintheclassroom,becausetheroleofeducationismorethangrantingqualifications.

地址灵便

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2014年3月8日雅思写作范文(教育类）

题目：Somepeoplethinkthatallyoungpeopleshould

berequiredtohavefull-timeeducationuntiltheyare

atleast18yearsold.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree？

2014-03-08可否应当在学校呆到18岁（教育类）

Thelengthofcompulsoryeducationvariesindifferentcountries.Somepeoplemaintainthatyoungpeopleshouldstayinschoolbeforetheyare18yearsold.Ithinkthisviewpointisreasonable.

Thereisnodoubtthatschoolhasthebestenvironmentforstudying,

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whichisthemaintaskofchildrenandteenagers.Thewell-establishedcurriculumsystemcanhelpstudentsacquireknowledgeinvarious

subjects.Theabundantresourcesareavailabletofacilitatestudents’study.Whentheyhavequestions,experiencedteacherscangivethemhelp.Whenpeoplearebefore18yearsold,theyhavethebestmemoryandplentifulenergyandschoolenvironmentenablesthemtomakethemost

oftheseyearsfortheirstudy.

Apartfromthebenefitsforstudy,schoolscanbetterprotectstudentsfromharmfulimpactofthesociety.Peopleareimmatureunder18yearsold,lackingtheabilitytomaketherightjudgment.Iftheyleaveschool,theyarelikelytolearnbadbehaviorlikesmokingordrinking,orevenassociatewithdelinquentpeople.Someteenagersworkforfactoriesorcompanies,buttheyareoftenunderpaidandsomeworkisdetrimentaltotheirphysicalandpsychologicalhealth.

Wehavetoadmitthattherearesomestudentswhohopetoleaveschoolearlybecausetheywanttobeeconomicallyindependent,ortheydislikeacademicstudy.Ithinkteachersandparentsshouldhelpthemtorealizetheimportanceofstudyatayoungage.Forthosewhosefamilieshavefinancialdifficulty,thegovernmentshouldoffersomeaid.

Overall,Ibelievethatallpeopleshouldstayinschooluntilthey18.This

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policyisforthepurposeofprotectingyoungpeopleandensuringabetter

futureforthem.

分析：

3月8号的考试最出乎不测的是考到了流程图，而一周前的3月1号考的是地图题。

显然是考官成心的。这就是所谓的反展望吧。这样的事情其实昨年也发生过，昨年的2月

14号和2月23号也是考的地图和流程图。考前可否应当准备流程图和地图，大家自己看着办啊！

这个谈论文的题目是2010年11月6号的原题。属于典型的教育类话题。学生可否应当在学校呆到18岁？你能够选择赞同或许不同样样意，可是我建议你选择赞同。因为这样一

来就可以用到很多教育话题里面的常例素材。这个题目的实质变成了写学校的功能。本文写

的是两个功能：一是优秀的学习环境，二是能够防备学生免受外界的不良影响。这篇范文的

词汇还波及到孩子的成长特点，孩子的行为问题，里面的很多词汇在写其他的教育话题中会特别适用。

2014年1月18日雅思写作范文（教育类话题）

题目：Childrenfinditdifficulttoconcentrateonorpayattentiontotheirstudyinschool.Whatarethereasons?Howcanwesolvethisproblem?

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2014-01-18学生不能够够专注于学习的原因和解决方法Itseemsdifficultforstudentstofocustheirattentionon

theirstudyinschoolandthisessaywillanalyzethepossiblereasonsforthisandoffersomesolutionsaccordingly.

Amongallthefactorsthatdistractstudentsfromtheirstudy,electronicproductsmayhavethemostsignificantimpact.Mobilephonesandlaptopsaresocommonlyseeninthecampusthatmanystudentscannotlivewithoutthesetechnicalgadgets.Theyspendagreatdealoftimetextingmessagesandansweringphonecalls,letalonegettingaddictedtoplayingvideogames.TheuniversalaccesstotheInternetmeanschildrenareexposedtoinformationfromtheoutsideworld.Allthesedistractionswouldmakeithardforstudentstoconcentrateontheiracademicstudy..优选文档

Anotherpossiblereasonischildren’stendencytocompetewiththeirpeersovermaterialthings.Withthegapbetweentherichandthepoorwidening,childrenfromdifferentsocialbackgroundshowobviousdisparityintheirclothesandstationary.Iftheydiverttheirattentiontothesedifferencesinmateriallife,itisnotsurprisingthattheywouldneglect

study,whichistheirmaintaskinschool.

Aschildrenaretooyoungtojudgewhatisrightorwrong,

teachersandparentsneedtosetsomerulesandregulationsforthem.IfusingmobilephonesandtheInternetcanberestrictedinschool,therewillbelessdistractiontochildren’slife.Thiscanbeachievedbyallowingthemtousethesedevicesataregulatedtime.Teachersshouldencouragethemtocompeteintheiracademicperformanceratherthanmaterialthingsand

guidethemtodevelopapositiveattitudetowardslifeandstudy.

分析：

这是大家比较喜欢写的教育话题，而且是对于仔细学习的话题，看起来应当很好写。

可是这也是绝对的新题。现在的考官很少会重复以前如出一辙的旧题，而是把旧题稍微做一些改装。

这篇文章用到了两条最常用的论据，一条是电子产品的宽泛使用，孩子沉醉于网络

和电子游戏，所以不能够够好好学习。这样就把科技类话题里的一些素材能够用上。另一条原因是孩子的家庭条件有差别，少儿简单关注物质享受，而不关注学习，这一条也是教育话题里

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的常例论据。

教育话题素来是雅思虑试的重点，这个题目还可是一个开始，今年还会有更多的教育话题陆续登场，而且能够希望的是，考官必然会不断调整出题的方式。大家应当仔细收集这类话题的词汇和素材，而且做到灵便运用。

2015年5月16日雅思写作考题分析与范文（教育话题）

题目：Somepeoplebelievethatinordertoimproveeducationalquality,weshouldencouragestudentstomakecommentsorevencriticismontheirteachers,butothersthinkitwillleadtothelossofrespectanddisciplineintheclassroom.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.

分析：

这个题目在教育话题里面难度中等。对于学生给老师提建议，我写了两条利处：1.促

使老师改良讲课2.培养学生独立思虑。这两点大家应当比较简单想到。重点在于怎样去展

开论证。为什么老师能够改良讲课？因为学生提建议对于老师是一种监察（supervise），老

师讲课可能会有不足（deficiency），学生提出来了，老师能够实时纠正。否则老师也可能

会懒散（slackoff）。第二条是培养了学生的独立思虑能力。这条素材我们以前写过很多次，

我在本文中仍旧用到了创新（makeinnovation），以及提高学生的想象力和创立力

（imaginationandcreativity）。

反方的见解以为这么做会有缺点：学生变得不尊敬老师（losetheirrespect），老师的权

威碰到挑战（authorityischallenged），老师会比较沮丧（frustrated），难以保护讲堂纪律

（maintainthediscipline），而且有的学生可能会利用这个机遇表达对老师的不满（express

theirdissatisfaction）。

最后一段个人见解：仍旧是折中的态度。给老师提建议是一种很好的互动（interaction），

有益于提高讲课质量，可是也要注意方法（doitproperly）。

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2015-5-16学生可否能够给老师提建议（教育话题）

Insomeschoolsstudentsareallowedtocommentonorevencriticizetheirteachers.However,theeffectofthispracticeisatopicofdebate.

Accordingtosomepeople,allowingstudentstocriticizetheirteacherscanmotivatetheteacherstoimprovetheirworkbecausetheteachers’workwouldbesupervisedbythestudentsandtheschoolboard.Theteacherscandiscoverthedeficiencyintheirteachingandcorrectitin

time.Ifnoonepointsouttheteachers’mistakes,theteachersmayslackoff.Inaddition,makingcommentsontheirteacherscandevelop

students’abilityofindependentthinking,whichisanimportantfactorintheirgrowth.Studentswithsuchaqualityaremorelikelytomakeinnovationintheirstudyandwork.Bycontrast,thosewhofollowotherpeopleblindlymayberestrictedintheirimaginationandcreativity.

However,itisarguedthatifstudentsarepermittedtocriticizetheirteachers,theymaylosetheirrespectfortheirteachers.Theteachersmayfeelfrustratedbecausetheirauthorityischallengedbythestudents.Thiswouldmakeitdifficultforthemtomaintainthedisciplineintheclassroom.Somestudentsmytakethischancetoexpresstheirdissatisfactionfortheirteachers,asteenagersusuallylacktheabilityto.优选文档

judgerightfromwrong.

Inmyview,encouragingstudentsandteacherstohavemoreinteractionisagoodwaytoimprovethequalityofeducation