初中英语写作公开课九级教学课件

ALessonofWritingALessonofWriting1Howtowriteacomposition.Howtowriteacomposition.2Example:ImaginethatyouareLiMing,writeacompositionaboutthechangestakenplaceinyourhometown.

Keypoints:1.Topic（主题）:changes2.who:LiMing3.Where:LiMing’shometown4.tense(时态):pasttense&presenttense

一般过去时&一般现在时First,considerthetaskcarefully.Example:First,considerthetas3LivingconditionCellphonesjobstransportationchangeshousecarsSecond,brainstorm(头脑风暴)educationshopsfoodroadscomputersclothesbuildingworkingtools农耕工具reasongovernmenteffortsLivingconditionCellphonesjob4liveinalowhouseliveinatallbuildingplantcropswiththehelpoffarmanimalsplantcropswiththehelpoffarmmachinesstudyinanoldschoolstudyinamodernschoolLivingconditionWorkingtoolseducationliveinalowhouseplantcrops5LivingconditionWorkingtoolseducationchangesBrainstormforthebody(正文)a.

Changesin

livingconditions.b.

Changesin

workingtools.C.

Changesin

education.LivingconditionWorkingtoolse6OutlineTitle题目:

ChangesinLiMing’sHometownHeading开头：Greatchangeshavetakenplacein……Body正文:a.

Changesin

livingconditionsb.

Changesin

workingtoolsC.

Changesin

educationConclusion结尾:Thankstothegovernment’sefforts(努力),LiMing’shometownisbecomingbetterandbetter.Next,drawupanoutline.提纲OutlineNext,drawupanoutlin7Then,writethecomposition.Then,writethecomposition.8Finally,checkoverthecomposition.Finally,checkoverthecompos9ChangesinLiMing’sHometown

GreatchangeshavetakenplaceinLiMing’shometownsincethereformandopening-up.

Inthepast,peoplelivedinlowhouses.Thefarmersplantedcropsonlywiththehelpoffarmanimals.Childrenstudiedinoldschools.

Butnow,mostpeopleliveintallbuildings.Thefarmerscanplantcropswiththehelpoffarmmachines.Andchildrenstudyinmodernschools.Thankstothegovernment’sefforts,LiMing’shometownisbecomingbetterandbetter.Onepossibleversion:heading开头body正文conclusion结尾ChangesinLiMing’sHometownO10AWritingPracticeWriteyourowncompositionaboutGreatchangesinmyHometown.AWritingPractice11以GreatchangesinmyHometown

为题，按下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文，介绍自己家乡的变化。1、过去生活贫困，房屋破旧阴暗；道路窄交通不便。2、现在住房宽敞、明亮；现代学校，孩子可接受良好的教育；马路宽广，许多人有小车，交通方便；人们生活大为改善。3、未来会更加富饶和美丽4、我的感受是希望记住过去，展望未来是很重要的。

可能会用到的词汇：poorandbackward贫穷落后的；traffic

交通；

convenient

方便的；Thanksto多亏；thecountryandthegovernment国家和政府；takeplace发生；education教育；modern现代；dreamabout憧憬

以GreatchangesinmyHometo12Requirement:1.topic:2.who:3.Where:4.Whatchanges：5.Tense时态:First,consideritcarefully.greatchangesI/myselfmyhometownliferoadshousespasttense&presenttense

……Requirement:First,considerit13LivingconditiontransportationchangeshouseBrainstorming(头脑风暴)educationroadsbuildingLivingconditiontransportation14Example:Outline提纲Title题目:GreatchangesinmyHometownHeading开头：Body正文:a.Changesin

…b.Changesin

…c.Changesin

…Conclusion结尾:Next,drawupanoutline.LifeHouseRoadshouselifeeducationtransportationExample:Next,drawupanoutli15nowUsedtobe…Once曾经pastManyyearsagois/areInthepastAtpresentbeforenowadaystodayWas/wereMakesentences.eg:1.Inthepast,myhometownwaspoor.

2.Myhometownusedtobepoor.Then:Brainstormforthetense(时态)nowUsedtobe…Once曾经pastManyy16LivingconditionCellphonestransportationwideroadscleancarsBrainstormforthebody(正文)dirtybetternarrowpoorclothesConvinent方便的improveeg:1.Manyyearsago,theroadsinmyhometownwasnarrowanddirty.2.Nowadays,theroadsinmyhometownarewideandclean.3.Today,manyfamilieshavecars.LivingconditionCellphonestra17schoolhouseBrainstormforthebody(正文)schoolhouseBrainstormforthe18Then,writethecomposition.Then,writethecomposition.19以GreatchangesinmyHometown

为题，按下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文，介绍自己家乡的变化。1、过去生活贫困，房屋破旧阴暗；道路窄交通不便。2、现在住房宽敞、明亮；现代学校，孩子可接受良好的教育；马路宽广，许多人有小车，交通方便；人们生活大为改善。3、未来会更加富饶和美丽4、我的感受是希望记住过去，展望未来是很重要的。

可能会用到的词汇：poorandbackward贫穷落后的；traffic

交通；

convenient

方便的；thanksto多亏；thecountryandthegovernment国家和政府；takeplace发生；education教育；modern现代；dreamabout憧憬

以GreatchangesinmyHometo20TheChangesinMyHometownIamLiMing,todayIhaveinterviewedmygrandmother.Shehaslivedinmyhometownformorethanseventyyears.Shehasseenthechangesinmyhometownherself.Inthepast,myhometownwasverysmallandpoor.Theroadswerenarrow.Thepeoplecouldn’tgetenoughfood.Butnow,theroadsweresowide,andtherearemoreandmorekindsoffoodtosatisfypeople’sneeds.Andnow,eachfamilyhastelephones,TVs,computersandsoon.Ithinkmyhometownwillbemoreandmorebeautifulinthefuture!TheChangesinMyHometown21ChangesinMyHometownMyhometownusedtobeabackwardplace,becauseitwasdeepinthemountains,wheretherewerenonicebuildingsandtheroadsweresonarrowanddirty.Peoplelivedapoorlife.Whileinrecentyears,withthedevelopmentofsociety,myhometownhasbeengreatlychanged.Nowtheroadsaregettingmuchwider.Treesandflowersareplantedonthetwosidesoftheroads.Theycanprovideuswithoxygenandfightagainstthepollutions.Sotheskybecomescleanerandbrighter.What’smore,youcanseemanymodernandbeautifulbuildingseverywhere,andthelivingconditionsareimproving.Peopleareenjoyingacomfortablelifenow.ChangesinMyHometown22Goodbye!Goodbye!231、考前物质准备考试前一天要整理好学习生活用具。首先是准考证；其次是钢笔、铅笔、圆规、直尺、量角器、三角板、橡皮等；再次是必要的如手绢、清凉油和生活用品。

2、考前心理准备成绩优秀的考生应记住：“没有常胜将军”、“不以一次成败论英雄”；成绩不太好的考生要有“破釜沉舟”的决心。

3、高考当天早晨，应有良好的心理暗示如“我很放松，今天一定能正常发挥”、“今天我很冷静，会考好的”等。

4、注意早餐早晨一定要吃丰盛的早饭，但不能过于油腻。

5、浏览笔记、公式、定理和知识结构主要是浏览一下重要的概念、公式和定理，或记一些必须强记的数据。

6、进考室前10分钟在考室外最好是一人平静地度过，可就近找个地方坐一会儿，或看一下笔记，再次浏览知识结构。设法避开聊天。

1、考前物质准备考试前一天要整理好学习生活用具。首先是准考24ALessonofWritingALessonofWriting25Howtowriteacomposition.Howtowriteacomposition.26Example:ImaginethatyouareLiMing,writeacompositionaboutthechangestakenplaceinyourhometown.

Keypoints:1.Topic（主题）:changes2.who:LiMing3.Where:LiMing’shometown4.tense(时态):pasttense&presenttense

一般过去时&一般现在时First,considerthetaskcarefully.Example:First,considerthetas27LivingconditionCellphonesjobstransportationchangeshousecarsSecond,brainstorm(头脑风暴)educationshopsfoodroadscomputersclothesbuildingworkingtools农耕工具reasongovernmenteffortsLivingconditionCellphonesjob28liveinalowhouseliveinatallbuildingplantcropswiththehelpoffarmanimalsplantcropswiththehelpoffarmmachinesstudyinanoldschoolstudyinamodernschoolLivingconditionWorkingtoolseducationliveinalowhouseplantcrops29LivingconditionWorkingtoolseducationchangesBrainstormforthebody(正文)a.

Changesin

livingconditions.b.

Changesin

workingtools.C.

Changesin

education.LivingconditionWorkingtoolse30OutlineTitle题目:

ChangesinLiMing’sHometownHeading开头：Greatchangeshavetakenplacein……Body正文:a.

Changesin

livingconditionsb.

Changesin

workingtoolsC.

Changesin

educationConclusion结尾:Thankstothegovernment’sefforts(努力),LiMing’shometownisbecomingbetterandbetter.Next,drawupanoutline.提纲OutlineNext,drawupanoutlin31Then,writethecomposition.Then,writethecomposition.32Finally,checkoverthecomposition.Finally,checkoverthecompos33ChangesinLiMing’sHometown

GreatchangeshavetakenplaceinLiMing’shometownsincethereformandopening-up.

Inthepast,peoplelivedinlowhouses.Thefarmersplantedcropsonlywiththehelpoffarmanimals.Childrenstudiedinoldschools.

Butnow,mostpeopleliveintallbuildings.Thefarmerscanplantcropswiththehelpoffarmmachines.Andchildrenstudyinmodernschools.Thankstothegovernment’sefforts,LiMing’shometownisbecomingbetterandbetter.Onepossibleversion:heading开头body正文conclusion结尾ChangesinLiMing’sHometownO34AWritingPracticeWriteyourowncompositionaboutGreatchangesinmyHometown.AWritingPractice35以GreatchangesinmyHometown

为题，按下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文，介绍自己家乡的变化。1、过去生活贫困，房屋破旧阴暗；道路窄交通不便。2、现在住房宽敞、明亮；现代学校，孩子可接受良好的教育；马路宽广，许多人有小车，交通方便；人们生活大为改善。3、未来会更加富饶和美丽4、我的感受是希望记住过去，展望未来是很重要的。

可能会用到的词汇：poorandbackward贫穷落后的；traffic

交通；

convenient

方便的；Thanksto多亏；thecountryandthegovernment国家和政府；takeplace发生；education教育；modern现代；dreamabout憧憬

以GreatchangesinmyHometo36Requirement:1.topic:2.who:3.Where:4.Whatchanges：5.Tense时态:First,consideritcarefully.greatchangesI/myselfmyhometownliferoadshousespasttense&presenttense

……Requirement:First,considerit37LivingconditiontransportationchangeshouseBrainstorming(头脑风暴)educationroadsbuildingLivingconditiontransportation38Example:Outline提纲Title题目:GreatchangesinmyHometownHeading开头：Body正文:a.Changesin

…b.Changesin

…c.Changesin

…Conclusion结尾:Next,drawupanoutline.LifeHouseRoadshouselifeeducationtransportationExample:Next,drawupanoutli39nowUsedtobe…Once曾经pastManyyearsagois/areInthepastAtpresentbeforenowadaystodayWas/wereMakesentences.eg:1.Inthepast,myhometownwaspoor.

2.Myhometownusedtobepoor.Then:Brainstormforthetense(时态)nowUsedtobe…Once曾经pastManyy40LivingconditionCellphonestransportationwideroadscleancarsBrainstormforthebody(正文)dirtybetternarrowpoorclothesConvinent方便的improveeg:1.Manyyearsago,theroadsinmyhometownwasnarrowanddirty.2.Nowadays,theroadsinmyhometownarewideandclean.3.Today,manyfamilieshavecars.LivingconditionCellphonestra41schoolhouseBrainstormforthebody(正文)schoolhouseBrainstormforthe42Then,writethecomposition.Then,writethecomposition.43以GreatchangesinmyHometown

为题，按下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文，介绍自己家乡的变化。1、过去生活贫困，房屋破旧阴暗；道路窄交通不便。2、现在住房宽敞、明亮；现代学校，孩子可接受良好的教育；马路宽广，许多人有小车，交通方便；人们生活大为改善。3、未来会更加富饶和美丽4、我的感受是希望记住过去，展望未来是很重要的。

可能会用到的词汇：poorandbackward贫穷落后的；traffic

交通；

convenient

方便的；thanksto多亏；thecountryandthegovernment国家和政府；takeplace发生；education教育；modern现代；dreamabout憧憬

以GreatchangesinmyHometo44TheChangesinMyHometownIamLiMing,todayIhaveinterviewedmygrandmother.Shehaslivedinmyhometownformorethanseventyyears.Shehasseenthechangesinmyhometownherself.Inthepast,myhometownwasverysmallandpoor.Theroadswerenarrow.Thepeoplecouldn’tgetenoughfood.Butnow,theroadsweresowide,andtherearemoreandmorekindsoffoodtosatisfypeople’sneeds.Andnow,eachfamilyhastelephones,TVs,computers