【课件】2021年3月广州一模读后续写：巧克力的故事

2021年3月广州一模读后续写

巧克力的故事第二节读后续写（满分25分）355words阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Ittookplaceinateachersfamily.Oneday,Benwasplayingbasketballinthelivingroomafterschool,whenheaccidentallythrewtheballatavasesittingontheshelf.Thevasedroppedtothefloorandalargepiecebrokeoff.WhatmadeBenmoreupsetwasthatthevasewasnotacommondecorationbutanantique,whichwashandeddownthroughgenerationsfromthe18thcentury.Itwasalsohismother'sfavouritepossession.Tocoverhisterribleaction,theterrifiedboygluedthepiecestogetherhastilyandputthevasebacktoitsplace.

Asthemotherherselfdustedthevaseeveryday,shenaturallynoticedthecracks(裂纹)thatevening.Tohersurprise,therepairworkwasactuallyverygood.Atdinnertime,sheaskedherboyifhebrokethevase.Fearingpunishment,thesuddenlyinspiredboysaidthataneighbor'scatjumpedinfromthewindowandhecouldn’tdriveitawaynomatterhowhardhetried.Itracedaroundthelivingroomandfinallyknockedthevaseoffitsshelf.Hismotherwasquiteclearthathersonwaslying,forallthewindowswereclosedbeforesheleftforworkeachmorningandopenedaftershereturned.However,inthefaceofherson’snervouseyesandthesuspiciouslooksoftheotherfamilymembers.Ben’smotherremainedcalm.Sherealizedsheshouldn’tjustsimplyblameandpunishhersonforlying.Shecameupwithanotheridea.

Beforegoingtobed,theboyfoundanotefromhismotherinhisroom,askinghimtogotothestudyatonce.Theboythoughthewouldnowbepunishedbut,ashehadalreadylied,hewasdeterminedtodenyeverythingtotheend,nomatterhowangryhismumbecame.

Inthestudy,calmlybathedinthelight,hismother'sfaceshowednosignofanger.Onseeinghersonpushopenthedoorandcautiouslyenter,shetookachocolateboxoutofadrawerandgavehimone.ReadforcharactersReadforconflictsReadforplotReadforemotionalchangesReadfortheme123455RsforContinuationWritingReadforCharactersRead1BenMothercalmlybathedinthelight,hismother'sfaceshowednosignofanger.naughtyBenwasplayingbasketballinthelivingroomafterschool,whenheaccidentallythrewtheballatavasesittingontheshelf.ashehadalreadylied,hewasdeterminedtodenyeverythingtotheend,nomatterhowangryhismumbecame.thesuddenlyinspiredboysaidthataneighbor'scatjumpedinfromthewindowandhecouldn’tdriveitawaynomatterhowhardhetried.quick-mindedrebelliousBen’smotherremainedcalm.Sherealizedsheshouldn’tjustsimplyblameandpunishhersonforlying.Shecameupwithanotheridea.calm;intelligent;patientAteacherIttookplaceinateacher’sfamily.Benwouldn’tadmithisfaulteasily.Ben’smotherwouldleadhimtoadmithisfaultinsteadofforcinghim.ReadReadforConflict...However,inthefaceofherson’snervouseyesandthesuspiciouslooksoftheotherfamilymembers.Ben’smotherremainedcalm.Sherealizedsheshouldn’tjustsimplyblameandpunishhersonforlying.Shecameupwithanotheridea.Beforegoingtobed,theboyfoundanotefromhismotherinhisroom,askinghimtogotothestudyatonce.Theboythoughthewouldnowbepunishedbut,ashehadalreadylied,hewasdeterminedtodenyeverythingtotheend,nomatterhowangryhismumbecame.Inthestudy,calmlybathedinthelight,hismothersfaceshowednosignofanger.Onseeinghersonpushopenthedoorandcautiouslyenter,shetookachocolateboxoutofadrawerandgavehimone.Benwasdeterminednottotellthetruthwhilehismotherwantedtomakehimadmit.Theconflictwassolvedbyaboxofchocolate.2ReadforPlotReadkeysentence:Sherealizedsheshouldn’tjustsimplyblameandpunishhersonforlying....shetookachocolateboxoutofadrawerandgavehimone

(p1)Benbrokethevaluablevasebyaccidentandgluedit.thebeginningMaindevelopmentResolutiontheending(p2)Benliedbuthismomcouldtellhislie.Climax(p3-p4)MomaskedBentogotothestudyandBenwasdeterminedtodenyeverythingtotheend.(p5)Ben'smomhadatalkwithhimwithaboxofchocolates.(p6)Ben'sbadattitudedisappeared.3Thischocolateisarewardfor...Withsomechocolatesinhand...Anotherchocolateisfor...Onemorechocolatefor...Paragraph1:Themothersaid,"Thischocolateisarewardforyourimagination:awindow-openingcat!”

Paragraph2:Nowwithsomechocolatesinhand,theboy’sbadattitudedisappeared.ReadReadforEmotionalChangesBen'sEmotionalChangesscarednervousBADattitudesembarrassedashamed4ReadReadforThemeorhonestyorfamilyeducation?5whatisthemomtryingtoteachhisson?

Whatistheauthortryingtotellthereader?Identifythethemeofthestory

Ittookplaceinateacher'sfamily.Oneday,Benwasplayingbasketball.......Itwasalsohismother'sfavouritepossession.Tocoverhisterribleaction,theterrifiedboy......Asthemotherherself.....Fearingpunishment,thesuddenlyinspiredboysaid...Hismotherwasquiteclear.....Ben’smotherremainedcalm.Sherealizedsheshouldn’tjustsimplyblameandpunishhersonforlying.Shecameupwithanotheridea.……Theboythoughthewouldnowbepunishedbut,ashehadalreadylied,hewasdeterminedtodenyeverythingtotheend,nomatterhowangryhismumbecame.......Nowwithsomechocolatesinhand,theboy’sbadattitudedisappeared.Theme--Whatistheauthortryingtosaytothereader?Paragraph1:

Themothersaid,"Thischocolateisarewardforyourimagination:awindow-openingcat!”

Q1:Anotherchocolateisfor...Q2:Onemorechocolatefor?Q3:WhatwereBen’sfeelingsandreactionstothemother’swords?Paragraph2:Nowwithsomechocolatesinhand,theboy’sbadattitudedisappeared.Q1:WhatdidBendoorsay?Q2:Whatdidmotherdoorsay?Q3：Howtoechothetheme?PredictionClue1:Tohersurprise,therepairworkwasactuallyverygood.Clue2:Theboy’sbadattitudedisappeared.

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Themothersaid,"Thischocolateisarewardforyourimagination:awindow-openingcat!”Astonishedashewasatherrewardinsteadofharshscold,Benreluctantlyreceivedit,notdaringtofixhiseyesonhismother’s.Then,themothersqueezedanotherchocolateinhishandasapraiseforhistoppingabilitytoskillfullyrestorethebrokenvase.Glancingatthechocolateswithhesitation,theboytimidlyraisedhisheadbeforehismother.Obviously,thetensiononhisfacefadedalittlebit.“Now,”themotherpickedoutathirdchocolateandsoftlycontinued,“thelastchocolate.Iamsosorry,mylittlesweetheart.Ishouldn’thavelaidafragilevaseataninappropriateplace,especiallywhenthereisaboysoabsorbedinsports.”Nowwithsomechocolatesinhand,theboy'sbadattitudedisappeared.“But,Mum,I…”,attemptingtomakesomethingclear,Benawkwardlyutterednothingbutsomewords.Hismothersilencedhimbygentlyputtingherfingeronhislips，gaveasoftkissonhisforeheadandwalkedoutofthestudy.Backi