和高考真题学写作-叙事：难忘的经历 讲义-高三英语二轮复习写作专项

和高考真题学写作--叙事：难忘的经历讲义2022年高考英语真题（新高考一卷）的完形填空是一篇记事类的记叙文。回忆了两次难忘的宿营经历。阅读完全文后，可以看出作者的思路很有条理，时间、地点、人物、事件都交代的很明确。行文过程中，人物动作、心理、天气环境都有适度描写。语言简练，不拖沓。我们先一起看一下原文：Myhusband,ourchildrenandIhavehadwonderfulcampingexperiencesoverthepasttenyears.Someofourmemoriesarefunny,especiallyfromtheearlyyearswhenourchildrenwerelittle.Once,wecampedalongChalkCreek.Iwasworriedthatour15-month-oldboywouldfallintothecreek(小溪).Itiedaropearoundhiswaisttokeephimneartoourspot.Thatlastedabouttenminutes.Hewasuncomfortable,andhiscryingletthewholecampgroundknowit.Soinsteadoftyinghimup,Ijustkeptacloseeyeonhim.Itworked---hedidn’tendupinthecreek.Mythree-year-old,however,did.Anothertime,werentedaboatinVallecitoLake.Theskywasclearwhenweheadoff,butstormsmoveinfastinthemountains,andthisonequicklyinterruptedourpeacefulmorningtrip.Thewindpickedupandthunderrolled.Myhusbandstoppedfishingtostartthemotor.Nothing.Hetriedagain.Noluck.Wewerestuckinthemiddleofthelakewithadeadmotor.Asweallsattherehelplessly,afishermanpulledup,threwusaropeandtowed(拖)usback.Weweresafe.Now,everyyearwhenmyhusbandpullsourcamperoutofthegarage,wearefilledwithasenseofexcitement,wonderingwhatcampingfunandadventurewewillexperiencenext.梳理一下文章的脉络：宿营经历1时间（when）once(whenourchildrenwerelittle)地点（where）besideChalkCreek人物（who)I,15-month-oldboy,3-year-oldboy事件（what）溪边宿营，大儿子掉河里了事件发展（how）溪边宿营，担心小儿子掉小溪里，绳子绑腰，儿子哭闹，松绑后的小儿子没掉河里，大儿子反而掉河里了。原因（why)宿营经历2时间（when)anothertime(whenourchildrenwerelittle)地点（where）inVallecitoLake人物（who)I,husband,fisherman事件（what）租船游湖，被困获救事件发展（how）租船游湖，天气骤变，发动机无法启动，被困湖中，渔夫帮忙，全家获救。原因（why)主体段落（第二、三段）使用了如下的逻辑关系助力情节发展：第二段（宿营经历1）时间关系：when,once,last因果关系：worried→tiedarope,cry→so...承接关系：and转折关系：insteadof,however解释说明关系：破折号——第三段（宿营经历2）时间关系：anothertime,when,as转折关系：but承接关系：and并列关系：and因果关系：with大家认真体会，多多诵读，以读促写。接着我们泛读一篇适合高中生的外刊文章，再趁热打铁练一篇小作文。【拓展阅读】外媒节选：DAWN相关主题：生活故事难易程度：易词数：800AMemorableDayIwokeupexcitedly.Thisdaywasspecial.ItwasmybirthdayandIwassurethatIwasgoingtoreceiveagreatdealofwishesandpresentsthisyear.Igotofffrommybedandrushedtomybathroomtogetdressedinthebestpossiblemanner.IworethebeautifuldressthatIhadboughtespeciallyforthisday.Islippedonmytwinklingjewelry,putonsomelightmake-up,dressedmyhairandwentdownforbreakfast.Momwasinthekitchen.Iflashedabrightsmileather,waitingforhertowishmeandgivemeahug.Butmysmilesoonvanishedasmymotherstartedrollingwithlaughter.Iwasconfused.Iaskedherwhatthematterwas.Controllingherlaughter,shemanagedtoanswerme,whichsoundedsomethinglike,“Whyareyoudresseduplikethatearlyinthemorning?Areyoualright?”Istartedwonderingwhatwaswrongwithher,andmyworriesgrewevenmorewhenshestoppedlaughingsuddenly.Withaconcernedfaceshecametowardsme.Shetappedmycheektwiceandasked,“Honey,areyousleepwalking?”Iwantedtoburstoutinanger.Iwantedtoscreamather.IwantedtotellherthatIwasdressedupbecauseitwasmybirthday!Butthen,somethingstruckmymind.Isaidtomyself,'Ismomalright?'Ihadnoideawhattosaytoher.IjusttoldherthatI'llberightbackandthenwentuptomyroom.IchangedintoacasualdressandjustwhenIwasabouttostartcryingwithmyheadburiedinthepillow,mymomcame.Sheseemedmorecomposed.Shetoldmethatshewassorryforherbehaviordownstairs,shejustcouldn'tcontrolit.Shegavemeahugandtookmedownforbreakfast.Ibreathedasighofrelief.Irealizedthatnothingwaswrongwithher.Shehadonlyforgottenmybirthday.Idecidednottotellhermyself.Afterafewmoments,mybrotherandmyfathercameforbreakfastaswell.Igavethemboththesameflashysmile,butwasheartbrokeninstantlywhennoneofthemwishedme.Ithoughtthatmaybetheyareplanningasurprisebirthdaypartyforme,andthatwasthereasonnoneofthemwishedme.IfeltexcitedasIlovesurprisebirthdayparties.Alldaylong,Istayedinmyroomsothatmyfamilycouldeasilyprepareformyparty.Ikeptcountingeverypassingsecond,impatiently.Iloggedontotheinternetanddidn'tfindasinglebirthdaywishorcardintheemail.Itexcitedmeevenmore.IwasimaginingwhatpresentsImightgetthisyearwhenmymomcametomyroomandsaid,“Whyareyoustuckinyourroomsincemorning?I'mconcerned!Areyouupsetoranything?”IsmiledatherandtoldherthatIwasfineandIjustwantedalittletimetomyselftoday.Shesmiledbackandleft.Intheevening,mymothercametomeandsaidthatshewasleavingforherfriend'shouseandifIwantedtocomealongaswell.Iknewshewastryingtofoolmeandsheonlywantedmetogetdressedfortheparty.Irepliedtoherinaffirmativeandstarteddressingup.IheldmybreathwhenIwasleavingmyroom,preparingmyselfforourhousedecoratedwithballoonsandribbons.Iclosedmyeyesandsteppedoutofmyroom.ThenIopenedmyeyesand...WHAT?Thehouseislookingexactlylikeithasalwaysbeen!Noballoons?Noribbons?Nofriends?Noparty?Iwonderedwhatthesurprisereallywas,becausemymomdidtakemetoherfriend'splace.Onourwaytoherhouse,Ikeptwonderingifweweregoingsomewhereformyparty,butweweren't.Onourwayback,IthoughtmaybenowIwouldfindmyfriendsatmyplace.ButIwasdisappointedagain!Sadly,Iwentbacktomyroom.Itwasgettinglateandnobodyhadwishedme.Iwassoheartbrokenforeverybodyhadforgottenmybirthday.Iwasweepingwhenmymomcametomyroom.Seeingmecrying,shegotconcernedandaskedmewhatthematterwas.ItoldherthatIwasupsetbecauseeverybodyhadforgottenmybirthdayandnowthedaywasalmostover.Mymothersmiledasifshewascontrollingherlaughterandtoldmepolitelythatitwas29thNovemberandnot29thDecember,whichismyactualdateofbirth!Howmyfamilykeptmakingfunofmetillmybirthdayactuallycame!【写作训练】假设你是李华，你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以“人生中难忘的一次经历”为主题，写一篇短文。内容包括：1、经历过程；2、个人感受。AnUnforgettableExperienceinMyLife______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文1】AnUnforgettableExperienceinMyLifeWithtimegoingby,lotsofgoodmemoriesarenolongerfresh.TheexperienceasavolunteerintheHarbinSnowandIceFestival,however,hasbeensovividandunforgettableuptonow.Morethanoneyearago,I,togetherwith11otherstudentsofourschool,washonoredtobechosentoservetouristsfromhomeandabroadattheopeningceremonyofthefestival.Wetriedourbesttointroducesnowculturetovisitors,guidethemtoadmireicesculpturesandanswertheirquestions.Sosuccessfulwastheeventthatwevolunteersgothighlypraised.Itistheexperiencethatmakesmeawareoftheimportanceof