高考速成写作：超级简便实用高效课件

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超级实用高效写作部分

我是高考生我是文章加工大师假如你是高考阅卷老师，下面这篇作文，你能给打他多少分？

Ontheweekend

TodayisSunday.Igotupearlythismorning.Icleanedmyroom.Iopenedthewindowandsweptthefloor.Imadethebed.IhadmilkandbreadforbreakfastAfterbreakfast,Myfamilywentshoppingtogether.Weboughtmanythings,suchaslollipops,icecreams,oranges,milkandbread.Ilikethemverymuch.Afterthatwewenttothezoo.Isawmanyanimals.Themonkeysareveryinteresting.Theelephantareverybig.Thepandaareverycute.then.Ataboutnineo’clock,WegothomeWehadagoodtime.这篇其实就是上篇，仅仅是做了点修改，你能给打他多少分呢？

Ontheweekend

TodayisSunday.Igotupearlythismorning.Then,Icleanedmyroom.Inotonlyopenedthewindow,,butalsomadethebed.Later,Ihadmilkandbreadforbreakfast.It’safterbreakfastthatMyfamilywentshoppingtogether.ThereasonwhytheytookmetothesupermarketisthatIlikesomekindsoffood.Weboughtmanythings,suchaslollipops,icecreams,oranges,milkandbreadwhicharemyfavourites.Besides,onourwaybackhome,wealsowenttothezoowhereIsawmanyanimals.ASweknow,wecanwriteagoodarticlebywatchingtheanimals.Isawsomeveryinterestingmonkeys,bigelephantsaswell.Onfindingsomecutepandas,Iwasveryexcited.Wedidn’tgothomeuntilnineo’clock.Thankstomyfamily,Ihadagoodtimetoday.最高效写作

高考写作必背高分必背，背必高分一．过渡词

1)…首先，......其次，......第三..............开始Firstly,Secondly,thirdly,Atthebeginning,tostartwith2)..................接着,后来......此外.......另外；除此之外.....再者，另外......更糟糕的是......然而

next,then,…later接着,后来besides此外inaddition.另外；除此之外what’smore再者tomakethings/mattersworse.更糟糕的是.however然而3)............最后........最后但同样重要............简而言之atlast.finally.最后lastbutnotleast.最后但同样重要.Inaword,.inshort.简而言之

高分必背，背必高分二、其他过渡词...............................我认为___________事实上______________坦白地InmyopinionasfarasIamconcernedasamatteroffactfranklyspeaking三、高级或者增分点的词句1.Weshouldgetupearly_________________________________________大家都知道________众所周知_________________俗话说_______________正如一则谚语所说，“有志者，事竞成.It’swellknowntousthat…..asweknow.......Asthesayinggoes....Asaproverbsays,“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.”Wearesupposedtogetupearly

2.Shedanceswell,andshesingswelltoo.Shenotonlydanceswellbutalsosingswell3.Theyworkedverylong,theywenthomeat113.Theydidn’tgohomeuntil11o’clockafterwork.4.Wetakeexercise,wecanalwaysstayhealthy.

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高分必背，背必高分8.Becauseheencouragedme，Ifinallyrealizedmydream.Owingto/Thankstohisencouragement，Ifinallyrealizedmydream.

9.Youworkharder，youmakemoreprogressTheharderyouwork，themoreprogressyoumake10.wehavetogrowtrees,sotheycansupplyfreshairforus.Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycansupplyfreshairforus

高分必背，背必高分

四．必用、好用的增分从句和句型1.定语从句必用Ihaveagoodfriend,sheisgoodatEnglish2强调句型It’s+被强调部分+who/that.......Shebroketheglass.

3.only+状语，主句部分倒装例如：只有用那种方法，我们才能成功。

Wecansucceedonlyinthatway.4.with结构手里拿本书，她进来了。5.doing、done做壮语被老师表扬，他高兴回家了。

IhaveagoodfriendwhoisgoodatEnglishIt’sshewhobroketheglassOnlyinthatway,canwesucceed.Withabookinhand,shecamein.Praisedbyhisteacher,shereturnedhomehappily高分必背，背必高分