高中英语作文新视点英语作文写作技巧课件1

英语书面表达指导

英语书面表达指导11Generalstructure3AdvancedexpressionsVariousstructuresGracefulwords2LinkingwordsElementsofapassageTopicsentenceSupportingsentencesConcludingsentence3AdvancedexpressionsVariou2一、文章总体模板1.文章开头的总体交待

——起（引出主题）A.Recently,wehadadiscussionabout…B.wecarriedoutasurveyof…C.Whenitcomestothetopicwhether…

2.呈现不同观点的句式——

转承（陈述观点）A.Someofthemareinfavoroftheideathat…However,othersholdacompletelyoppositeopinion.B.Somepeoplefirmlybelievethat….Othersarguethat…呈现论据时常用的连接词…in

the

first

place,

______(原因一).Furthermore,

in

the

second

place,_______(原因二).So

it

goes

without

sayingthat

_______(观点一).

…Somepeoplehold

the

idea

that_______(观点二).

In

their

point

of

view,

on

the

one

hand，______(原因一)

.

On

the

other

hand,______(原因二).

Therefore,

thereis

nodoubtthat

________(观点二).

3.结尾部分表达个人观点和总结的用语——结（总结观点）AsfarasI’mconcerned,…/Frommypointofview,…/Tosumup,…

一、文章总体模板1.文章开头的总体交待——起（引3方法一:使用多种句子结构Ifsheiscomparedwithotherteachers,wefindshepaysmoreattentiontoherwayofteaching.(状语)Comparedwithotherteachers,shepaysmoreattentiontohiswayofteaching.2Youshouldkeepsilentatthemeetingunlessyouareinvitedtospeak.(连词+分词)Unlessinvited,youshouldkeepsilentatthemeeting.3

Hedidn’trealizehisfoolishnessuntilhereturnedhome.(倒装/强调)NotuntilhereturnedhomedidherealizehisfoolishnessItwasnotuntilhereturnedhomethatherealizedhisfoolishness.二、高分作文技巧方法一:使用多种句子结构Ifsheisc44Wecanachieveasatisfyinggradebychangingthewaywestudy.(only倒装).5Howshouldweprotecteyesight?Itstillremainsaquestionamongus.(主语从句)6Weshouldemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyesight.(can’t…toomuch)Onlybychangingthewaywestudycanweachieveasatisfyinggrade.Howtoprotectoureyesightstillremainsaquestionamongus.Wecan’temphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyesighttoomuch.4Wecanachieveasatisfying5方法二:善用高级词汇Whichisbetter?

1周末我们会有很多作业要做.AWehaveendlesshomeworktodoattheweekend.BWehavealotofhomeworktodoattheweekend.2在我所有的老师里,毛老师给我留下了很深的印象.AOfallmyteachers,IstillrememberMrMoore.BOfallmyteachers,MrMooregavemethedeepestimpression.方法二:善用高级词汇Whichisbetter?163高级培训班结束后回到家，他的妻子感到精疲力尽。A.Hiswifecamebackhomeaftertheadvancedtrainingclass,feelingverytired.B.Hiswifecamebackhomeaftertheadvancedtrainingclass,feelingveryexhausted.4.他没听我课上讲的东西。AHeturnedadeafeartowhatIsaidintheclass.BHedidn’tlistentowhatIsaidintheclass.3高级培训班结束后回到家，他的妻子感到精疲力尽。4.他没7Topic:HowtoLengthenYourComposition

Topic:8

Whenitcomestotheissueof…,themajorityofpeopleseemtogetaccustomedtotheideathat…However,attitudestowards…varyfrompersontoperson.somepeoplefirmlybelievethat…,therearesomefactorscontributingtothisattitudeasfollows,inthefirstplace,…inthesecondplace,...Ontopofthat,…Asamatteroffact,itisnotoftenthecase.Othershaveapreferenceof…,thereareseveralremarkablereasons.Foronething…,foranother…Onmypart,...1.利用模板Whenitcomestotheissueo9方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容2、附加成分作解释说明例一：这样更方便照顾父母。拓展：因为父母越来越年迈。

原因

astheyaregettingolderandolder.

Owingto/because例二：因广告过多，影片放映晚点。拓展：这导致观众不耐烦甚至恼火。后果

whichmadeaudienceimpatientandsomeofthemevenannoyed.makingaudienceimpatientandsomeofthemevenannoyed.ItwillbemuchmoreconvenienttolookafteryourparentsThereweretoomanyadvertisementsthattheydelayedthetimeofshowingthefilm,方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容2、附10方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容2、附加成分作解释说明条件

目的

例三：安全出口（exit）标志不明，存在安全隐患(potentialhazard）。

拓展：万一遇到危险，观众难以逃脱。Incaseofdanger,itisdifficultfortheaudiencetoescape.例四：对中学生假期通讯方式进行了一项调查Wedidasurveyabouthowourhighschoolstudentscommunicatewitheachotherduringtheholiday拓展：为了了解对中学生假期通讯方式Inordertolearnabouthowourhighschoolstudentscommunicatewitheachotherduringtheholiday,

wedidasurveywiththehelpofmyclassmates.

Theexitisnotclear,sotherewillbepotentialhazard.方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容2、附111、纪律是集体的面貌，集体的声音，集体的动作，集体的表情，集体的信念。2、知之者不如好之者，好之者不如乐之者。3、反思自我时展示了勇气，自我反思是一切思想的源泉。4、在教师手里操着幼年人的命运，便操着民族和人类的命运。一年之计，莫如树谷；十年之计，莫如树木；终身之计，莫如树人。5、诚实比一切智谋更好，而且它是智谋的基本条件。6、做老师的只要有一次向学生撒谎撒漏了底，就可能使他的全部教育成果从此为之失败。十一月222022/11/222022/11/222022/11/2211/22/20227、凡为教者必期于达到不须教。对人以诚信，人不欺我;对事以诚信，事无不成。2022/11/222022/11/2222November20228、教育者，非为已往，非为现在，而专为将来。2022/11/222022/11/222022/11/222022/11/22

1、纪律是集体的面貌，集体的声音，集体的动作，集体的表情，集12方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容2、附加成分作解释说明(1)表达不同原因的概括语Thereareseveralreasonsforthis.Thereasonsareasfollows.Thereasonfor…isthat…Thereasonwhy…isthat(2)表示无需说明的事实的概括语：Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…It’sneedlesstosaythat…Needlesstosay,…It’sobviousthat…方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容2、附133.加谚语(Proverb)锻炼对学生有好处Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise..Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise.3.添加谚语3.加谚语(Proverb)锻炼对学生有好处Itisg14加谚语(Proverb)集中注意力于学习Weshouldfocusourmindonourstudies.Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”Weshouldfocusourmindonourstudies...怎么添加谚语？方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容加谚语(Proverb)集中注意力于学习Weshould15常用谚语(Proverb)Striketheironwhileitishot.

趁热打铁。Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.

三思而后行。Practicemakesperfect.

熟能生巧。Abirdinthehandisworththantwointhebush.

一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。DoastheRomansdo.

入乡随俗。

Doitnow.

机不可失，时不再来。Failureisthemotherofsuccess.

失败是成功之母。Itisnousecryingoverspiltmilk.

覆水难收。Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.一天一个苹果，医生远离我。AllroadsleadtoRome.条条大路通罗马。

常用谚语(Proverb)Striketheironw16青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample,wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,refusetousesingle-useproducts,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.4.举例说明青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球Weteenagers17人口密集地区遭受许多自然灾害（举例说明）Manypopulatedareassufferfrommanynaturaldisasterssuchasflood,hurricanes,droughtsorotherdisasters.人口密集地区遭受许多自然灾害（举例说明）Manypopul18珍惜每一滴水Therefore,weshouldnolongerbeindifferentaboutthis.Toprotectourvaluablewaterresources,weshouldcallonpeopletocherisheverydropofwater.Otherwise,maybethelastdropsofwaterwillbeourtears.

Asmiddleschoolstudents,wealsohaveaparttoplay.Doremember:wearenotsavingwater,wearesavingourownlife.Witheveryonedoinghisbit,wecanmakeadifference.5.结尾提出倡议或号召珍惜每一滴水Therefore,weshouldno19Asstudents,weshouldstartfromourselves.HereI’dliketoremindmyfriendtotaketheleadinprotectingtheenvironment.Witheveryonedoinghisbit,wecanchangethepresentsituation.

参加俱乐部或活动Don’thesitate.Itwillbegreatfun!Don’twait.Joinusnow!Sinceithassomanybenefits,whatareyouwaitingfor?Starttojoinusnow!保护环境Asstudents,weshouldstartf20“短话长说”方法：1.利用模板

2.附加成分作解释说明

3.加谚语(Proverb)4.举例说明

5.结尾提出倡议或号召“短话长说”方法：1.利用模板2.附加成分作解释说明21写作任务

现在，青少年肥胖越来越严重，很让父母担心。请你根据以下提示写一篇文章参考词汇：肥胖：obesity垃圾食品：junkfood要求：1.字数150左右2.对所有要点要适当发挥，不要简单翻译。3.开头已给出，不计入总数Recently,thephenomenonofteenobesityhasmadealotofparentsconcerned.______________________________________________

原因缺少运动饮食结构不合理建议多参加体育锻炼多吃健康食品，远离垃圾食品…写作任务原因缺少运动建议多参加体育锻炼22

要点分析如何起、转、承、结Onmypart,…利用模板Whenitcomestothe

phenomenonofteenobesity,ourparentsareingreatconcern.Whyaresomanykidsgettingfatterandfatter?Someare…,othersare…如何起、转、承、结Onmypart,…利用模板When23BecauseofthepopularityofTVandcomputers,andbecausestudentshavesomuchhomeworktodo,theyaregettinglessexercisethanbefore.1.缺少运动BecauseofthepopularityofTVandcomputers,andstudentsareburdenedwithsomuchhomework,BecauseofthepopularityofT24Becausepeople’squalityoflifehasgottenbetterandbetter,familiescanaffordtobuymanyfoods,suchasmeat,chocolateandothersweetoroilysnacks,whichmightmakethekidsoverweight.2.饮食结构不合理Becausepeople’squalityofli25Inordertoloseweightandstayhealthy,teensshouldavoidspendingtoomuchtimeinfrontoftheTVorthecomputeranddomoreexercise.建议1.多参加体育锻炼

Inordertoloseweightandst26Asthesayinggoes,“Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.”Theyshouldalsoeatamorebalanceddietsuchasfruitsandvegetables,andlessfastfoodandjunkfood.

2.多吃健康食品，远离垃圾食品Asthesayinggoes,“Anapple27Lastbutnotleast,theyshouldmakeapropertimeschedulesothattheycanbalanceourexerciseandstudies.3.制定合理的计划，时间表Lastbutnotleast,theyshoul28合成文章

Recently,thephenomenonofteenobesityhasmadealotofparentsconcerned.Whyareteensgettingfatterandfatter?Inmyopinion,therearetworemarkablereasonsforthisproblem.Firstly,becauseofthepopularityofTVandcomputers,andstudentsareburdededwithsomuchhomeworktodo.Theyaregettinglessexercisethanbefore.Secondly,becausepeople’squalityoflifehasgottenbetterandbetter,familiescanaffordtobuymanyfoods,suchasmeat,chocolateandothersweetoroilysnacks,whichmightmakethekidsoverweight.

Foranother,Ontheotherhand,arousedForonething,Ontheonehand,合成文章Recently,thephenomen29Inordertoloseweightandstayhealthy,teensshouldavoidspendingtoomuchtimeinfrontoftheTVorthecomputeranddomoreexercise.Asthesayinggoes,“Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.”Theyshouldalsoeatamorebalanceddietsuchasfruits,vegetables,lessfastfoodandjunkfood.Lastbutnotleast,theyshouldmakeapropertimeschedulesothattheycanbalancetheirexerciseandstudies.Inordertoloseweightands30ThanksforyoulisteningBye-bye!Thanksforyoulistening31英语书面表达指导

英语书面表达指导321Generalstructure3AdvancedexpressionsVariousstructuresGracefulwords2LinkingwordsElementsofapassageTopicsentenceSupportingsentencesConcludingsentence3AdvancedexpressionsVariou33一、文章总体模板1.文章开头的总体交待

——起（引出主题）A.Recently,wehadadiscussionabout…B.wecarriedoutasurveyof…C.Whenitcomestothetopicwhether…

2.呈现不同观点的句式——

转承（陈述观点）A.Someofthemareinfavoroftheideathat…However,othersholdacompletelyoppositeopinion.B.Somepeoplefirmlybelievethat….Othersarguethat…呈现论据时常用的连接词…in

the

first

place,

______(原因一).Furthermore,

in

the

second

place,_______(原因二).So

it

goes

without

sayingthat

_______(观点一).

…Somepeoplehold

the

idea

that_______(观点二).

In

their

point

of

view,

on

the

one

hand，______(原因一)

.

On

the

other

hand,______(原因二).

Therefore,

thereis

nodoubtthat

________(观点二).

3.结尾部分表达个人观点和总结的用语——结（总结观点）AsfarasI’mconcerned,…/Frommypointofview,…/Tosumup,…

一、文章总体模板1.文章开头的总体交待——起（引34方法一:使用多种句子结构Ifsheiscomparedwithotherteachers,wefindshepaysmoreattentiontoherwayofteaching.(状语)Comparedwithotherteachers,shepaysmoreattentiontohiswayofteaching.2Youshouldkeepsilentatthemeetingunlessyouareinvitedtospeak.(连词+分词)Unlessinvited,youshouldkeepsilentatthemeeting.3

Hedidn’trealizehisfoolishnessuntilhereturnedhome.(倒装/强调)NotuntilhereturnedhomedidherealizehisfoolishnessItwasnotuntilhereturnedhomethatherealizedhisfoolishness.二、高分作文技巧方法一:使用多种句子结构Ifsheisc354Wecanachieveasatisfyinggradebychangingthewaywestudy.(only倒装).5Howshouldweprotecteyesight?Itstillremainsaquestionamongus.(主语从句)6Weshouldemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyesight.(can’t…toomuch)Onlybychangingthewaywestudycanweachieveasatisfyinggrade.Howtoprotectoureyesightstillremainsaquestionamongus.Wecan’temphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyesighttoomuch.4Wecanachieveasatisfying36方法二:善用高级词汇Whichisbetter?

1周末我们会有很多作业要做.AWehaveendlesshomeworktodoattheweekend.BWehavealotofhomeworktodoattheweekend.2在我所有的老师里,毛老师给我留下了很深的印象.AOfallmyteachers,IstillrememberMrMoore.BOfallmyteachers,MrMooregavemethedeepestimpression.方法二:善用高级词汇Whichisbetter?1373高级培训班结束后回到家，他的妻子感到精疲力尽。A.Hiswifecamebackhomeaftertheadvancedtrainingclass,feelingverytired.B.Hiswifecamebackhomeaftertheadvancedtrainingclass,feelingveryexhausted.4.他没听我课上讲的东西。AHeturnedadeafeartowhatIsaidintheclass.BHedidn’tlistentowhatIsaidintheclass.3高级培训班结束后回到家，他的妻子感到精疲力尽。4.他没38Topic:HowtoLengthenYourComposition

Topic:39

Whenitcomestotheissueof…,themajorityofpeopleseemtogetaccustomedtotheideathat…However,attitudestowards…varyfrompersontoperson.somepeoplefirmlybelievethat…,therearesomefactorscontributingtothisattitudeasfollows,inthefirstplace,…inthesecondplace,...Ontopofthat,…Asamatteroffact,itisnotoftenthecase.Othershaveapreferenceof…,thereareseveralremarkablereasons.Foronething…,foranother…Onmypart,...1.利用模板Whenitcomestotheissueo40方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容2、附加成分作解释说明例一：这样更方便照顾父母。拓展：因为父母越来越年迈。

原因

astheyaregettingolderandolder.

Owingto/because例二：因广告过多，影片放映晚点。拓展：这导致观众不耐烦甚至恼火。后果

whichmadeaudienceimpatientandsomeofthemevenannoyed.makingaudienceimpatientandsomeofthemevenannoyed.ItwillbemuchmoreconvenienttolookafteryourparentsThereweretoomanyadvertisementsthattheydelayedthetimeofshowingthefilm,方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容2、附41方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容2、附加成分作解释说明条件

目的

例三：安全出口（exit）标志不明，存在安全隐患(potentialhazard）。

拓展：万一遇到危险，观众难以逃脱。Incaseofdanger,itisdifficultfortheaudiencetoescape.例四：对中学生假期通讯方式进行了一项调查Wedidasurveyabouthowourhighschoolstudentscommunicatewitheachotherduringtheholiday拓展：为了了解对中学生假期通讯方式Inordertolearnabouthowourhighschoolstudentscommunicatewitheachotherduringtheholiday,

wedidasurveywiththehelpofmyclassmates.

Theexitisnotclear,sotherewillbepotentialhazard.方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容2、附421、纪律是集体的面貌，集体的声音，集体的动作，集体的表情，集体的信念。2、知之者不如好之者，好之者不如乐之者。3、反思自我时展示了勇气，自我反思是一切思想的源泉。4、在教师手里操着幼年人的命运，便操着民族和人类的命运。一年之计，莫如树谷；十年之计，莫如树木；终身之计，莫如树人。5、诚实比一切智谋更好，而且它是智谋的基本条件。6、做老师的只要有一次向学生撒谎撒漏了底，就可能使他的全部教育成果从此为之失败。十一月222022/11/222022/11/222022/11/2211/22/20227、凡为教者必期于达到不须教。对人以诚信，人不欺我;对事以诚信，事无不成。2022/11/222022/11/2222November20228、教育者，非为已往，非为现在，而专为将来。2022/11/222022/11/222022/11/222022/11/22

1、纪律是集体的面貌，集体的声音，集体的动作，集体的表情，集43方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容2、附加成分作解释说明(1)表达不同原因的概括语Thereareseveralreasonsforthis.Thereasonsareasfollows.Thereasonfor…isthat…Thereasonwhy…isthat(2)表示无需说明的事实的概括语：Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…It’sneedlesstosaythat…Needlesstosay,…It’sobviousthat…方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容2、附443.加谚语(Proverb)锻炼对学生有好处Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise..Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise.3.添加谚语3.加谚语(Proverb)锻炼对学生有好处Itisg45加谚语(Proverb)集中注意力于学习Weshouldfocusourmindonourstudies.Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”Weshouldfocusourmindonourstudies...怎么添加谚语？方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容加谚语(Proverb)集中注意力于学习Weshould46常用谚语(Proverb)Striketheironwhileitishot.

趁热打铁。Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.

三思而后行。Practicemakesperfect.

熟能生巧。Abirdinthehandisworththantwointhebush.

一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。DoastheRomansdo.

入乡随俗。

Doitnow.

机不可失，时不再来。Failureisthemotherofsuccess.

失败是成功之母。Itisnousecryingoverspiltmilk.

覆水难收。Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.一天一个苹果，医生远离我。AllroadsleadtoRome.条条大路通罗马。

常用谚语(Proverb)Striketheironw47青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample,wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,refusetousesingle-useproducts,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.4.举例说明青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球Weteenagers48人口密集地区遭受许多自然灾害（举例说明）Manypopulatedareassufferfrommanynaturaldisasterssuchasflood,hurricanes,droughtsorotherdisasters.人口密集地区遭受许多自然灾害（举例说明）Manypopul49珍惜每一滴水Therefore,weshouldnolongerbeindifferentaboutthis.Toprotectourvaluablewaterresources,weshouldcallonpeopletocherisheverydropofwater.Otherwise,maybethelastdropsofwaterwillbeourtears.

Asmiddleschoolstudents,wealsohaveaparttoplay.Doremember:wearenotsavingwater,wearesavingourownlife.Witheveryonedoinghisbit,wecanmakeadifference.5.结尾提出倡议或号召珍惜每一滴水Therefore,weshouldno50Asstudents,weshouldstartfromourselves.HereI’dliketoremindmyfriendtotaketheleadinprotectingtheenvironment.Witheveryonedoinghisbit,wecanchangethepresentsituation.

参加俱乐部或活动Don’thesitate.Itwillbegreatfun!Don’twait.Joinusnow!Sinceithassomanybenefits,whatareyouwaitingfor?Starttojoinusnow!保护环境Asstudents,weshouldstartf51“短话长说”方法：1.利用模板

2.附加成分作解释说明

3.加谚语(Proverb)4.举例说明

5.结尾提出倡议或号召“短话长说”方法：1.利用模板2.附加成分作解释说明52写作任务

现在，青少年肥胖越来越严重，很让父母担心。请你根据以下提示写一篇文章参考词汇：肥胖：obesity垃圾食品：junkfood要求：1.字数150左右2.对所有要点要适当发挥，不要简单翻译。3.开头已给出，不计入总数Recently,thephenomenonofteenobesityhasmadealotofparentsconcerned.______________________________________________

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