高中英语五句话作文培训：建议信的写作优秀公开课课件

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-----五句话作文的训练方法-----以“建议信”的写作为例从读到写，体验模仿

-----五句话作文的训练方法-----1经典考题A（2012深圳五校联考基础写作）

在紧张的高三备考阶段，你代表学生会给校长写封信，表达你们对于高三复习迎考的建议。1)适当减少课时，留出思考时间 2)反复训练重要、易错的知识点，培养能力3)减少作业量以保证质量 4)少些批评，多些鼓励经典考题A（2012深圳五校联考基础写作）

在紧张的高三备考2你是高三（10）班的Jack。在学校食堂用餐一段时间后，你觉得有必要给学校食堂提一些建议，于是决定给管理处的黄先生写封信，信中包括如下内容：1．降低菜的价格，增加菜的样式。2．想办法缩短等候时间，学生常常得等候20分钟才能买到饭菜。3．希望及时加热饭菜，特别是在冬天时，这样才能确保学生健康。4．真诚地希望对方考虑您的建议和解决这些问题。经典考题B（2011深圳六校联考基础写作）经典考题B（2011深圳六校联考基础写作）3DiscussionQuestions1.两篇文章都是什么体裁(genre)的文章？2.文章在表达并列建议时，都使用了连词吗？有哪些连词(connectionwords)？3.文章的第一句话起到了什么作用(function)？4.文章第二至第四句话起到了什么作用？5.文章的第五句话起到了什么作用？6.文章中提建议时的句型(sentencepattern)有什么特点(feature)？DiscussionQuestions4ModelEssayAWearewritingtosharewithyouthepreparationforthecollegeentranceexaminationinseniorthree.First,wethinkthatitisnecessarytoreducetheamountofperiodsandleaveustimetothinkbyourselves.Besides,itwouldbebettertogiveusmorepracticeonthoseimportantandconfusingpointstocultivateourabilitytodealwithproblems.Furthermore,Iwouldliketosuggestthatteachersshouldreduceourhomeworktoassurethequalityandgiveuslesscriticismbutmoreencouragement,whichwethinkwillbebeneficialtousall.Wedohopethatyoucantakeouropinionsintoconsideration.ModelEssayAWearewritingto5ModelEssayBIamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerningthecanteenserviceatourschool.Firstly,Ithinkyoushouldcutdownthepriceofthefoodandincreasethedishvariety.Besides,itwouldbebetterifyoucouldshortenthewaitingtimeforstudentssometimeshavetowaitforabout20minutestobuythefood.Lastbutnotleast,itisnecessaryforyoutoheatthefoodintime,especiallyinwinter,toensurestudents’health.Ihopeyouwouldthesesuggestionsusefulandbereadytosolvetheseproblems.ModelEssayBIamwritingtoe6学生讨论总结Whatdotheabovetwopassagesshareincommon?Bothpiecesareadviceletters.Bothpiecesuseconnectionwords,suchas….Thefirstsentencestatesthewritingpurpose.Thenextthreesentencesstatespecificadvice.Thelastsentencestatesthewriter’swish.Inbothpiecessubjectivemood(虚拟语气)isadoptedwhengivingadvice.学生讨论总结Whatdotheabovetwopa7AppropriatenessWhichofthefollowingisamoreappropriatewaytogiveothersasuggestion?祈使语气：Giveuslesscriticismbutmoreencouragement.虚拟语气：Iwouldliketosuggestthatteachersshouldgiveuslesscriticismbutmoreencouragement.AppropriatenessWhichofthefo81. 表写作目的的句型Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyouabout…Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning…2. 提建议的句式Itishelpful/necessary/importantforyoutodo…Itshouldbeagoodideaforyoutodo…Inmyopinion,itwouldbebetterifyoucould…Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthatyoushoulddo…Ifeelthatitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…3.建议信结尾常用句式Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.4.表建议并列的连词First,second,third,finally；Firstly,secondly；Tobeginwith,atlast;furthermore;moreover;besides,inaddition,meanwhile1. 表写作目的的句型9语法填空答案1.a2.for3.it4.beneficial5.concerning6.which7.(should)improve8.but9.with10.consideration语法填空答案1.a6.which10学生互评作文学生互评作文11参考范文IknowthatyouaregoingtosetupanEnglishprogramformiddleschoolstudents,soIwouldlikesuggestaprogramcalled“AllAroundGuangzhou”.Inmyopinion,itisnecessaryforthisprogramtocoversuchtopicsasGZ’shistory,itseducation,famousscenicspots,food,andfamouspeople,whichwillenablestudentstolearnmoreaboutGZsoastointroduceGZtoforeignvisitors.参考范文Iknowthatyouaregoing12Besides,itwouldbebetterifyoucanbroadcastthisprogramonSundaysothatitwouldbeconvenientforstudentstowatchit.What’smore,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoushouldinvitesomestudentstoattendthisprogram,whichwillstimulateothers’interestinit.IsincerelyhopethatyoucantakemyadviceintoconsiderationandIbelievethisprogramwillbepopularamongstudents.Besides,itwouldbebetterif13总结：好的作文是模仿出来的模仿着模板句写出地道的英语句子总结：好的作文是模仿出来的模仿着模板句写出地道的英语句子14从读到写，体验模仿

-----五句话作文的训练方法-----以“建议信”的写作为例从读到写，体验模仿

-----五句话作文的训练方法-----15经典考题A（2012深圳五校联考基础写作）

在紧张的高三备考阶段，你代表学生会给校长写封信，表达你们对于高三复习迎考的建议。1)适当减少课时，留出思考时间 2)反复训练重要、易错的知识点，培养能力3)减少作业量以保证质量 4)少些批评，多些鼓励经典考题A（2012深圳五校联考基础写作）

在紧张的高三备考16你是高三（10）班的Jack。在学校食堂用餐一段时间后，你觉得有必要给学校食堂提一些建议，于是决定给管理处的黄先生写封信，信中包括如下内容：1．降低菜的价格，增加菜的样式。2．想办法缩短等候时间，学生常常得等候20分钟才能买到饭菜。3．希望及时加热饭菜，特别是在冬天时，这样才能确保学生健康。4．真诚地希望对方考虑您的建议和解决这些问题。经典考题B（2011深圳六校联考基础写作）经典考题B（2011深圳六校联考基础写作）17DiscussionQuestions1.两篇文章都是什么体裁(genre)的文章？2.文章在表达并列建议时，都使用了连词吗？有哪些连词(connectionwords)？3.文章的第一句话起到了什么作用(function)？4.文章第二至第四句话起到了什么作用？5.文章的第五句话起到了什么作用？6.文章中提建议时的句型(sentencepattern)有什么特点(feature)？DiscussionQuestions18ModelEssayAWearewritingtosharewithyouthepreparationforthecollegeentranceexaminationinseniorthree.First,wethinkthatitisnecessarytoreducetheamountofperiodsandleaveustimetothinkbyourselves.Besides,itwouldbebettertogiveusmorepracticeonthoseimportantandconfusingpointstocultivateourabilitytodealwithproblems.Furthermore,Iwouldliketosuggestthatteachersshouldreduceourhomeworktoassurethequalityandgiveuslesscriticismbutmoreencouragement,whichwethinkwillbebeneficialtousall.Wedohopethatyoucantakeouropinionsintoconsideration.ModelEssayAWearewritingto19ModelEssayBIamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerningthecanteenserviceatourschool.Firstly,Ithinkyoushouldcutdownthepriceofthefoodandincreasethedishvariety.Besides,itwouldbebetterifyoucouldshortenthewaitingtimeforstudentssometimeshavetowaitforabout20minutestobuythefood.Lastbutnotleast,itisnecessaryforyoutoheatthefoodintime,especiallyinwinter,toensurestudents’health.Ihopeyouwouldthesesuggestionsusefulandbereadytosolvetheseproblems.ModelEssayBIamwritingtoe20学生讨论总结Whatdotheabovetwopassagesshareincommon?Bothpiecesareadviceletters.Bothpiecesuseconnectionwords,suchas….Thefirstsentencestatesthewritingpurpose.Thenextthreesentencesstatespecificadvice.Thelastsentencestatesthewriter’swish.Inbothpiecessubjectivemood(虚拟语气)isadoptedwhengivingadvice.学生讨论总结Whatdotheabovetwopa21AppropriatenessWhichofthefollowingisamoreappropriatewaytogiveothersasuggestion?祈使语气：Giveuslesscriticismbutmoreencouragement.虚拟语气：Iwouldliketosuggestthatteachersshouldgiveuslesscriticismbutmoreencouragement.AppropriatenessWhichofthefo221. 表写作目的的句型Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyouabout…Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning…2. 提建议的句式Itishelpful/necessary/importantforyoutodo…Itshouldbeagoodideaforyoutodo…Inmyopinion,itwouldbebetterifyoucould…Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthatyoushoulddo…Ifeelthatitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…3.建议信结尾常用句式Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.4.表建议并列的连词First,second,third,finally；Firstly,secondly；Tobeginwith,atlast;furthermore;moreover;besides,inaddition,meanwhile1. 表写作目的的句型23语法填空答案1.a2.for3.it4.beneficial5.concerning6.which7.(should)improve8.but9.with10.consideration语法填空答案1.a6.which24学生互评作文学生互评作文25参考范文IknowthatyouaregoingtosetupanEnglis