高考英语一轮复习读后续写第二课讲义

读后续写第二课运用独立主格结构和with复合结构名词/代词+VingTherebeingnobus,wehadtowalkhome.Jacksonannouncingthenews,wesatstillandsilently.Weatherpermitting,theywillgoonanoutingtothebeachtomorrow.名词/代词+VedHewaslisteningattentivelyinhisclass,hiseyesfixedontheblackboard.Thisdone,wewillgohome.名词/代词+不定式Muchworktofinish,weneedtospeedup.Somanypeopletohelphim,heissuretosucceed.(4)名词/代词+介词短语Marrywassittingnearthefire,herbacktowardsthedoor.With/with复合结构With、without+宾语（名词/代词）+宾语补足语Thegirlhidherboxwithoutanyoneknowingwhereitwas.Thekidfeelssoexcitedwithsomanyplacesofinterests.Theboywaswalking,withhisfatherahead.Hestoodatthedoor,withacomputerinhishand.Withhissonsodisappointing,theoldmanfeltunhappy.练习：改为独立结构和with复合结构的表达Wheneverythingwasprepared,webegantocarryouttheproject.ARobberburstintotheroom,andaknifewasinhand.用独立主格结构、with复合结构扩句Tomjumped.Hearingthenews,Tomjumpedwithextraordinaryjoy.Thegirlseemstobeveryhappy.(年轻的，黑色长发)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Heglareatme.(用灼热的目光)Hewassohappy.______________________(通过考试之后)，hewassohappy.Sherantohimandhuggedhim._________________________,(她一看到Tom),Sherantohimandhuggedhim,_______________________(喜悦和如释重负的感觉一下子涌上心头)Hewokeupearlythatmorning,____________________________________(有些期待看到他的爸爸).可怕的想法涌上他的心头（riseup/flood/surgethrough）_______________________________________________________________奇怪的念头在他脑子里转动(racedaroundandaround)__________________________________________________________________一、旅途和历险有关的环境描写：1.

Tohersurprise,she

sawnothingbutforest

（除了森林什么也看不到）and,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.

（2016年10月浙江高考）2.

Bathedinthewarmsunlightandbalmywind（沐浴在温暖的阳光和惬意的微风）,theypromisedtobealwayswitheachother.

（2016年10月浙江高考）3.

Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks，

thedeepgreenpinetrees，

andthelateafternoonsun

mixedtocreateamagicscene（混合起来创造出神奇的场景）.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven

（编织的）

blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.

（17年11月浙江高考）4.

Theluxuriantforests,thetinyflowersthatperfumedtheair,thegroupofsheepinthefardistanceandthesingingriver

allmademefeelmysoulpurified（都让我灵魂得到净化）.

（17年11月浙江高考）5.

Atthatmoment,itwascompletelydarkexcept

thefaintlightgivenoutbyafewstars

（几颗星星发出的微弱的光）inthesky.

（17年11月浙江高考）6.

Heavysnowandspringrains（十二月的一个冰冷的早上）

hadturnedtheusuallymanageablefallsintosomethingfierce.

（金丽衢十二校2020届高三英语下学期第二次联考）7.

Unfortunately,

thedarknessdrownedeverything（黑暗淹没了一切）.（金丽衢十二校2020届高三英语下学期第二次联考）8.

Thesnowhadstopped,butsometimelaterapowerfulwind

musthavekickeduptheflamesofourdyingfire（我们熄灭的火的火焰被点燃）.

（湖北省宜昌市第二中学2021届高三起点考试英语试题）9.

Themoonwashanginglow（月亮低悬）

intheSouthCarolinaskyasMishafinishedloadinghertruck.

（2020年河北衡水中学全国高三第一次联考）10.

Windingriversweremerrilyflowing（蜿蜒的河流欢快地流淌着）.Therestoodloftymountainsanddeepvalleys.Therelaysunnybeaches.

（2017年10月浙江高考）二、旅途和历险有关的情绪描写：1、旅途和历险有关的心理活动描写：Lyingawakeinthedark（在黑暗中醒着躺在那里）,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.

（2016年10月浙江高考）2、旅途和历险有关的兴奋描写：1.Thenearerthehelicoptergot,

themoreexcitedandhopefulshewas（她就越来越兴奋和有希望）.（2016年10月浙江高考）2.

NeverforamomenthadJanebeensoecstaticthat（Jane从来没有如此狂喜）

shehuggedTomtightly.

（2016年10月浙江高考）3、旅途和历险有关的紧张描写：1.

Silencebetweendadandme

madememorenervousandscared（让我越来越紧张和害怕）.

（17年11月浙江高考）2.

Thefearanddespair

（害怕和绝望）thathadbeenbuildingupinsidemybodyjustcametoanend.

（17年11月浙江高考）3.

Tiredastheywere（虽然他们很累）,theyhadtostrengthenuptospendanightthere.（金丽衢十二校2020届高三英语下学期第二次联考）4、旅途和历险有关的难过描写：1.

AccordingtoMom,messingupouragenda(日程表)—evenbyoneday—

wouldsendourscheduletopplinglikedominoes（会让我们的行程像多米诺骨牌一样倒下）（2021.03

十校联盟续写讲评）2.Hisdream—TheTripofaLifetime—wasvanishingbeforehiseyes（在他眼前消失）.

（2021.03

十校联盟续写讲评）5、旅途和历险有关的开心描写：1.Wildwithjoy,Whitson,Ramirez,andHunter

wavedandyelledlikecrazy（像疯了一样招手和大叫）.（金丽衢十二校2020届高三英语下学期第二次联考）2.It

wasfilledwithsurprisesandamusements（充满惊讶和愉悦）,allbecauseofmymother---loving,sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.

（2017年10月浙江高考）3.

Lettingoutascreamofthrill（发出激动的尖叫声）,Momlocatedaclearingandimmediatelyguidedustopitchthetent.（2017年10月浙江高考）4.

Ourheartylaughterwasdissolved（我们发自内心的笑消散）

intothatabsolutelygoodnight.（2017年10月浙江高考）5.Somanytroublesandsurprisesofinteresttoshare.Andthehouse

wasfilledwithloudlaughterofjoy（充满了开心的大笑）.

（2017年10月浙江高考）6.

Mysoulsilentlyrejoiced（我发自内心窃窃欣喜).（2021.03

十校联盟续写讲评）WritingTask（2022年全国高考新高考Ⅰ卷）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路线)throughthickevergreenforest.IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn’twiththeotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool’scoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened.“Iwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,”heexplaineduncomfortably.“Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide.”Ibitbackmyfrustration(懊恼).Iknewthecoachmeantwell—hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.Itjusttookhimlonger—that’sall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,IwasfamiliarwiththechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.Isaidgentlyandquietly,“Noonecanchangeyourmind,exceptyourself.Ifyoudesiretochallengeyourself,thereisnothingtodowithothers’thoughts.”Hesatstillwithadeepbreath.“Youhaveafullpreparationbeforethisevent,whichisthemostimportantreasonwhyyoushowuphere”,Iaddedwithasinceretone.Hearingmywords,Davidturnedtometremblinglywithtearsspillingoutofhiseyesandexpressedhehadmadeafirmdeterminationtofinishthecross-countryrun.HiscoachheardwhatDavidsaidandgavemealook—thekindthatwasmoredeterminedthananyoneelse’s.IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.Theracestarted.Itseemedthattherunwaywasextremelylongforyoungchildren,nottomentionachildwithaheartdisease.Davidinsistedonrunningasifhehadforgottenallhisweaknesses,thoughhewastrippedoverwithintheafewkilometers.Itdidn’ttakelongbeforehepickedhimselfupagainandcontinuedhismission.Classmatesallappearedontheracingtrack,cheeringforhim.“Comeon!Youcanmakeit!Weareproudofyou!”theyshoutedenthusiastically.Toeveryone’sjoy,hereachedthefinallineandrankedthe20th.Itwasnomoreimportantwhetherhewonthefirstplaceornot.Itwashisbraveheartandstrongfaiththatcouldmakesomethingunusualhappenfinally.【解析】【导语】本文以赛跑为线索展开。作者是一名特殊教育教师，在大型越野赛跑那天，发现患有大脑疾病的大卫独自站在一旁。作者问其