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高考英语读后续写精读精炼(七)一:原文重现In1945,a12-year-oldboysawabeautifulbrooch(胸针)inashopwindowthatsethisheartracing.Buttheprice—fivedollars—wastoohighforReubenEarle.Fivedollarswouldbuyalmostaweek'sfoodforhisfamily.【来源:21·世纪·教育·网】Reubencouldn’taskhisfatherforthemoney.Everythinghisfathermadethroughfishingwenttohismother,Dora.Slimandbeautiful,shewasthecenterofthehomeandthegluethatheldittogether.Thehouseworkwasnever-ending,andshestruggledtofeedandclothetheirfivechildren,butshewashappyasherfamilyandtheirwell-beingwereallshecaredabout.Nevertheless,heopenedtheshop'sdoorandwentinside.Standingproudlyandstraightinhisflour-sack(面粉袋改做的)shirtandwashed-outtrousers,hetoldtheshopkeeperwhathewanted,adding,“ButIdon'thavethemoneyrightnow.Canyoupleaseholditformeforsometime?”"I'lltry,”theshopkeepersmiled."Peoplearoundheredon'tusuallyhavethatkindofmoneytospendonthings.Itshouldkeepforawhile."21*cnjy*comReubenrespectfullytouchedhisworncapandwalkedout.Hewouldraisethemoneyandnottellanybody,forhethoughtMumwouldgetsurprisedwhenshesawthatbrooch.Onhearingthesoundofhammering(捶打)fromasidestreet,Reubensuddenlyhadanideathathecouldraisemoneybysellingtheusednailbags.PeoplebuilttheirownhomesinBayRoberts,usingnailsboughtinbagsfromalocalfactory.Sometimestheusedbagswerethrownawayattheconstructionsite,andReubenknewhecouldsellthembacktothefactoryforfivecentsapiece.Thatdayhesoldtwonailbagsandhidthemoneyinarustysodatin.21教育名师原创作品注意:1,续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Everydayafterschool,Reubenstartedhisplan..Paragraph2:Finally,thetimecame!_______________________________________________________________________________.二:文本解析情节分析:本文主要讲述了一个小故事:12岁男孩Reuben想为自己的母亲买一枚胸针,可手头没有足够的钱,他找到店主,店主答应为他保留一段时间,而Reuben开始捡钉子来筹钱购买胸针。21世纪教育网版权所有续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:每天放学后,Reuben就开始他的计划。本段开头提到Reuben已经开始进行筹钱计划,后文可以讲述他的筹钱过程以及最终结果,可以具体描写一下筹钱过程中Reuben付出的努力。第二段开头是:终于,是时候了!本段开头暗示Reuben己经筹到了足够的钱,后文就可以描写他买下胸针的激动心情以及将胸针送给母亲Dora的过程。另外,母亲收到胸针后开心、感动的反应也可以是描写的重点.文章的主人公无疑是小男孩Reuben,但次要人物Dora是不能忽略的,需要通过妈妈来衬托儿子。那么看看文章对妈妈的描述:Slimandbeautiful,shewasthecenterofthehomeandthegluethatheldittogether.Thehouseworkwasnever-ending,andshestruggledtofeedandclothetheirfivechildren,butshewashappyasherfamilyandtheirwell-beingwereallshecaredabout.如果结尾只是说妈妈很开心,就非常遗憾了,还必须和这个描写照应:对生活的乐观和对孩子的热爱。妈妈的开心:Wearingthebeautifulbroochandknowingthestorybehindit,Dorawastoooverjoyedtoutteraword.妈妈的疼爱:Shejustthrewherarmstightlyaroundherbelovedson.对话:“MerryChristmas,mom",thesonannouncedproudly."Youtoo."theproudmotherechoed.主题升华:Well,nodreamisoutofreachforawillingheart.三:续写单句训练每天放学后,鲁本都开始了他的计划。又冷又饿,鲁本四处闲逛,小心地从一条街到另一条街寻找指甲袋。为了节省更多的钱,这个下定决心的男孩甚至决定在一大早就送文件。他赢的每枚硬币都去了苏打罐,他珍贵的“银行”,然后所有的疲倦都神奇地消失了每次他经过商店橱窗里的胸针时,都会提醒他,他做了什么是值得的。一天比一天地,他的苏打水锡变得越来越重了。六个星期过去了,他才知道。然后走到了平安夜。终于,时间到了!鲁本偷偷走进他的房间,小心翼翼地拿出苏打罐,把所有的硬币都倒出来,开始数。5美元二十美分!他第二次数了一遍,毫无差错。他的努力工作最终得到了回报!鲁本紧紧地拿着苏打锡,立刻冲进了商店。朵拉戴着漂亮的胸针,知道背后的故事,欣喜若狂,一句话也说出来。她只是伸出双臂紧紧地搂住了她心爱的儿子。“圣诞快乐,妈妈,”儿子骄傲地宣布。“你自己也是如此。”骄傲的母亲也着。嗯,没有梦想是无法不到的。四:佳作展现Everydayafterschool,Reubenstartedhisplan.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Finally,thetimecame!__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________五:课后练笔AlexwasveryexcitedbecausetheNewYearEvewasapproaching.Suddenly,hesawhisgrandfathersittingalonelookingveryAlexwenttohimandasked,“Grandpa,whyareyousittingalone?Isthereanythingwrongwithyou?”【版权所有:21教育】Hisgrandfatherreplied,“No,Iamfine.Ijustfeellikesittingalone.”“Grandpa,youknowtheNewYearisnear,soareyoupreparingforit?”askedAlexexcitedly.“Nodear,Iamnot.Withthepassageoftime,theworldhascompletelychangedandIdon’tseeanypointincelebratingtheworldIseetoday,”answeredhisgrandfatherdisappointedly.“Iknowsomethingiswrongwithyouandyouarenottellingme.Pleasetellmewhattheproblemis.”Alexsaid.“IfeelIamastrangerintheworldIamlivingin.ItisnotthesameasIhaveknown.Noweveryoneisbusywiththeirownwork.Yourfatherisbusywithbusiness,yourbrotherisbusyonthecomputer,yoursisterisbusystudyingabroadandyourmumisbusywithhouseholdwork.Idon’tknowhowtopassmydays,”saidhisgrandfathersadly.“Grandpa,youhaveme!”saidAlex.Hisgrandfathersmiledandsaid,“Yeah,youarehere,butwhataboutothers?Inourdays,wehadafixedtimeeachdaywhenthewholefamilysattogetherandtalked,sharedproblemsandlaughedtogether.”ThatnightAlexthoughtaboutwhathisgrandfatherhadsaidandanideaflashedthroughhismind.HedecidedtohaveasurpriseNewYearpartyathisownhomeandmakeeveryonecometogetherthatday.AsNewYear’sEvegotnearer,Alexgotbusypreparingfortheparty.Hekeptitasecretfromhisgrandfatherandaskedeveryonenottolethimknowaboutitinordertosurprisehim.ItwasDecember31andeveryonewasbusywiththeirownwork.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Alexsawhisgrandfatherlookingveryhappywhiletalkingwiththefamilymembers.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________六:单句训练那是12月31日,每个人都在忙着自己的工作。亚历克斯的祖父坐在他的房间里看书。晚上8点。每个人都开始聚集在客厅里,亚历克斯去给他的祖父打电话。他惊讶地发现所有人都在那里。“今天,我们不去,只是为你享受派对!”亚历克斯说。全家都为忙于生活而道歉。然后他们吃了一顿丰盛的晚餐,一起聊天,分享问题,一起大笑。亚历克斯在和家人交谈时看到他的祖父看起来很开心。他们回顾了过去,为未来做了计划。“我希望我们不会再被分开了。所有家庭成员在一起的地方永远不会改变。亚历克斯看着他年迈的祖父说。其他人也同意了,并确定了全家定期聚会的时间。爷爷感动了,希望和大家一起享受生活。尽管外面很冷,但全家还是暖和不过了。参考答案三:单句训练Everydayafterschool,Reubenstartedhisplan.Coldandhungry,Reubenwanderedaround,searchingfornailbagscarefullyfromonestreettoanother.Tosavemoremoney,thedeterminedboyevendecidedtodeliverpapersontheearlymorning.21·世纪*教育网Everycoinhewonwenttoasodatin,histreasured“bank",andthenallthetirednessdisappearedmagically.www-2-1-cnjy-comEachtimehepassedbythebroochintheshopwindowwouldremindhimwhathedidwasworthwhile.2-1-c-n-j-yDaybyday,hissodatinbecameheavierandheavier.【来源:21cnj*y.co*m】Sixweekspassedbeforeheevenknewit.ThenapproachedtheChristmasEve.Finally,thetimecame!Reubenstoleintohisroomandcautiouslytookoutthesodatin,pouredallthecoinsoutandbegantocount.【出处:21教育名师】Fivedollarsandtwentycents!Hecounteditasecondtime,andnomistake.Hishardworkeventuallypaidoff!Holdingthesodatinfirmly,Reubenrushedfortheshopwithoutasecond'sdelay.Wearingthebeautifulbroochandknowingthestorybehindit,Dorawastoooverjoyedtoutteraword.21教育网Shejustthrewherarmstightlyaroundherbelovedson.“MerryChristmas,mom",thesonannouncedproudly."Youtoo."theproudmotherechoed.21*cnjy*comWell,nodreamisoutofreachforawillingheart.2·1·c·n·j·y六:单句训练ItwasDecember31andeveryonewasbusywiththeirownwork.Alex’sgrandfatherwassittinginhisroom,readingabook.Whentheclockstruck8pm.everyonestartedgatheringinthelivingroomandAlexwenttocallhisgrandfather.21·cn·jy·comHewassurprisedtofindeveryonethere.“Today,wearenotgoinganywherebutenjoythepartyforyou!”Alexsaid.Thewholefamilyapologizedforbeingbusywiththeirlives.Thentheyhadawonderfuldinnertalking,sharingproblemsandlaughingtogether.Alexsawhisgrandfatherlookingveryhappywhiletalkingwiththefamilymembers.Theylookedbackontheolddaysandplannedforthefuture.“Ihopewewon’tbeseparatedagain.Itneverchangesthathomeiswhereallfamilymembersaretogether.”Alexsaid,lookingathisageinggrandfather.Othersagreedandfixedatimewhenthewholefamilywouldgettogetherregularly.Grandpawasmovedtotears,wishingtoenjoylifewitheveryone.Despitethecoldoutside,thewholefamilycouldn’tbewarmer.四:佳作展现(一)Everydayafterschool,Reubenstartedhisplan.Coldandhungry,Reubenwanderedaround,searchingfornailbagscarefullyfromonestreettoanother.Tosavemoremoney,thedeterminedboyevendecidedtodeliverpapersontheearlymorning.Everycoinhewonwenttoasodatin,histreasured“bank",andthenallthetirednessdisappearedmagically.Eachtimehepassedbythebroochintheshopwindowwouldremindhimwhathedidwasworthwhile.Daybyday,hissodatinbecameheavierandheavier.Sixweekspassedbeforeheevenknewit.ThenapproachedtheChristmasEve.Finally,thetimecame!Reubenstoleintohisroomandcautiouslytookoutthesodatin,pouredallthecoinsoutandbegantocount.Fivedollarsandtwentycents!Hecounteditasecondtime,and
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