四级作文类型总结公开课一等奖省优质课大赛获奖课件

CET-B4Writing1.论说型2.综合型3.图表型4.书信型Type1:论说型

A.现象/问题处理型论说文B.对立观点型论说文C.利弊型论说文A.现象/问题处理型论说文1.当前越来越多人使用电子邮件2.电子邮件给人们生活带来哪些便利3.我对电子邮件看法Moreandmorepeoplearecommunicatingviaemail.Communicatingviaemailisconvenient.Iliketocommunicateviaemail.moreandmorepeoplearecommunicatingviaemailsendemailstofriends;universitystudentshandintheirhomeworkviaemailCommunicatingviaemailisconvenientfast:reachesthereaderinaminutecheaperthansendingaletterormakingaphonecalleasier:don’thavetosolongasIliketocommunicateviaemail.agoodwayFirstly,Secondly,Lastly引出话题惯用句式1.Itisuniversallyafactthat(社会现象).2.Nowadays,moreandmorepeopleareconcernedabouttheproblemof…3.Recently,theissue／problem／questionof…hasbeenbroughttopublicattention.分析原因惯用句式1．Hereareseveralreasonsforit.First…Second…Finally…2．Thereasonscanbelistedasfollows.Foronething,…Foranother…3.Whathaspossiblycontributedtothisproblem?Inthefirstplace…Inthesecondplace…4．Perhapsthemain／primary／mostimportantreasonis…5.…isalso／partly／chieflyresponsiblefortheproblem.6．Anumberoffactorscouldaccountfor／leadto／contributeto／resultin…提出处理方案惯用句式1．Thefirstkeyfactortosolvethisproblemis…Anotherkeyfactoris…2．Peoplehavefoundmanysolutionstodealingwiththisproblem.3．Wecanfigureoutmanywaystorelievethepresentcrisis.4．Then,howshouldwesolvethisproblem?Herearesomesuggestions,whichmaybeofsomehelp.5．Facedwith…,weshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.B.对立观点型论说文Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicSpringFestivalGalaonCCTV.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegivenbelow.许多人喜欢在除夕观看春节联欢晚会有些人却提出取消春节联欢晚会在我看来……TheCCTVSpringFestivalGalaisoneofChina’smostpopularannualtelevisionevents,watchedbymillonsofpeopleontheeveofthelunarNewYear.However,inrecentyears,the4-hourshowislosingitsappeal,especiallytoyoungsters.Peopleinincreasingnumberschoosenottowatchtheshow.TheyclaimthatthestereotypedGalashouldgive

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diversemoderncelebrations.However,someotherpeoplearefaithfulaudienceofit.TheyarguethattheEveningGalahassomewhatbecomeatraditionsinceitwasinitiatedinthe1980s.what’smore,watchingtheshowisanindispensablepartofthefestivalforthem.ThoughtheGalaisnolongerpopularwithyoungpeople,Ienjoywatchingtheshowwithmyfamily.Yettomaintaintheinterestoftheyounggeneration,theorganizingcommitteeshoulddevelopaprogrammoreexciting,morecolorfulandmoreentertainingthanthepreviousones.Forexample,it’sagoodideatoinvitesomebignamesinChina’sfilmsandmusicindustriestoperformontheGalastage.Therehasbeenadebateover(中心问题).Somepeoplebelievethat(观点1).Theyinsistthat(观点1之理由).Otherpeoplehowever,insistthat(观点2).Theybelieve(观点2之理由).Inmyopinion,(我观点).Therearethreereasonsformyopinion.Firstofall,(理由1).(展开).Furthermore,(理由2).(展开).Finally,(理由3).(展开).Conclusively,(重复我观点).(展开).点明文章主题惯用句式1....hasbecomeahottopicamongpeoplerecently.Opinionstowardsitvaryfrompersontoperson.2.Thereisanargument／muchdisagreement／amongpeopleconcerning／over／asto／on...3.Differentpeoplehave/hold/takedifferentviews／perspectiveson...4.Whenitcomesto/askedabout...differentpeoplewillofferdifferentanswers.详细介绍两种对立观点惯用句式1.Somepeoplesuggest／maintain／holdtheopinionthat...But／However／While／Nevertheless／Yet,otherpeopleholdadifferentpointofview...2.Somepeoplethinkthat...Onthecontrary／Incontrast,therearestillmanypeoplewhowon’tagree,andtheyclaim...3.Whenitcomesto...somepeoplethink／believethat...whileothersargue／claimthattheoppositeistrue.4.Nowitiscommonly／generally／widely／universallythought／accepted／believed／heldthat...ButIwonder／doubtwhether...陈说自己观点惯用句式1.Formypart／Astome／AsfarasIamconcerned,I’dliketoagreetotheformer／myfavorgoestothefirstview.2.Inmyopinion,bothsidesarepartlyright.Whenwe...weshouldtakeintoconsiderationallaspectsoftheproblemsandthenmaketherightdecision.3.Thereisprobablysometruthinbotharguments／statements,but...

C.利弊型论说文Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicOwingaCar.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegivenbelow.拥有汽车好处；拥有汽车坏处；你看法，观点。开篇句：伴随…发展，汽车日益进入普通家庭。1)好处：2）坏处：

3)利大于弊。Withthedevelopmentofmodernsociety,carsareenteringordinaryfamilies.therearesomeadvantagesof…disadvantages

…aregreaterthan…

提供最方便交通方式b.旅行，舒适,尤其是…气侯里。c.表明事业上繁荣a.所占空间大b.小心，不然轻易发生交通事故c.污染环境providesb.withsth.Itisadj.forsb.todosth.occupy/takeup…islikelyto…Withthedevelopmentofmodernsociety,carsareenteringordinaryfamilies.T.S.---therearesomeadvantagesof…providesb.withsth.formoftransportationitis+adj.forsb.todosth.especially…showprosperity/successT.S.---disadvantagesoccupy/takeupbecareful/cautious,or/otherwiseitisveryeasyto…Xpossible,probable,likelyItisprobable/likelythattrafficaccidentswouldhappen.Trafficaccidentsarelikelytohappen.Trafficaccidentswouldprobablyhappen.giveoffpoisonousgaseswhichpollute…T.S.---Despiteallthedisadvantagesmentionedabove,arebiggerthanX…aregreaterthan…/outweighfirst,second,thirdtobeginwith,furthermore,moreover;

However…/Fromacertainpointofview,theseremarksmaysoundreasonable.But…

Foronething,besides,inaddition,

Inmyopinion/AsfarasI’mconcerned/PersonallyInfact/Asamatteroffact/Actually说明事物优点惯用句式1．Thereareseveraladvantagesin／2．Forall／Inspiteof／Despitethedisadvantages／sideeffects,ithasitscadvantages／beneficialeffects.3．…hasapositiveimpact／influence／effectonpeople’slives.4．…isplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinpeople’slives.说明事物缺点惯用句式1．However,justlikeanythingelse,…hasitsnegativesideaswell.2．Ofcourse,thedisadvantagescannotbeignored.3．However,itstillhassomedrawbacks.4．However,justaseverythinghastwosides,…alsohasmanydisadvantages.5．However,…mayalsocause／bringabout／leadto／resultin／contributetosomeproblems.6．Astheproverbgoes,everythinghastwosides…isnoexception.7．However,thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent／obvious／evident.表明事物利大于弊惯用句式1．Astome,Ithinktheadvantagesoutweigh／carrymoreweight／aremuchgreaterthanthedisadvantages.就我而言，我认为利大于弊。2．Anyway,Istillbelieve…hasmoreadvantagesthandisadvantages.3．Butforme,Ithinkwhatismoreimportantisitspositiveside.Type3:图表型

Directions:

Examinethechartcarefully.Writeacompositionbasedontheoutlinegivebelow:

1.Detailedsituationoftheproduction.

2.Analysisandconclusion.YEAROUTPUTTOTALCOLORTVSETBLACKANDWHITETVSET198345,0005,00040,000198445,00010,00035,000198550,00020,00030,000198665,00040,00025,0001987100,00080,00020,0001988105,00085,00020,0001989110,00090,00020,0001990120,000100,00020,000Thischartshowsustheincrease

intheproductionofTVsetsinthefactoryfrom1983to1990.一个事物在不一样时期所表达出来发展或改变趋势提干说明部分或者图表说明部分Wecanseethatthetotaloutputincreasedfrom45,000setsin1983to120,000in1990.thisincreasewasduetothesubstantialriseintheproductionofcolorTVsets.In1983,theoutputofcolorTVwasonly5,000sets.Thefigure,however,doubledannuallyforfouryearsinsuccessionandcontinuedtoincreasesteadilyeversince.In1990itreached100,000,a20-foldincreaseinsevenyears.Ontheotherhand,theoutputofblackandwhiteTVsetsdeclinedgraduallyfrom40,000in1983to20,000in1987andthenremainedstable.对图表改变部分作出详细描述，分析其特点。TherapidincreaseintheproductionofTVsetsmirroredthegrowthofpeople’spurchasingpower,andthegrowingdemandforcolorTVsetsfurtherindicatedtheimprovementofpeople’slivingstandard.对图表改变部分分析成因。

有时候：

1.谈论个人看法或者观点

2.陈说图表所表达出来主要意义

3.谈论图表所表现问题Directions:Examinethegraphcarefully.Writeacompositionaccordingtotheinformationgiven.

思绪该图表特点：描述多项事物多项事物描述次序：高-低；低-高；高和低掐两头，然后描述中间其余项事物，其余项事物也要有次序描述方法：一个事物一句话描述；也能够选取两到三个事物放在一句话里描述详细词句：占…百分比怎么说？第一，第二…怎么说?ThesportsprogramsenjoyaboomamongTVviewers.Accordingtotheabovegraph,78%ofTVviewersfrequentlywatchsports,whichisobviouslyfaraheadofothertelevisedevents.Newsfollowssecondwith68%ofviewers,comparedwith54%moviewatchers.DocumentaryseemstobemorepreferableamongpeoplethanSpecialsdo,with42%and20%respectively.怎样补上缺失第一句话？Type4:书信型

书信型

ALetterofApplication(自荐信)ALetterofRecommendation(推荐信)ALetterofComplaintALetterofApologyALetterofCongratulationReadthefollowingadvertisementpublishedinthenewspaper,thenwritealetterofnofewerthan120wordsapplyingforthejob.Besuretostateyourqualificationsandanyothernecessaryinformation.AttentionAppliedTechnology,Inc.islookingforanexperiencedcomputerclerkforapositionstartingSept..Ifinterested,pleasewriteto:PersonalmanagerAppliedTechnology,Inc.289ChangjianRoadHefei,AnhuiALetterofApplicationDearSirorMadam,Inthenewspaper,Inoticedyouradvertisementfortheservicesofaclerk.Iherebywishtoapplyfortheposition,feelingconfidentthatI’mqualifiedtofillittoyoursatisfaction.1.用一句话做个大约自我介绍。(可省略)

2.给出求职信息起源。

3.表示自己求职意愿。

I’m22yearsold,andshallgraduatethissummerformthecomputerDepartmentofHefeiUniversityofTechnology.Ihaveagoodknowledgeofcomputers.Besides,IamskilledinEnglish.IhavepassedCollegeEnglishBand6Exam.LastsummervacationIworkedinacompanyasaclerk.Asaresult,IfeelsurethatIwouldbeacompetentclerkinyourcompany.1.Educationrelated.

2.Workexperiencerelated.

3.小结句：表示自己情况符合要求

注意：陈说多项内容时，要使用连接词。

Shouldmyapplicationberegardfavorably,Iwouldappreciateyourkindnessandconfidenceinme.Ihopetohaveanopportunityforaninterviewatatimeconvenientforyou.Thankyouforyourconsiderationofmyapplication.

YoursFaithfully，LiuYan

1.假如对方能够考虑，自己感激不尽。

2.期盼回复。Youareallowed30minutestowriteacomplaintlettertothemanagerofashopwhereyoureceivedabadservice.Besuretoexpressyourangerinasuitableway.ALetterofComplaintDearManager,Muchtomyregret,Iwritethistoplaceacomplaintagainstoneofyourshopassistantsabouthisbadserviceinthecourseofourshoppinginyourshopyesterday.用一句话概述写信原因。(指出投诉对象、投诉主要理由、时间和地点)

Yesterdayaboutteno’clockinthemorning,myhusband,Iandaladyfriendofourscametoyourshopwiththeintentiontobuysomesouvenirs.Oneofyourshopassistants,whosebadgenumberwas15ifIrememberright,wasaskedtoremovethedustfromsomeofthebronzestatusinorderthatourfriendmighthaveagoodlookattheseobjectsbeforemakinguphermindtobuy.Underthecircumstances,itwastheassistant’sdutyeithertodowhatwasaskedorexplainwhyhewasunabletocomplywithsucharequest.Insteadofmindinghisdutyandactinginapolitemanner,theassistantturnedadeafeartoourrequestandwalkedawaymurmuringinasarcasticmannerthatourfriendwasfoolishinaskingforremovalofthedust.Greatourembarrassmenttomeetwithsuchanawkwardoccasion.用记叙方式，详细陈说事情发生整个过程。Wewishyouwouldlookintothisunsatisfactorystateofaffairsandtakestepstopreventarecurrenceofoffensiveconductofthiskind.TheladyinquestionhasarrivedfromJapananditisapitythatsheshouldbeledtoformanunfavorableimpressionoftheassistantsinthiscity.表示出自己希望对方做事情。

2.表示自己对于此件事情心情。

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicALettertotheEditor.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegivenbelow.假设你是李明，有一天，你在乘坐公交车时，发觉一个小伙子给一位老人让座，因为老人没有致谢，小伙子所以和老人吵了起来。请你就此事发表评论，能够批评小伙子，也能够批评老人，或者兼而有之。June24,DearSir,IamwritingaboutwhatIsawonBusNo.878ataround16:00onmywaytoWal-Mart.Assoonasanoldmangotonatonestop,ayoungmangavehimaseat.Theoldman,however,tooktheseatwithoutaword.Seeingthis,theyoungmanmusthavegotupset,forhewanteditback.Asaresult,aquarrelstartedrightaway.Iwasreallypuzzled.Wastheyoungmanmakingafussovertrifles?Whatwouldhavehappenediftheoldmanhadsaidthanks?Aftercarefulconsiderations,I’dliketoproposethatyoungpeopleberespectfultotheoldevenifsomeofthemarenot“good-mannered.”Atthesametime,theoldshouldmindtheirmannersandsetgoodexamplesfortheyouth.Onlyinthiswaycanoursocietybeharmonious. Sincerely, LiMing点题记叙重点段落结论描述经过发表看法说明目June24,DearSir/Madam,IamwritingaboutwhatIsawonBusNo.878ataround16:00onmywaytoWal-Mart.Assoonasanoldmangotonatonestop,ayoungmangavehimaseat.Theoldman,however,tooktheseatwithoutaword.Seeingthis,theyoungmanmusthavegotupset,forhewanteditback.Asaresult,aquarrelstartedrightaway.Iwasreallypuzzled.Wastheyoungmanmakingafussovertrifles?Whatwouldhavehappenediftheoldmanhadsaidthanks?Aftercarefulconsiderations,I’dliketoproposethatyoungpeopleberespectfultotheoldevenifsomeofthemarenot“good-mannered.”Atthesametime,theoldshouldmindtheirmannersandsetgoodexamplesfortheyouth.Onlyinthiswaycanoursocietybeharmonious.

Sincerely, LiMing

June24,DearSir/Madam,IamwritingaboutwhatIsawonBusNo.878ataround16:00onmywaytoWal-Mart.Assoonasanoldmangotonatonestop,ayoungmangavehimaseat.Theoldman,however,tooktheseatwithoutaword.Seeingthis,theyoungmanmusthavegotupset,forhewanteditback.Asaresult,aquarrelstartedrightaway.Iwasreallypuzzled.Wastheyoungmanmakingafussovertrifles?Whatwouldhavehappenediftheoldmanhadsaidthanks?Aftercarefulconsiderations,I’dliketoproposethatyoungpeopleberespectfultotheoldevenifsomeofthemarenot“good-mannered.”Atthesametime,theoldshouldmindtheirmannersandsetgoodexamplesfortheyouth.Onlyinthiswaycanoursocietybeharmonious.

Sincerely, LiMing

向右缩进5个字符Sample1

June24,DearSir/Madam,IamwritingaboutwhatIsawonBusNo.878ataround16:00onmywaytoWal-Mart.

Sample1Assoonasanoldmangotonatonestop,ayoungmangavehimaseat.Theoldman,however,tooktheseat

withoutaword.Seeingthis,theyoungmanmusthavegotupset,forhewanteditback.Asaresult,aquarrelstartedrightaway.

Sample1 Iwasreallypuzzled.Wastheyoungmanmakinga

fussovertrifles?Whatwouldhavehappenediftheoldmanhadsaidthanks?Aftercarefulconsiderations,I’dliketoproposethatyoungpeopleberespectfulto

theoldevenifsomeofthemarenot“good-mannered.”Sample1Atthesametime,theoldshouldmindtheirmannersandsetgoodexamplesfortheyouth.Onlyinthiswaycanoursocietybeharmonious.

Sincerely/Respectfully, LiMingFormalitySample2June8,DearSirorMadam,IamwritingtoyouaboutaquarrelIwitnessedinabusthisafternoononmywayhome,whichmightbeasuitabletopicforReaders’Discussioninyourmagazine.Sample2Atastop,anoldmangotonthe