考研图画类作文完全攻略（第三讲）副本

考研图画类作文完全攻略第三讲主讲教师：刘畅Accordingtothissubtlyportrayedcartoon〔段首套话〕,thereare〔串联细节词〕twotourists-perhapsacouple-takingsightseeingonasmallboatsteeredbyaboatman,leaningintimatelyoneachotheranddiscarding〔-ing伴随状语，平行结构〕theirpicnictrashcasuallyintoalake,with〔介词伴随状语〕thebeautifulnaturalwaterresortbeinglitteredandteamedbyflowrubbishlikeplasticcontainers,fish-bones,bananapeel,watermelonrind,bottles,tins,foodwrappings,etc.,asif〔虚拟语气〕theyturnedablindeyetotheenvironment.Andbelowthedrawing,atopicreads:〔提示语翻译〕the“leftovers〞“after〞thetraveland“me〞inthetravel,whichformsanironicpun〔定语从句〕.Asissymbolicallyillustratedinthecartoon,therearetwoindividualsrespondingtothesameeventincompletelydiverseways,withthepersonontheleftairinghisdissatisfactionanddisappointmentwhenabottleisoverturned,whilethemanontherightishurrytoraiseitup,wearingashiningsmileonface.Weareinformedbythewordsinthedrawingthatvariousfolkstakedifferentattitudestowardthesamescene.AnEnglishproverbhasitthat"it'snousecryingoverthespiltmilk".Thispicturepreciselycapturesoneofsuchsituations-

thereisabottleofwaterbeingaccidentallydroppedontotheground.Yetthereactionsofthetwoindividualsinthecartoonareofgreatdifference,withoneexclaiming"Oh,God,it'sallover!"whereastheotheroneremainscalmandpositive-expressingthat"thereisstillsomeleft."Thisthought-provokingcartoonfeaturesasharpcontrastbetweentwomen'sperspectivesonthewaterremaininginthefallenbottle.Theleftone,whowearsanexpressionofsadnessandmelancholyonface,lamentsthelossofwaterandthinkspessimisticallythat"itiscompletelyfinished".Conversely,theotheroneontherightconsidersthat"fortunatelythereisalittleleft."首韵：change,chance,andchallengeaccept,advocate,andappreciatecaution,conscience,andcouragethroughfairorfoul〔经过困苦〕flourishandfail〔兴衰〕waxandwanefameandfortunepeace,progress,andprosperitysurviveandsucceed2007:Accordingtothisvividandenlighteningcartoon,

therearetwofootballplayersstandingontheplayground,withthegoalkeeperlookingquitenervousandtheforwarddoubtfulabouthisability,asifbothofthemlosttheirconfidencetowinthegame.→Thiscartoonhumorouslypresentsasceneofacriticalmoment:

thereisanervoussoccerforwardstandingbythepenaltyspot,facingupwithhisopponent,thegoalkeeper.Interestinglyenough,theforwardmagnifiestheopponentinhismind,imaginingthegoalkeeperasanimmenseobstacleloomingaheadofhimsothatchancesofshootinginareratherslim.Meanwhile,thegoalkeeperminimizeshisownimage,withanillusionthatthegoalistooenormousforhimtoguard,asifhecouldnotdefendtheshotsuccessfully.(Castingacloserlookandreflectionuponthispictureprovidesuswithabettersenseofitsdeepimplications.)补充：语言模板模板1：Thesatirical/enlightening/inspiringsketchgraphicallyportraysavividsceneinwhich(…).Quiteobviously,(…),butthisisnotthekeymessageconveyedbythepicture.Themoststrikingfeatureofthedrawingisthat(…),whichindicates(…).Aftercarefulobservation,weareinformedbythecaptionthat(…).模板2：Thispicturedepictsanenlighteningsceneinwhich....〔整体描述〕Thewittedartistdeliberatelyexaggeratessomedetails,fromwhichwecanperceivethat....〔细节描述1〕And,furtherexaminationuponthisportrayalalsorevealsthat....〔细节描述2〕(However,themoststrikingandconspicuousfeatureimpressingmedeeplyis....〔细节描述3〕)Theenlighteningsketchgraphicallyportraysavividsceneinwhich(twofootballplayersarestandingonaplayground).Quiteobviously,(theyareplayingafootballmatch),butthisisnotthekeymessageconveyedbythepicture.Themoststrikingfeatureofthedrawingisthat(bothofthemtendtooverestimatetheirrivalsandunderestimatetheirownabilities),whichindicates(theirlackofconfidence).二、意义阐释段1、段落结构：总分/总分总2、段落层次：复原逻辑词WhenIwasatmiddle-school,myparentswerebothoutofwork.MyparentsfeltdisappointedandIwasgreatlyworriedaboutmyfuture.Ourlifebecameveryterrible.Ievendecidedtocommitsuicide.Ourneighborlearntaboutmyfamily’scondition,andtheybegantohelpus.Theylentafewmoneytomyparentsandmyparentsusedthesemoneytoopenashop.Theyhelpedmetostudy.Myparentsfinallygotthroughhardlife.SoIsaythatloveisgreat.→Forinstance,whenIwasatmiddle-school,myparentswerebothoutofwork,duetowhichmyparentsfeltdisappointedandIwasgreatlyworriedaboutmyfuture.Consequently,ourlifebecamesoterriblethatIevendecidedtocommitsuicide.Later,ourneighborlearntaboutmyfamily’scondition,andtheybegantohelpus.Meanwhile,theylentafewmoneytomyparentsandmyparentsusedthesemoneytoopenashop.Inaddition,theyhelpedmetostudy.Intheend,myparentsfinallygotthroughhardlife.SoIsaythatloveisgreat.补充：形合vs.意合英语：语言缜密，思维精细，借助语法、结构形式连接。中文：尚世功，惊人疏懒，不讲显性的语法和逻辑。e.g.我出生在武汉；武汉是个美丽的城市；长江汉水在此交汇。你说你要来；你没来；我很失望。吃食堂：I’mgoingtoeatinthedininghall.救火：extinguish/fightagainstthefire枯藤老树昏鸦，小桥流水人家Youdon’tknow,whoknow?→Ifyoudon’tknow,thenwhowillknow?“天太晚了，住在这吧！〞It'slate.Stayhere.Youhadbetterstayovernightatthisplacebecauseitistoolateforyoutogohomenow,刘畅很帅。LiuChangishandsome.食堂今天吃饺子。Dumplings/Jiaoziareservedinthecanteentoday.3、论证模式：①论证形式：纯道理/道理+举例②论证方法：正反比照；因果分析主题句（+过渡句）正反对比（A→B；非A→非B）因果分析（分类：横向/纵向）细节论证（例子、引言、数据等）2004年16分：Thecartoondepictsavividpictureinwhichanathlete,drippingsweat,isrushingtotheend.Obviously,hewinsthematch,butthisisnotthekeymessageconveyedbythepicture.Themoststrikingfeatureofthedrawingisthatthesamelineismarkedasboth“thestart〞and“theend〞,whichindicatesthatalthoughtheathletecametothefinish,anewraceiswaitingforhim.Theideaconveyedbythecartoonisapparent:theendisanewstart.Itiswidelyacceptedthatweshouldnotbesatisfiedwiththepresentachievement,fornowadaysnewchallengesandcompetitionneverstop.Themarketeconomyandcompetitivesocietydrivesmanypeoplestudyinghardforhigheracademicdegrees,someofthemevenseekingtheopportunitiestostudyabroad.Weshouldsparenoeffortsimprovingourselves,masterhightechnologyandprofessionalskills.Thenwecanmakeuseofittodevoteourselvestosociety.Takemyfatherasanexample.Hewasdeniedhighereducationforhistoricalreasons.Butbyself-studyhebecameatechnicianinafactory.Manypeoplethoughthewascontent.Butheneverstoppedstudying.Hetookcoursesoflawinhissparetime.Laterhebecamealawyer.“Thefinishingpointisjustanewstartingpoint〞,hesaidtome.Theideaconveyedbythecartoonisapparent:theendisanewstart.Itiswidelyacceptedthatweshouldnotbesatisfiedwiththepresentachievement,fornowadaysnewchallengesandcompetitionneverstop.Themarketeconomyandcompetitivesocietydrivesmanypeoplestudyinghardforhigheracademicdegrees,someofthemevenseekingtheopportunitiestostudyabroad.Weshouldsparenoeffortsimprovingourselves,masterhightechnologyandprofessionalskills.Thenwecanmakeuseofittodevoteourselvestosociety.→Theideaconveyedbythecartoonisapparent:theendisanewstart.Foronething,itiswidelyacceptedthatweshouldnotbesatisfiedwiththepresentachievement,fornowadaysnewchallengesandcompetitionneverstop.Foranother,themarketeconomyandcompetitivesocietydrivesmanypeoplestudyinghardforhigheracademicdegrees,someofthemevenseekingopportunitiestostudyabroad.Undersuchcircumstances,undoubtedly,weshouldsparenoeffortimprovingourselves,masterhightechnologyandprofessionalskills,bywhichwecanmakefulluseofittodevoteourselvestosociety.18分：Asisshowninthepicture,onarrivingatthefinishinglineofaraceontheplayground,thelovelyyoungmanhastocontinuehisnewjourneyinnotimeinsteadofstoppingtotakearest.Hehassuccessfullysettledthepuzzleof“stoppingorgoingon〞whichmighthaveconfusedmanyothers.Withtheincreasingpaceofmodernlife,perhapsnochangehascharacterizedthepastdecademoredramaticallythanthatofpeople'sviewontheirownlife.Itisgenerallyagreeduponthatpeoplehavetoadjustthemselvestothisnewchange.Ontheonehand,nodoubt,peoplewillgainalotbysettingnewgoalsintheirdailylife.TakethefamousscientistThomasEdisonforexample.Hehaddoneverywellinhisearlylife,butcontinuedtopursuesomethingmoredifficultallthroughhislife.Ontheotherhand,ifoneisobsessedwiththesuccesshehasachieved,hewouldlosethechancetopursuenewsuccess.Whatismore,hemaybecometheslaveofhissuccess.Therearemanycasesshowingthatpeoplelosetheircouragetobetterthemselvesafterbecomingsuccessful.Tosumup,one'sviewonhissuccessdetermineshisfuture.Inmyopinion,itisnecessarytocarryoutanation-widecampaignpublicizingpeoplewhohaveaburningdesireformoreandevergreaterachievementwhentheyarealreadywell-known.Sothatpeopleinthesocietywilldevelopaforward-lookingattitudeandmaketheirlifeworthlivingandtheworldmorebeautifulaswell.2021年：DoesInternetnarrowthedistanceamongpeople,orbroadenit?Thisissuehasbecomeahot-topicwhichconcernsmostofus.Ontheonehand,sincetheprimaryuseofInternetiscommunication,itwillsurelyexertpositivesocialconsequencesinpeople’severydaylivesbecauseitincreasesthefrequencyandqualityofinterpersonalcommunicationsamongpeople.Butontheotherhand,theeaseofelectroniccommunicationmayleadtoweakersocialties,inthatpeoplehavelessreasonstoleavetheirhomesandactuallyinteractfacetofacewithotherpeople.ThemetaphoricandimpressiveportrayalhassubtlyrevealedthedualityoftherelationshipbetweenmanandInternet.ThespiderwebundoubtedlyservesasasymbolofInternet,bothconnectingpeopleandisolatingthemfromeachother.Ontheonehand,fromthepositiveside,thereisnodenyingthatInternetiscurrentlyoneofthemostefficientmediausedforinterpersonalcommunication,connectingpeoplewhohaveaccesstoitinacomparativelycloserpattern.〔Forinstance,asacollegestudent,IgetonlineeverydaytodiscussopinionswithotherpeopleonBBS,tosharemypleasuresandsorrowsonmicro-blog,tostudyEnglishbyregisteringforwebcoursesandtochatfreelythroughe-mailsorWe-chatwithmynet-friends.Andformostpeople,instantmessagingservicesprovidedbyonlinetechcompanieslikeTencentenableustocommunicatewithothersfarawayfromus.〕Butontheotherhand,fromarathernegativeperspective,asizableproportionofInternetusersadmitthattheyaretoomuchaddictedtoInternettomaintainface-to-facecontactwiththeirfamilies,acquaintancesandcolleagues,idlingawayanexcessiveamountoftimeonline,withtheresultthatthetraditionalwayoflifehasbeenradicallytransformed.Onceindulgedinthefictitiousworld,peoplefeelreluctanttoapproachothersandtoconcentrateonreallife,unwillingtomakecontactwitheachotherinaface-to-faceway,whichleadstotheirlossoftheskillofdirectcontactandtheiralienationfromothers.2021：Itisapparentthatthecartoonistaimsatremindingusoftheimportanceofcooperationandglorifyingthespiritofmutualhelp,whichtopthelistofvirtuesinChinesetime-honoredtradition.Hardlycananyoneachievesuccessinhiscareerwithouttheassistanceofhiscolleaguesandpartners.Ascompetitioninalllinesofworkgrowsincreasinglyfierce,wemustdefeatourrivalsthroughpowerfulteamwork.Whatweneedmostinplightiscooperation,simplybecauseconcertedeffortsbenefiteveryindividualaswellasthewholesociety.TakebasketballheroYaoMingforanexample:hecanslamthedunksmartlybecauseallhisteammatescontributemoreorlesstohisoutstandingperformance.Similary,itisthespiritofteamworkamongthestaffthatempowersthestrickendigitalgiantAppletosurvivetheterriblecrisisandclimbanewheight.Ifthevirtuewereignored,itisimpossibleforthehigh-techcorporationtocreateacontinuousseriesofhitsintheglobalelectronicmarket.Likewise,thesuccessfullaunchingofChang'eNo.3lunarprobeshouldbeattributedtotheChinesescientists’jointeffortsinsteadofindividualaccomplishment.Ifweworkseparately,wewillbeconfinedtofrailmindsandlimitedresources-inanutshell,cooperationreallydoesmatter.2021:Laughteristhesunthatdriveswinterfromthehumanrace.Whenwefeeldisappointed,sad,lonelyormiserable,wetendtofeelasifwewerelivingindespair.Butlaughterisagoodmedicineanditcanworkmiracles.Actually,whatseemstousasbittertrialsareoftenblessingsindisguise.AsSirWinstonChurchillstates:Apessimistseesthedifficultyineveryopportunity;anoptimistseestheopportunityineverydifficulty.Sotodrawaconclusion,optimismisthekeytoachievement.Onnoaccountcanproblemengulfuswhenweareplacedinaplightinthatwehavetohewoutofthemountainofdespairastoneofhope.2021年：Wecandeducefromthepicturethatgreatimportancehastobeattachedtotheissueofoptimism.Then,whathassparkedthisphenomenon?Identifyingthereasonsforthisemergingfactwhichinvolvesseveralcomplicatedfactorsisfarfromaneasytask.Butingeneral,theymaycomedowntothreemajorones.Tobeginwith,onaccountofthequickeningpaceoflife,competitiongoesincreasinglyfierceinallwalksoflife,imposingtremendouspressureonallindividuals.Thus,ahostofpeoplehavegainedagreaterawarenessoftheneedforanoptimisticandpositiveattitudetowardslife.What'smore,wemustmaintainpowerfuloptimisminfaceofchallengessoastosurviveandsucceed.Anothercausewhichisalsoworthmentioninghereisthebenefitsoptimismprovidesonindividualsandonsocietyasawhole.正反比照模板Peopledifferintheirattitudestowardsfailure.Facedwithit,someofthemcanstanduptoit,drawusefullessonsfromitandtryhardtofulfillwhattheyaredeterminedtodo.Others,however,loseheartandgivein.人们对失败持有不同的态度。面对失败，有人能够经得起考验，从失败中汲取教训，并努力去完成他们下定决心要做的事情。然而，另一些人却丧失信心并退却了。Inthefirstplace,ifyouwanttoachievesomethingorintendtofulfilloneofyourambitions,youmustworkhard,makeeffortsandgetprepared.Otherwise,youwilltakenoadvantageofopportunitieswhentheycometovisityou.Secondly,thedifferencebetweenamanwhosucceedsandonewhodoesnotliesusuallyinthewayeachtreatsopportunities.Thesuccessfulpersonalwaysmakesadequatepreparationstomeetopportunitiesastheydulyarrive.Theunsuccessfulperson,ontheotherhand,workslittleandjustwaitstoseepassby.第一，假设你要取得成就或要实现你的雄心壮志，你必须努力工作、艰苦奋斗、准备好条件。否那么，机遇来临你却无法利用。第二，成功者与失败者的区别在于处理机遇的态度。成功者做好充分准备迎接机遇的适时来临。而失败者工作懒散，眼看机遇悄然而过。The

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Undoubtedly,thiscartoonarousesdeepconcernovertheissueofmutualsupport.Themessageconveyedinit,Isuppose,istwofold.Inthefirstplace,innowadaysworld,ifonewantstoachievesomethingorintendstofulfilloneofhisambitions,hehastoworkhard,makeeffortsandgetpreparedonthebasisofhisteam.Otherwise,hewilltakenoadvantageofopportunitieswhentheycometovisithim.Secondly,thedifferencebetweenamanwhosucceedsandonewhodoesnotliesonlyinthefactwhetherornothecouldcooperatessuccessfullywithothers.Thesuccessfulpersonalwaysachieveaccomplishmentsinhiscareerwiththeassistanceofhiscolleaguesandpartners.Theunsuccessfulperson,ontheotherhand,worksmerelyonhimselfandjustwaitstoseepassby.因果模板Whathassparkedtheincreasinginterestinexercise?Foronething,peoplehavegainedagreaterawarenessoftheneedforphysicalfitness.Foranother,theconstantlyimprovingstandardoflivingenablesChinesepeopletopatronizetheincreasingnumberofrecreationalvenues.Themainthingperhapscentersonthehealthcareandpsychologicalbenefitsexerciseprovides.什么引发了人们对锻炼越来越浓的兴趣？一方面，人们更加清楚地意识到保持身体健康的必要性。另一方面，不断提高的生活水平使中国人能够支付增加的娱乐支出。最主要的可能在于锻炼带来的保健和心理上的好处。Identifyingthereasonsforanemergingphenomenonwhichinvolvesseveralcomplicatedfactorsisfarfromaneasytask.Forexample,

somescientistsattributeenvironmentaldeteriorationtoaseriesofnaturalfactors,whileothersplacetheblamesolelyoninappropriatehumanbehavior.要找到涉及许多复杂因素的新现象的原因远非一件易事。例如，一些科学家把环境的恶化归结为一些自然因素，而另一些人把责任都推在人类不适当的行为上。Theexplanationforthephenomenonoftherisingteenagesuiciderateinvolvesmanycomplicatedfactors.Someattributetherisetoanoveremphasisonearlysuccess,otherspointtomountingpeerpressure,andstillotherstoconfusionoverchangingsocialvalues.对上升的少年自杀率的解释涉及很多复杂的因素。有的人把上升的原因归结为过分强调少年时期的成功，有的人指出是因为不断增长的同伴之间的压力，还有人认为是对不断变化的社会价值的迷茫造成的。Thereasonsforantisocialbehaviorarebothcomplicatedandvaried.Isuggestthephenomenonresultsfrominappropriaterolemodelsandthelackofwell-definednormsofbehavior.However,themainreasonisquitelikelythecontinuingdegenerationofsocialvalues.反社会行为的原因既复杂又多样。我认为这种现象是不恰当的角色典型和缺少行为标准的很好的定义造成的。然而，主要原因很可能是不断贬低的社会价值。仿写：

2005：Throughtheartisticpresentation,wecanbeeasilyremindedofapopulartendencyintoday'ssociety,thatis,disrepecttowardseldersandshirkingoftheresponsibilityofnursingagingparents.Then,whyareagrowingnumberofChineseyoungstersfailtotakeonthefilialresponsibility?Onereasonistheincreasingdemandformaterialpossessionoftheyoungergeneration.Anotheristhebenefit-orientedtrendinmodernsociety.Perhapsthemainreason,however,centersonthedeteriorationofthepublicawarenessofnursingagingparents.2006：Themessageconveyedinthiscartoonisquiteapparent:incontemporaryChina,anincreasingnumberofyoungsterstendtoworshipthesuperstarsinanirrationalway.Identifyingthereasonsforthisemergingphenomenonwhichinvolvesseveralcomplicatedfactorsisfarfromaneasytask.Aftercarefulanalysis,Isuggestthephenomenonresultsfrominappropriaterolemodelsandthelackofwell-definednormsofbehavior.However,themainreasonisquitelikelythecontinuingdegenerationofsocialvalues.

负面话题模板Thiscartoonservesasawake-upcalltounveiltheincreasinglygraveissueof(tourists'spoilingofnature)whichprevailsinChinaandwhichalarminglyremindsusoftheimportanceof(naturepreservation)incontemporarysociety.Firstandforemost,atnotimecantheeconomyboom/societydevelopatthecostof(environmentaldamage).Inthisrespect,(tourism)isnoexception.Thus,(asustainedandharmoniousdevelopment)insteadof(thenettouristrevenue)justifiablytopstheagendaoftheoperationandmanagementofthegovernmentandtheauthoritiesconcerned.Inaddition,thecartoonalsourgesustopaydueattentionto(considereringhowtoraisethepublicmorality).ThephenomenonpresentedintheabovedrawingisanabsolutedisgracetousChinese,whosecorevaluestraditionallyhighlightthetremendoussignificanceof(publicmorals).正面话题模板Themetaphoricandimpressiveportrayalhassubtlyrevealedthesignificanceof(optimism).Firstandforemost,withinthiscompetitive21stcenturyfullofchancesandchallenges,weallexperienced(enoughgoodandbadinlife-amplehappinessandsorrow,sufficientjoyandpain).Undersuchcircumstances,itisgenerallyagreeduponandwidelyacknowledgedthat(apositiveandoptimisticattitude)notonlyprovidesthepassporttoapromisingfuturebutalsolaysthefoundationforachievingtriumph.Foranother,quiteunfortunately,ahostofindividualssinkincreasinglydeeperintothemiredueto(theirgloomyoutlook).Sotosumup,nomatterwhathappens,wehaveto(sparenoeffortestablishingarightoutlook,improvingourselvestodevoteourselvesinabetterwaytosociety).引用Oneofthegreatearlywriterswrotethat:Workisthegrandcureofallthemaladiesandmiseriesthateverbesetmankind.Ifthisistrue,thenthepresentsituationshouldmakeuswonderwhetherthemeasurethattheaverageworkerisobligedtoretireattheageof50isreasonable.一位伟大的作家曾写到：工作是医治人间一切病痛和疾苦的万应良药。如果是这样的话，那么现在的状况应使我们想一想，强迫普通工人在50岁退休是否合理。"Thepeoplewhogetoninthisworldarethepeoplewhogetupandlookforcircumstancestheywant,andiftheycannotfindthem,makethem."SuchistheremarkmadebyBernardShaw,agreatwriter.Thisviewhasbeensharednowbymoreandmorepeople.著名作家萧伯纳曾说过：在这个世界上取得成功的人，都努力去寻求他们想要的时机，如果找不到时，他们就自己创造时机。这一观点现在正在被越来越多的人所接受。Adleriscorrectinthisassertionthateducationdoesnotendwithgraduation.阿得勒这句话很正确，教育不能随着毕业而结束。三、举例论证段结构简图：〔主题句+〕关联词+主人公+插入修饰+例子细节+〔引言+〕例子总结2021:Weshouldgatheradditionalfactstosupportexistingevidenceandillustratethecorrectnessofmycontentionthatself-confidenceisoftheutmostimportance.Forinstance,Beethoven-theworld-famousGermanComposer-begantolosehishearingin1801andwasentirelydeafby1819.However,thisobstaclecouldnotkeephimfrombecomingoneofthemostinfluentialandprolificcomposersinarthistory.Withastrongspiritofoptimism,hesuccessfullyconqueredthestrikeanddifficultyinhislifeandmadehismusicformatransitionfromclassicaltoromanticcomposition.Beethoven'scaseisatypicalexampleindicatingthatconfidenceisthebasisofanysuccess.2021：Anexampleshouldbeaddedtohighlighttheissuediscussedabove.Todemonstrate,thestudentswhoareintheprocessofpreparingfortheNationalPostgraduateEntranceExamination–greatmanyinnumber,doubtfulabouttheirchancesandchoicesinmind–motivateandencourageeachothertogetridoftheoverwhelmingpressurefromthatexam,throughwhichtheysoonregaintheconfidenceandcourageaftercheeringeachup.Thisisaperfectevidenceindicatingthatonlycooperationandteamworkcanmakeitpossibleforthemtogothroughinfaceofanxietiesandinsecurity.2007：AnancientChineselegendoffersareadyexample.Anman–oldinage,namedtheFoolandlivingbesideMountainTaihangandWangwu–setuphismindtoremovethemountainblockingthevillage’sday,disregardingmockingcommentsfromhisfellowvillagersastheysawhimandhissonssettingouttowork,shovelbyshovel.TheFoolbelievedthatafterhisdeaththeworkwouldbehandeddownfromonegenerationtoanotheruntilthemountainwasleveledandfinallyherealizedhisdream.ThisisatypicalexamplethattheoldFool’sconfidenceinhimselfandcontemptfordifficultieseventuallypaidoff.2004：Numerousexamplescouldbecitedtosupportmyclaim.Forinstance,ThomasEdison–diligent,world-famousanddoingverywellinhisearlylife–continuedtopursuesomethingmoredifficultallthroughhislife.“Geniusconsistsof1%inspirationand99%perspiration.〞Suchistheremarkmadebyhim.Itistrueindeed.ThomasEdison’scaseisatypicalexamplethatkeepingmakingprogressanddaringtostrideforwardalwayshastobeconsideredastherightattitudetowardslifeandworkforeveryonewholongsforsuccess.开放式举例：Tospecifythisstatement,Iwouldliketotakeanexample.HelenKeller-blindanddeaf-isalwaysadmiredandrememberedasaheroinestrivingforthedreaminherlife’sjourney.Withlanguage,sheprovedshecouldcommunicateintheworldofsightandsound-andwasabletospeaktoitandliveinit.“Literatureismyutopia.HereIamnotdisenfranchised.〞Helen’scaseisatypicalexamplethathowknowledgecouldliberateandcultivateone’smind.Todemonstrate,LadyDianaSpencer-theforevercharmingPrincessofWhales-isalwaysrememberedandrespectedbypeopleallovertheworldmoreforherkindness,humanityandcharitableactivitiesthanforherbeauty.Thislady’scaseisatypicalexamplethatone’sinternalmeritsoutweighsanythingelse.Forinstance,LiuChang–smart,quick-wittedandmostlikelytosucceedaftergraduation–endedupunemployed.“I’mregretful!〞HelaterremarkedwheninterviewedbyareporterfromChutianMetropolisDaily.“Myfailure,toalargeextent,canbeattributedtomylossofconfidence.〞LC’scaseisatypicalexamplethat….Risingcrimeisoftencitedasaprimeexampleofmountingsocialdecay.犯罪的上升经常被当作越来越严重的社会倒退的主要例子。BillGates,founderofMicrosoft,isaclassicexampleofsuccess.微软的创始人比尔·盖茨是成功的经典范例。Persistencepaysoff!AcaseinpointcentersontheongoingnegotiationsandanticipatedeminentresolutionoftheMiddleEastpeaceprocess.坚持不懈能取得好结果！一个恰当的例子是正在进行的关于中东和平进程的谈判和预期达成的引人注目的决议。Weshouldgatheradditionalfactstosupportexistingevidenceandillustratethecorrectnessofthecontention.我们需要收集更多的事实支持现有的证据，并证明论点的正确性。Afewmoreexamplesshouldbeaddedt