过考法2 句法错误-短文改错

1、PAGE20专题5短文改错过考法2句法错误Proofreading12022全国卷IMyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.Thoughnotverybig,buttherestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleevenhadtowaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorh

2、ighqualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichintheshortperiodoftime.Instead,hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.Proofreading2预测新题Theotherdays,myfatherofferedtoteachmetorideabike.IwastooscaredthatIcouldntmakeupmindtohaveatryfirst.ButunderFathershelp,Igotonthebike.Atfirst,I

3、rodeunsteady.ButwhenIjustmadeaprogress,allofasudden,Ifallfromthebike.AndIcouldnthelpcry.ButFathersaid,Itdoesntmatter.Whateverhardlearninganewthingis,youshouldnevergiveup.WhenIeventuallylearnedhowtorideabike,IfelthappybecauseInotonlylearnedtheskillofridingabike,andlearnedthespiritofnevergivingup.Proo

4、freading32022新课标全国卷ThebookImreadingoftalksaboutafternoonteainBritain.Itissaidtohavestartedintheearly1800s.Haveteainthelateafternoonprovidesabridgebetweenlunchanddinner,thatmightnotbeserveduntil8oclockatnight.Thiscustomsoonbecomesanothermealofday.Interesting,ithadaconnectionbytheBritishporcelain(瓷器)i

5、ndustry.TeainChinawastraditionallydrankfromcupswithouthandles.WhenteagotpopularinBritain,therewasacryingneedforgoodcupwithhandlestosuitBritishhabits.Thismadeforthegrowintheporcelainindustry.Proofreading4名师原创Highschoolisconsideredthemostimportantstage.Asseniorthreestudent,itwillnotbelongbeforeIgradua

6、ted.NowIhavemanythingstoshareinmyfellows.Firstofall,IdliketoexpressmythanktothosewholentmeahandwhenIwasdisappoint.Itwastheirkindnesswhichhelpedmeregainmyself-confidencewhenIlostmyheart.Besides,Ianxiouswanttoclearupsomemisunderstandingwithmyfriendsinordertokeepourfriendshipsforever.WiththeNationalCol

7、legeEntranceExaminationapproached,Istronglyrecommendthatwecouldvaluetimeandredoubleeffortstostudysothatwecangetintoakeyuniversity.Proofreading52022陕西卷MyfathertookmeoutcampingforthefirsttimewhenIwasseven.Hewantedteachmeaboutanimals,insectsandtrees.Myunclesallcomealongwithbowsandarrowsforhunting.Oneev

8、eningatsunset,wesatbythefire,haveourbarbecue.Justthenabirdwasflyingoverus.Myunclesimmediatejumpedupandshottheirarrowsonthebird.Neitherofthearrowshitthetarget.Suddenlythearrowswasflyingdownatusfromtheskytheywerelookedlikerain!Werantoescapebutfortunatelynoonewasinjured.ThatdayIdidntlearnmuchaboutanima

9、ls,insectsortrees,butIlearntaimpressivelessonaboutgravity!Proofreading6预测新题DearPeter,Howtimeflies!IthadbeenalmostayearsinceyouleftChinatoSweden.Duringyourhomestayatmyhome,wehadsuchwonderfultimethatitseemedasifeverythinghadbeenhappenedyesterday.Ihavebeenlongtohearallaboutyoubutmissyoutoomuch.Fortunat

10、e,Iwasselectedasoneofthestudentrepresentativetopayavisittoyourschool.ThevisitwilllastfromJuly7thto20th.Andasasupersoccerfan,Idreallylovetovisitourlocalsoccerclub.IcantwaitforthedaytocomewhatIcanseeyou.Yours,LiHua参考答案Proofreading1MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.Thoughnotverybig,wherebu

11、ttherestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmeal去掉buttimes.Somepeopleevenhadtowaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohishavesuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorhighqualityoilhonestyandareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichintheusedofashort

12、periodoftime.Instead,hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.hissteadilythatwhere。【解析】考查宾语从句。根据语境可知,此处表达的是靠近我居住的地方,where在此引导宾语从句,并在从句中作地点状语,故需将that改为where。删除but。【解析】考查连词。从属连词Though(虽然)不可与并列连词but(但是）一起使用,故需删除but。hadhave。【解析】考查时态。此处描述现在的客观情况,所以需将had改为have。honesthonesty。【解析】考查名词。根据语境我叔叔告诉我他成功的关键在于诚实可知,此处应

13、用名词作表语。orand。【解析】考查并列连词。根据语境可知,此处不是表示选择关系,而是表示新鲜的蔬菜和优质的油故把or改为and。usingused。【解析】考查被动语态。freshvegetablesandhighqualityoil与动词use之间为被动关系,故用被动语态。becoming前加of。【解析】考查介词。dreamofdoingsth.是固定搭配,意为梦想做某事。thea。【解析】考查冠词。此处表示泛指,故用不定冠词a,inashortperiodoftime意为在短期内。ourhis。【解析】考查代词。由语境及主句主语he可知,此处指的是叔叔的生意,故将our改为his。答

14、案及解析steadysteadily。【解析】考查副词。根据语境可知，此处应用副词修饰动词grow,所以将steady改为steadily。Proofreading2Theotherdays,myfatherofferedtoteachmetorideabike.IwastooscaredthatdaysoIcouldntmakeupmindtohaveatryfirst.ButunderFathershelp,Igotonthemywithbike.Atfirst,Irodeunsteady.ButwhenIjustmadeaprogress,allofasudden,Ifallunstea

15、dily去掉afeelfromthebike.AndIcouldnthelpcry.ButFathersaid,Itdoesntmatter.WhatevercryingHoweverhardlearninganewthingis,youshouldnevergiveup.WhenIeventuallylearnedhowtorideabike,IfelthappybecauseInotonlylearnedtheskillofridingabike,andlearnedthespiritofnevergivingup.butdaysday。【解析】theotherday为固定短语，意为不久前

16、的某天。tooso。【解析】一开始我是如此害怕以至于我下不了决心去尝试。so.that.为固定句型,意为如此以至于。mind前加my。【解析】makeuponesmindtodosth.下定决心做某事为固定用法。underwith。【解析】withoneshelp在某人的帮助下为固定用法。unsteadyunsteadily。【解析】根据语境可知.此处应用副词修饰动词。unsteadily不稳定地。删除progress前的a。【解析】但是当我刚刚取得进步的时候,我突然从自行车上摔了下来。progress作进步讲时是不可数名词,故删除a。fallfell。【解析】此处摔下的动作发生在过去,故应用

17、一般过去时。crycrying。【解析】我忍不住哭了。cant/couldnthelpdoingsth.忍不住做某事为固定用法。WhateverHowever。【解析】无论学习新事物有多么困难.你决不应该放弃。此处应用However引导让步状语从句,修饰形容词hard。andbut。【解析】当我最终学会如何骑自行车时,我不仅因为学会了骑自行车这项技能而感到开心,也因为学会了永不言弃的精神而感到开心。notonly.but(also).不仅而且.为固定用法。Proofreading3ThebookImreadingoftalksaboutafternoonteainBritain.Itissai

18、dtohave去掉ofstartedintheearly1800s.HaveteainthelateafternoonprovidesabridgebetweenHavinglunchanddinner,thatmightnotbeserveduntil8oclockatnight.Thiscustomsoonwhichbecomesanothermealofday.Interesting,ithadaconnectionbytheBritishbecametheInterestinglywith/toporcelain(瓷器)industry.TeainChinawastraditional

19、lydrankfromcupswithoutdrunkhandles.WhenteagotpopularinBritain,therewasacryingneedforgoodcupwithcupshandlestosuitBritishhabits.Thismadeforthegrowintheporcelainindustry.growth删除of。【解析】考查动词。此处read为及物动词,readabook表示读书,故删除介词of。HaveHaving。【解析】考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知,此处应用动名词短语作主语。thatWhich。【解析】考查定语从句的关系词。分析句子结构可知为

20、which引导的定语从句，并在从句中作主语，指物。becomesbecame。【解析】考查时态。此处在介绍英国人喝下午茶这一习俗的形成，故应用一般过去时。day前加the。【解析】考查冠词。day是可数名词，且在此处表特指，其前应用定冠词the。InterestingInterestingly【解析】考查副词。此处应用副词Interestingly作评述性状语，表示有趣的是。bywith或to。【解析】考查固定搭配。haveaconnectionwith/to是固定搭配，表示与有联系。drankdrunk。【解析】考查被动语态。分析句子结构可知，Tea与动词drink为被动关系，故应用被动语态

21、。cupcups。【解析】考查名词的单复数。此处cup为可数名词，前无限定词，应用复数形式表示泛指，指各种各样的杯子。growgrowth。【解析】考查名词。根据语境及句中for后的the可知，此处应用grow的名词形式growth。Proofreading4Highschoolisconsideredthemostimportantstage.Asseniorthreestudent,itawillnotbelongbeforeIgraduated.NowIhavemanythingstoshareinmyfellows.graduatewithFirstofall,Idliketoexpr

22、essmythanktothosewholentmeahandwhenIwasthanksdisappoint.Itwastheirkindnesswhichhelpedmeregainmyself-confidencewhenIdisappointedthat去掉mylostmyheart.Besides,Ianxiouswanttoclearupsomemisunderstandingwithmyanxiouslyfriendsinordertokeepourfriendshipsforever.WiththeNationalCollegeEntranceExaminationapproa

23、ched,Istronglyrecommendthatwecouldvaluetimeandapproachingshouldredoubleeffortstostudysothatwecangetintoakeyuniversity.senior前加a。【解析】根据语境可知.此处指作为一个高三的学生,不久之后我就要毕业了。此处表泛指,且senior的发音以辅音音素开头,故用不定冠词a。graduatedgraduate。【解析】主句用了一般将来时，时间状语从句中应用一般现在时表示将来。inwith。【解析】现在我有很多东西要与我的同伴们分享。sharesth.withsb.是固定搭配，表示和

24、某人分享某物。thankthanks。【解析】首先，我想向在我失望时帮助过我的人表示感谢。thanks是名词，表示感谢，谢意。disappointdisappointed。【解析】disappoint是动词，而此处是作表语，需要用形容词；这里表不某人感到失望，故应用disappointed。whichthat。【解析】当”我失去信心时，是他们的善良帮助我重获自信。分析句子结构可知，此处是强调句型Itis/was+被强调部分+that+其他，如果强调的是人，that还可以换为who。本句中被强调部分是句子主语theirkindness,故应用that。删除heart前的my。【解析】losehe

25、art是习惯用法，表示失去勇气,失去信心。anxiousanxiously。【解析】我急切地想要消除与朋友间的一些误解。此处修饰动词want，故应用副词anxiously。approachedapproaching。【解析】分析句子结构可知，此处是with复合结构在句中作状语，approach与其逻辑主语theNationalCollegeEntranceExamination之间是主谓关系，故应用approaching。couldshould或者删除could。【解析】recommend表示建议。其后的宾语从句要用虚拟语气，故从句谓语动词应用should+动词原形，其中should也可省略。

26、Proofreading5MyfathertookmeoutcampingforthefirsttimewhenIwasseven.Hewantedteachmeaboutanimals,insectsandtrees.Myunclesallcomealongwithbowsandtocamearrowsforhunting.Oneeveningatsunset,wesatbythefire,haveourbarbecue.Justthenabirdwashavingflyingoverus.Myunclesimmediatejumpedupandshottheirarrowsonthebir

27、d.immediatelyatNeitherofthearrowshitthetarget.SuddenlythearrowswasflyingdownatusfromNoneweretheskytheywerelookedlikerain!Werantoescapebutfortunatelynoonewas删除were或lookedandinjured.ThatdayIdidntlearnmuchaboutanimals,insectsortrees,butIlearntaanimpressivelessonaboutgravity!wanted后加to。【解析】考查非谓语动词。他想教我关

28、于动物、昆虫和树木的知识。wanttodosth.为固定用法，故在wanted后面加ecame。【解析】考查时态。我的叔叔们都带着弓和箭一起去打猎了。此处在描述过去发生的事，故把come改为came。havehaving。【解析】考查非谓语动词。一天傍晚，我们坐在篝火旁，吃着烧烤。此处have并不是句子的谓语，而是作伴随状语，应该把have改为having。immediateimmediately。【解析】考查副词。我的叔叔们立刻跳起来并瞄准那只鸟将箭射出去。修饰动词短语jumpedup，用副词。故把immediate改为immediately。onat。【解析】考查介词。shoo

29、tat对准射击，为固定搭配，故把on改为at。NeitherNone。【解析】考查代词。没有一支箭射中那只鸟。表示两者都不用neither，表示三者或三者以上没有一个用none,故把Neither改为None。waswere。【解析】考查主谓一致。突然那些箭从天上向我们飞来，它们看起来像雨一样。主语thearrows是可数名词复数形式。故把was改为were。删除were或looked。【解析】考查连系动词。此处表示（看起来）像不用被动语态，故删除were或looked。butand。【解析】考查连词。我们跑着逃走，幸运的是没有人受伤。根据语境，前后是顺承关系，故把but改为and。aan。【解析】考查冠词。那天我没有学到关于动物、昆虫或者树木的知识，但我学到了关于重力的令人印象深刻的一课。impressive的发音以元音音素开头，故将a改为an。Proofreading6DearPeter,Howtimeflies!IthadbeenalmostayearsinceyouleftChinatoSweden.Duringhasforyourhomestayatmyhome,wehadsuchwonderfultimethatitseemedasifaeverythinghadbeenhappenedyesterday.Ihavebeenlongto