广东省广州二模试卷vs八校联考试卷评讲课件

1、2022广州二模试卷讲解Passage APassage BPassage C广二模passage D 七选五广二模完形填空语法填空Dear David, Im thrilled to know youre learning Chinese! Its normal to feel a bit anxious at first, but it will soon pass. Here are some suggestions. First, read aloud little poems. Chinese is a beautiful language, and Im sure youll en

2、joy its rhyme and rhythm. Second, try to communicate often. You may find a Chinese friend with similar interests. That way, you will feel more relaxed and comfortable. Last, use websites of Chinese media, China Daily or CGTN, for example, where youll find sufficient quality learning resources. By im

3、merging yourself in it, youll soon have a deeper insight and eventually be eager to learn more. The Great Wall was not built in one day. Im sure your constant efforts will be rewarded. Go for it, David! (125 words) Yours, Li MingDear David, Im thrilled to know youre learning Chinese! Its normal to f

4、eel a bit anxious at first, but it will soon pass. Here are some suggestions. First, read aloud little poems. Chinese is a beautiful language, and Im sure youll enjoy its rhyme and rhythm. Second, try to communicate often. You may find a Chinese friend with similar interests. That way, you will feel

5、 more relaxed and comfortable. Last, use websites of Chinese media, China Daily or CGTN, for example, where youll find sufficient quality learning resources. By immerging yourself in it, youll soon have a deeper insight and eventually be eager to learn more. The Great Wall was not built in one day.

6、Im sure your constant efforts will be rewarded. Go for it, David! (125 words) Yours, Li MingIm delighted to learn that youve started learning Chinese! To help you have a better command of Chinese, Im writing to share with you some practical suggestions, just for your reference. With proper guidance

7、and enough practice, youre bound to learn Chinese well. To begin with, it is advisable that you regularly watch some Chinese learning programmes, which will expose you to an authentic learning atmosphere and will help you develop a better understanding of Chinese culture. Secondly, youd better make

8、some Chinese friends and communicate with them as much as possible. With frequent communication in real life, youll eventually improve your oral Chinese and feel more confident. Hopefully my tips above can be of some help. Wish you every success. (121 words) 13-14得分：14 分 评语：文章符合建议信的语篇规范；要点表述清晰，内容充实、

9、丰富；段落功能清晰，衔接 手段有效，段内逻辑清晰，信息层次分明；各项建议合理，并有较好的内容拓展。语言表达 丰富多样，建议句型使用较为到位。书面整洁美观。理想地达成了预期的交际目的。有个别 拼写（crusial）和用词错误(dont hesitate to tell)，但瑕不掩瑜。14评语：文章符合建议信的语篇规范；要点表述清晰，内容充实、丰富；段落功能清晰，衔接 手段有效，段内逻辑清晰，信息层次分明；各项建议合理，并有较好的内容拓展。语言表达 丰富多样。书面整洁美观。理想地达成了预期的交际目的。得分：12-13 分 评语：文章条理清晰，表述建议的段落使用总-分框架；语言表达丰富多样，词汇运用

10、较恰 当，能恰当使用不同句型完成写作任务，读者意识较好；书面整洁美观。但个别处词不达意。得分：11-12 分 评语：内容较丰富，但拓展条理不清晰，中间个别内容不是建议，而是个人主动提供的帮助。 有语言错误，但是不影响理解。书写上目前行距太密切，建议书写时小一个字号评语：虽然已经完成写作任务，但是建议的拓展比较简单浅显，内容不够丰富。书写格式 有问题，顶格书写扣一分。得分：8 分 评语：尽管内容比较丰富，但语言表达非常不规范，词法、句法错误多，比较严重地影响了 理解，文章可读性低。且内容规划不太合理，需要加行书写，影响观感。23分评语：内容真实、丰富，较好地接续了原文情节（尤其是第一段所接续内容

11、与首句的衔接）， 对人物的设定和角色定位合理，并能根据情节发展需要合理地编排细节，令人物设定与情节 与前文融洽，如第二段提到 Im sure your mom will be treated in exactly the same way when in need。结尾合理，对主题的揭示准确到位。虽有个别单词拼写错误（如：descption*）、个别 表达较为生硬，不够地道（如：prevented accelerating*; It again occurred to me that rose given, fragrance stays.），但整体上看，故事完整、人设到位、内容丰富、内涵深刻

12、。卷面整洁，书 写优美，赏心悦目。得分：19-20 分 评语：故事完整，情节合理，能尝试运用丰富的心理描写塑造人物，结局设计比较合理自然。 语言表达方面，尝试运用多种情感描述和丰富的句子结构，有一定的语言积累，但在准确性 上仍需进一步打磨（如：第二段 Upon hearing my words, confusion appeared .非谓语与逻辑 主语不一致）。要注意构思好内容和节奏，避免出现加行现象。得分：13 分 评语：故事基本完整，各段内容推进基本合理，在第一段中能尝试添加一定的环境描写，但 不够聚焦，个别描述与人物心境不太相符。语言和拼写错误较多，且结尾处未能准确提炼主 题，扯得有点

13、远，缺乏原文线索依据。卷面欠整洁，涂改较多，书写需要着力改善。得分：8 分 评语：内容较少，字数不达要求。虽有一定的合理情节，但整体故事不完整，未能围绕主题 合理地设计结局。虽有一定的细节描写，但句子结构不完整，词不达意或表达不清，导致影 响理解。 For hours, we drove through the city. Now and then, the old woman would ask me to slow down or pull up. After the short stop at her primary school, she showed me the building

14、where she had once worked as an engineer. Then we drove through the neighborhood where she and her husband had lived when they had first been married. She had me pull up in front of a furniture warehouse that had once been a park, where she had spent the best time with her daughter. Sometimes she wo

15、uld have me slow down in front of a particular building or corner and would sit staring into the darkness, saying nothing. As the first hint of sun was creasing the horizon, she suddenly said, “Im ready. Lets go now.” We drove in silence to the nursing home. As we pulled up, two nurses were waiting

16、for us. They helped her into a wheelchair. “How much do I owe you?” she asked, reaching for her purse. “Nothing,” I said. Without thinking, I leaned down and gave her a hug. She hugged me tightly. “You gave an old woman a little moment of joy,” she said. “Thank you.” I squeezed her hand and then wal

17、ked back to my taxi. For the rest of that day, I could hardly talk. I believe I have never done anything more important in my life. We usually think that our lives are defined by great moments. But I now realise that great moments catch us by surprise, because they often seem quite small. (根据原文改编，26

18、0 words)八校联考1试卷讲解2022-5-03Passage BPassage CPassage D八校联考七选五八校联考完形填空Good morning，everyone Everybody has his dream job. I also have my dream job. My dream is to work for foreign tourists as a tour guide. Why do I want to be a tour guide? First of all, Im an outgoing girl, and I like doing some exciti

19、ng things. Maybe being a tour guide is the best choice. If I become a tour guide, I can travel all around China, and know more about our country. Then I will tell the foreign tourists about our colorful history. Second, I like making friends. If I work as a tour guide, I can make a lot of friends al

20、l over the world. This may be great. Perhaps someday my foreign friends will ask me to visit their countries. I really like to go to their countries to know something about their culture. Whats more, I like singing. Singing English songs is my favorite. I believe I will be popular with foreign touri

21、sts. Their trip will be excellent. Now, I am still a middle school student. My job now is to work hard in school. Then Ill go to university to learn something about being a tour guide. Im sure I can be a qualified tour guide in the future My turn finally came.As I led Cowboy in to the arena, the fam

22、iliar old snicker returned and I sensed Beckys looks of contempt as she brushed past us, as arrogant as a princess. Clenching my fist, I stared into Cowboys stern eyes with determination and whispered Buddy, find our usual pace, ok? Drumming his hoof against the ground, Cowboy signaled me that he wa

23、s ready. We charged forward at the whistle, hitting the three barrels with lightning speed and finished the race with a perfect triangle-shaped ring of dust arising behind us. No cheers filled the air when I finished my show.13 seconds and a half! the judger announced our timing as a veil of awkward

24、 silence swept across the grandstand. Obviously, the spectators were taken aback by our landslide victory and they needed the time to digest this fact. Leaving others disbelief and dismay behind, I stroked Cowboy gently on the neck and grinned in triumph as we were awarded with the blue ribbon. Only god knew how much pains and efforts cowboy and I had poured into this race. My turn finally came.As I urged Cowboy fo