中考英语二轮专题复习-写作课(共15张)课件

1、She is a kind teacher.In order to help you, she always works hard. She is a teacher who is very helpful, for example, she always helps you with your science.Who is she?Lets play a guessing game!She is a teacher who likes travelling.She is a teacher.She is a kind teacher.In orderEnglish Writing -Try

2、to make your writing betterEnglish Writing -Try to make pollutionHi! Tina, Im happy to get your letter. I hear that the pollution is bad. I have some suggestions. You should walk to school. You should turn off lights. You should plant some trees. You should use something that can be used many times.

3、 These are my suggestions. I hope the environment in your hometown will be better later.Yours,Bill TinapollutionHi! Tina,TinaIm happy to get your letter.You should walk to school.Tip1:Use words and phrases properly and vividly.用词适切、生动Im happy to receive your letter.You should go to school on foot.Ho

4、w to make it more vivid(生动的)？Im happy to hear from you.You should go to school on foot instead of taking cars.Im happy to get your letter.T Parts of Body: 正文(节选)You should walk to school. You should turn off lights. You should plant some trees. You should use something that can be used many times. S

5、entence patterns(句型) of giving advice:should / can do sthWhy not do sth?/ Why dont you do sth?What about doing sth?/ How about doing sth?It is + adj + for sb to do sthIt is a good idea to do sthHad better do sthIt is better to do sthTry to do sthLets do sth Lets walk to school.It is a good idea to w

6、alk to school.Youd better walk to school.Tip2: Try to use different sentence patterns (句型) . Parts of Body:You should walkWed better turn off lights so that we can save energy.You should turn off lights. Parts of Body: 正文(节选) Adverbial Clause状语从句 so that, when, in order to, Turn off lights when we l

7、eave the classrooms to save energy.In order to save energy, lets turn off lights.Wed better turn off lights soYou should plant some trees that are good for the environment.You should plant some trees. Parts of Body: 正文(节选) Attributive Clause定语从句 that, which Tip3: Use complex sentences(复合句) to make s

8、entences better. You should plant some trees that can make our earth green.You should plant some trees thUse something that can be used many times. For example, we can use china cups instead of paper ones. Use something that can be used many times. Parts of Body: 正文(节选)Try to add an example.for exam

9、ple, such as Use something that can be used many times, such as using cloth bags instead of plastic bags. Tip4: Add examples to make your writing persuasive(有说服力的).Use something that can be used Hi! Tina, Im happy to hear from you. Because Im sorry to hear that the pollution is serious. I have some

10、suggestions for you . Lets walk to school instead of taking cars. Its good for us to reduce air pollution. You should plant some trees that are good for the environment. Turn off lights when we leave the classrooms to save energy. Use something that can be used many times. For example, we can use ch

11、ina cups instead of paper ones. These are my suggestions. If everyone starts to do something, the world will be saved. I hope the environment in your hometown will be better and better in the future.Yours,Bill Tip5:Use linking words properly 连接词使用恰当 ()Coherent (连贯的)? Hi! Tina,Tip5:Use linking wo写作中句

12、子和句子之间比较常用的连接词1.表示并列/递进关系：and, besides, whats more, also, not only, but also,at the same time, 2.表示转折关系：but, however,3.表示因果关系：because, since, so, therefore,4.表示结果：as a result, sothat,5.表示先后：First, Second, Third, Next, Finally6.表示时间：when, while, after, before, as soon as7. 表示总结：in a word, generally s

13、peaking, all in all写作中句子和句子之间比较常用的连接词 Hi! Tina, Im happy to hear from you. _Im sorry to hear that the pollution is serious. _I have some suggestions for you. _, Lets walk to school instead of taking cars. Its good for us to reduce pollution. _, Turn off lights _ we leave the classrooms to save energ

14、y._, you should plant some trees that are good for the environment._, use something that can be used many times. For example, we can use china cups instead of paper ones. These are my suggestions. If everyone starts to do something, the world will be saved. I hope the environment in your hometown wi

15、ll be better and better in the future.Yours,Billfinally, so, firstly, but; when; secondly; whats more; when Secondly Firstly But Whats more So Finally Hi! Tina,finally, so, firstly Firstly, lets walk to school instead of taking cars. Its good for us to reduce pollution. Secondly, turn off lights whe

16、n we leave the classrooms to save energy. Whats more, you should plant some trees that are good for the environment. Finally, use something that can be used many times. For example, we can use china cups instead of paper ones. Finally, use something that can be used many times. For example, we can u

17、se china cups instead of paper ones. Hi! Tina. Im happy to hear from you. But Im sorry to hear that the pollution is serious. So I have some suggestions for you. These are my suggestions. If everyone starts to do something, the world will be saved. I hope the environment in your hometown will be bet

18、ter and better in the future.Tip6:Make sure the structure(结构) is clear. Firstly, lets walk to schoo采分点满分可给分值1.内容充实，覆盖要点 （内容、要点）767分 描述了所有要点，内容合理、丰富35分 描述了大部分信息，内容比较合理12分 描述了小部分信息，内容不合理0分 没有作答或描述内容与主题无关2.用词适切，语法正确，句型多样 （词汇、语法、句型）767分 用词适切，句型变化多样且有效，完全或基本没有语言错误35分 用词基本适切，句型较为单一，有少量语言错误但不影响理解12分 有较多语言错

19、误，一定程度上影响理解1分 有大量语言错误，影响理解3.结构紧凑，意思连贯 （语意、连词、指代）434分 行文连贯，连接词使用恰当，指代清晰12分 行文不够连贯，连接词使用不够恰当，指代不够清晰0分 没有连贯的意识4.书写规范，词数适宜 （标点符号、大小写、词数）22分 大小写、标点正确，词数达标，书写规范整洁1分 大小写、标点有部分错误，词数达标，书写尚可辨认0分 大小写、标点错误较多，语言应用不规范，词数严重不足，书写难以辨认 作文评分标准采分点满分可给分值1.内容充实，覆盖要点 （内容、要点）7pollutionHi! Tina, Im happy to get your letter.

20、 I hear that the pollution is bad. I have some suggestions. You should walk to school. You should turn off lights. You should plant some trees. You should use something that can be used many times. These are my suggestions. I hope the environment in your hometown will be better later.Yours,Bill TinapollutionHi! Tina,TinaHomeworkPolish your own writing.Homework1.学习语文是一种享受，你会发现语文学习是在与另一个人对话，也是在与自己对话。每当你读一篇文章时，仿佛作者就在你身边，他的经历、他的情感都进入了你心中。2.不论读名家名篇，还是自己创作，你会更清楚地认识到自己，每次学习语文，其实