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1、2016 期末改错冲刺After shopping, Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch. I noticed Mother look at a nearby table occupied by an elderly woman and young couple. They ate silently, and it was clearly that things were not going well. As we left, Mother stopped on their table. “Excuse me,” she said, put

2、her arms around the unhappy old woman. “You remind me so many of my mother. May I hug you?” The woman smiled happily as she accepted to it. After we leave, I said, “That was very nice of you, Mother. So I didnt think she looked like Grandma.” “Neither did me,” said Mother cheerfully.lookingaclearat/

3、byputtingmuchleftButIDear Sir, Im writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host family for the British students Locating in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, our large fully-equipped apartment meets all their needsIn addition the convenient public transportation, our own car can also

4、bring them to some nearby places of interestWith fluent English, Im sure I will have no difficulty communicate with themfamilies located totakecommunicating Above all, we have hosted two British students last year, through it weve gained lots of experienceWhats more, my mother is a good cooker and c

5、an guarantee us a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food I would greatly appreciate you if I could have the chance to host them and make friends with them Looking forward to your reply Yours, Li Huawhichcook themit Inthesummerholiday,wetravelledtoQingdaoandpaidvisittomy unclethere.Itsalo

6、ngandboredjourney.ButthemomentIarrived,I fallinlovewiththecity.ItssuchbeautifulacitythatIcanhardlyfind anywordtodescribeit.Thestreetsarecleaningandtheskyisblue.If youwalkalongthecoast,youcanfeelthewindtoblowingonyourface.Theseaisvastandsometimesyoucanfindaboatoraship.Youmay alsodosomefishingasfarasi

7、tispermitted.Besides,Ithinkthedriver theredrivetoofastinthestreet.Youcanneverbetoocarefullywhen crossing thestreet.aboringfellsocleanlongHoweverdriverscareful B As it is known to us, fewer and fewer students do sports regularly, what makes them weak and easily tired. There are many reasons about thi

8、s. First of all, some of the students complained that they have too many homework, resulting in less time to take exercise. Beside, some of them think that it is very difficulty for them to keep doing exercise, because it is a very hard thing. Because lack of physical activities, many students are i

9、n poor health. I suggest that our school must take measures to encourage more students to take part in sports. For us students, no matter what busy we are, it is necessary to spare some time to do exercise. whichforcomplainmuchBesidesdifficultofshouldhow Television plays important part in our life.

10、It shows us information program, like the news and sports events. We can watch films, listen to interviews and hearing the sounds of events that happened far away. Television teach us about countries and cultures but we can enjoy entertainment. A television set can be used for another things as well

11、. You can record shows and films for late viewing, watch DVDs, or even play video games. Television was being developed over 80 years ago, influenced our lives ever since.anprogramshearhappenteachesandotherlaterinfluencingTom is a senior two student who devote himself to his lessons every day. Last

12、Saturday, as usual, he went to several courses. In the evening, he studies at home until deep into the night. He was too sleepy and tired that he couldnt work effectively. In Sunday morning, Tom was about to study when his father came up and advised him to have break. Soon they had a good idea. They

13、 bought a kite which they liked it very much and then the family went to the suburbs where Tom enjoyed fly the kite himself. The family had a picnic together but felt very relaxed in the open air. On Monday, Tom was energetic and actively in class. He said it was only why he had a better weekend. so

14、 studied devotes On a flying and active because This evening an English play calls “CINDERELLA” was prepared. As the smallest actress in the class, I also tookthe part in the preparation. I believe most you have heard about this story, and this one is different. Its a new one. When we were acting, w

15、e all lose ourselves in the great play. Because it is an English play, I bet that you will enjoy it and get something importantly from it. Poor girl are not always unlucky. If they are diligent and believe in them, they can always find the key of success. That is how the play wants to tell us, I thi

16、nk.ofcalledbutlostimportantwhatgirlsthemselvestoMy old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class. I could easy see the football field. In the morning , it was full

17、 of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road, I was always interested

18、to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.sidesofsittingeasilywasitafeelAlthoughThough短文改错（共10 小题；每小题1分，满分10分）That was the biggest snow we ha

19、ve ever experienced in Canada. Snow began to fall at night and it lasted one and a half day. We were told in the radio that more than ten inches of snow had been fallen and that since the roads were blocked they would have no school that day. We jumped up with joy. We found the whole world hidden un

20、der a white blanket of softly snow. We built a snowman, after that we took turns sliding down a hill on large piece of cardboard. We were having so much fun while supper time came. Mother almost had to force us to go in and ate.haddayson/overwesoft awheneatwhichNowadays, the computer technology deve

21、lops very fast that the Internet has become more and more popular. Some students regarded it as a great helper. Because there has a lot of information on line, so you can surf the Internet for any information you need in a short time without working hard in the library. It is also very convenient to

22、 talk with others by use the Internet. Moreover, other students think that there is some information on line which is not good for students. In addition, spend too much time playing games will not only have a bad effect on their studies but also do harm for health. Therefore, we should make properly

23、 use of the Internet. It is of great important to separate good plants from wild weeds.soregardusingHoweveristoimportancespendingproperLadies and gentlemen,Welcome to our English Corner. This Corner was set up three years before. Every Sunday morning, students from different schools and some foreign

24、ers often took part. Gather around here, we practise spoken English by talking about everything we are interested. We also exchange my experience in English study. We all have a good time here. Thousands of people have been here when it was set up. We think that they have learned a lot by taking par

25、t in activity here. It is a really supplement to our English class and it is welcome to students, their parents and teachers. They all think it is of helpful. If you want to know much about the corner, you may talk to the students here.agotakesGatheringinoursinceactivitiesreal或 helpful改为 helpmoreAsw

26、eknow,whenseniorstudentsfinishschool,mostofour referencebooksarethrownaway,whicharestillin a good condition. Howagreatwasteitis! Isuggestthatstudentsshouldrecycleallthesebooks.Ontheonehand,recyclethemcansavealotofnaturalresource,whichareusedtomaketextbooks. Ontheotherhand,the notesinthebooksarehelpfulto whoeverneedthem. Infact,recyclingtextbookshasbeenincreasingpopularinsuchcountrieslikeAmerica andAustralia.Weshouldlearnfromthem butmakeeveryefforttobuild an energy-savin