(整理)高考书面表达指导课件

1、(最新整理)高考书面表达指导2021/7/261(最新整理)高考书面表达指导2021/7/261来冬梅2015届高考英语书面表达指导2021/7/262来冬梅2015届高考英语书面表达指导2021/7/2622012年高考书面表达回顾 假定你是李华,从互联网（the internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡（Singapore）举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括： 1.自我介绍（包括英语能力）； 2.参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家） 3.希望获准。2021/7/2632012年高考书面表达回顾 假定你是李华,从互联网（2013年高考书面表达回顾

2、 假定你是李华，自制了一些中国结（Chinese knot)。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代买，要点包括： 1.外观（尺寸、颜色、材料） 2.象征意义 3.价格2021/7/2642013年高考书面表达回顾 假定你是李华，自制了一些中国结2014年高考书面表达回顾 一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。1.家庭；2.工作；3.业余生活。2021/7/2652014年高考书面表达回顾 一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是2015年高考书面表达2021/7/2662015年高考书面表达2021/7/266高考书面表达的题材特点题材贴近现实生活和学生实

3、际生活生活化学校生活求职申请环境保护人际关系兴趣爱好热点话题文娱体育旅游交通饮食健康文化习俗2021/7/267高考书面表达的题材特点题材贴近现实生活和学生实际生活生活化学Writing写作水平要提高科学方法来支招follow me2021/7/268Writing写作水平要提高科学方法来支招follow me循序渐进练写作词汇短语句型谋篇漂亮、地道阿来2021/7/269循序渐进练写作词汇阿来2021/7/2691. 这个工作很难。B. The job is quite _ .The job is quite difficult/ hard/ tough. challenging词汇是基础2

4、021/7/26101. 这个工作很难。B. The job is quite 2. 这个很(好）。B. The (thing) is very _The (person) is very _ clever/ bright/ smart/ handsome/ cute/intelligent/ easy- going / gentle/ . perfect/wonderful/excellent/outstanding/.2021/7/26112. 这个很(好）。B. The (thing) is 3. 我很喜欢。C. Im fond of I like very much.B. I enjo

5、y very much.D. My favorite is2021/7/26123. 我很喜欢。C. Im fond of I li4.电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。Computers are very important in our life.Computers play a very important role in our life. Computers are of great importance in our life.2021/7/26134.电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。2021/7/2611._(众所周知)，there is a famous saying “

6、Everything depends on ones attitude”.As is known to us2. _ (我认为) , Kobe is really a super basketball star.As far as I am concerned句型是关键2021/7/26141._(众所周知)，ther3. 不但而且 In London, you can _ taste delicious food _can visit some famous tourist attractions _. not onlybut as well4. 毫无疑问_China is a develo

7、ping country with a long history. There is no doubt that2021/7/26153. 不但而且 not onlybut as5.认为是重要的/必要的。I think (consider) _important / necessary to do something.6.该是的时候了。_ we took actions to protect and beautify our environment.Its high time that It 的用法不可忽视哦it2021/7/26165.认为是重要的/必要的。6.该是的时候了。Its抄改连扩抓

8、审书面表达书面表达六步法2021/7/2617抄改连扩抓审书面书面表达六步法2021/7/2617六个步骤1、审题文字信息图画信息题材、人称、时态2、抓要点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句话的要点3、扩展成句：用一些简单句、不同句型、不同句式或 高级词汇将要点扩展成句4 连句成文：注意：主语和谓语背景（适当增加时间、地点等）逻辑关系开头与结尾语篇衔接5、检查修改6、规范抄写 （单词拼写、大小写、标点、时态、语态、主谓一致等）2021/7/2618六个步骤1、审题文字信息图画信息题材、人称、时态2、抓要点：大家来判断、给分Which composition feels more attractive

9、, why?2021/7/2619大家来判断、给分Which composition feel2021/7/26202021/7/2620漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面2021/7/2621漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面20影响给分的因素之二：文中所采用的语言材料人靠衣装，文靠词装A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；B. 句型结构运用灵活多变 ；2021/7/2622影响给分的因素之二：人靠衣装，文靠词装A. 词汇的选择灵活新影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅 上下贯通、一气呵成正确而巧妙地使用好连接词2021/7/2623影响给分的因素之三：行

10、文的流畅 上下贯通、一气呵成2021/Tom was ordinarylooking _very popular in his school because of his kindness.but连接亦重要2021/7/2624Tom was ordinarylooking _ 高考大纲中常用的连接词 also; besides; moreover; furthermore, in addition; what is more; but; however; though, on the other hand; on the contrary; 1. 表示递进2. 表示转折关系阿来2021/7/

11、2625 高考大纲中常用的连接词1. 表示递进2. 表示转折关系 since; as; because (of ); so; thus; consequently; therefore; as a result; if ;on condition that ; as long as 3. 表示因果关系4. 表示条件关系阿来2021/7/26263. 表示因果关系4. 表示条件关系阿来2021/7/262 when; while; after; before; until; as soon as; 5. 表示时间关系阿来2021/7/2627 when; while; after; before

12、;above all; first(ly); second(ly); then; next ; finally; in the end in other words; that is to say; 6. 表示特定的顺序关系7. 换一种方法表述阿来2021/7/2628above all; first(ly); second(l for instance; for example; like; such as; in fact; actually; as a matter of fact; to tell you the truth;8. 进行举例说明9. 用于陈述事实阿来2021/7/262

13、98. 进行举例说明9. 用于陈述事实阿来2021/7/262 luckily ; happily; vividly; obviously; eventually; surprisingly; consequently; “总而言之”， “总的来说”: on the whole; in short; to sum up; in general; in brief; in a word; above all;10. 其它常用到的副词11. 对一个话题进行总结阿来2021/7/2630 luckily ; happily; vividly To rid students of the situat

14、ion, here I address some effective measures to relieve pressure. First of all, spare time for relaxation. Some music and physical activities bring you leisure. In addition, you can turn to the psychologist for help if necessary, for they can always give practical advice.学生习作一2021/7/2631 To rid stude

15、nts of the Above all, the school is no more than one mile the distance from our house, so its really convenient. Exactly speaking , Im confident that I can treat my British brother as if he were at his home. Above all Exactly speaking学生习作二学生习作三2021/7/2632 Above all, the school is no抓住要点 开门见山 完美收关适当扩

16、展文章有窍门2021/7/2633抓住要点开门见山 完美收关适当扩展文章有窍门2021/假定你是某国际学校学生李华。今年暑假将有15名英国学生来你校参加“游学”（Study Abroad）活动。学校现从学生中招募15个义务接待家庭。请你根据以下要点用英文给负责此项目的Mr.Dean写一封申请信。1. 你的家庭情况；2. 你家的居住条件及与学校的距离；3. 你家作为接待家庭的优势。注意 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加情节以使行文连贯； 3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。写作天天练 高分有希望2021/7/2634假定你是某国际学校学生李华。今年暑假将有15名英国学生来你校要

17、点1. 家庭情况2. 居住条件3. 与学校的距离4. 优势(advantage)2021/7/2635要点1. 家庭情况2. 居住条件3. 与学校的距离4. 优 Dear Mr. Dean, Its nice to learn that 15 students from Britain will come to our school for a Study Abroad program. . Im looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua2021/7/26362021/7/2636Possible version Dear Mr. Dean, I

18、ts nice to learn that 15 students from Britain will come to our school for a Study Abroad program. After I consulted with my parents, my family would like to be a host family to one of them. We have the following advantages. First of all, my dad is a university teacher, and my mom is a saleswoman in

19、 a shop. We all can speak English, so it will be easy for us to communicate with our great guest. Second, we have a spare room with a washroom and shower for our guests convenience. Third, my home is within easy reach of the school, and it normally takes about 10 minutes by subway or 25 minutes by b

20、us. Whats more, my mom is good at cooking. I believe my guest will have a pleasant stay with my family. Im looking forward to your reply. Yours. Li Hua(121 words)2021/7/2637Possible version 2021/7/26371 天天“315”- 高考“ 135 ”2 背诵范文写作复习建议阿来2021/7/2638写作复习建议阿来2021/7/2638书面表达我最好2021/7/2639书面表达我最好2021/7/263

21、9Thank you2021/7/2640Thank you2021/7/2640 Dear Mr. Dean, Its nice to learn that 15 students from Britain will come to our school for a Study Abroad program. And Im writing to be admitted as one of the host families. Firstly, my mom is a happy housewife, so she can pick us up on time. Located not far

22、 from our school, with all conditions are fully equipped, I think our family couldnt be better for this activity. Secondly, Im outgoing and I can speak English well. So communication is not a big deal. Also, my father cooks well, which will definitely makes him or her feel at home. All in all, its t

23、he best chance that I can meet a foreigner face to face. I would appreciate it if you could offer me an honor. Im looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua(123 words by 闫丹彤)学生习作一2021/7/2641 Dear Mr. Dean,学生习作一2021/7/假设你是李华,正在带领来自英国某中学的交换生参观你校的图书馆。请你根据以下要点，用英语为他们做一个简短的介绍：1.图书馆的环境：前有花园，后有教学楼，内有各种书籍

24、、报刊杂志等；2.借阅规定：一次至多借5本，保留10天；3.开放时间：周二到周日8：30-21：30，周一闭馆。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数；4. 文中不得出现你学校的名称。与您交流Homework2021/7/2642假设你是李华,正在带领来自英国某中学的交换生参观你校的图书 Boysandgirls, MayIhaveyourattention,please?Thebuildingwearevisitingisthelibrary.Asyoucansee,infrontofthelibraryisabeautifulga

25、rdenandtheteachingbuildingisrightbehind it.Whenyougetintothelibrary,youwillseemanyshelvesfullofbooksondifferentsubjects.Therearealsonewspapers andmagazinesnearthereadingzone.Accordingtotherules,everystudentcanborrowuptofivebooks atatimeandkeepthemfor10days.Thelibraryisopen from8:30amto9:30pmfromTuesdaytoSundayand